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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Heya Shah Didi ...

I m glad to find that you have posted your story congrats on another new FF
Like I told You the concept is awesome

As always very well thought out and executed
Both chapters 1 and 2 were beautifully writte

Seems Like Uday ( the " fake principal" is Uday r8?) and his
friend know Manyata Singh or perhaps they know her dad
since he is an attorney he must hav made himself friends and enemies

I dont think taking manyata's phone from her was just a
mere prank I vud hazard a guess that perhaps he took it to knw more about her ... its just my detective brain going wild😆

Abh ya Rahul kaun hai ?seems like a nice guy or mayb he cud b 1 of Karan's friends trying to befriend Miss singh Anyways excuse my overly dramatic interpretation and imagination I loved both the chapters looking forward to more awesome updates take care Hugs



Aww thank you my dearest yaara for your ever so kind words and confidence in me and my stories.
You have just been incredible with all the love and support. As always ur mind is working... and figuring out so very much. Tum me pata hai tum CID definitely join kar lena chahiye...lol. love the comment yaara. hugs and loads of love. muuuaaahhh
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chocohollic

A usual nerd gets a prince attention

Something too good to be true

I read both the chapter And I really like this story Firstly Cinderella is my dream characterBut the second chapter left me with suspension I do know this innocent soul is falling in his trap But why is he playing around with her?


Thanks for the comment dear, nice knowing you enjoying the story so far. While there is no exact replica to the fairytale cinderella, its just the name that stuck out in my modern version of a simple girl... feeling beautiful for a small period of time...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shahista01


Thanks for the comment dear, nice knowing you enjoying the story so far. While there is no exact replica to the fairytale cinderella, its just the name that stuck out in my modern version of a simple girl... feeling beautiful for a small period of time...


OK well that is even better do pm me please whensoever you update and please do update your other ss
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chocohollic


OK well that is even better do pm me please whensoever you update and please do update your other ss

will do sweety.. muuaahh
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Posted: 12 years ago
Firstly a very big THANK YOU TO EACH AND EVERYONE of you for liking the last chapter... hugs and lotsa love.
Chapter 3
'Damn these stupid combinations'
'You need some help'
Startled she looked up into a genuinely sweet face. She shook her head
'No I am fine thanks, its just' ' again she banged her hand on the door
'It seems like you do need the help, these lockers are like that especially when trying for the first time'

And with that he had opened it

'Thank you '

'By the way I am Rahul and you are definitely new here'

'Yes i am manyata transferred from Rosewood'

'So what do you think of BSC?'

'Its'.. different'

Rahul smiled knowing exactly what she meant, she turned after placing her new load of text books from previous class and soon they were chatting away. Felt nice to meet someone normal like her'. He was running late for his literature class while she was struggling to find the bio lab.

The hallway seemed deserted when she turned to look straight into a couple having a heavy make out session which shocked the hell out of her. She tried to look away while walking around them

'Ok baby I got to go'

'Will I see you later?'

'No probably not'

Manyata walked past hurriedly as she heard the girl pleading with the guy to see her later carefully not looking at their faces but hearing their conversations when she heard her name being called. She continued walking thinking she heard wrong when again'..

'Manyata'.Singh'

She stopped and turned around only to be greeted with his perfect face and wicked smirk' what is he doing here? Oh god run manyata, he is probably one of those physco serial robbers or something, why cant I move my legs? Oh no he is walking towards me, do something manyata scream' she looked around and couldn't see anyone else in the hallway, yuck he was the same guy that girl was glued to.. disgusting and cheap. Her brain finally began to work as she took few steps back and spoke preparing to run her fastest if he moved towards her

'Yooo. Uu YOU stay away from me. YOU ARE not the principal and I will rep.. I will report you'

'You will now? What will say to them?'

'Listen I will scream stop.. stop coming any closer to me.. YOU.. YOU THIEF''

'Well what do you know.. that's quite a mouth you have on you MAN.. YA.. TA''

Oh god she was having troubling breathing as he gained proximity, her heart pounding as she turned around and started to run only to feel her arm being yanked forcefully before she could scream or retaliate she was taken into the janitors room and the door shut while his hands were covering her mouth.

Oh god this is it, he is going to kill me. Tears stinging her eyes as she tried to look around in the room but she couldn't as she was pressed against the wall with his weight while his hand never left her mouth and his eyes burning into hers.

'I am going to remove my hands from your mouth, you don't want to make the mistake of screaming, UNDERSTAND'

She said nothing numb from what is happening

'I said do you UNDER STAND?'

She nodded her head while he removed his hand and the minute he moved his body weight off her she tried to flee only to be pulled back by him and this time his hands were on either side of the wall and his face was inches away from hers. She could look at him and the tears she was suppressing was now flowing out

'Ple'..please don't hurt me' I promise I wont report you or the phone stolen, you can.. you can keep the phone' just let' just let me go'

Oh man tears' she looks like a fragile baby, so innocent so'. Afraid' of me?

'shhh' he placed his finger in her quivering lip

'I am not going to hurt you and if you had not ran in the first place I would have give you your phone back?'

He took it out from his jacket pocket and gave it to her

'I am many things but a thief is not one them, I forgot to give it back to you earlier'

'Why' why did you do that earlier?'

He burst out laughing as she swallowed hard and looked at him, her eyes misty.

'Well you were just at the wrong place at the wrong time, you should thank your lucky stars I usually don't welcome newbies so warmly'' '

She creased her eyebrows feeling very intimidated my him and his alluring eyes and the way he was staring at her lips.

'Uhh.. ok.. Thanks I suppose. Now i' I should be going. I am late for my class.. and

Before she could say a word more, her glasses were taken off'. Oh no not again, this room was dark as it is and now'.

'Please give me back my glasses see' I really cant '. I promise I wont ever come in front of you again' please just.. just let me go'

She felt his warm breath on her face and inhaled his strong smell closing her eyes as her lips quivered

'YOU ARE REALLY GOING TO HAVE TO SOMETHING ABOUT THESE GLASSES'

There's that line again?...

And he placed her glasses back on her nose

As soon she felt that, she pushed past him hard and ran not before hearing

'I don't think I want you to hide away from me'. I know you exist now and if you keep away I will find you'

And she shut the door hard breathing heavily not even turning around once to look back.. .. if this was how the first day was what Is the rest of the year going to be like?

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She had come home to an empty house, missing her last class and even worse dad was not around. She found his note

'I am so sorry princess, I had to leave today.

Maria will be back tomorrow so please don't forget to switch on the alarm before you get to bed and yes the security will be patrolling the area, it is generally safe neighbourhood but still I will be checking in on you.

Hope you had a great first day, will skype you later and then you can fill me in.

Bye princess, love you'

She sighed heavily as she sank into the chair. What a day and you are also not here now' I still can't believe any of it, I spent most of my childhood and teenage years going invisible and now at 17 .I have become the pawn of a bully?? Why me? I don't want to go back to that school, as soon as dad comes back I will have to tell him that I want to transfer out. I need to speak to jai, she took out her phone and dialed jai, their casual conversation turned serious when manyata filled jai in on her first day'..jai was livid that someone had actually had the nerve to treat her that way

'Manya you seriously should report him, such a jerk for targeting you'.

'J I can't do that, I don't want any more undue attention and problems'

'But why not, people like him can't just go around scaring the hell out of innocent people, the sleazy slime ball'

Manyata laughed her contagious infectious laugh after the horrible day she had listening to her bestie vent her anger

'Maybe this whole thing will be forgotten and tomorrow will be a better day, I mean he did return my phone'

'I hope so babes, but if he so much as blows wind in your direction. You better stand your ground and get his ass kicked out'

'I don't think he is a student there, he looks very'.. different ' older like'

'Whats his name?'

'I have no idea, I mean its not like we were introducing ourselves at an AA meeting'

Jai giggled ' Nice to know your sense of humor is still intact'

'Babes I just want to say please be careful and stay away from that creep, and one more thing how does he look?'

'WHAT?'

'You know is he like UGLY with a capital U or Fairly Ok looking?'

'J seriously are we having this conversation now?'

'All I am saying is that if the bugger is half as good looking is even more dangerous'..'

'That's just the thing, why would any good looking guy ...ok more than good looking guy even look in my direction?'

'Ahaaan? So Mr. Slime ball' actually must really be good looking for you to '

'No .. no j its not like that, I meant''

'I know what you meant babes, and I don't know when you will realize how beautiful you are, perfect sun kissed hair, flawless skin, the cutest dimple that's always hidden as you never smile and eyes that light up the world' you need to see yourself the way you really are babes'.. '

'Ok enough with the flattery, best friends are supposed to say that.'

'No M, best friends are supposed to be honest and I am. You are a gem of a person inside and out just please be extra careful and carry a can of pepper spray if the good looking slime ball messes with you, just kick him where the sun don't shine, pepper spray his eyes and run'

Manyata laughed as she listened to her, only jai could make a bad day so much better, they continued chatting for while after until both realized that they had to go, promising to chat tomorrow.

While manyata had prepared her supper , showered and sat in front of the tv waiting for her dad to call and eventually fell asleep waking up to the sound of her phone ringing. It was her dad checking in on her and making sure she was alright as security was patrolling in the area, she reassured him that she was fine and she had her supper. He sounded so tired and the last thing she felt like telling him about was her first day and how she didn't want to go back there, instead she changed the topic and decided when his back she would speak to him. After ending the call, she double checked the pin on alarm and headed to her bed putting out all thoughts of dark alluring eyes and strong musky no minty no woody' whatever it was it needed to get out of her senses as her dreams called out to her.

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ok guys thats chapter 3... you guys are being so great and i am only returning the favour with all the updates. Do let me know what you think of it. Kindly ignore any spelling errors.
Have a great weekend
Hugs
Shahi
Edited by Shahista01 - 12 years ago
chocohollic thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Am i seriously the first to comment
Woa for the first time I got this position
Well the update left me smiling
It was really so good
Seems like her life is turning into a fairy tale
Loved the part where Uday pins her to the world
And does things his way
I mean the way he talks to her and treats her is so romantic
I am loving his character but I just hope it is not a trap
Lastly loved the bond J and Manyata share
Thanks for the pm
You write so well
Edited by chocohollic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a treat from you shahi.
This whole week has just been so awesome now that you are back.
And coming to this chapter.
Too good.
Uday is really a bully? but there was such hotness when he took her in that room. She is so quite and specksy,she wants to transfer out already?
I know you let that happen. jai and manya convo was great.
Love their bond. so she is home alone.
Well that was some first day.
I enjoyed every second of reading it.
Thanks shahi. Ur the best.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow shahi
If you were in front of me, I would give you the biggest hug.
Thank you so much for thinking about us.
Well as for the chapter, loved it.
I mean it is like a thriller somewhat. I think uday is up 2 something.
But love the way he pinned her to the wall and keeps taking her glasses off.
And I love this stuttering manyata. And manyata and Jai convo. she is a good friend.
Well the next chap will be even more interesting. I just know it.
so Rahul is a good guy or bad guy?
Thanks again.
And U also have a good weekend. Its so great to have you back shahi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
ooo my god sha. triple update for dis ss in a week. den u updated d or r. now i read in one of reply u r going to update dekha next week.am i day dreaming sha. seems like someone planning to vanish for another 2 or 3 months huuuh.any way i am so so happy dat u r updating all ur ss.

now comming to d update. d charactor of rahul seems fishy.den loved manveers second meeting.ooo my dis uday. if he was going to give her phone back den y did he take away.i really like j of ur ss sha.glad dat u didnt made her typical vamp. loved d friendship bond dey shared. really uv had some effect on manyata.

mind blowing udate shahi.loved it loads. luking forward wat twist story takes. eagerly waiting for next chappy.try to continue soon sha. danxs for pm.
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome shahi!!
that was really good!.
hehehe Uday ne manyata ki Baja dali!
update soon

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