A Boulevard Of Dreams- Fiction index- New OS updt - Page 5

Hey NB...nice intriguing story "CHASING DREAMS"...read all the parts in one go...enjoyed immensely... how iss kkg going further...ASR character in nicely put...just attracted to KKG...ready for love & loyality but resists commitments for marriage... Thank God...no emotional baggage...so less struggling...

Excerpt is frightening... why abortion... KKG does not to stick to her resolutions...not ready for acknowledging the relation openly...what next ???

Good story indeed...ur work is commendable👏👏... as u mention CHASING DREAMS is ur first story...but I never felt so...U r instant hit...Many readers recommend ur stories...so looking forward to read ur all other stories later...

One suggestion...please arrange for the 1st 10 chapters with mentioning links in ur index as it will be helpful for ur new readers...as finding out the updates was a tedious job...not easy at all...I lost patience in between but I found somehow...

Have u seen movie CHOTI SI BAAT of AMOL PALEKAR???...where hero goes to Ashok Kumar...by following a difficult path...I felt the same for initial 10 chapters...May be U were checking for reader's patience... He he he...no offence...just kidding...🤣

Jokes apart U r tooo goood ...so keep writing...u can add my
id: memyarshi@gmail.com for updates...

Quite a long comment...considering my history of comments...Thanks...bye...keep writing