Eternal Love- a Swaron FF (updated Chap. 8)

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

veryy nic update loved it...

whose d guy...

waiting 4 nxt. update

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

mystery guy..hmm

swayam's pain was palpable.her dad,the villian in this story is about to make an appearance and with that im expectimg some of the mysteries to be unravelled.

your writing was usual amazing.

update soon

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Shivani

@shivheena123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: austen4ever
mystery guy..hmm
swayam's pain was palpable.her dad,the villian in this story is about to make an appearance and with that im expectimg some of the mysteries to be unravelled.
your writing was usual amazing.
update soon

Thank you so very much. I really appreciate you saying that my writing was amazing. I really appreciate you guys giving me such pleasant comments and replies. Keep commenting everyone. Thank you!

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Regina.Phalange

@Regina.Phalange

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Awesome update 🤗

I loved how you portrayed swayam's pain ...lovely update 👍🏼

Want to know who is that guy

Waiting for next update :)

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

after a long tym u updated this ff it seems

but koi ni

n cuming to the update

it was an shocking update

first of all sharon getting shocked n den tensed as mr rai prakash cuming to meet her n even swayam is der in d same city so a bit scared if they encounter each other den wat would happen

n another shocking news for me as well as swayam who was dat guy wid whom sharon was talking in the cafe

n u hv nlyintroduced jenny as her only frnd i supposein the start den who is this guy???

plz update soon

eager to know wats gonna happen next

thanx for the pm

update soon

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Shivani

@shivheena123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi
after a long tym u updated this ff it seems
but koi ni
n cuming to the update
it was an shocking update
first of all sharon getting shocked n den tensed as mr rai prakash cuming to meet her n even swayam is der in d same city so a bit scared if they encounter each other den wat would happen
n another shocking news for me as well as swayam who was dat guy wid whom sharon was talking in the cafe
n u hv nlyintroduced jenny as her only frnd i supposein the start den who is this guy???
plz update soon
eager to know wats gonna happen next
thanx for the pm
update soon

thank you very much. I'm sorry I wasn't able to update quicker because I was busy. And I can't say anything about the story, just that you should wait for the next update! Thanks for the appreciation!

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

it might be possible of her dad as he was go to came new york to meet her...
swayan and sharon on face to face in the cafe... it get interest to read more...
do continue soon and pm me...

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

plz update soon

waiting to read further

want an update

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Shivani

@shivheena123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi
plz update soon
waiting to read further
want an update

I will try to update as quick as i can! Thank you!

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Shivani

@shivheena123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Chapter 8-

She looked at him and didn't know what to say. Her eyes met Swayam's in the most awkward way and the eye contact was held for a few seconds. She looked into his dark eyes, unable to look away. They captivated her, as if she were the prey of a beast. The guy next to Sharon brought them both back to reality. "Hi! I'm not sure we met." He spoke in Swayam's direction. Swayam fought with himself to make sure he didn't keep his eyes on Sharon. "I'm Jay. I don't think we have met before!"

"I'm Swayam," he said disappointed, but confused.

"Oh nice! So I see, you know Sharon already!" Sharon looked at Swayam with a look that asked for a billion apologies. "So Swayam, how long have you known Sharon?"

Swayam wanted to say his whole story but he held back. Just as he was about to speak, Jay started to talk again. "Wait, aren't you from that dance group that recently came here? What was it? D3 right?" Swayam nodded. "Cool dude! So you are like famous right?"

Swayam barely listened to what this guy was talking about and kept looking at Sharon. He couldn't take it anymore. He managed to get to words out of his mouth, "Excuse me." He ambled to the restroom just a few steps away, closed the door and bursted out crying. It started as a light cry but turned into a violent sob. He just couldn't control his emotions anymore. All this time, all the girls went crazy for him but he stayed loyal to a girlfriend he never broke up with, while she was going around dating other people, or he thought.

He quickly cleaned himself up and made his way out. Before approaching Jay and Sharon, he wiped his cheek with the back of his palm. He took a deep breath before starting to walk. As he came up to Jay, he put on a fake smile and started to talk. "It was great meeting you Jay. You seem like a good guy. I have known Sharon for a long time and she is a special girl." Jay nodded in acceptance. "Take care of her. I have to go now, wish I could get to know you better."

Jay started to talk, "You can't stay any longer? I mean I'd love to be friends."

"Wish I could. See you around." He started to turn but remembered he forgot to say something. He turned back to Jay and said "You two look great together by the way." Before anyone could say anything more, Swayam had taken the leave.

Inside, Sharon broke completely. Her heart shattered like a billion pieces of glass. 'How could he think that? That me and Jay? How dare he think I was over him?' she thought. Sharon got up without saying a word and walked out the door. Jay was confused and didn't know what to do so he ran after Sharon.

Sharon kept on picking up her speed so that Jay could not catch up to her. "Sharon!!" he called. Sharon ignored him. "Sharon! Hold on!" He was still being ignored. Jay picked up his speed and finally caught up to her. When he was about a step away from her, he took hold of her upper arm, making her stop in her place.

He looked concerned, seeing the tears roll down Sharon's cheeks. Sharon couldn't look up at his face. She looked mad yet so sad. She had a delicate heart and this was about the third time she felt heartbroken. Just because of a guy who liked her. "Jay! Leave me." He shook his head, signaling a no. "I SAID LEAVE ME!!" She cried. Sharon looked around to see if anyone heard her loud cries, yet, thankfully, no one did. "Please," she pleaded. "Just let go of me."

She was completely shattered and couldn't take another second on the happy, normal streets. Jay was worried. "Just tell me what happened love."

"Stop Jay! Just stop it! It's all your fault. Why did you ever even come in the coffee shop? Why did you walk up to me?"

"What did I do?" Jay was confused.

"Everything!" She couldn't speak further and broke into tears. Sharon fell to her knees with her hands covering her face. Jay pulled her up from the shoulders and brought her into a tight, safe hug. Sharon cried into his chest while he rubbed her back as if he were pacifying a baby.

Edited by shivheena123 - 12 years ago