in love with my jiju thread 2 updated on 24th dec pg 53 - Page 14

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chapter 14





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let me tell you a story
the story about a princess
her life was perfect
so was she
when she smiled
sun shone bright
when she laughed
the stars twinkled high in the sky
she was her dad's darling
and apple of her grandfather's eyes
in came a prince
he fell in love with her
she was swept off her feet and twirled high and round in love

together they were perfect
they loved
lived
dreamt
made promises together
to be with each other in
happiness
despair
pain
and
harmony
alas!
if they had known
there are a few battles
that are fought alone
that when destiny comes in the way of love
everything may turn topsy turvy
and so it did
the prince left
the princess was all alone
she lived alone
never laughed again
and then
she too departed
it all ended




'why Maan why is it not that simple?' Geet asked Maan


Maan had gotten up from where they were seated and had moved a few paces away from Geet, he was now standing at the corner of the magnanimous lawn, while the stars sparkled and the wind blew in strong gusts as if warning of an impending danger, storm may be. Maan's mood had changed from sombre to dark and he looked pensive. as if mentally correcting all the wrongs in the past.

Geet somehow trying to gauge, went up to him and held his hand while she leaned on his frame placing her head on his shoulder.



few mins, seconds ticked by
nobody moved. it was still as a tomb. only the wind bellowed.



"Geet ,Antara was very happy about the news of the arrival of the baby. our final semester was almost over and our exams were at our doorstep knocking giving us nightmares but Antara remained aloof from all the tension and she spent a hell lot of time talking to her baby. though i knew that it was good that she wasn't losing sleep over her studies which was not right given her state, as she was expecting yet i knew her not appearing for the exams or not doing well would set all the alarm bells ringing back in India. so i had to made sure she studied and pass in the exams. hence i decided to speak to her."

Maan sighed, breathed in ample of fresh air, as if savoring the fragrance in the air or preparing himself for what he was about to say.


"Antara though had recuperated from the loss yet her mind remained fragile, she would react at smallest f the issues so i knew i had to tread carefully with patience. on the afternoon when i was all prepared to confront her and went to her room to talk to her i found her sleeping on her bed. i turned to leave when i heard her murmuring in her sleep and something about her speech stalled me midway and i retreated into her room near her bed to where she was sleeping. i bent down closer to her face and tried to hear. she was murmuring something about the baby being unwell and not responding. i was worried, i checked her forehead and felt it burning, she had high fever. Immediately i rushed her to the nearby hospital where i made sure she was attended with utmost care. i was asked to wait outside while she was being examined. waiting outside in the lobby all sorts of bad thoughts crossed my mind. i mentally scolded myself for not taking good care of her, it was at that time i realized that i had never asked her about her routine checkups the ones that are usually carried out once a lady is expecting in fact i had never shown any interest in any of the reports or never asked which doctor she went to. i was so crammed up in my studies and the tension of the exams that i failed to cross my mind. moreover the grief somewhere had struck me hard too and the hasty decision of marriage all had taken a toll upon me. i blamed myself.
Then i saw the doctor coming out, she looked calm, her face impassive, devoid of expressions. she looked me square in the eyes and asked, ' are you with Antara?' i nodded and even before i could ask her about Antara she barreled in with her volley of questions that made no sense to me"


he had stopped again and this time the silence seemed eerie. Geet knew something real bad was up her way and somewhere Maan was trying to prepare her for the onslaught, the emotional turmoil. she felt something stir in her gut and her stomach felt queasy. yet she nudged Maan who looked her way and the moment he did so she saw his eyes brimming with tears that threatened to fall yet he controlled himself and continued. he held her close to his heart that Geet felt hammering against his rib cage. Geet could feel his sadness his dilemma she held him in tight grip trying to assure him.




Maan went on...the doctor asked me since when Antara suffered from the problem? whether there was any family history? how many sessions has she had? if she had sessions then why wasn't there any improvement and last of the questions that had me alert was, which shrink was she seeing? and she would like to see her prescriptions before giving her any medication. i was shocked, my head was reeling and i felt nauseous while the doctor insisted on Antara's psychiatrist's number so she could talk to me. it was too much for me to take in, the vision seemed blurred and my body light, the world around me went round and round and in the midst of all i saw all that that had transpired in the past few weeks. Antara falling ill, complaining of nausea and then suddenly breaking the news of pregnancy, daaarji calling in for my consent, Antara being happy, talking to the baby. i could see it all in front of me and then the next moment it was all black. i had passed out. i woke up in a room all white, strange even the calmest of the colors failed to provide me with some peace. ever since gained consciousness my head hurt and the questions wallowed in my subconscious plagued with one question of my own, why had the doctor referred to a shrink? is Antara ill mentally? can it be true? how? she seemed well absolutely. while was still squinting my eyes to adjust with the bright lights in the room the nurse walked in silhouetted by the doctor. she now had a pleasant but detached doctorly smiles that said i sympathize with you plastered to her face.
she asked me how i felt and while checking my pulse. she said that too much of stress can be exhaustive for the body and mind. I'll come back later and then we'll discuss about your friend. for now you rest' with that she patted my back and was about to leave when i called out, and asked as to what was wrong with her. in return i got another question, as to whether Antara had suffered from any trauma? I nodded in a solemn yes and then slowly gave details of the past few weeks. She listened patiently and I saw her expression change from solemn to grave. After I had finished an uncanny silence hung in the air. Then she began and what she told me had me go absolutely cold, turn placid, like a statue. She told me Antara was on the path of losing her mental equilibrium. She had a rare problem where the patient after experiencing a trauma fails to register the bitter truth that plagues her situation. In Antara's case though she had been forced to come to terms with the harsh reality of Aakash's death yet the dreams that they had seen together when he were alive are very much a reality to her. A greater shock awaited me next, when I enquired about the baby and whether Antara's mental health would have any repercussions on her physical health and that of the baby , when the doctor concurred that Antara was not pregnant . I lay on the hospital bed flustered flummoxed jarred with too many questions, I just couldn't understand how? But the doctor cleared it all out. She told me the baby was a figment of Antara's imagination, since she and Aakash had discussed about having children; it was Aakash's dream, he loved children and hence after his death when she had nothing to turn and too devastated to believe that her beloved had left her, she turned to the bay for solace, the next closest substitute for Aakash. She patted me on my hands and with a sympathetic smile told me Antara was in dire need of help. She also told me that now if we coaxed her to see a shrink situation may worsen since her ailment had graduated to the next level. I held my head and asked just how? And all the doctor had to say was life can be really cruel at times. She told me that while examining her they never knew about her cmental condition, it was only when at the examining room when Antara had gained consciousness and had gone totally out of control that they subjected her to some mental assessment and in due course found about her delirium"

Geet was appalled at the truth, she didn't know how to react she was shocked. Of all she hadn't expected to hear this. Her sister mentally unstable, " she seemed fne but''." The words came out in hoarse whisper. She was unable to come terms with the truth. She staggered backwards and faltered in her steps, her head was reeling and though they were standing outside yet she felt stuffy. She would have fallen had Maan's strong arms not caught her mid air. He picked her up in his arms and led her inside.

He made her lay on the bed. Geet all of the sudden inspite of the pleasant weather felt uncannily cold and Maan just laid by her side and held her close . he whispered near her ears, 'sleep my angel, rest you need to rest"

"Maan please don't leave me, please" with that Geet clutched on to Maan

"I wont" said Maan, "now sleep"

Precap; ?

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Nice update love it
antra is mentally apsect 😲
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plzzz i want more maneet scenes 😛😉

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thank you all!🤗

There was no baby 😲 Antara was never pregnant 😲 It was all in Antara's brain because she cudnt bear the shock of Aakash's death,she lost her mental balance.And thats why Maaneet and Antara,all three suffered.

Feeling exptremely sad for Antara,how deeply she had loved,yet God took her Aakash away from her.

I hope,after the initial shock Geet becomes normal and Maaneet's relation becomes smooth.


Outstandin part buddy.But I wud request you to not end it so soon,give the story its deserving parts and then end. 😊