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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
lovely Cs
wait for update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Interesting cs.. continue soon... always loved ur stories..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for double post
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Kya concept hai yaar!!
Arjun unmarried!!
Awsm...
Cont soon.
Plz plz pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
new stry by u!!!
Party time!
Awesome CS
Arjun with no past but still has some conflicts with Sameer hmm!!!!
Riya has a Past???
Do Cont soon
We are all waiting!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Nice concept
looking forward to read part 1
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
nice cs

what does mean Jiya Jale???

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry 4 being late

Awesome,brilliant CS dr

Neki or posh posh

Thanx 4 pm me

Ps: my comment will be late due to my study so pm me don't mad at me if I will be late. I will read pm ASAP and a comment on ur work don't 4get me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1:-
one girl is sleeping holding a teddy..having a cute smile on her face..perhaps she is looking some dream..

but her sleep & her dream get disturb..as someone bang on the her room's door..

Mrs.Mukherji(loudly shouting,banging on the door):-Riya...open the door..Riya..uto..jaldi..

Riya(mutter in the sleep):-sone do mom..

Mrs.Mukherji:-Riya jaldi utho..aur pehale darwaja kholo..Riya..

Riya(open her eyes..):-oh..ho..ye mom bhi na subah subah disturb karti he..

She look to a photo frame on the wall..& give flying kiss..

Riya:-good morning dear..

Mrs.Mukherji:-Riya..

Riya :-haa..mom..

She get up & open the door..

Riya:-what mom..?aap subah subah itana chilla kyo rahe ho..?

Mrs.Mukherji:-subah subah...?Riya..zara watch dekho..7:00 baj rahe he..

Riya:-toh..?

Mrs.Mukherji:-toh..?hey bhagwan..bhul gayi kya..?aaj office nahi jana..?office ka pehala din he..aur aaj hi ke din late hona he kya..?

Riya:-OMG..office..?bhul hi gayi thi..

She run towards bathroom..Mrs.Mukherji shake her head in disbelief of their daughter's antics..& leave to make breakfast for her..

Riya get ready hurrily..she come out of bathroom..go to her wardrobe..& try to decide which dress to be ware..

She select one dress..

Riya:-ammm..ye pehanu..?(looking towards the photo on wall)batayiye na..?accha lag raha he kya..?nahii..ok..(she take another dress in her hand)ab ye..?i think ye toh badiya he..what you say..?

Mrs.Mukherji(coming in room):-hey bhagawan..what is this Riya..?ab tak tayar nahi hui..?

Riya:-mom...mein dress select kar rahi thi..

Mrs.Mukherji:-beta..tum office ja rahe ho..kahi shadi me nahi ke itana soch rahi ho..jaldi aao..mein breakfast laga rahi hu..

Riya just nodded..& ware the dress..she get ready..

She come infront of the photo..

Riya:-so..?how I am looking..?beautiful as always na..?wow..i am joining ETF..its the best day of my life..(she give flying kiss to photo..)ab ham jald hi milege..Mr.ACP..

She flashes her dimple smile..& leave..

She take breakfast hurrily..& leave for office..

ETF Office:-

Shree,Chotu,Aayesha are sitting in conference hall & chatting..

Shree:-yaar kal ke case ne toh mera dimaag kharab kar dala..

Chotu:-aur nahi toh kya..?mein toh bahot hi bore ho gaya tha uss suspect pe nazar rakh ke..

Aayesha:-haa..aur puri investigation me muze Arjun sir ke sath kaam karna pada..bahot bore ho gayi..

Shree(teasing):-haa..woh toh he..tuze Rathod sir ke sath kaam karne ki aadat jo pad gayi he..fir Arjun sir kaise acche lagege..?

Aayesha:-what..?what do you mean by this..Shree?

Chotu:-aye..chup karo tum dono..dono don aa rahe he..

Rathod come out from his cabin towards conference room..while Arjun enters in office..he also directly come to conference room..

The trio keep mum..

Both Rathod & Arjun sits on their respective chairs..

Rathod is looking somewhat in tension..

Aayesha:-Shree..sir kuch pareshan nahi lag rahe..?

Shree look to Arjun..

Shree:-muze toh aisa nahi lagata..aur agar woh pareshan he..toh hone do yaar..jab hame din raat kaam bolte he..tab ham pareshan nahi hote kya..?

Aayesha:-bhuddu..mein Arjun sir ki nahi..Rathod sir ki baat kar rahi hu..

Shree:-are..haa..bhul hi gaya tha..tu Arjun sir ke bare me kaise baat karegi..tu toh Rathod sir ki hi fikar karegi..

Aayesha:-Shree..

Shree:-ok..baba..waise tuze lagata he na ke woh pareshan he..toh tu hi puch le..

Aayesha:-kya mein..?na baba na..

Shree:-toh fir..tu bhi tension mat le..aur muze bhi mat de..

Rathod:-kya chal raha he tum logo ka..?kaam nahi he kya tum tino ko...?

The trio started work hurrily..

While Arjun goes towards his cabin..

After sometime..Riya enters in conference hall..

Everyone get shocked to see her..though she has ware simple official dress..but she is looking beautiful & her dimple smile making her more attractive..

Riya:-hello..i am Riya Mukherji 'trainee Researcher..

Rathod:-oh..Hello..miss Mukherji.I am Sameer Rathod ETF Chief..

Riya:-oh..hello sir..but plz call me by my name..Riya only..

Rathod(just nodded with faint smile..):-ok..Riya..inase milo..ye he Aayesha Kapoor..ETF Officer,Shree..Technical Expert,& Chotu..ETF Commondo..all are your team mates..

Suddenly Arjun enters in conference room..

Rathod(is about to give Arjun's intro..):-aur ye he..

Riya(loudly,excitedly,scream..):-AHHwww..

Arjun is about to sit on chair..he shockingly stop..Rathod & all others are looking Riya in amazement.

Rathod:-what the hell this was..?

Riya (don't pay attension on Rathod,she is looking to Arjun without blinking eyes..):-OMG..ACP Arjun rawte..I cant belive this..plz someone pinch me..

Aayesha pinch her hardly..

Riya:-aauu..muze yakin hi nahi ho raha ke mein aapse mil rahi hu..I am so happy to see you..i don't understand what to say..

Arjun(raised his eyebrow..):-huuhh..toh apna naam hi bol do..

Riya:-mein..mein..Riya..mukherji..researcher..

Arjun just nodded slightly..& sit on his chair..

Riya:-you don't know sir..mein aapki kitani badi fan hu..you are the best..

Rathod(angrily):-ye ETF office he..Arjun Rawte Fan Club nahi..

Riya:-lekin..sir mein toh bas..

Rathod(angrily):-shut up..woh ACP he koi Super hero nahi..

Riya(mutter under breath):-mere liye toh super hero se bhi jyada he..

Rathod:-kya kaha tumne..?

Riya:-kuch nahi sir..

Rathod:-so kaam suru karo..Shree se sari detail le lena..

Riya just nodded..& sit on a chair..near Shree,Chotu & Aayesha..

Rathod started reading a file..while Arjun is looking to her somewhat angrily..

Riya(to Shree):-ye..hamare chief..

Shree:-Rathod Sir..?

Riya:-haa..haa..wahi..woh..hamesha se aise Khadoos he ya..sirf muze hi..

Shree:-are nahi..woh..toh he hi khadoos...

Aayesha:-nahi..Riya..aisa kuch nahi he..he is very nice..but shayad aaj woh kuch pareshan he..

Riya:-par..

Shree:-are..Riya..jaise..tum Arjun sir ki Fan ho na..waise hi ye Rathod sir ki fan he..

Riya(excitedly):-wow..Really..?

Aayesha:-Shut up Shree..dekho Riya..ye Shree aur Chotu he na hamesha bakwas karte rehate he..toh inake taraf jyada dhyan mat diya karo..

Shree:-ha..ha..khud ki bari aayi toh..ham bakwas karte he..?

Arjun(yelled):-kya chal raha he tum logo ka..?office me kaam karne ke liye aate ho ya..chatting karne..?

All started work hurrily..

Riya(in mind):-not bad ACP..aap toh chillate ho tabhi bhi handsome hi lagate ho..

After some minutes..

Chotu(whisper to Shree):-yaar..hamari toh kismat hi kharab he..

Shree:-kyo..?

Chotu:-ek ladki patane ka chance nahi milta iss ETF me..

Shree give him look..

Chotu:-dekh..Aayesha..woh toh Rathod sir ki baate karte thakti nahi he..aur ab ye Riya..ye toh Arjun sir ko aise dekh rahi thi..jaise koi Shahrukh Khan ko dekh raha ho..woh toh pehale si Arjun sir ki big fan nikali..muze lag raha tha ke agar Rathod sir nahi chillate toh shayad woh..Arjun si se auto graph bhi le leti..(Shree try to control his laugh) ye chance bhi gaya..haat se..

Shree:-Chotu..mere bhai..fir meri nahi sirf teri kismat kharab he..

Chotu:-matlab..?

Shree:-matlab meri already GF he..

Chotu:-kya teri GF he..?tu ne muze bataya nahi..?aisa kaisa best friend he yaar tu..?

Shree:-are meri GF ye he na..(pointing towards his tab..)

Chotu:-oh..god.tu crazy he Shree..you are such a gazet-freak..

Shree:-whatever..but Chotu better luck next time..perhaps next time tuze koi mil jaye..

Chotu nodded..

After sometime..

Arjun:-jaha tak muze pata he aaj ek aur appointment hone wali he na...?

Rathod(looking to Arjun through file):-haa..

Arjun(looking to Riya):-I hope..kamse kam iss baar tumne sahi person choose kiya ho..jo ETF me kaam karne aaya ho..

Riya(in mind,she recognize that he taunted her):-uf..aapke toh taunt karne ki style pe bhi mein fida ho gayi..

After sometime..

Someone entered in conference hall..

Arjun & Rathod both get shocked to see that person..

Precap:-

Arjun(yelling to Rathod):-how could you do this..?i am not going to tolerate this..?

Rathod(yelled back him):-stop yelling me Rawte..if you forget..let me remind you..I am ETF Chief..

Arjun(angrily):-then..the hell with your ETF..I am leaving ETF now..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
great start
please update next part of zindagi
Edited by khemanisarita - 12 years ago

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