MG OS ~HUMARA SATH~ [Discontiuned] {BY:Nelu}

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MG OS ~Humara Sath ~

Prolouge

MAAN : use milne ki justuju or use
pane ka khwab,
zindagi inhi do sapno se
shuru or inhi do armano pe
khatm'

GEET: Unnho ne mujhse wada kiya hain kese tor denge...
i know he will come for me... for HIS MISHTI

Introduction

Maan SINGH KHURANA:
MD of khurana construction! Very stirct towards his work.. Love his dadi a lot... Nd searching his childhood love geet... He promised her he will back but didn't go back back as he had lots of responsibility to complete... But when he get free he directly went to hp but he found that geet's family leave hp 5 year ago.. He IS TRYING A LOT TO FIND HIS LOVE...

GEET HANDA/MALHOTRA:
A married girl... Wife of Raj malhotra... She believed MAAN will surely come... his maan never broke his promise...

START

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PINKY { A SWEET GIRL IS ANGRY NOW} Cuz she love her frnd GEET a lot... yes GEET ... GEET MALTOTRA... {Wife of raj malhotra} but is she really married?? OR just a name seck relation???.
so here the story start:
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IN LONDON AT MALHOTRA HOUSE
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pinky: what thAT the hell geet?? why r u doing this with ur self??? HE will not come... why can't u understand,damn it ??? he forget you... plzz baby apne life se yu maat khelo... raj ko chor do... yah toh apna lo... maybe he will be good if you accept him..
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geet: first all pinky MAAN will never forget me...Smile cuz he also love me like i do... nd I knw MAAN wapass aayeng... apne mishti ke pass jarur loo tenge... aur main apna khayal rakh rahe hu.. I;M PERFECTLY FINE...Smile... aur RAj kabhi nahi badal sakta... maine maa-pappa ke kehne usse shadi ki par ussne mujhe se sirf GREEN CARD ke liya shadi ke hain... he just want money nothing else... ND I'M VERY HAPPY ABOUT THAT... Cuz agr maa-papa ke pass rahunge toh maan ka intezar nahi kar paunge... nut here i can wait for him...
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pinky: but geet tu kyun uss ke liye ek care taker ki job kar rahe hain??? tu mere sath chal hum sath main rahenge... tujhe kaam karne ki koi jarurat nahi... aur RAJ ki har raat ki new girlfrnds ko dekhne ki koi jarurat nahi hain...
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geet: dekh pinky main jaha bhi rahunge ghar ke pement ke liye job toh karna hi hoga... aur main toh ek cute se baby ki care taker hu... nd i love my job... aur raj se mujhe koi matlab nahi hain... just a name seck relation we share... i don't care woh kitne ladki ke sath soota hain... MERE MAAN AAYENGE TOH SAB THIK HO JAYEGA...
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PINKY: kab tak tu usko diya hu wada nibhate rahege??
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geet: apne aakhre saas tak... main unko diya hu wada kabhi naho to runge...
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pinky: phir tu apne ghar chali jaa.. wa ha jaake uska intezar kar... aunty ko samjha...
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geet: u knw main assa anhi karunge... main MAA ko hurt karke MAAN ko diya wada nahi tor sakte...
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PINKY: PAR geet uss wade ka koi maltab nahi hain... 15 saal ke maan ne uski 12 saal ki geet ko jo wadadiya tha woh sirf bachpana tha...
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geet: aur 3 saal ki geet 5 saal ke maan ke bich jo rista tha woh kya tha??? .
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pinky was silent...
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geet: humara rista pyar ka tha aur humesa wesa he rahe ga... .
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pinky: toh phir tu dadi se diya wada tor de... aab toh uski study bhi puri ho gaye hoge... usse milne ki koshish to kar ek baar...
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geet: main nahi chahte maan mere waje se sab chor ke yaha aa jaye... unhe kaha tha woh khud aayenge mere pass... mujhe apne dulhan bana ke le jayenge...
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PINKY: TUJSE BAAT KARNA HE BEKAR HAIN... sirf maan maan aur maan... apne halat dekhi hain... kitne kamzor ho gaye hain... khud ek bache hoke dusri backe ko sambhal rahe hain...
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GEET: tu rehne de tu mujhe kabhi nahi samje ge...
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pinky: tu je toh sirf tere maan he samaj sakta hoga...
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geet: haa woh mujhe saab se behtar jaante hain...
. tu woh sab chor main abhi chalte hu, maanyata { geet is her care taker.} mera wait kar rahe hoge.. i'm getting late... { she gavwe a quick hug to her} bbye...Smile
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pinky: bye take careSmileSmile
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...OTHER SIDE...
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..DEHLI IN KHURANA MANSION...

DADI TO MAAN: BETE AAP TOH SHADI KAR LOO... hum kab tak wait kare???
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.maan: aab aur jiyada der nahi hain...
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dadi: aap toh hume kab se yah keh rahe ho... but kab tak aap usko wait karoge... woh aab kissi ki biwi hain...
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maan: i don't care dadi... WHAT I CARE IS ONLY FOR GEET...MUJHE pata hai woh mere hain kissi aur ki nahi..
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dadi: aap unki zindagi main jaa ke unke riste to kyun karab kar rahe ho???
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maan: main karab nahi dadi sab thik karne jaunga... Apna wada pura karna hain mujhe...
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dadi: agar woh nahi mane toh...??
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maan: pehle baat toh woh mujhe NAA bolo he nahi sakte ... phir bhi agar mujhe kabhi yeh ehsas hua usse mere sath rehne main problem hain toh main uske zindagi se humesha
ke liye dur chala jaunga...
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dadi: phir apka kya hoga???
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maan: joo aab tak hota tha... INTEZARSmile
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DADI : kyun asa kar rahe hain aap?
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maan: U knw dadi I LOVE HER...
... Wese main kal london jaa raha hu...
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dadi: par u yu aachanak???
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maan: woh kuch kaam hain aur GEET bhi london main hain...
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dadi: apko uska pata chal gaya??? apne hum nahi bataya???
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maan: adress nahi hain dadi just i knw woh london main hain...
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dadi: thik hain bete... par agar woh kush hoo to aap unhe kuch maat kehna apne bare main.,
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maan: millunga toh jararur ... baki ki baat baad main dekhenge,,,.
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dadi: okkk...
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MAAN IN LONDON AIRPORT...
MAAN : LONDON AATE HE TUMHARA EHSAS HO NA SURU HO GAYA... Kaha ho mishti?? tumhara DUST DANAV apna wada pura karne aa gaya hain... Baas aab tumse mill ne ke der hain...
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then his start ringning..{{ it was private detective}
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pd: hello sir... did u reached??
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maan: yes... aab bataye aap ne GEET ko kis park main dekha hain??
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pd: sir MADAM roz lunch ke baad ek choti ladke ke sath XYZ park main aate hain...
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maan: ok... main aapse baad main baat karta hu... wese aapko maine geet ki jo pic de the woh aapke pass hain na?? {dadima ne rano (geet ki mom) ke pass se do tin pics le the}
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pd: yes sir... hum jab milege main apko de dunga...
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maan: dhiyan se rakhna... kuch ho na nahi chahiye...
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pd: yes sir...
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...then he cut the call...
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maan goes nd sit in the car to go XYZ PARK
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in car maan: geet ki bacha bhi hain?? but rano maa ne toh iss bare main kuch nahi kaha... par sayad woh bhul gaye honge,hain na??.
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wow mere choti se GEET aab MAA bangaye hain... bilkul uske tarah dikhte hoge... par geet ne mujhe bataya bhi nahi...
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main toh asse baat kar raha hu jese hum dono roz bate karte hain or usne mujhe nahi bata hain...
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koi nahi aab toh usse unn dono se milne ka intezar bhi nahi ho raha...
drive chalde cahlo...
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on the other side geet was playing with manyata { 4years old sweet girl} in park...
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both enjoy each other comapany a lot...
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manyata was playing nd geet was watching him...
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geet: aaj asa kyun lag raha hain jese maan mere bohot karib hain???
she open maan's pic in his mobile... {MSK ko kon nahi janta or uske pics to internet yah newspaper main aate rehte hain}
... maan aaj apke bohot yaad aa rahe hain... kab aao ge aap?? kab main apke jubanse phir se apna naam sun paunge??
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...maan reached the park...
maan: pd ne kaha geet lunch ke baad yaha aate hain toh abhi yahe hoge... {he start seaching}
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geet went to icecream stall to buy for manyata...
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she turned and some childrens was playing they hit geet & she was about to fell & {maan was seaching her suddendly he saw some1 is going to fell to so he try to save her} geet was in MAAN'S arm..
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both was very HAPPY... {NO Words came out just their heartbeat}

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Then geet thought maan ne mujhe pehcana nahi hoga... so she was about to go
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maan: itna gussa ho ke apne dust danav se ek bar gale bhi nahi milo ge???
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geet was shocked but ver happy she immedtly give him a tight hug...
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MAAN: I missed you alot...mishti...
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geet: main kab se apke zubanse mishti sunne ke liye taras rahe the...
i missed you a very much... IN every second of my life...
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Maan broke the hug & kiss geet's forhead
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MAAN: MISHti ... I'M so sorry... mujhe aane main bohot der ho gaye... but believe me JAAN main bohot ullaj gaya tha... bohot kam tha jo pure karna jarure tha... Lekin I swear MISHTI YOU was only strenghth that time... tabh main yaha pohoch paya hu... SAB tumhare dust danav ko MAAN SINGH KHURANA ke naam se jaan ne lage hain... jo humesha se tum chahte the, hain na???? BUT please JAAN forgive me...
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GEET: nahi maaf kar sakte apko MAAN...
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Maaf toh unhe kiya jata hain jinse hum gussa ho... par apke mishti ne toh aap pe kabhi gussa karna sikha he nahi hain... siya humare chocholate ke siya... :)
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MAAN : you know geet i missed you really very much... TODAY after long time i feel like i'm alive... YOU'RE MY SOUL JAAN...
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GEET: BUT YOU'RE MY BREATH... THAT WHy i'm still alive...
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maan: ohh my geet... {hug her tightly} nobody can love me like u always did... GEET kya tum mere sath ghar chalo ge??? humare ghar...
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geet: MAAN... {itne din se intezar kar rahe hu... tu aaye ga aur utha ke le jaye ga... par tune toh aa ke haq he na jata ya...}
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then she suddenly remember...
geet: maanyata... maan main bahu aate hu... plzz kahe jana math...
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maan: main tumhare sath nahi chal sakta???
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geet: chalye...
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GEET TO MAANYATA...
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GEET: baby i'm so sorry... apke geetu ne ice cream lane main der karde... sorry baby...
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maanyata: no i'll talk to you...
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geet: oh my baby... plzz sorry ...
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maanyata: ok lekin ek shart hain...
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geet: i know what my baby want... main abhi aaye...
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...MAAN WAS AMAZED TO SEE THEIR RELATION...
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MAAN: GEET KI BETI BILKUL GEET JESE HE HAIN...
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...thn GEET came...
geet: Yeh lo mera baby... tumhare 3 ice cream... aab toh kush ho??
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maanyata: I LOVE YOU GEETU... YOU'RE THE BEST...
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GEET: chalo aab ghar jana hain na???
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maanyata: par kal jaldi aayeng,ok??
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geet: ok baby...let's goo...
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geet take maanyata's hand & start walking...

geet: MAAN mujhe abhi maanyata ko ghar chor na hoga... hum baad main milte hain...
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maan: aur intezar kar paoge tum??
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geet: karna hoga MAAN... sayad babji nahi chahte hum sath main rahe...
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maanyata: BABAJI kyun nahi chahte aap uncle ke sath raho???
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geet: pata nahi baby...
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maanyata went near maan pull his pant...
so bent down on kness.
maanyata: uncle geetu is so alone... she has no frnd without me... plz don't leave her...BABAJI ko hum mana lange... you promise me..
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MAAN: i pomise you baby... i'll never leave you geetu alone... but u have to support me...
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Maanyata: par mujhe kya mile ga??? {with a baby face}
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maan: anything you want baby...
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maanyata to geet: geetu yeh uncle bhi humare sath chalege...
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geet:par kyun baby?? ghar pe kisine pucha kon hain toh??
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maanyata: apka pati hain...
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geet: i wish maan mere pati hote {slowly}
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geet: yeh mera dost hain... pati nahi{painful voice}
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MaanYATA: ok geetu aab chale...
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geet: hmm chalo...
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maanyata take maan& geet's hand & start walking...
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...THEY enter maanyata's home...
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maanyata's mom: geet why r u late??
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geet: maam actully there was traffic that's why...
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maan was shocked {st} : geet is not maanyata's mom?? so what she is doing with her??
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maanyata's mom: geet listen sometimes come late now you start to take maanayata late... i can tolorate it geet... this is ur last warning... or u can leave this job...
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maan get angry cuz someone once is telling bad thing to his MISHTI...
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MAAN: excuse me maam.. she said na that there was traffic... so why u getting angry?? she can't stop the traffic ri8?? dose she?? & for u kind information she is leaving ur job ri8 now...
geet come with me {ordered geet}
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geet: maan u just stop .. this is not ur matter...
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maan: i said come with me now {angryliy}.
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geet : i can't
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maan pull her wrist tightly: i said na...y can't u listen? then both went out...
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maan called his driver to come with car...
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geet was about to again in maanyata's home but maan stopped her...
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maan: why r u again want to go there??
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geet: i don't want to tell ... leave me alone...
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maan: kab se mujse baate chupane laga geet?? kya mujhe haq nahi hain??
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maan pull her more close
geet: maan leave me...
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maan: kyun mujhse dur jana chahte ho jaan?? kya aab tum apna haq mujhpe nahi jamaoge?? kya humare rista itna badal gaya hain e aab tum apne dil ki baat bhi mujhse se share nahi kar sakte?? kyun mujhse apne baate chupa rahe ho mishti??
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geet pushed him & angryliy:
HAQ?? RISHTA?? Aab ke intezar kitne saalo se kar rahe hu.. par apne aate hi kya kiya?? mujhse permission mange??? kya tum chaloge mere sath?? tab kaha gaya aapka haq MAAN?? kyun aapne itne saal mujhe intezar karwaya maan?? kyun mere zindagi se yu wade leke chale gaye?? Main toh itne pagal hu ke aapke ek bhi waddo ko todna na toh na sahi par bhul bhi nayE paye...
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maan was shocked & smiling to see her love...
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Maan : aab sab thik ho jayega mishti...
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geet: no i will not come with you... i hate you...
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maan: really u hate me??
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geet: yes i do...
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maan: ok then i will go to dehli again..ri8???
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geet: here i'm angry with you & u dust danav want to go dehli..,... I TRully hate you... jaw yaha se...
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maan: ooo my mishti is angry??... so tell me how u'll forgive me??.
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This time I need lots of comments which should be long & also lots of like to continue this OS...😊
Will update the next part in next maybe...
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Other Work-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3633654/mg-creations-by-nelufar
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Love Nelu... 😊

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago