The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 68

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Maaneet dreamy dhaba date

Me too dancing 😉 😛




Loved how you built up the whole atmosphere around I could actually picture the whole scene so clearly
Maan trying to make the most of these precious moments together
😳

The dhaba guy flirting with Maan ki Geet🤢
Maan se panga😲
and Maan all set to punch him...present ka Maan hota toh pehle maarta aur phir sochta😆
That's the difference I wanted to set up, from an unsure person to someone full of confidence. You caught me...😃
Maan bechaara is trying so hard to make this a memorable date and his jhalli is thinking over splitting the bill😆
Only Geet can do this but I guess thats makes her so special na
She knows and values Maan!
Maan awed by her simplicity and honesty😊
She does not know about his wealth at all as you will see in their next part. To her he is just a college guy, regular shirt pant; bike is his only wealth as far as she is concerned. Even in the KC scenes she never thought that it was his own office, she just thought he worked there..
But our Munda has an answer to all her logics😉 and bechaari Kudi phas gayi😳
Lekin Maan ne Giit ki choclate gul kar di😲 but choclate dene ka tareeka...haaye😃
I loved that part too... so filmy and cheesy but hey what can you say.. first love should be like that...
Maan 'J' bacche bhi uski Giit ko bindass kiss karte

Khotte tu bhi crowd ka phayda utha ke ek peck de hi de😉😆
I'm sure woh bura nahi maanegi😳

The lassi scene☺️ it will always be one of the most memorable moment in Maaneet life be it the show or here
Dil ko chu jaata hain!
😳

Maan cursing self to have brought her in a such a public place
ab kya karna yeh pehle sochna chahiye tha Maan babu😕
He did not know she would agree... uncertain and insecure jo hai.. and madam does not make anything easy for him
The dance part was adorable specially Maan picking up the kid and dancing😳
Papa Singh Khurana in making😉

Avi superbly woven their small but precious moment with Independence Day flavour!
Truly India is home so many cultures, caste, creed, religion but the spirit is always Indian and proud to be one!
That's what I figured would be the focus for Indep day..
Apt selection of a song totally fitting it with the place and emotion
Awesome update Avi
Loved both POV's back to back giving a clear picture of them
Dil khush kar ditta!
🤗 🤗

I truly short of words to apologize too much happening around
And I 'm late very late
SORRY!!!!!






Thanks Heytal for being here.. Better late than never😉 I am just kidding. I know you would have made it earlier if you could.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
😳😳😳😳😳😳 soOo sorry for being the late latif again...
read all the parts i hv missed and it z d first thing i did after logging in today though was a bit confused this time as wht to comment,from where to start and frm wht to was the question but any how gonna say coz i hv to say smthng cant go without saying anythng...😳
u truely r redefining mannet's romance Avi... truely cant pick a single thing to say i liked it more than the other...there z absolutely no scaling...hv luvd each & everythng be it all the characters,their stories,nok jhoks,the gradual progress in their relations,the song selections,dialogues,screenplays etc etc each & everythng z the BEST 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼and today i really dont hv words to praise ur work...u can make me fall in luv wd every character u write about that too other than maan & geet which i never thought i wd ever say...and the most commendable thng i hv found in these last updates is the way u hv connected each character wd one another yet they hv a story of their own to tell...their luv,fights ,turmoils & anguishes hv been portrayed so wonderfully...i'm absolutely in luv wd the way u emote through ur words and then execute them through actions👏👏👏👏...falling in luv wd the story even more and eagerly waitin to read more,got to to knw u r on holidays wish u a super joyous chuti till then i'm going to read all the parts again & again!!!
And a big wala Thank u ⭐️ & super Big Hug 🤗 for the Pm's though i'm feeling very guilty to not respond on time & i'm extremly sorry for that but i guess i owe u this much!!!
keep spreading the luv!!!❤️😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

😳soOo sorry for being the late latif again...

read all the parts i hv missed and it z d first thing i did after logging in today though was a bit confused this time as wht to comment,from where to start and frm wht to was the question but any how gonna say coz i hv to say smthng cant go without saying anythng...😳
u truely r redefining mannet's romance Avi... truely cant pick a single thing to say i liked it more than the other...there z absolutely no scaling...hv luvd each & everythng be it all the characters,their stories,nok jhoks,the gradual progress in their relations,the song selections,dialogues,screenplays etc etc each & everythng z the BEST👍🏼and today i really dont hv words to praise ur work...u can make me fall in luv wd every character u write about that too other than maan & geet which i never thought i wd ever say...and the most commendable thng i hv found in these last updates is the way u hv connected each character wd one another yet they hv a story of their own to tell...their luv,fights ,turmoils & anguishes hv been portrayed so wonderfully...i'm absolutely in luv wd the way u emote through ur words and then execute them through actions👏...falling in luv wd the story even more and eagerly waitin to read more,got to to knw u r on holidays wish u a super joyous chuti till then i'm going to read all the parts again & again!!!
And a big wala Thank u ⭐️& super Big Hug 🤗for the Pm's though i'm feeling very guilty to not respond on time & i'm extremly sorry for that but i guess i owe u this much!!!
keep spreading the luv!!!❤️😳





Thanks Gitu.. Those were some really nice words that really encourage me to keep going. Thank you again 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


hope ur enjoying ur holidays..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hope ur enjoying ur holidays..

❤️ it.
Yes am having fun. As usual, taking jhaaking on IF to keep up with my stories... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


lke eating, sleeping and all GF has become an inevitable part of our lives now... cant part with it even for a day... so enjoy peeping in between the fab holidays

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Posted: 11 years ago

i have no idea, whether u have kids or not...

but still thought to share this...

its fun


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-


i have no idea, whether u have kids or not...

but still thought to share this...

its fun




loved this. gonna try it later😃

Thanks Lakshmi
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Posted: 11 years ago

missing u wala hug hai ya stomach hurting without ladai wala😲

😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



missing u wala hug hai ya stomach hurting without ladai wala😲

😃


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