Arshi SS: Honeymoon In The Haunted Mansion *Completed* - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago


Ah I read all five chapters without getting scared lol, it is day time now...coming to story...it is awesome...in second update I thought Khushi will come face to face with the ghost but then it was kate, then thought Arnav will see the ghost but then before he could Nk's voice made him to come out of the room, which is good anyway...Poor Jake had to lose his life...yaar don't separate Arnav and Khushi I mean they should face the ghost together...Now what they r going to do...surely the ghost is going to make it's appearance now...I feel sorry for Elizabeth too...but if the ghost Arnav and Khushi I'll hunt it down in my dream of course😉...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update!!!
Nk is absolutely hilarious!! But i must say he is quite brave and had guts to go all alone to his room that too when knew there is a ghost lurking in the darkness!!

The story of the ghost was actually sad!! I mean i can understand about her brothers turning her in but how could her parents gladly handed her to the villagers and left!! That was plain cruel and pathetic!!

And no one has ever managed to come out of the house alive!! Waiting to see how they manage to come out of it!! I hope this ghost has a romantic bone in her body( or may be not) and doesn't kill our Arshi!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
N i every time forget!! Thanks for the PM!! N sorry for the late reply!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gey Guys!!! Hehe...um bak wid another chappy...Go on, read it!!
Enjoy Reading!!!
Luv Everyone Who comments!!! LUV YOU ALL!!! 🤗


Chapter 6

Arnav had finished reading the story when he looked up to see the horrific faces of everyone which displayed their fear very clearly.
Suddenly, the lights on the ceiling started flickering... on, off, on, off. The doors of the rooms started opening and closing on their own accord.
Everyone's heads started looking around wildly, no one understanding what was happening and what would they do?
"KHUSHI, WATCH OUT!!" Jenna screamed looking behind Khushi with wide eyes.
Khushi's head whipped around to see the dining which was placed next to the kitchen wall, now floating up in the air and shooting towards her in the fastest speed possible, Khushi sat frozen with her eyes wide as she saw the table nearing her in ultimate speed.
"KHUSHI!!!" Arnav screamed jumping up from his seat and launching towards Khushi, he jumped on Khushi, taking her down with him. Arnav had twirled them at right them so his back landed on the cold, hard floor, missing the table with an inch.
"Take Cover!" Arnav commanded everybody else who now ran around the house like insects, looking for a safe place to hide. Khushi was still clutching onto Arnav for her life, her form was shivering in fear to what could have happened if Arnav hadn't jumped up to save her at the right time.
"Khushi, baby look at me, everything's gonna be fine. I promise!" Arnav slightly got up taking Khushi up with him who was still clutching onto him. He lifted Khushi up in his arms and ran towards the nearest place he figured out could be safe, behind the staircase.
"A..A..rn.av" Khushi took in a shaky breath before taking her head out of the cocoon of his neck.
"Ssshh...its okay" Arnav patted the back of her head to comfort her.
Arnav gave Khushi a quick peck on her hair before noticing someone crawling behind the couch and towards them. It was NK.
"Hey guys" NK smiled as he stood up from the floor and sighed in relieve.
"Hey guys? Hey guys is what you say now, in this situation?!" Arnav asked exasperated at

NK's calmness. If he was a second late something could have happened to Khushi but her he is all calm and saying 'Hey Guys'. This guy!
"Okay, we need to get out of here and up to my room safely. We'll discuss everything there, kay?" He asked NK who nodded wildly in response.
"I'll go and inform everyone else" Arnav rose his eyebrows as he saw NK crawl back behind a pillar and towards the other couple who seemed to be carrying a hardly concious Kate.
Arnav peaked his head out to check the situation in the living room, the slights were still flickering and now there was strong wind blowing things out of their places, it was almost like a storm inside the house which was totally different to the dead, silent night outside.
Arnav looking for a chance, started running with Khushi clutching his hand and running fastly to keep up with his speed. Arnav and Khushi were already half way up the stairs, dodging the little objects that were shooting towards them when suddenly Arnav froze, seeing him freeze Khushi popped her head out from his side to check, she could make the outlines of a white figure which stood on top of the stairs. Slowly, the figure started get clearer and more solid until she the same a hideous sight in front of her, it was of a bruised body in a ragged white dress with her thick black rough hair falling on the sides and her eyes were plain, bloodied white, her arms were hanging on the side and their was blood dripping from them. Khushi let out a small shriek as soon as she witnessed it.
Now they were stuck, they couldn't go back because that would just lead them to square one and then any chance of them escaping would vanish, they couldn't stay at the same position because of the dangerous objects flying around and they definitely can't keep moving cuz there was a friggin' ghost at the top just waiting for them!
Khushi was still in shock when she felt something collide to her, ready to scream, Khushi turned around, only to find NK and the rest of them standing shocked, their eyes jumping between the lady in white on the top of the stairs and their own position.
"E..Eli..za...Eliza...beth" Jenna stuttered in pure horror as her eyes turned impossibly wide. The figure's lips curved into a mean, wretched smile and her eyes glinted with something that sent a horrifying chill down the spine of everyone who was present there except Kate who was hardly aware of what was happening.
And as suddenly as she had appeared, she disappeared. After making sure the coast was clear, Arnav rushed up with his hand clutching Khushi's in a death grip, everyone followed him up. Arnav barged in through the closed doors of their room and after making sure that everybody had come in, Malcom shut the door tight and locked it. Little did he know that spirits didn't need the door to be opened for them to enter.
Jenna and Malcom gently laid Kate on one side of the bed before gasping out loud as they looked at the other side of the bed which was burnt. It looked like the frame of the bed from that side had melted. Everyone had now came by and seen that sight.
"That's where...I...I...found her" Arnav's body shook at thinking what would have happened if he hadn't gone down at the right time. Just as a sense of protectiveness enveloped him he harshly pulled Khushi in a bone crushong hug to surpress his fears about loosing her. Now, everyone had gotten busy with their partners and NK had closed his eyes and started thanking God for the lucky escape they had made. A few minutes later, Khushi broke the hug and cupped Arnav's face before giving him a quick peck on his lips in need to reassure him that she was fine. What could happen to her when he was there to save her? After a little time all the thanking and comforting subsided as everyone came back on the topic of 'How To Escape?'.
After Khushi quickly gave a look around the room, something outside the window caught Khushi's attention. She moved out of the talking circle to get a better look at it. Khushi figured out that it was something red glowing in the dense forest as she neared the window. Suddenly, Khushi felt a force pushing her and in no time Khushi crashed against the window, breaking the glass and she felt herself falling out of the window...
"AAAHHH!!!"

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Hehe...A Cliffhanger...😈
lol...Did you feel da action?!...kay..I tried making it a little Arshi-ish...but Its a haunted FF sooo...*walks away casually*
Hehe..lol...kay..keep commenting and liking...
Veggie 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG !! This is getting really scary..!!
I'm just loving it !
I feel as if i'm in their group and all that is happening with mee too..
The story is getting more n more thrilling with each chapter.
Superb !!
And what the !
Khushi'z falling down..
No no n..
Plz don't let her get hurt.
Will be waiting for the next chappy eagerly.
Update soon.😃
Edited by Arshi-Nikita123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awh nice chapter!:)
Arnav is so comforting and nice.<3 x
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Posted: 12 years ago
O H M I G O D !

You have no freakin idea how scared i am atm!

KHUSHI!! My baby doll khushi i going to fall down?? Please please please have mercy on my baby!!

Okay now this is getting really scary!

DAMN!

I am so scared that i cant read with both eyes open and i am so addicted that i cant quit reading this ss... See what you have done?

Overall that was a wonderful update... I feel really bad for Elizabeth though because all the greedy people killed her. Her family was supposed to guard her but instead they... they...uGh!

I hope Arnav finds a way out soon...

But now NK's behaviour is giving me a hint that something is fishy!

But BUT But Khushi is about to fall out of the window... Please let Arnav save her...

Thank god arnav was there all the while with khushi. That is really the best part of this story.

Love Arnav.


He is so supportive and cute...

All the others are scared as well... I feel for them because trust me i am REALLY afraid of Horror films. I watch them sitting behind my sofa because i lack courage and this story is thrilling me to no limits.

Wonderfully written sweethrt : D

Hope you update soonish : )

Thanks for the pm babe😳

Edited by PrInCeSs_dIVa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update. khushi is about to fall out of d window. Hope arnav saves her. pls Continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...i was at the edge of my seat all the while...Khushi akele kyun gayi uss window ki paas...ab kya hoga...cant wait...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ho my this was so horrific really the ghost is killing all. And now khushi is in danger. Poor them. Waiting for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.

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