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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part - 21

Next day….at breakfast….

Maan: gud mor Dadi

Dadi: morning bete

Dadi Maan ko aaise muskurathe hue dekhkke samaj jaathi ki sab kuch teek hai…

Dadi kal raat ki barein mein baat karkke Maan ko pareshaan nahi karna chahathi….

Jaise bhi ho, ye donno kush hai toh dadi bhi kush, haina?

Lekhein ye Geet abhi tak kyun nahi aayi?

Aaj office nahi jaana hai kya?

Kahin Geet Maan se naraaz toh nahi?

Nahi nahyi, aaise nahi hoga, warna Maan itne achce mood mein kaise?

Dadi: Maan bete, kya baat hai? aaj aap bahut kush lag rahe hai?

Maan: aaise kuch nahi hai

Dadi: aap ko kuch chahiye? Nakul, Maan sir ko juice lekhe aao

Maan: nahi nahi

Maan looks around….Geet kahin dikhayi nahi dethi…..

Dadi samaj jaathi ki Maan kissko doondh raha hai…..

Dadi: Geet abhi tak aayi nahi hai

Maan: kya?

Dadi: haan, aap unkko hi dhoondh rahe haina?

Maan: woh….haan Dadi, mujhe Geet se kuch zaroori baat karni hai

Dadi: toh kal ki baat abhi bhi puri nahi hui

Dadi smiles…..

Maan: woh baat nahi hai, Geet ne apni naukri ko chod diya haina?

Dadi: kya?

Maan: haan dadi

Dadi: toh issiliye Geet upset hai?

Maan: mein soch raha tha ki kyun na Geet ko KC mein kaam dedhoon?

Dadi: Maan bete?

Dadi is shocked…….

Maan: woh meinne dekha tha, Geet bahut achchi kaam karthi hai

Dadi: haan haan, humne bhi dekha ki aapko Geet bahut pasand hai

Maan: kya?

Dadi: hare aapko Geet ki kaam bahut pasand aayi haina?

Maan: haan, issiliye

Dadi: ye toh bahut achchi baat hai, humne toh pehle hi kaha tha, lekhin aap donno toh maanthe hi nahi

Maan: mein Geet se baat karkke aatha hoon

Dadi: haan haan, jayiye, Geet aap ke liye hi wait kar rahi hogi

Dadi winks…….

Dadi ko sab patha haina?

Maan goes to see Geet….

Geet apne kamre mein hi hai…..

Maan knocks…..Geet opens the door….

Geet abhi abhi nahaakke aayi ahi…..

Geet: aap?

Maan: kyun? Mein yahan nahi aa saktha hai kya?

Geet: nahi

Maan: Geeet

Geet is blocking his way…….

Geet: hmm

Maan: kya mein andar aasaktha hoon?

Geet: kya?

Maan: tum aaise hi kadhi rahogi toh mein kaise andar aatha?

Geet moves to let him in…..

Maan gets in and takes a look around…..

Maan: toh ye tera kamra hai?

It's very neat and tidy……

Geet: aap yahan kyun aaye ho?

Maan: Geet, ye mera ghar hai, mein kabhi bhi yahan aasaktha hoon, samji

Geet: lekhin ab ye mera kamra hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan

Maan: toh mujhe tumse permission lena padega?

Geet: haan

Maan: kya?

Geet: aap kuch bhi karne se pehle permission kahan lethe ho? kaam katam karkke permission ki baat karkke kya faida?

Geet kal raat ki puppy ki baat kar rahi hai……

Maan: achcha, ab tum batein karna bhi seekh gayi?

Geet: kyun? Sirf aapko batein karna aatha hai kya?

Maan gets closer….Geet steps back…..

Maan Geet ko gurkke rehtha……

Geet looks into his eyes…..Maneet eyelock…..mahi……

Maan Geet ki zulfon ko teek kartha…..

Geet closes her eyes……she is lost in his touch…….

Tabhi phone bhajtha…..

It's Adi….he is waiting for Maan down……

Maan attends the call…..

Geet tries to move…but Maan still hold her tight…..

Maan: Adi

Adi: gud mor, Maan sir

Maan: kya baat hai?

Maan gets irritated…….aaise waqt pe koi disturb kartha toh?

Adi: Maan sir, aaj aapka meeting hai, RK constructions mein, mein aapka intrezaar kar raha hoon

Maan: tum ek kaam karo, tum pehle chale jao, mein thode dher badh aatha hoon, mujhe thoda kaam hai

Geet is shocked….kaisa kaam?

Ab tak toh Geet Maan ko bahut achche se jaan chuki hai……..

Maan: Geet

Geet: aapko meeting ke liye dher ho rahi haina? Toh yahan kya kar rahe ho? jaldhi jao

Geet tries to send him….

Maan stands there like a pillar….

Geet ussko push karne ki koshish karthi….

Aur Geet ka pher fisal gaya aur woh ghirne lagi….

Maan catches her and lifts her….

Geet: hare, mujhe kuch nahi hua?

Maan: sshhh

Geet: aap kya kar rahe ho?

Maan takes her to the bed….

Maan: toh aaj se tummari chutti? Mein jab chahatha tumse mil saktha, haina?

Geet: kya?

Maan: ab toh tummari naukri gayi haina?

Geet: aap ko bahut kushi hothi hai?

Maan: haan, toh ab tum mujhse dhoor nahi jaasakthi haina?

Geet: kya?

Maan: ab aage ka kya plan hai?

Maan gets closer and looks at her lips…….

Geet bahut dar jaathi….

Geet: woh….kuch nahi hai

Maan: mein ek suggestion dhoon?

Geet pushes him off……

Geet: kya?

Maan: hare, tere kaam ki suggestion

Geet: kaam?

Geet blushes…..ussne kya socha tha?

Maan: tujhe kya laga?

Geet: kuch nahi, aap kaho

Maan: mujhe lagtha hai ki ab mein tumse dhoor nahi reh saktha

Geet: kya?

Maan: tum mere saath KC join karlo

Geet: Khurana Constructions?

Maan: haan

Geet: wahan koi vacancy hai kya?

Maan: abhi koi vacancy nahi hia

Geet: nahi hai?

Maan: lekhin tum meri personnel assistant ban sakthi ho, waise ye kaam bhi Adi hi sambaltha, ab mujhe lagtha hai ki mujhe ek exclusive PA ki zaroorat hai jo har kaam mein mere madat kar sakthi

Maan gives a bad look…..

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, office ke kaam aur

Geet: aur?

Maan: that depends on my mood, you know?

Geet: kya?

Maan: tum ek kaam karo, aaj thoda aaram karlo, lekhin kal se mere seva karne ke liye tayaar raho

Geet: kya?

Maan: ye tere har kya ke jawaab dene ke liye mere paas waqt nahi ahi, tum ek kaam karo, tum apne sare sawaalon ko mujhe msg kardo, mein apne free time mein reply kartha hoon, tujhe bhi timepass hojayega

Geet: achcha, toh teek hai

Maan: toh mein chaltha hoon Geet, msg karna mat bhoolo

Geet: msg karoon? Ab mein dikhathi hoon aapko ki Geet Handa kaun hai? aaj mein unkko nahi chodhoongi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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cute and sweet update
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
very nice update ab dadi ko pata chal gayi hai kya chal raha hai maneet ke beech
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Cute Update😊

Geet is seeing different side of Maan😆, ab dekhna hai ki geet kaise sambhalti hai maan ko
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part ' 22

Geet starts texting''..

1st one: gud mor, Maan

2nd one: aap office pohunch gaye?

Next: meetng mein ho?

Next:aapne teek se tayaari kiya haina?

Next: meeting shuru ho gayi?

Next: rahul sir bhi aaye haina?

Next: ab kya baat ho rahi hai?

Next: aapne apne naye assistant ke barein mein sabko bathaya?

Next: nahi?

Next: abhi bathao

Next: reply kyun nahi karthe?

Next: deal finalize ho gayi?

Geet: I knew, congrats

Aaise hi hare k minute ek msg bhejthi rhethi hai'..

Maan meeting mein hai'..

Pehle msg ko dekhkke Maan bahut kush hotha''

Par msg pe msg?

Maan gets a little embarrassed''

Sab ko shak hotha? Aaise kay baat hogi?

Rahul: Maan, is everything OK?

Maan: haan

Just then ek aur msg aatha''.

Rahul: aapko kahin jaana hai?

Maan: no no, no problem, let's comtinue

One more msg''

Rahul: mujhe kuch teek nahi lagtha

Maan: Rahul, aaise koi baat nahi hai

Rahul: must be Geet, woh kal ki incident ko lekhe bahut pareshaan hogi, you go, I can manage

Ab wahan se jaana hi behthar hai'.

Maan leaves'..he heads home'..

Dadi: hare, itne jaldhi aagaye aap?

Maan: haan dadi, meeting katam ho gayi

Dadi: toh yahan ki meeting shuru karlo

Maan goes to the OH''

Geet is still texting''

She sends a msg''.she hears the beep''

Get: hare, mujhe kaun msg kar raha hai?

Maan: ye mera mobile ka beep hai Geet

Geet turns back and finds Maan fuming''.

Geet: hare aap?

Maan: ye kya hai?

Geet: ye phone hai, aapko nahi patha? MSK mobile nahi jaanthe?

Maan: Geeet

Geet: ohhh'.sorry, mein thoda busy hoon, woh kya haina? Mere boss ne mujhe msg karne ka kaam diya hai, pehla kaam haina? Issiliye bahut mehnat kar arhi hoon, aap mujhe disturb mat karo

Maan: toh tum bahut busy ho?

Geet: haan

Maan gets near and snatches her mobile'..

Geet: hare, ye kya? Aap jaanthe nahi ki mere boss kitne bade Dhust Danav hai? mujhe naukri se nikhaaldenge

Maan: achcha, mujhse bhi bada DD hai?

Geet: nahi nahi, aap se bada DD toh ho hi nahi saktha

Maan: ohh'abhi dikhatha hoon ki mein kitna bada DD hoon

Geet starts to run'.Maan chases and gets hold of her'.

Maneet masti'..mahi''''

Next day'..

Geet Maan ke saath KC chale jaathi'.

Everyone is surprised to see her at KC'..

Ab ye yahan bhi aagayi?

RK constructions ki incident sab ko patha chal gaya hai'.

Yahi hai woh ladhki'

Naam kya hai?

Hare Geet''

Geet handa?

Nahi nahi Geet Khurana?

Toh isski shadhi ho gayi?

Maan sir ke saath?

Par isse dekhkke toh aaisa nahi lagtha?

Shayad humse chupathi hai?

Haan haan, aaisa hi hoga'..

Wherever Geet goes she is surrounded by gossips'.

Maan ko ye sab patha nahi hai'.

He thinks that KC mein aaisa nahi hoga'.

Lekhin kahin pe hi ho insaan toh insaan hi haina?

Geet is upset'..she goes to see Maan'..

Maan ke cabin ke andar jaathe hi bahar gossips shuru hothe hai'..

Hare issko dekho?

Kay hua?

Woh Maan sir ke cabin mein chali gayi?

Kya?...haan''

Toh zaroor dal mein kuch kaala hai?

Haan haan, aaise ladhkiyon pe koi barosa nahi kar sakthe?

Maan: Geet, toh tumme hummara office kaise laga?

Geet: teek hai

Geet is not sounding great'..

Maan: aur tummara kaam?

Geet: achcha hai

Maan: hare kya hua? Kal toh kitne masti kar rahi thi?

Geet: har waqt mazak nahi kar sakthe

Maan becomes serious'.

Maan: Geet

Geet: hmm

Maan: what's wrong?

Geet: kuch nahi

Maan: Geeet

Geet: woh yahan bhi log mere barein mein'..

Maan: kya? Mere office mein? Kisski himmat hui tummare barein mein baat karna ki?

Geet: woh'uss din ke badh toh sab aaisa hi batein karenge, haina?

Maan: toh, tum kya karogi? Chup chap sunthe rahogi?

Geet: nahi, mein ghar chalthi hoon, mujhe koi naukri nahi karni

Maan stops her'..

Maan: Geet, pagal ho gayi ho kay?

Geet: nahi, mujhe chodho, ab mujhse nahi hoga

Maan: tum chalo mere saath

Maan Geet ke haath pakadkke ussko bahar lekhe jaatha'..

PS starting a nes SS...but will be updating MBKD regularly... Mujhe Shadhi Nahi Karni...
Edited by ghsp2fan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

😆😆😆😆😆😆geet ki messages aur maan ka haal behaal hogaya.

so now maan is going to announce about geet and his relation to her
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Amazing part
ab maan kya karega
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#88
Can't stop laughing...


Geet ka naya job bohut hi acha hai


Ab Maan kya kahega?


Waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Part - 23

Maan: Adi….sab ko bhulao

Maan is very angry…….

Sare staff aagaye, aaj toh kuch kadbad honewala hai…..

Everyone is so scared…….

Maan: toh aaplog Geet ke barein mein kya jaanna chahathe ho?

There is complete silence……

Maan continues……

Geet is confused…..she thought Maan would warn them but himself is talking about it?

Maan: yahi haina ki Geet ki shadhi mere saath ho gayi ya nahi? Hummare shadhi nahi hui hai, lekhin jaldhi ho jaayegi,aur fikar mat karo,tum logon ko invitation zaroor miljayega, ye aapki honewali malkhin hai, ab isskke aage koi bhi sawaal karna hai toh aaplog Geet ko pareshaan mat karo, seedhe mujhse pooch, samje aap, kyunki ye mera office hai aur yahan koi gossips nahi….now, everybody….back to work….yahan apne office ka kaam karo, mein usske liye hi aapko salary detha hoon, gossiping karne ke liye nahi

Sare staff apne apne jagah chale jathe…..

Geet is stunned….ab ye Maan ne kya kardhiya hai?

Pehle hi sab Geet ke barein mein kuch ahchci baat nahi karthe….

Ab Maan ke ahcanak aaise kehne se sab Geet ko galat samjenge, haina?

Ab ye toh yahan aaj hi aayi hai, aur sirf Adi ko jaanthi hai….

Lekhin lagtha hai sab Geet ko pehle hi jaanthe hai….

Waise sab ne uss din party mein Geet ko Maan ke saath dekha hai….

Back in Maan's cabin….

Geet: ye aapne kya kehdhi?

Maan: kyun Geet? Meinne sach hi toh kaha hai, mein toh dadi se baat karne hi wala tha

Geet: par mein kaise?

Maan: Geet, tum meri ho, sirf meri, samji…

Geet ab kya jawaab degi?

Geet goes and hugs him…..

Maneet passionate hug….mahi…..

Maan: chalo ab bahut mahi hogayi, thoda kaam bhi karein?

Geet: kya?

Maan: tum Adi se Mr.Khanna ki file lekhe aao

Geet: teek hai, Maan sir

Geet is a little angry….

Geet: gud mor, Adi sir

Adi : morning Geet, Welcome to KC

Geet: woh, Maan sir Mr.Khanna ke file maang rahe hai

Adi: toh tumne aaj hi kaam shuru kardhi?

Geet: kya karein? Aapke boss toh aaisa hi haina? Dusht Danav?

Adi laughs……

Adi: koi baat nahi Geet, do chaar din mein tumme bhi isski aadat pad jayegi

Geet: woh toh hai

Adi: ye lo file

Geet file lekhe jaathi…..

Maan's cabin…….

Geet: ye lo, file

Geet file dekhe wapas jaathi hai…..

Maan catches hold of her and stops her…..

Maan: ab tum kahan jaa rahi ho?

Geet: hare, apne cabin jaa rahi hoon

Maan: teek hai, toh notepad lekhe aao, mujhe kuch dictate karna hai

Geet gets angry…..jab dekho kaam kaam, kitna kaam karwathe hai?

Wahan RK sir toh mera kitna madat karthe the? Babaji, ye mein kaise pusgayi?

Maan: Geet, kya soch rahi ho? mein tere liye pura din intrezaar nahi kar saktha

Geet: jaa rahi hoon

Geet pad lekhe aathi hai…..

Maan: toh sab tayaar hai?

Geet: haan

Maan: toh beito

Geet sits in front of him…..she listens seriously……

Pehla kaam hai, koi galthi nahi hona chahiye…..

Maan: toh likho, mere pyaare mishty

Geet looks at him…..

Maan: kya dekh rahi ho? likho

Geet: yahi likhna hai?

Maan: tum PA ho ya mein?

Geet: mein

Maan: toh likho, jaldhi, mere paas time nahi hai

Geet: par ye Mishty kaun hai?

Maan: tum mujhe sawaal nahi kar sakthi?

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, kyunki ye mera office hai aur yahan mein boss hoon, samji

Geet: teek hai, kaho

Maan:" aaj tummare liye bahut khaas din hai, mujhe teri nayi venture ki kabar milli, congrats.

Mujhe pura yakheen hai kit um apne mission mein zaroor succeed karoge. Iss kushi ko celebrate karne ke liye aaj mein tere liye ek special dinner arrange kar raha hoon, tayaar raho, aaj shamko 6 bhaje. Mein tumme lene aaraha hoon. "

Tummara apna, Maan

Maan jaise jaise kehthe jaatha Geet bahut upset ho rahi hai…..

Ye kaise chitti hai….

Koi official letter nahi lagthi….

After evry sentence Geet looks at Maan….

Maan toh bahut serious dikhtha….

Geet likhthe likhthe soch rahi hai, ye kaun ho sakthi?
Maan toh Geet ke photo ko dekh raha hai...
Geet tries to peep in...
Maan hides it from her...

Koi business partner hogi? Mujhe kya?

Maan kissi ke saath bhi dinner pe jaaye, mujhe kyun takleef hothi hai?

Geet: bas ho gayi?

Maan: haan

Geet: ab issko kya karein?

Maan: fekhdho

Geet: kya?

Maan: Geet, issko type karkhe lekhe aao

Geet: issko kissko bhejna hai?

Maan: Geet, meinne kaha pehle type karkke lao

Geet stares…..

Geet: hmm…Geet resents….

Geet chale jaathi….

Geet type karkhe aathi……

Maan: ho gayi?

Geet: address kya likhna hai?

Geet is eager to know who this Mishty is?

Maan: woh mujhe dedho, mein kudh unko dedhoonga, woh kya haina? Ye thoda personnel letter hai

Geet: personnel hai toh mujhse kyun likhwathe ho? kudh kyun nahi likhthe?

Geet bahut gusse mein hai…..

Maan: tumse likhwane mein hi mazaa aatha haina?

Geet: kya?

Maan smiles at her reaction……

Maan: hare, tum toh meri secretary ho, Aur aaj hi join kiye ho, Tumme bhi kuch kaam dena padega haina?

Geet: achcha, kuch aur kaam hai kya?

Maan: kuch nahi, tum jaa sakthi ho

Geet sochne lagi…..ye kaun hai?

Maan: kya soch rahi ho? jao

Geet : jaathi hoon

Geet slams the door….

Maan Geet ko dekhkke muskuratha….

Chalo chalo, Hoshiarpur express chali gayi…….

par Geet pura din Maan aur uss Mishty ke barein mein hi soch rahi thi...

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😆😆😆😆😆😆😆jab geet ko sachai patha chalegi yeh misthy kaun hai tho gaye maan kaamse😆

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