Virman FF- Mujhe pyaar ho gaya- Part 8+ Promo (Updated) - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
me waiting dear update soon i but i will like it but dont except comment frm me coz i am lazy too comment😆
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Hey guys...I am back with the next update...Forgive me if its boring... Hope you enjoy! 😊

Disclaimer: No portion of this story has been copied from any other story. And if you feel it resembles, then it is just the idea of the portion that is the same. The whole story is made by me. I dont like plagarism and hope no one copies my story as well as its purely my idea.

Recap: He leaves the club leaving everyone back...
Everyone understood that Virman's relation was more than friends...
Karan boiled in anger... He closed his fist tight in anger...

Chapter 5: Many Questions...No Answers!

Virat entered the car and began driving back home... He didnt know why but seeing Manvi in pain was hurting him too much... He had tears flowing from his eyes remembering the bruises on Manvi's hand and her pain filled eyes...

Virat:(to himself) yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain...kyun mein Manvi ko aise haalat mein nahi dekh paa raha hoon...KYUN???...grrthh... Stamps the break in anger and the car stops with a screeching sound in a deserted area... He comes out of the car and sits on the road leaning his back on the door of the car.

Virat: uss..usss nalayak..kya naam tha...oooh...haan sid...uski himmat kaisi huyi Manvi ko chune ki...aaj bhai, manvi aur sab log beech mein nahi aate tho uska khair nahi... Gritting his teeth angrily...bas***d...(confused)...magar why am I feeling like this? Why cant I see Manvi in pain? Uski ek aasu mujhe dukh kyun pahuncha raha hain...Kyun??? Pata nahi..milke dho din hi nahi huwa hain...fir bhi!...jo bhi ho...i cant see her in pain...thats for sure...aa-akhir dost hain mera...wiping his tears... Oh..maine toh Manvi ko call karna bhool gaya...pata nahi bhaabhi first aid lagaya ya nahi...hey..ab tak tho woh log ghar bhi pahunch gaya hoga...

On the other hand in the club:

Manvi had tears in her eyes all the while Jeevika did her first aid...but this tears were not cause her bruises were paining...rather the very scene of Virat being possessive and then his tears, all did have effect on her. She kept silent all throughout. Virika and Karan also wanted to give her time...

Manvi and Jeevika was then dropped home by Viren.

Manvi then took a quick shower and jumped on to the bed recalling that day's events...

Flashback:

As soon as Virat left, Sid spoke betting up slowly holding his broken hand : Manviii...yeh tune achcha nahi kiya...chodunga nahi tumhe aur tumhari aashiq ko...he put himself in danger cause of you...beware of me! He shouted and left.

Flashback ends.


She felt scared.

M: mere vajh se Virat bhi...sab meri galti hain... I shouldnt have let him beat that b****d sid... But why did I feel so good to see Virat being protective about me?why did his one tear break me... I hope he remains safe...Please bhagwaan keep us both safe...

She kept thinking while she kept looking at her phone ,sorry his name in her contact list. It did work. The very magic his name creates in her is amazing... She felt better. But then her heart was craving to call Virat...by then her wish was fulfilled...Yes..the very name that creates havoc in her body, kept flashing on her phone. Without wasting a second, she picked up the call..

M:hello...she said slow enough for him to hear...
V:hello...Manvi...kaha ho tum?
M:mein ghar par hoon...
V:is your bruises hurtinv you? He asks sadly.
Manvi understands the pain in his voice..
M:noo baba..I am fine...
V:Jeevika bhabhi tumhaari first aid achchi se ki na?
M: haan...dont worry...
V:achcha...worry nahi karoongi to...he stops... hmmm...just wanted to know whether you are fine...apna khayal rakhna...
M:(cuts off)ek minute Virat...
V:haan bolo Manvi...kya hua? Us nalayak Sid ne tumhe kuch kaha...main toh uski...kal dhekh loonga... M:arrey ruko mere superfast train...allow me to tell...hmmm.. I am scared... Yes she was actually scared, not for herself alone but for him too. Sid is indeed a dangerous guy and koyi udke saath panga lene ke baare mein sochta nahi hain...
M: pata nahi... Sid kaafi khatarnak hain...and I am scared. Woh tumhe bhi chot pahunchaane ki koshish karenge... he had warned us and gone...Hmmm...yeh sab meri galti hain...I am sorry...
V:hey...why are you sorry? He deserved it...actually usss zyada voh deserve karta hain...and sweetheart...dont worry...when Virat's here not to fear...voh hume kuch nahi karenge... Now be happy snd sleep...He recieved no reply.
V: hey manvi...so gayi kya...hello...hello...
M:haan...she said sobbing... She was so much happy hearing all that Virat.
V:hey dont cry sweetheart...please... Her sobbings hurted him a lot...
M:tum itna sweet kyun ho? Huh? I am glad I got you as my friend! Soo..aaj se mein tumhe friend se PARTNER bananewaali hoon...Bol manzoor?
V:ismein poochnewaala kya baat hain...Manzoor bandariya...
M:thank you chep Partner!
V:partner, ab hume sona chahiye..see you tomorrow...bye..take care..gudnyt!
M:bye Partner...take care and gudnyt!

They end the call. Virat drives home and then goes to bed. Both the innocent souls lie on their bed waiting for sleep to engulf them.

Next day morning...

Chaudhary Nivas...

As usual...

Trriiinnnggg...trrriinnnggg...

Manvi putting pillow over her ears:uff...iss alaram ne meri neend karab kar rahi hain...(looking at the alaram) tu shumar kar ki maine tumhe ghar pe aur voh bhi mere room mein rakha hain...tu har din meri neend karaab kartha hain aur phir bhi maine tumhe apne paas rakha hain...tumhe daya nahi aati hum innocent souls par...kaise aa sakta hain ...tumhe toh...
J(cuts her off):bas kar Manvi...uthe hi shuru ho jaati hain... Jeevika witnessed her talking with the clock standing at the door. If she wouldnt have interupted then manvi would have never stopped ber bug bug in the near future...
J:ab utt...or nahake neeche aa..varna college ke liye late ho jayenge... She pulls Manvi's duvet away from her, folded it, and set the bed..thats when she notices the bandage on Manvi's hand...since she didnt want to remind Manvi of the previous day's incident, she kept quiet...she then leaves...

M:(looking at theclock) aaj tu bach gayi bachooo...kal dekh lungi tujhe... She goes to take bath..thats when she notices the bandage on her hand. All that happened the previous day came in her mind...she was scared...but virats caring and protective words did have effect on her..she blushed thinking how caring he was. She brushes off all negative thoughts and enjoys her shower. She then gets dressed up in jeans and blue sleeveless top...

Vadhera House:

Trrriiingg triinnggg...

V:uff...i dont have time to argue with you baby...so bye...he switches off the alaram and sleeps again. 10 minutes later, viren comes to check whether Virat was ready or not. He got a shock seeing Virat still sleeping...
Vn:arreyyy...tu abhi bhi so raha hain? Chal utt... Hitting him on his shoulders, viren tries to wake him up...all in vain. Virst doesnt respond.
Vn:uttna...otherwise i will call dadaji...
Still no response.
Vn:buaji ko bulaungi...
Still no response.
Vn:(to himself)ab kya karun...kaise uttavu isse...hmmm...idea...yeh toh kaam karega hi...lol... (to virat) dekhna virat...maine toh yeh batana hi bhool gaya ki Maaanvi ka call aaya tha...

Virat gets up all of a sudden...

V:kya?? Manvi ka call aya tha? Aur aap mujhe ab bata raha hein...what did she say...is she in pain..arrey aap muh kolke kyun beta hain? Bata na...says Virat anxiously waiting Viren to reply...

Viren couldnt control himself and broke out laughing.

Vn:hahaha...omg...hahaha...jo jaadu dadaji aur buaji ke sunke tujpe nahi hua vo manvi ki naam se hua...haha...says viren in beteeen his laughter.
V:oh tho yeh aapka plan tha? Achcha hain... Sarcastically...
Vn: trying to control his laughter...achcha bachoo bata kya chal raha hain tum dono ke beech?? Bata bata...
Virat who was unable to reply to this question to himself searched for words to tell Viren... V:nothing bhai...we are friends...good friends...aur kal voh mujhe uska partner bhi bana liya... All excited!

Viren could see the excitement in Virat's voice and was about to ask him about their relation. But Virat understood this and ran to the washroon before he was fired questions to which he didnt have answers! He wanted to call and ask Manvi about her health...but then hesitated.

He had a shower and wore a light yellow shirt with blue jeans. Both the brothers soon had their breskfast and left for college.

Chaudhary Nivas:

She reached downstairs and saw Jeevika waiting for her. She quickly has her breskfast. Jeevika finally removed the old bandage and put a new one.

J:is it paining? All concerned.
M:a little...but thats fine... I am completely fine...seee... Shows herself...
J:chal nautanki...i just wanna tell you forget whateva happened yesterday and...
M:(cuts off) kal kya hua tha? Mujhe yaad nani hain... Acting as if she is thinking...
J:achcha...hmmm...even i dont remember...so lets leave..Otherwise the teachers will forget that we do exist!
M:lol...ya come...


They finally reach the college...

Manvi enters the class and finds Virat already seated.

M:hey partner...itna ghumsum kyun? Gf chodke chali gayi kya?
V:.hey hows your hand...is it still paining?
M:no virat...i am fine...
V:haan tum kya pooch rahi thi...
M:...itna ghumsum kyun? Gf chodke chali gayi kya?
V: haan..voh post kaali hain...tujhe bana hain? Asks virat before thinking. Then he regretted.
Manvi understood this and put it diplomatically:haan bana Hain...infact i am already your gf...
Virat was shocked but it sounded good!
V:what?
M:arrey baba... I am your friend right?
V:ya...a very good friend. Manvi smiles at this...
M:thank you...and I am girl right...toh hua na baat girl+friend=girlfriend!
V:but i doubt whether you are a girl... Tryinb to suppress his laughter.
M:kyun...tumhe dhikhayi nahi deta kya... Angrily! Lol!
V:nahi toh...kaha hain...mujhe toh sirf ek bandariya dhikhayi de raha hain...
M:achcha...ok...mein toh fir ek bandar ke saath hi betogi...
V:oh...then go na go sit with karan... He says sitting on his seat
M:hey dont call karan monkey huh...he is a good friend of mine..aur haan i am now sitting with a bandar only...says Manvi sitting next to Virat.

Karan came in and saw Virman sitting comfortably with each other...and laughing ang talking. He goes to them..

K:hey Manvi...how are u? Howz your hand sweetheart?
M:i am fine...thank you...
K:nice to hear that...hmmm...and dont worry just tell me if that sid even tries to come close to you...
M:woooh...no worries...I am perfectly fine... I have full faith on someone... Looking at Virat... Nothing will happen to me... Virat assured her with his eyes...
K:ooh...you mean god right...? I knew it...no one knows Manvi better than I know...
Virat looks at Karan and sees him staring back at him...
M:okk...now lets...

Professor comes in cutting her speech off...

Everyone took their seats and the classes as usual went good...

Finally the class ended and all students came out...

Virat, Manvi,Viren,Jeevika,Karan,Shruthi were all walking together...
Sid comes from the other side with bandages on and stops seeing them...
Manvi trembled in fear. Virat knew this and hence held her hand. He then gave her an assuring look...

Sid:pointing at virat and then manvi...BEWARE! and leaves...
Rahul comes and tells them that sid was dismissed from the college due to his unruly behaviour for the 5th time. Everyone was happy hearing this.
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Sid:un donon ko mein chodunga nahi...main sirf sahi vakt aane ka intezaar kar raha hain...till then you will have break from me..hahaha...

To be continued...


Heres the link for characters of Sid, Rahul and Shweta!
3 Characters added!

Thats it...A long update...uff... Please like and comment if you think it deserves!
Sorry for the mistakes..
Pms will be sent later..
Take care...

Ps. Pms will be sent to all people in ma buddy list. But only those people who have their names in pm list(in page 13) will recieve pm from next update... So if you to recieve, then please like the post in page 13!


Edited by Viru_Neutrogina - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _keertu_

me waiting dear update soon i but i will like it but dont except comment frm me coz i am lazy too comment😆


nahiii... i need like and comment! Lol...
If u r soo lazy then how did you reac 7229 post??? Ek aur comment and you will reach 7230...
So do that on mine...lol..
Your wish...😊
No compelsion!
Tc!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Update..!!! Like it...Both f them confused abt their feelings..Waiting for next...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Nice Update..!!! Like it...Both f them confused abt their feelings..Waiting for next...!!

oh dear..congratz on commenting first...
Thanks a lot yaar...
Hmmm...will try to update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
owww they are questioning their own actions and feelings towards eachother thats interesting will soon make them realise their love for eachother ...its really gonna be exciting 😃
and they both care for eachother more than themselves and specially virat being over caring thats sooo sweet 😃
and still their cute sarcastic nokjhoks on loving them 😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update...loved the way u expressed the feelings of the virat and manvi...both cannot see pain in eachother...really nice the way they become partners from friends...,...still loved their teasing...hope soon they become boyfriend and girlfriend...,and releasize their love...continue soon...take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow yaar superb update 👏
both confused about der feelings
i liked dat possesive caring virat 😳
he's so sweet
and dat sid...argghhh i hate him... uska bharta bana de yaar ...
karan kuch zyada hi oversmart hai...
shruthi ka pata nahi ... par ye shweta kab entry maregi😆😆
aww mannu is so hurt ... but when virat is hear not to fear... i hope dey soon realise der feelings and confess in a dhamakedar waay... bilkul filmy ishtyle 😳
chal jaldi continue kario
love take care
ananya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

nice update
continue soon


thanks a lot dear...will try to continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">owww they are questioning their own actions and feelings towards eachother thats interesting will soon make them realise their love for eachother ...itsreallygonna be exciting😃</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">and they both care for eachother more than themselves and specially virat being over caring thats sooo sweet😃</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">and still their cute sarcastic nokjhoks on loving them😆😆😆</font>


thanks a lot yaar...
Hmmm..they will indeed realize it some time later...do wait for it..😉
Even i ❤️ this overcaring virat...
I will try to update the next soon...
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