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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 56


Maan threw her on the floor as he closed the door of the cottage but still she did not react. His each word had stabbed her like a knife. He stormed near her pulling her up by her arm see Geet.. isn't it the same place.. once destroyed and once you and today it will see both of us destroying each other. Maan held her face by his fingers and turned her face to make her see the cottage tat was once their love cottage. Bahut maaza aat hain na.. you enjoy tarnishing your own image in public.. itni badal gayi tum tat you have forgotten everything… Tho theek hain Geet.. aaj main khud tumhe tarnish karta hoon… I will f*** you making you a s***. He said dragging her inside the bedroom as she kept staring at his back. She was numb and did not know wat she or he was doing. She did not protest once when he threw her on the bed as if she was garbage.



Dekho Geet.. yeh humara pyar ka ghar tha.. and now I will show wats Maan Singh Khuranna.. you want me to leave you na.. tho chod deta hoon Geet.. I will leave you once after I get your body aakhir I loved you.. so I need to get your body for loving you na.. so let me f*** you and show you wats f***** means and he tore her Kurti pulling her by her arm yet she kept looking at him. Not in fear but something tat he could not see. Something tat her heart was feeling but her mind refused to feel and next she was lying all bare on bed as he hovered on her body with his boxers on him. He pinned her down kissing and squeezing her body with anger and pain tat she was giving him since last 2 years. He had held himself from coming back owing to the promise he had made but she did not stop torturing himself even though he was away. He waited tat she would change but he failed when he learnt tat she was having an auction for her own body and tats when he came back forgetting everything. But alas he had to burn more in love and she kept burning him tarnishing herself. Hurting her body, spitting venom for herself and today she crossed all limits when she even forced Annie to take such dangerous step in life. He looked at her with anger and next she felt a sharp pain as he thrust into her with such hard force tat she would die but strange she had a smile on her face. A glow in her eyes with the feel of him in her but he failed to see beyond his anger as he kept thrusting into her with anger saying Hasi aati hain na.. now you will laugh Geet.. you will laugh on my plight when you will see me breaking.. when I will see you proving me a b***** for making you a s***.. this was your dream na.. than see Geet.. it turned into a reality.. m f****** you.. so hard tat none of your clients did or will do..see Geet Sameera ka pyar tumhe f*** kar raha hain.



He was getting hyper with each thrust as he could only remember each and every second Geet insulted herself. The moments where she used all venom for herself trying to prove tat she was a s*** whom he created. Ab jao Geet..he said as he reached his climax pushing her way from him on bed go and find some b****** to f*** you.. or shall I book some clients for you.. nahi ushe pehle.. let me call the news channel.. lets do tat favour fisrt by announcing you as a b**** Geet.. you know Mrs. MSK a b**** a paid b**** who gives pleasure for men's and walked out of the bed leaving a smiling Geet but stopped with her words I Love you.


His body froze as the reality hit him hard with her words Geet ne tho sirf Maan se pyar kiya.. na ki Maan jaisa.. and today you blessed my love my touching my soul.. chahiye aapko soul kisi aur ke paas ho. She said smiling as she stared at the ceiling as Maaan turned to see a nude Geet. His legs refused to move to her as the harsh reality tat he crossed his line made him to cry falling on his knees why… oh god.. wat did I do.


You marked me as yours Maan.. only yours… na ab yeh kisi aur ka hain na kabhi hoga she said as tears rolled down her eyes sitting the bed flinching with pain. He looked at her and the moment he saw he feared for the worst as he knew tat this smile was hiding something big. He gathered himself and reached to her to pull her into his arms Kuch nahi karogi tum.. do you get… you won't do anything to my Jaan he said pulling the sheet to cover her nude body. He cupped her face as he wiped of those tears tat he always hated Jaan… do you hear me.. dekho I was angry.. but I did not mean to do it.. I did not f*** you Jaan.. it was my love for you.. do you get.. tum galat nahi thi.. you are mine.. My Jaan.. sirf meri.


I was always yours Maan… par aap nahi the.. aap kabhi nahi the mere she said wiping the tears but the moment she touched him she felt a disgust run in her. She jerked herself away as she stared at him in anger Don't touch me.. don't… your touch reminds me tat someone touched my Maan.. do you get… your body smells her… and I …I will.. remove it. Maan flinched as he felt her sharp nails scratching his body. She looked mad as if she was possessed and her words feared him I will remove tat bitch from your life.. do you get… aap sirf mere ho.. sirf mere.


He stared at her as she kissed him hard on his lips taking him on her laying on the bed. He wanted to resist stop wat she was doing but he thought tat may be this would bring her out and wat he thought earlier was wrong. He stared at her as she spoke into the kiss Make love to me Maan.. I want to forget everything. She said crying and kissing as he slowly kissed her back trying to soothe her heart tat was disturbed due to him. One side he wanted to go along but other side he feared tat he may be wrong and she would kill herself once she realizes wat he did. He did not mind to move forward but his heart warned him saying tat he should not. She bit him on his lips getting him back and he kissed her back but seeing her eyes closing he felt tat she would sleep soon and literally she slept. He stared at her pale face but he did notice the strange smile on it the smile tat feared him. He pulled apart and dressed herself and than him and called Annie to come at the cottage. He feared tat he would not be able to handle her this time and so only one who could do it was Annie. But Annie failed to notice tat since she was back someone was having a close watch on her and the moment she left that person followed her from a far distance so tat she would not see .


Annie ran inside the moment Maan opened the door to see Geet. She called out to her and he signaled her tat she was inside sleeping. He followed her but averted his gaze as Annie stared at him. She looked deep at Geet first and then Maan and without a word he stormed out of the room. Annie quickly glanced at Geet again and followed Maan. Annie pulled Maan by his hand the moment he tried to hurt himself Wat did you do bhai. Her one question shook him as he tried not to look into her eyes. Don't Bhai… sach bataye.. kya kiya aapne meri Geet ke saath… kahi mera shaq her own tears rolled down as Maan broke falling on his knees on her feet Maine sab khatam kiya Annie… i.. i.. my anger.. I don't know…how I did… now I fear Annie.. uski smile.. her smile is scaring me Annie.


Annie stood numb as she registered his words Maine sab barbaad kiya… please Annie say na.. tat her smile was not fearful.. woh kuch nahi karegi na… I did not mean Annie.. I did not mean.. but I lost it uski baatein.. she did not even let you today Annie… and I could not control it.. main.. how could I Annie. Maan stood on his legs as and folded his hands saying I always feared her words Annie… kahi main gusse mein sab kuch na kar du..and she kills herself.. I always felt something odd when she spoke those words. Annie just kept staring at him as Maan failed to put his thoughts in words. He cupped her face saying I feared tat agar maine.. if I cross my limits she will kill herself.. I feared tat she wanted me to claim even knowing tat I loved Sameera… pata nahi Annie par yeh thoughts.. I feel like she wanted me to claim her in all senses.. uska gussa.. her hatred was not for me Annie.. but for herself.. she wanted her love her Maan.. to claim her before she kills herself.. woh kethi rehti thi Annie… tat she wont kill me.. as she will give me the biggest punishment.. aur aaj.. maine.. I crossed my limits in anger..Maan hugged Annie as she still was shocked bolo na Annie.. she wont kill herself na.. say na Annie.


Annie parted with anger and hatred for Maan Kyu kiya aapne aisa.. why Bhai why.. you knew she is not in condition.. then why . Annie pulled Maan by collar and questioned him I don't know.. shayad mera gussa.. I could not control seeing you like tat Annie.. who sab barbaad kar rahi thi and his words choked as he heard his name being called out. Both turned towards the door to see the person but Annie boiled in anger why did you come here.. she glared again So you were following me.. ab kya rakha hain… you both destroyed everything.. sab barbaad kiya aap dono ne she said pushing Maan away from her i will never forgive you both… leave her.. leave her alone.. meri geet ko barbaad kiya… meri Geet innocent thi.. and wat did you both do.. i wil never forgive you both.. nahi karungi.


Nahi Annie.. don't say.. she is mine too.. woh meri bhi Geet hain the person came closer to Annie but Annie stepped behind only to choke on with her words trying to say Ge…ee..t. Her legs refused to move as she saw the white tiled floor turning red with her blood tat was dripping from her wrist. Annie looked horrified as she stared at her sweet innocent Geet who had now cut her both wrist and still she had a smile on her lips. A smile of contentment tat she was happy but a fearful smile to tat she will lose everything. Geet smiled seeing Annie as she walked with slow unsteady steps towards her Di.. Maan ne mujhe apna bana diya di.. par main.. I can't stay with this pain di.. he.. does not love me na di.. and I want to free myself from this pain di. But m happy di…see your Geet is smiling di… she is smiling as she got her Maan.. her Maan di. she said as she fell unable to walk with pain. Maan did not turn but his heart stopped hearing her words. He looked at Annie as she pushed him and ran towards Geet and hugged her tight Yeh kya kiya…. yeh kyu. Annie asked cupping her face as Geet still smiled.


Di, main tho unhe pyar karti hoon na.. see Di.. you remember.. you said.. tat love gives pain but you have to live with it… I lived di.. I lived with pain thinking tat.. My.. Maan will.. never betray me.. but he did…. i.. i.. wanted to kill myself.. di.. par nahi kar paayi… my heart.. was selfish.. I wanted..My Maan.. to claim me .. once di.. isliye….sab kiya di.. main tho kabhi gussa nahi thi di.. I never hated you.. you know na.. aur aaj.. I got want I wanted di.. main tho sirf unki thi.. aur dekhiye.. I will die as his only.. he touched my soul di.. unki Geet aaj unki patni bani di. Annie got angry on her words Phir kyu.. why Geet.. why did you do this.. when you love him… haan…


Geet smiled hearing as she raised her droopy eyes to look at Maan who stood with is back towards them but m sorry di.. I never wanted… to… hurt.. anyone.. par.. Maan… yeh sab nahi .. karta… he would.. not.. cross his.. limits.. if..i would..not do.. all… this… his.. weakness di…. His anger is his weakness… and I had to break him to.. cross..all..limits..m.. sorry..di.main.. galat thi.. I was..wrong..to..hurt everyone… but i..had too.. di.. i..wanted..to die..before.. this..pains..kill…me…and..Maan….ko majboor karna tha di.. m sorry for..all.. pain and misery…. I gave.you all.. Geet wiped Annie's tears with her fingers and smiled but Annie only questions her Why..why…do.you..love him so much..why did you do this Geet… hume kyu saaza di… why did you give yourself punishment.



I cant stay without him di.. I cant take the pain again.. Woh mujhse pyar nahi karte di.. I want him to be happy… isliye jaa rahi hoon.. Maine hamesha dukh aur dard diye.. I changed tat Maan who was lovable and soft.. main tho sirf kala saaya thi unpar… aur aaj jaa rahi hoon… I cant bear this pain in love more di.. m not strong.. m not so strong di… but I love him di… I only love my Maan. Geet looked up at Maan again Di.. see Di.. everyone used to say na… tat Geet sirf Maan ki hain.. dekho Di.. Geet tho sirf Maan ki hi thi.. aur Maan ki hi banke jaa rahi hain… in real.. sense.. sirf Maan Di.. sirf mere Maan ki she stopped trying to breadth as much as possible Maan… she called out stabbing his heart further. He wanted to turn Main sirf aapki thi… sirf Maan Ki Geet.


Aur Maan sirf Geet ka a voice echoed as Geet turned her gaze to meet a pair of eyes with tears and pain. Geet smiled seeing Maan mere nahi hain… I lost my Maan.. I lost him she said with tears as it pained to hear something tat was not true but the person screamed using all the energy saying he is only yours..Do you get.. your Maan is only yours and fell down on knees with tears streaming from eyes as guilt seeing Geet dying in front Sunna.. tumhe… your Maan is only yours… he is as pure as his love for you but I failed to see it.. Rano Handa failed to see tat Maan Singh Khuranna will die without his Geet…. failed to see tat Geet Handa will die without his Maan… your own mother destroyed your love with her hands.. do you get.. Rano Handa ne apni hi beti ko barbaad kar diya.


Geet looked at Rano as Rano crawled on her knees near her trying to touch her daughter; the daughter whom she gave death but stopped when she felt a push from Annie don't touch her.. meri Geet ko haath mat lagana.. sunna aapne.. don't touch her Maa… don't touch my Baby Annie cried hugging Geet but Geet looked at Rano who continued I killed your love Geet… Maan galat nahi hain… sab maine kiya hain.. sab maine kiya hain.. do you get… woh Karan.. tat Sameera everything was by me.. do you get… Maan is only yours.


Her heart swelled as she looked up at Maan calling him with her weak voice Maannn. He clenched his fist why…. Mera darr.. why did you prove my fear right Jaan falling on his knees but still he did not turn to see. He feared t meet those dying eyes.. those eyes tat had love for him. He was weak and scared to lose his love when he again heard her say woh… I could not.. ta..ke…pai..n…i..ca..nt stay.. my.. Maan.. woh… gla..ss..i…c..ut…myse..lf..i..wa..n..ted… to..di..after..you..mak..e..me..a..s..yours she said with great difficulty as she closed her eyes and Annie screamed seeing her eyes closed as her hands fell lifelessly besides her Annie Geet… open your eyes Geet.. you cant leave us geet.. youa cant.. Bhai...Bhai Geet.. aapki Geet mar jayegi she said patting her cheeks as Maan turned with a almost dead heart tat stopped hearing Annie and his lips called Jaannn with blank eyes.


So,

How was it Guys.. full on Dangerous love or Not.. And the Person.. now say was Maan wrong in doing it. Isn't Rano Handa very important for him? How many had guessed Rano and now I know you all will want to know why she did it.. but guys abhi tho bahut baaki hain.. lets wait and see.

So how was the revelation of truth to Geet about the truth? Do share wat you feel about the update and do tell me how was the first twist.

Next update after +265 Likes and 25 pages of comments and I want comments from each one of you this time and not just one word and a line but long comments or else hang up for the update as long as I get it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow me first 🥳
superb and emotional update dear 👏👏👏👏
finally maan claimed his geet
so that person is rano handa 😲
how can she do this to her children 😲😲
hope nothing happens to geet
continue soon dear
Edited by lehr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i always wondered as to why maan was not crossing his limits even after geet was badly getting on his nerves and now this revealation has justified fine i have a question here di

geet wanted maan to claim her before she dies right?? she wanted to die being his in all senses and how could she imagine if maan loved sameera he would claim her?? and if he did that now he loved her always right?? and ek aur baat hamari dard se sirf unko dard hota hai jo hamse pyar karte hain!! and maan always was in pain with geet's pain how couldnt geet see that??

marna problem ka solution hota hai?? and rano how could she do it with her own daughter?? y do i feel ki maan's possessiveness for geet made her do it to separate maaneet?? hmmm i guess i am right anyway update soon di peej
Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice dear😊
maan claim hr as his😃
omg what a twist
rano she cum into the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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power packed and full of emotion with a big twish
so it was rano handa how can a mother do it with her daughter🤢
and she calls herself mother whatever be the reason it cant be bigger than geet
but she🤢
coming to geet maan knew something will happen and it happened
and did geet really died
i dont think so coz if it happens than maan will also not be alive

continue soon
i want the update of next part also soon di before 19th 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rula diya yaar iss twist ne
maine to ye kabhi nhi socha tha ki aisa bhi hoga


maan ne geet ko apna to bna liya lekin usse kho bhi diya hai

geet ne maan ke ussi gusse ko fayda utha ke maan se uski limits cross kra di jo maan kabhi nhi karna chahta tha

aur ye sb jo aaj hua hai un sb ka jimmedar ek hi insaan hai rano handa jisne socha ki maan se dur karwa kar uski beti khus rahegi
bt hua kya sb barbaad kar diya uski ek galti ne
Edited by shalinimg - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new thread dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...I'm speechless... I was right, geet did all this just 2 get.maan... Rano is d 1!!!! That was totally unexpected!!!! Waiting 2 know her part of d story... Finally maaneet r 2gether!!! Maan will defo safe geet!!! Waiting 4 a proper maaneet Milan wit love n passion!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was very scary and painful. I hadn't expect it that Geet mom would be behind this. It is so shocking!! Annie lovee geet so much! And in anger Maan has done it, and Geet I knows she will survive and come stronger out of it! And Maan too, I think it will be Maneet against the rest! Let wAit!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rano ne aisa Q kiya?
Poor maan geet...
But question hai ki maan ne geet ko dohka diya ki nai

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