Can I trust you? MG OS Last Part Pg 17 22/9

bubblygal1711 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago
#1
I just wrote this OS... i really dont know if it matches anyone's story... if so plz let me know... nothing new in this story... just an OS... i think 3 parts or so... i already typed enough...hope i get good response...



Can i trust you? you were a player but you changed after that... i know you love me... but seeing you in other woman arms made my heart bleed... did you cheat me again... i just hope it is not the truth... but i saw with my eyes... you nude in other woman arms... how can i trust you? Can i?


So guys plzzz tell me how it is... i will be posting one part today evening...

Love you all.. to get updates Add "hasi.pm"

Will update heart speaks for you next...







Edited by bubblygal1711 - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

101

Views

35.1k

Users

47

Likes

527

Frequent Posters

abinash079 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
interesting concept continue soon
and update soon plz😃
tanzy10 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Nice prologue waiting for the update
impoojaverma thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#4
nice concept dear
waiting for its updates
KaSh-Maneet-Fan thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Hiii...congrats on da new story...Awesome teaser...Loved it...interesting concept...was that geet...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
k1k1k1 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Great let hear the story then proglue sound good
.OneDirection. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Very interesting
update sn , will be waiting
dnt be late 😆
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail 18th Anniversary Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
hi thanks 4 da pm..interestin prologue! update soon!
nahtani88 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Lovely Concept
Continue Soon
Thanks For The PM
maaniqra thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
interesting concept continue soon
and update soon plz

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter · 28 days ago

The Girl in the Bookshop- - MG || (Part 18 |Page 14)

Chapter One: Before the Storm At five in the morning, Shimla still belonged to the dark. The hill town slept beneath a cold blue hush, its...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m · 4 years ago

This is the story of Maan Geet . The couple who love each other and married secretly . This story will tell their everlasting love, and...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m · 5 years ago

Prologue London.It’s a hot day and Geet, in white wedding dress, watched her dear fiance kissing with her sister whose mother had already...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m · 4 years ago

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21 · 3 years ago

Love is an intense feeling of affection and care towards another person. It is a profound and caring attraction. On the other hand, lust is a...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".