Forbidden Love... ~ A Tale ~

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Posted: 12 years ago

Helloo..

It's been long time since have made a post..

I don't know where to start from Hmm... Actually it's a fiction that I had thought of writing a long time back But couldn't do so..

So I now got time so posting it..

So Enjoy..!!

...Forbidden Love...

A tale of four people and their life which gets connected with each other and gets too complicated that they can's seem to go away from each other.. Fate or Destiny finds some or other way to throw them in each others path and life..

Can they overcome their destiny and get away from each other..

A tale of lovers who gets involves so much in each others life that they can't get away from the other..Even if they want.. Even if the society doesn't allows them to be togetger..

Can they overcome the rules and expectations of society or would give up in the pressure and would part their ways forever..

A tale of hatred and dislike.. A tale where nobody can trust each other... A tale where everybody wants the other to fall.. A tale which will bring out their deepest and darkest secrets and would force them to face it..

Can they face their fears or would hide themselves in the shadow of the society and would continue their life as pretenders..

A tale which would get you all engage in the world of Hatred.. Loathe..Vengeance.. Love.. Passion.. Obession..

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Three people...

All three of them have a childhood full of sufferings and emptiness.. They all think that they have lost everything and blames anyone they could.. Hates the entire world for getting the childhood they want.. For getting all the love and affection which they didn't..

All of them pretends to be rude.. to be arrogant.. to be selfish.. but actually they all are the three lost children who are longing to be loved.. who are longing for the care and affection they were deprived of.. To get some peace from their pretended life..

According to them their is no one other them that has suffered so much.. But would that change when they would get to know another person same as them yet so different.. who too had suffered and who too pretends.. but unlike them that person pretends to be happy..

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Do comments and tell me whether I should continue or not..

Would continue if I would get enough comments or else would not..

Edited by Freakin_girl - 12 years ago

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Palak

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Posted: 12 years ago

Character Sketch..

Sharon Rai Prakash..

Eye doll of her brother who loves to pamper her..Trusts nobody just her brother.. Hates swayam since her brother too hates him.. But doesn't know he actual reason of their fight..Loves her brother dearly since her every wish is granted at that instant only by him.. Loves dancing and dances everytime whenever feels happy or sad.. but hadn't told anyone due to the fear of forcing her to leave it..

Pretends to be arrogant and rude but is very kind and innocent from inside..Goes in the same college as her bro.. Lives at penthouse with her brother..

Rey Singhania..

Loves his sister dearly.. She izz the world for him. Can't see her cry and can't tolerate anyone messing with her.. He loves dancing but nobody knows not even sharon.. So he hides the real him inside himself.. and doesn't allows anybody to come near him...Only Sharon has audacity to mingle with his perfect and private life but that too to a limit...

He is still in college... Rey's father is the important trusty of the college or you can say that he owns the college.. have killer looks.. He was aware of it and very well know how to use his charms to have his own ways.. Casonova and a Big Player... Thinks can get any girl he wants.. Hate girls due to his mother and treats them like tissue paper..doesn't trusts any one.. and dislikes his parents.. Lives separately from them with his sister..

Swayam Shekhawat..

Unlike rey he isn't any player.. but very sharp , clever and cunning.. He knows how to bring any situation under cntrol and can easily mend a situation according to his needs.. Very strict and can't tolerate anyone misbehaaving with him or any girl.. Respects girls a lot.. want everything to be perfect and Organized. A loyal friend and a trustworthy partner.. Doesn't make much friends.. Helps everyone who asks for and even those who don't..

He too have same killer looks as Rey's bt he isn't bother with it.. He came to India with an aim to destroy the one's who had destroyed his family.. who had taken away the only thing he cherished the most in the world.. his mother.. knows how to dance and is a great dancer.. loves dancing and uses as his stress buster.. He too is in the same college as Rey and Sharon.. Lives in a five star hotel..

Taani..

Very poor with no family.. Used to live in orphanage.. The name was given to her by them only.. doesn't remember anything about her past.. Has a past which she too isn't aware of..In order to earn money works part time at Singhania's mansion as maid and lives there only.. Respects Mr Singhania a lot.. And treates him as her ideal and well wisher.. Have been given a scholarship by Rey's dad.. Soon would be joining the same college as them... Haven't met the other three yet.. Very innocent , loyal and friendly.. Loves to make friends and talks non stop... Excited and nervous for the first day of the college.. Believes in enjoying each and every moment of life..

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Family Relation..

Taani is Rey's house maid...

Sharon is Rey's half sister.. Both have same mother but different father.. Sharon is younger..

Swayam is Rey's half brother... Same age.. .. Both have same father.. So technically he is Sharon's half brother as well.. Hates his father and uses his mother's surname..

Rey loves his sister Sharon dearly and can do anything for her.. Swayam and Rey hate each other.. since both thinks the other is just egoistic and arrogant.. Both blame each other for the consequences and sufferings of their mother but don't know the actual truth..

Swayam fell in love with Sharon on the very first day he saw her.. but her snobbish and arrogant attitude didn't allowed him to talk to her sincerly..and then he came to know her relation with Rey which gave him more reason to dislike her.. He knew the actual reason of her arrogance was because of the pampering she gets from his brother..

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Do Leave your Comments and responses..

Would only continue if I'll get enough of them..

Edited by Freakin_girl - 12 years ago

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894223

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing and different concept
do continue...update soon

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dildostidance09

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved the concept and gr8 character sketch..!!

So excited to read further..!!

Do continue and update soon..!!

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Natasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

very interesting concept

plz continue soon

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christy

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice one yaar~~interesting...do cont..but plz nxt part ke liye agle janam tak wait mat karwana.

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Posted: 12 years ago

I loved ur CS especially Family relation... Bcoz when i read in the prologue that society will oppose one love i thought it will taarey love as they are maid-boss son... After reading family relation, i understood that it is swaron love... And reason for reyam hatred... Waiting for story to unfold