you know what
i can imagine each and every word
like i am watching action movie
everything gunshot, taani's scream, swayam helping rey, he is on branch everything just perfect.
you are an awesome writer
keep it up dear
worried for taani
hope reyam will find her soon and as rey said no mercy for shaka.
and cont. soon
TaSha... U always make me speechless yr...
Today also u did the same...!!!I mean itna acha update...Me toh totally lost in the update...It was that mind-blowing and amazing...I so loved the way i write each and every part...That part where Shaka shooted Rey was really very scary I was also like someone snatched something from me cozz such scary scenes always brings such sensation in me and u also did the same...Now I'm totally scared for Taani yr...!!And ya thanx for making Swayam know that the clues which Rey left were wrong...I so wanted that to happen...I so loved that Swayam knows Rey a lot...And the way Swayam tried to take out the bullet was scaring me but still it was awesome yr...And that ReYam part in the morning was awesome...I so loved the dialog Rey said to Swayam when Swayam was saying all that that what will happen to Taani and all...I really loved that dialog of Rey's...Now only waiting for ReYam to find out Taani soon...Over all u did a fantastic job...Hats off to u...😃
Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan
TaShu!!!😭😭
Loved the Update..It was so emotional, so touching..I had tears in my eyes..Rey was in such a bad condition..And seeing Rey like that Taani was also in so much pain..Wait.. Let me take out all my frustration first...SHAAAKAAA!!!!!!😡Feels Better...😆That Shaka😲How dare he???He shot Rey..😲😭😭And Taani!!Her screams.. Her Pain..Her fear...You described that part so beautifully, dear..Really Loved it,..The way you write everything, it actually feels like an ongoing Movie...So Perfectly Visualised...And Swayam...He knows his Best friend so well..I really loved the flashback..Specially that particular part which depicted Rey's attitude..Haye!!! I am so in love with it...I really respect their friendship...The way you described Swayam's fear..And then the way he saved Rey..Really loved it, TaShu...Hahahahhaha!! That scene..Swayam sitting on the tree...😆I could not stop ROFLing...So Hilarious...😆And I feel so bad for Rey...He could still feel her pain..😭Really loved how Rey said those Lines about Taani to Swayam..It showed how much he loves her...I really loved that part...Amazing Update, dear..👏Now, Jaldi chahiye next update...😡Plz..😳😆
Originally posted by: Bista-anzana
hell to shaka... Rey being shotd but thnkxx to swayam he ws dere by tym..Nd thnkfully swayam choosed de ri8 direction.. IN Scary situation reyam r hving funny doalouge...mostly swayam hats off to dem.. Hope soonly dey will find taani also nd will make kimma of dt creepy saka...
Originally posted by: shikha_taarey
Res
Sry...have already commented on pg 13 😛
Originally posted by: hima_taarey
resunres...sorry sorry sorry...me bhool gayi... 😭m really sorry...and it was an awesome update... 👏finally swayam came to the rescue... ⭐️and tht shaka!!! 😡pls taani ko kuch mat honey do... 😭i wish jaldi reyam usse dhoondh nikaale... 😭loved reyam convo... and rey cried a lot 4 taani...pls update soon... 😃
Originally posted by: sashaz_sis
res/unres
read d update
in a hurry so, reserving again
wiil unreserve later 😉
unres
😡
Shaka shot Rey...uski 🤬
thank god Swayam located him n removed d bullet...
ab toh Shaka ko koi nahi bacha sakta... 😈
the flashback was very cute... 😳
P.S.- Sorry for unreserving so late 😭
Originally posted by: 123renudrlng
i knw i knw am really late...shorry for that *holdng ears* ..tho ab update key baremey bat karungi ...tasha ye kya kara diya?rey got shooted??..how dare u to do it wid my ..sry sry our hero??aur Shaka esetho me muder hi karadungi frst of all he shoot rey then took taani with him...and finally my swayu is back...i loved the FB yaar..swayam knw so much abt rey..and reyam the best buddies...now my both hero are toghtr i hope now they find taani vry soonnn..i jst love the way u wrte the updates tasha...and cmng to the authors note...well i nevr cmmnt in one line in ur ff ...i hope u knw dat..and am too a writer so i knw how it feels to read jst one line cmmnts...and i knw that cmmnt are the only engry drnk for authors...i always pay atten to ur notes dear ...and ah update soon... will be waitng to knw wats happns next...pm me wen u update...
Promo
Taani was sitting on the big rock like a lifeless person. She was remembering her past, her beautiful memories and the time she spent with her Prince Charming. She had tears rolling down her eyes. She was helplessly sitting there remembering the moment he falls on the ground in front of him. Her heart skipped the beat again visualizing the horrendous moment. "No! No he can't leave me. Never!" she murmured to herself. She wiped her tears and says to herself "he promised he will never leave. He promised to spend each and every moment together till we both die TOGETHER. He … he" She couldn't say it anymore a small smile came on her face remembering the day he promised her all those things. The most beautiful day of her life EVER.
*Promo Ends*
Hello guys I know I am late. I am sorry about that. I wanted to tell you all that from now on I will be late in updates as my college starts next week. The only way you guys will get quicker updates is your BIG comments and regular commenting. This time I got really few comments cause of which I am only updating promo. Also, wanted to inform you all that only couple of chaps is left for this FF. So be prepared to say bye to this FF. In the end, from now on PMs will be sent by only me as I got my internet back yaay
Love
TaSha ❤️
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