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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

hey
howz you?
wow one more story
amazing concept
i really like it shahi u awsome writter
mindblowing story loved the concept
amazing do continue soon
story name was amazing lovely
loved ur story so so much
i loved it update soon
and pm me 4 sure
thank yo 4 the pm
and i love it please update ur other chapter also
u are great writter..!!!
story name omg wow amazing and attracting
update soon i m eagerly waiting 4 next pdate

hey sweety.. im well thanks and you?
thanks for the kind words
will be updating later...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome concept loved the start so sad she lost her mom and she is a new transfer in can't wait to read more thanks for the pm

Thanks dear... love the pics😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
FIRSTLY A VERY BIG THANK YOU TO EACH AND EVERYONE OF YOU 60 😲😲FOR LIKING.. LOVE THE RESPONSE, AND SERIOUSLY DID NOT EXPECT IT TO BE SO WELL RECEIVED..
CONSIDERING QUITE A FEW OF MY FRIENDS HAVENT LIKED OR READ YET... SO I AM VERY HAPPY... AND DECIDED TO POST THE SECOND CHAPTER...WILL NOT PROLONG OR KEEP THIS STORY AS IT WILL MOVE VERY QUICKLY SO AGAIN THERE NEXT CHAPTER IS ALREADY WRITTEN... AWAITING YOUR RESPONSE...😆
A VERY BIGTHANK YOU WALA HUG🤗 AND THIS ONE'S JUST FOR YOU... GUYS

Karan immediately dialed a number as he watched manyata walk in the admin block direction

'Hey man, it's the next one. I think she is the one'

'W*F is the one supposed to mean karan, get to the point'

'It means she is Manyata Singh??? Ring any bells'

Silence as the name registered very well in his head, karan didn't want to upset him further knowing if his anger gets out then everything will go to waste

'Hey man listen, just calm yourself and make sure it really is who we were waiting for, but Rosewood high gave it away and one more thing get rid of that flava on our lap, she will be there any minute now'

He inhaled sharply closing his eyes

'Whats wrong baby?'

'I need you to leave now'

'Sorry, what?

He said through gritted teeth before forcefully kissing her lips leaving her breathless

'LEAVE NOW'

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She finally managed to find the principal's office and as she was just about to knock the door opened and out came a scantily clad girl who was adjusting her top and looked straight at manyata smiling and winking as she walked past fixing her hair. Manyata gulped staring at her and walking out not knowing what to expect when she heard''

'Are you going to stand outside the whole day? I don't have time to waste'

She swallowed hard and took a deep breath in before walking in and stopped dead in her tracks when her eyes met his'' She couldn't move as his eyes smirked at her, he was gorgeous' no wait that's an understatement she had never seen anyone like him, he was extremely good looking and way to young to be a principal, what the hell is going on here? I am in the wrong office? Oh my god manyata move away you are looking at him like an idiot.

'Excuse me, are you ok?'

Finally gaining the ability to speak she spoke

'I am so .. soory' hmmm I was looking for the principal's office and I ' hmmm I need to go now''

She turned to walk away walking straight into the door 'OWW'

that's gotta hurt 😆 he thought to himself

He had to keep himself from bursting into laughter as he watched this clumsy little nerd stare at him like she had never seen good looking man before well that's natural I mean its not a reaction I am surprised at '.but to actually walk into the door' this is going to be fun considering she is so naive and unaware, too bad someone's gotta pay the price.

He bit his lip to suppress his laughter and rushed to see if she was ok, her nose was so red and she immediately covered it with her right hand half blocking her face. Her bag was scattered on the floor as was her admission slip and report card

'Are you ok?'

She shook her head wanting to get out of there as quick as possible ,embarrassed and mortified would be an understatement of what she was feeling now, she just wanted to cry, she could feel her cheeks heating up and dared not to look at him again as her hands touched the door handle, his hand touched hers. She froze instantly

'Manyata Singh, you are not in the wrong office, this is the principal's office'

She turned around slowly looking at him like he spoke some foreign language' she couldn't understand how on earth someone so young and good looking could be the PRINCIPAL?

He was looking at her admission slip reading it out and smiling to himself while she was just dazed. Her phone beeping broke her trance as she took it to read a text from jai. Instantly her phone was taken from her hand

'Miss Singh I am not sure how things were done in your old school, but here things are different and cell phones for one are not allowed least of all during hours, now from your report and admission slip you have quite a good track record, I hope it stays that way'

'Uh.. yes' sir.. I am' so.. sorry sir. I wont, I mean' you wont find me with my phone during classes and.. i'

He moved in closer to her which only added to her awkward nervousness

'Have you always worn glasses?'

He took them off her face while she battled to see him, her vision being unclear .

'Ye.. yes I have and I need them now' she reached towards him trying to feel with her hands and ended up touching his cheek and then his lips, instantly pulling her hands away as she felt her clip being undone and tresses falling down in a heave around her shoulders.

Her heart was now pounding as fear crept into her'

'S' Sir' what are you doing? Sir.. please give m my glasses.. sir'

'shhh'

She felt his hot breath close to her ear and shivered while he inhaled into her hair

'You are going to have to do something about these glasses'..'

What the hell is that supposed to mean?

She felt her glasses placed in her hand and quickly put them on only to hear the door shut.

She battled to breathe for a few seconds and felt tears spring to her eyes as she picked up her bag and placed the clip back on her messy bun as the strands fell onto her face, she was about to leave when the door opened and in walked a short, bald man with a pot belly who creased his eyebrows when seeing her.

'Yes can I help you? May I know what you are doing in my office?'

'Uhhh I was actually ' I am a new student, I transferred from Rosewood High'.'

'Oh yes Manyata Singh, I was expecting you today. I am Principal DK Bose?'

'Principal?' manyata looked at him confused😕

'Ok go along to reception I will have Ms Joseph draw up your class schedules'

She turned around realizing that she was just pranked and embarrassed herself in front of a stranger and wondering what else can go wrong on this day

'Oh and Manyata Welcome to BSC, I am sure you will fit in just perfectly here'

She smiled and gently closed the door shut before closing her eyes, she already didn't like this place, and she was alone.FIT IN PERFECTLY?? WAS HE SERIOUS. She missed jai and she needed to speak to her, she looked around for her phone and then realized as her eyes widened.. THE FAKE PRINCIPAL'. THE THIEF STOLE MY PHONE

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While the rest of the day went fairly quickly, manyata still couldn't believe how terrible the morning had been or even worse what an idiot she had been for getting so lost in the thief's eyes' say what you may he really was insanely handsome with a perfect built. Wait I did not just think that ' what is wrong with you manyata? He could have seriously harmed you and he stole your phone and you find him attractive??

The last thing she felt like was lunch, she just wanted to go home now and thankfully she just had one more class to go. Should she report the matter? Shouldn't the school tighten up their safety precautions to avoid situations like this? she was lost in thought as she walked towards her locker and struggled with the combination to unlock it

'Damn these stupid combinations'

'You need some help'

Startled she looked up into a genuinely sweet face. She shook her head

'No I am fine thanks, its just' ' again she banged her hand on the door

'It seems like you do need the help, these lockers are like that especially when trying for the first time'

And with that he had opened it

'Thank you '

'By the way I am Rahul and you are definitely new here'

'Yes i am manyata transferred from Rosewood'

'So what do you think of BSC?'

'Its'uh.. different'

**** thats one way of putting it mildly...😆
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Well thats chapter 2.. Kindly ignore any spelling errors. By the way i am feeling very generous because of how you guys welcomed this story so here is a sneak preview of next chapter...😉😆
Oh god run manyata, he is probably one of those physco serial robbers or something, why cant I move my legs? Oh no he is walking towards me, do something manyata scream' she looked around and couldn't see anyone else in the hallway, yuck he was the same guy that girl was stuck to.. disgusting and cheap.
'Yooo. Uu YOU stay away from me. YOU ARE not the principal and I will rep.. I will report you'

You will now? What will say to them?'

'Listen I will scream stop.. stop coming any closer to me.. YOU.. YOU THIEF''

'Well what do you know.. that's quite a mouth you have on you MAN.. YA.. TA''

Oh god she was having troubling breathing as he gained proximity, her heart pounding as she turned around and started to run only to feel her arm being yanked forcefully before she could scream or retaliate she was taken into the janitors room and the door shut while his hands were covering her mouth.

Oh god this is it, he is going to kill me. Tears stinging her eyes as she tried to look around in the room but she couldn't as she was pressed against the wall with his weight while his hand never left her mouth and his eyes burning into hers.

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DO ENJOY... hugs
Shahi🤗
Edited by Shahista01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Hey... WOW... it was just lovely really loved it... Bit where is our dashing uday or was the guy who was sitting on the bike is uday...of purse u should continue because now I can't wait for the next part so please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
SHAHI!!!!!SUPER CHAPPY.ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF D CHAPPY SO MUCH.BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

THE GUY WHO KARAN CALLED IS UDAY RIGHT.ONE SHADE OF HIS IS OUT.HE IS A KAMINA.NOW I WANNA TO SEE HIS MAD POSSESSIVE OBSESSIVE LOVER SIDE.

HEHEHE MANYATA REALLY THOUGHT UV AS PRINCY.LOVED D UV MANYATA FIRST MEETING AT PRINCYs ROOM. NICE PRANK UDAY.BUT Y DID HE TOOK HER MOB.IT WAS WELL WRITTEN SHAHI.

DEN WHO IS DIS RAHUL. ANOTHER CHAMCHA OF UDAY. WAS DAT HELPING JUST A DRAMA OR REALLY HEZ A NICE PERSON. OR SIMPLY JUST A CHARACTER

LOVED D PROMO SO MUCH. WHY IS UDAY BEHIND MANYATA. DID MANYATA REALLY THINK UV A SERIAL KILLER SHA.EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPPY.

TRY TO CONTINUE SOON SHAHI. AND THANKS FOR THE PM.
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
hey jiji
yet another awesome update by you
i loved it
reminds me of my school days
when i had a crush on one of my teacher
aha so who was playing this game of princi
poor manyata i hope in the coming chappy
this ugly dugling turns into princess
in the first part who was that speedy
and rahul seems fishy
million questions i hope will be answered
thanks for the pm
hugss
anni
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ...anju...

SUPER.will edit at night.

by d way plz update dreams or reality.

😉lucky for you anju.. dreams or reality is ready. will post tomorrow theek hai😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update shahi thanks fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Shahista01


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😉lucky for you anju.. dreams or reality is ready. will post tomorrow theek hai😆



ok sha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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