Here is episode 1 n 2 written update

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Episode 1: Dabboo's fantasy turns into a nightmare as he dreams of his chacha breaking his teeth. He was actually sitting on top of a car's luggage carrier that halts in front of a house. The family of the Singhs gets out and is excited to see their new house.

Tejo and Vichittar (Daboo's chacha-chachi) are mean to him and send him to his room which is like a dirty store room with cobwebs. Dabboo looks at his dead parents pictures and speaks to them sadly. The two nasty kids Cheeku and Chunni come and drag Dabboo to their room which is bright, shiny and full of toys. Dabboo looks at it in awe. And then the two monstrous kids start hitting him with a ball. After many hits, Dabboo ducks and the ball goes flying out of the window into the outhouse. Dabboo is made to go and fetch it.

He walks into the eerie, spooky outhouse, to find the ball perched on top of a cupboard and as he tries to jump and get it, he pulls off an old Nimbu-Mirchi hanging on the door of the cupboard. Now the door of the cupboard opens a little and a smoky form comes out of it slowly. As Dabboo runs out with the ball, the smoky form follows him out and then as Dabboo leaves the outhouse area, the smoky form transforms into a young man (Ni Ke) he looks around excitedly and screams - I'm free!

The ghost Ni Ke comes into the house and tries to talk to Tejo and Chavvanni but no one can see him or hear him. He is very upset and complains to Guru (GoD). The two nasty kids corner Dabboo and hit him with a metal plate. Dabboo passes out. The whole family is worried. An energy flow passes from Ni Ke to Dabboo as Ni Ke comes and feels his heartbeat. Dabboo suddenly sits up.

Dabboo becomes the first and the only one to see and hear Ni Ke. Ni Ke is ecstatic and he flies all over the house in excitement - Dabboo sees this spectacle and screams. Ni Ke comes back and tells him that he forgot to tell him that he is a ghost. Dabboo promptly faints again!

Episode 2: Ni Ke excitedly speaks to the unconscious Dabboo and tells him that he is so happy to have met someone who can hear and see him - that means that he will find out where his parents are and have many other questions answered.

Dabboo suddenly regains consciousness and is really scared to see the ghost. He runs out, Ni Ke follows him. He runs again but is then caught by Cheeku Chunni and then Chavvanni who informs them that Mishra ji has come to meet Dabboo.

Dabboo tells the lawyer with a fake smile on his face that he really likes being with his chacha chachi and has a lot of fun with his cousins. Mishra ji (the lawyer) has come with a gift for Dabboo - his fathers locket! Dabboo hugs Mishra ji but then starts screaming as Ni Ke appears again. Mishra ji is troubled by Dabboo's behavior and tells Vichittar Singh something really important.

Tejo snatches the locket from Dabboo and keeps it for herself. Ni Ke returns to Dabboo and tells him not to scream and shout as he can help bring Dabboo's fathers locket back. Dabboo calms down - the two travel across the house to find the locket. Vichittar catches Dabboo twice but Ni ke makes Dabboo disappear and Tejo thinks that Vichittar is hallucinating.

Tejo has worn the locket and gone out but a thief steals the locket from her neck. She screams - Ni Ke tells Dabboo that this is their chance. Vichittar, Tejo, Dabboo and Ni Ke, all follow the thief. Ni Ke finds the thief and brings back Dabboo's locket. Dabboo is overjoyed.

Dabboo tells Ni Ke that he can do anything so can he also bring back Dabboo's parents? Ni Ke says that won't be possible. Dabboo is upset. Ni Ke walks out of Dabboo's room only to find out that Vichittar and Tejo are plotting to take away all of Dabboo's fathers money by declaring him mad! Mishra ji has told Vichittar that Dabboo is behaving in a very odd fashion ever since his parents died and so if he continues to behave like this, they should inform him so that he can take the necessary legal actions and make Vichittar take over his property. Tejo gets excited at the information and tells Vichittar that even if dabboo hasn't really gone mad, they will make him go mad. Ni Ke stands stunned!

hey hope this is helpful when i will get more updates will post it here but no worries bcoz frm next week we r gonna start wid the updates as u all knw who r the updaters also.thanks

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks amra for writing the updates i think this will help the members 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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theres only u niki di who is posting comments n appreciating but srry but i want to be totally frank this is not done by me this is taken frm a site where i found but this is not frm any forum or anything.
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