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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Just started reading...

Amazing concept, dear..
Loved it...
Its gonna be so interesting to see how taaRey fall for each other..

aawww thnx a lot hun!! 🤗
im happy dat u luvd it!!😃
well woh toh abhi durr hai
i just started wd d story so u hve to wait dear 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Chapter 1


It was so cute..
For me the best part was the childhood part..
Awww.. Rey wanted to become her prince..
The cute TaaRey..
And then the Crazy taani..
ahahhahahaha!!
Everyone was so scared...
Lovely chapter, dear..

aawweee thnk u so much hun!!! 😃
im glad u liked d flashback n d chapter
thnx a ton hun!!
🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Interesting promo, dear..

Hmm.. I think, the guy is Rey...😛
And then..
Swayam!!! Wo to gaya...😲😆
And SwaRon Blushing...😆
And Taani teasing them...😆
Plz. Update soon..

thnk u so much dear!! 😃
well keep guessing dear!! rey ho sakta hai ya koi aur bhi hosakta hai 😉
will update soon dear
chalo u commnted so much den will update d next chapter in few minutes 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Suhani--

Chapter 1:
Awe such a cute chapter ❤️
TaaRey were so cute :)
Lol Tanis dad scared to wake her up!!
Awe poor swayam!!!
loved it!!!
Update Soon!!

thnk u so much dear!! 🤗
im so happy dat u luvd it!!😃
thnx a ton dear
will update soon hun 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Suhani--

Interesting promo!!
Update Soon!!!

thnx a lot dear!!
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnk u so much hun!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nithi_newlife

That was really cute...

Great job!!😊😊

thnx a lot dear!!😊
im glad u liked it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ale_TaaRey

That's a confusing promo O.o Koi ni update soonnn ...!!! 😊

hahhahaha
well sabar ka phal meetha hota hai ale!!
u just hve to wait n watch wat happns 😉
will update soon hun 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey people!! im bck wid d 2nd chapter 😃
Hope u like dis chapter as much as d promo 😊

Chapter 2

*a girl ws running around in a beautiful garden, near a meadow..as she ws running, she ws laughing her heart out..her soft delicate hair ws falling on her face n a melodious sound of her laughter cud be heard everywhere...it cud be seen dat a guy ws running behind her, trying to catch her..she ws teasng him n laughing out loud at his frustrated expression as he cudnt ctch her..but suddenly, d girl trips n falls on d hard ground..d guys runs to her for her aid*

Guy - taanu! U ok? Kya hua? I told u nt to run dat fast na..ab dikhao kya hua hai


*he holds her feet n she winced in pain..not long enough, her tears start streaming out..d guy caresses her face n wipe her tears away wid his thumb*


Guy - sshhh..pls stop crying taanu..i knw ur in pain n I think tumhare per mein mocha a gayi..i hve to press it to make u feel bttr bt its gonna hurt baby

Taani - nahi nahi..im scared!!😭 Aur mujhe bht dard ho rahi hai..

Guy - chill baby..im gonna make it all bttr..u just count till three n d pain will b gone b4 u knw it..trust me

Taani - okok..i trust u..ok..o..one two..aahhh!!😲

Guy - dekha hogaya..nw u must b feelng much bttr😳

Taani - u ddnt even wait till 3!!😡 Dats cheating!! Jao main tumse baat hi nahi karunggi..katti !(wid a cute pout)

Guy - oh god taanu..accha sorry baby..ab yeh katti-watti mat karo..nw u must b feelng painless rght?😳

Taani - haye krishnaji..ur rght!! Its nt painful anymore!!😲 Wow..tum toh mere superman ho😳

Guy - hahahah..ur one n only superman..i love u taanu😳

Taani - I love you too SHIVAM!😳

*n dey hug each oder n never wanted to let go..taani ws in cloud nine..she ws in dis beautiful garden, wid her adorable bf whom she loves so much n who loves her too..evrythng felt perfect n nothing cud go wrong..bt she ws wrong, coz suddenly a rush of cold water splashed to her body..Taani den jerked up n screamed..she opend her eyes n gasped for air..she looked at her surroundings n realized dat she ws just dreaming abt her prince charming! She starred at d guy standing in front of her, holding a bucket..Mr.Swayam shikhwat, her brother, was staring at her n fear ws seen in his eyes..taani ws gvng murderous look to her brother for disturbing her sleep n ruining her dream! She ws ssoo ready to kill him nw*


Swayam(thinking) - oh freak!!😕 d sleeping beauty has turned into a crazy lady n she is so gonna kill me nw..i bttr run b4 she kills me! bhaag swayam bhaag!!😆

Taani(screaming) - AAAHHH!!!!😡 UR SO DEAD BHAI!! IM GONNA KILL U!!! HW DARE U THROW WATER ON ME!!😡

Swayam(stepping away n getting scared) - uuhhmm..de..dekho taanu..my baby sister..im sorry bt u were nt wakng up only..i clld ur name 100 times bt u were nt wakng up.s..s..so😕

Taani(standing up n walkng towards sayam) - SO WAT?😡

Swayam - s..so i..i..i had no oder option..dekh im so sorry taanu bt dad ne mujhe force karke tujhe uthane ke liye bola..dekh it ws nt my fault..taanu sory na😕

Taani - UR SO DEAD!😡

*n taani picked up d thng which ws closest to her i.e her soft toy, teddy..she threw it at swayam n he catches it wid his hands..a smirked appeared on his face n he laid out his tongue n teasd her..she ws more angry nw n picked up a vase nearby..swayam's expression changed into a scardy cat as he saw d vase..he den runs for his life while taani runs behind him*


Taani - U CNT RUN FROM ME BHAI!!😡 YEH VASE TOH MAIN AAPKI SAR PE MAAR KE CHODUNGGI😡

Swayam - omg taanu..tu pagal ho gayyi hai!! 😲N u cnt catch me 😛


*as swayam n taani runs down from d stairs, he bumps into aditya whu ws startled at frst, bt he understood wat ws going on once he saw taani running behind swayam..dis ws like a daily routine for dem, except it's usually munia getting taani's wrath n scoldings *

Swayam(taking cover behind aditya) - papa..dekho yeh aapki beti kya kar rahi hai 😕 she wants to kill me n just bcoz I distrupted her sleep n broke her stupid dream

Taani - MY DREAM WS NT STUPID!😡 NW IM SERIOUSLY GONNA THROW DIS VASE ON UR HEAD! 😡

AS - taanu beta..chill..dekho yeh jo vase hai yeh mujhe dedo 😕 ab swayam ko jaane do na ..tumhe pata hai na who kesa hai..n he ws just following ur mom's orders..

Taani - bt pa..

AS - bas bas..ab swayam say sorry to taanu..tumne usko gilla bhi kardiya 😡 bichari..nw say sorry

Swayam - uugghh..fine..sorry taanu

Tani - pehle 10 times uthak bethak karo..fir main manunggi 😛

Swayam - wat?😲 Oh hello, im a grown man nw..im nt gonna do dat!😕

AS - swayam beta..its ok..woh choti hai na n u did soaked her! Bichari ki hallat dekho..she is even shivering nw..so just do it..only 10 times

Swayam - bt pa..😕

AS - just do it swayam n end dis topic nw😡

Swayam - fine..aap toh humesha iski hi side lete ho

Taani(smirking) - ok bhai im counting nw 😛 one..two..


*taani counts till 10 while swayam did d punishment..he was pissed at frst, bt seeing his sister laughing n smilling , he smiled too..he ws happy wen she ws happy..after he did his punishment, a satisfied smirk ws seen on taani's face..she luvs her brother so much, even though sumtimes he ws a pain in d ass..she knew dat he wud do anythng for her n dat goes to her father too*

AS - ab toh khush na taanu?😊

Taani - very haapy papa 😃

AS - accha ab go n get ready..collge nahi jana kya?

Taani - oh freak..its allrdy 8!😲 Im so gonna b late again!! Accha main jaa rahi hoon tayaar hone

MS(cuming out from d kitchen) - ruko taanu..yeh ladki hi na..kya hallat banai hai apni?😕 Hw come ur soaked! U knw wat, nevermind..ab breakfast karle fir tayaar ho jaa na

Taani - bt mom..😕

MS - no buts..chalo sab log beth jao aur breakfast karke hi jao..aaj I made alloo paranthe😃

Taani - omg alloo paranthe!!😃 Yyuumm😃


*n dey all sat to hve breakfast togthr..taani ws enjoying her alloo paranthe n eatng it like a kid*


Swayam(looking at taani) - oh god taanu..hahahaha 😆 u hve like yoghurt all over ur face..tu seriously bacchi ki bacchi hi rahegi..araam se kha na..😆

Taani - arrey bhai main kya karoon..dese paranthe r ssooo tasty!!😛 Mom kya paranthe hai! Mmuuaahh!!😃

Swayam - oh btw taanu..teri frend, Sharon nahi dikhai deh rahi?😳 Is she nt going collge wid u today?

Taani - arrey haan..yeh shar kaha reh gayyi 😲 ab iski wajah se I will b late again😕

Voice - tumne pukara aur hum chale aaye😆


*The shikhawats tuned towards the main door n saw the diva, Ms.Sharon rai prakash, standing n smilling her million dollar smile..Sharon n taani hve been best frends for a long time nw..dey hve been frends since their schooling days..sometimes taani wondered hw dey became frends coz dey r totally opposite each oder ! Sharon is a total diva..she has always been so glamorous n pretty..She had d body n curves of a girl dat any1 cud die for..her hair is always so bouncy n perfect..even wen she walks wid elegance n diva-like dat evry1 wud stop n just stare at her..in d oder hand, taani is a very simple yet beautiful girl..she believes in simplicity n not at all a glamorous girl..she dsnt hve d perfect hair nor d perfect body bt she is happy wid d way she is n people still do turn their heads wen she walk past dem..Sharon n Taani are totally opposites but dey balance each oder out n dey understand each oder..dats wat makes their frndship work

As Sharon enters d house, she runs towards taani n hugs her tightly*


Sharon - taanu!! I hve missed u so much🤗

Taani - u missed me?😲 yeah rght..mujhe miss kiya ya kisi aur ko?(eyeing swayam)😉

Sharon(blushing) - shut up tannu 😳 i hve missed u n evry1 too😳

Taani - oh god shar 😕 we just met like yesterday in collge remember?😆

MS - arrey Sharon tum aaj kal ghar hi nahi aati beta😊

Sharon - ji aunty..woh actlly I hve been so busy wid assignments n all..bt aaj toh main aayi hoon na aur aapki famous alloo parantha khake jaunggi 😃

Taani - hhmm..shar tu beth aur main jaake tayar hoti hoon..i dnt wanna b late again today 😕

Sharon - haan haan jaa !! tere karaan main bhi naa late ho jaoo😕

Swayam - mom , hum chalte hai..office mein bht sara kaam hai aur ek urgnt meetng bhi hai so we hve to go..chalein papa?

AS - yes yes..lets go..bye guys..oh haan taanu, aaj ghar jaldi aana..we hve family dinner nite aaj n I hve to discuss sumthng imp wid u guys too

Taani - ok pa..bye!! 🤗

Sharon - uumm..bye uncle..b..bye swayam😳

Swayam - uumm yeah..bye😳


That ws it guys!! i knw u guys were expecting more bt abhi ke liye itna hi 😳

n abhi rey ka introduction baad mein hoga..so u guys hve to wait..sabar ka phal meetha hota hai 😆

pls dnt frgt to hit like n commnt!!🤗 critism is welcome n will try to improve next time 😃

Edited by forever18able - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Resss...woh bhi pm se pehle...!!*Dancing*
M firstt yaayyyeee 🤗
Coming to the update...!!!
Bhaag Swayam Bhaag 😆
Ufff Taaniii love herrr...!!!❤️
Bechara Swayam 😆
Hayeee SwaRon 😳
Awesome update dea...!!!😊
Loved ittt...! 👍🏼
Update soon n pm me 😊
Love: Ale_TaaRey ❤️
Edited by Ale_TaaRey - 12 years ago

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