'Bas Vidya!' VERY Short Fanfiction - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry doston..!! Finally am kind of finished with my exams this week.... until next !😉 Here's the next episode... I'll see if I can post two at once if i have time !

Hope you like this one... it's not really that good. but will try !!

Vidya sits on the bed with her hands on her face, thinking of what she should say to Sagar. What if the words come out wrong ? She loves him dearly and is afraid of hurting him more.... Maybe she should stay away from Sameer for some time, and let Surily take care of him.... but what if Sameer gets hurt?

Vidya shakes her head firmly and knows that she needs to only focus on Sagar now. He is her husband and she must be there with him, through thick and thin.

Just as she gets up to find him, someone comes through the door in a huff....... none other than Sagar.

Sagar (looks angry) - Tum? Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho, Vidya ?
Vidya (bewildered) - Suniye.....
Sagar - Agar tum woh stupid baccha se baat karna chahti hoon, toh main abhi isi waqt iss kamre ko nikal jaaonga.
Vidya (tries to look firm) - Nahin, aap suniye nah, ab hum aapse baat karni chahti hoon....... (cut off)
Sagar - Kiskeliye ? Huh ? (trying to look angry but getting soften at Vidya's face)

Vidya (bursts out crying) - Humein.... Humein maaf kijiye.! (Sagar looks quickly at her and is shocked) Humne aapko khyaal nahin rakha..... hum sirf woh baccha ke soch rahi thi. Humein maaf kijiye.... aap humare pati hai... Humein aapko chot nahin jaana chahti (Sagar is now almost in tears) !
Sagar (feeling terrible at being angry) - Vidya.... jhooti.! Tum kya ke rahi ho --
Vidya (still in tears) - Nahin , aap humari baat ko suniye..... aap... humare subse accha dost hain nah ? (trying to smile and lighten the atmosphere) Aap kripaya Surily ke saath nahin sojaiyye..... humein.... aapka zaroorat hai.
Sagar - (walks slowly over to Vidya and starts crying) Vidya, tum kya ke rahi ho... tum meri patni ho aur meri sabsi acchi dost ho.... mein sirf gussa mein tha kyunki tum uss stupid boy se baat aur khel kar rahi thi nah..!!
Vidya (looks at Sagar in the eyes) - Aap ......... (says nothing more and hugs Sagar, who is crying on her shoulder)

Their hug seems to last forever, with both Vidya and Sagar crying on each other's shoulder. Finally, they break apart, Sagar wiping his tears.

Sagar (sniffing) - Tum.... hamesha hamesha ke liye mere saath rahoge nah ? Mujhe aapki bohut zaroorat hai Vidya.... Main uss bewakoofi Surily nahin rehna chahta hoon..!!
Vidya (takes his hand and puts it in her her's) - Arey... yeh koi sawaal hai kya. Hum aapke saath hamesha rahoongi.... (smiles, feeling a little shy)
Sagar (now completely stopped crying and starts laughing) -
Toh stupid.! (taps her on the head lightly) - Yeh rona dhona ab band karo. Humein khel nah hai nah ! Toh.......... utto..!!!

Sagar takes Vidya by the waist by surprise and lifts her in the air, both laughing and having fun. The happiness long lost in their eyes is now regained.

Suddenly, a person comes into the room.........

(deep, angry voice) - Yeh kya ho raha hai ?!

Oky, so that's Episode 2..!! Hope you all liked it... it's really not that great, i'm not good at this😆 but enjoy !

I'll definitely try and post another episode tomorrow.😊!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG...Ammuji you are a great writer. I loved it..I am addicted..hehe..and i can guess who just walked in 😆 😉 . Please continue soon. Its wonderful. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww thankoo so much Rushvi ji !!! 😃 😃 😛 Will try and post one today too 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great chappie ammuji! Awww they made up 😳 UGH too bad it'll take like 2 weeks for that to happen in the show 🤢 🤢 I think i know who came innnnn 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i loved both episode ammu!! keep it up yaar! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was good ammu! kaash, they showed this in the episodes as well! I love sameer, he is such a cutie, and I can't bear to see him with Surili, but still for some time, Vidya should focus on Sagar!

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks everyone..!!!

I'm having trouble writing the next part.... let's see how it goes 😉

Will post next episode today !!
Edited by ammmu - 18 years ago

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