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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello friends...hope you all fine..😊
here to share a lame poem...hope u like
please read it as Swayum's point of view(before Confession)
KR/TR fans can also read it as Rey's POV.
So here it goes...
red crystal heart line
Ankahi...

Kehte hai ehsaas ko alfaaz dene jaruri hain...
maza to tab hai jub koi ankahe ehsaas sune

kehte hai hal-E-dil panno pe likhe ho...
Maza to tab hai jub koi aankhein padhe

nam aankho se ashq to gair bhi ponch let hai ...
Maza to tab hai jub koi un ashqo ko sanjoye

bechain nigahon ki talash to anjaan bhi samajhta hai...
Maza to tab hai jub koi un nigahon ki manzil bane

Dil pe lage zakhmo ko samajhta to har ek hai...
Maza to tab hai jub koi zakhmo pe marham sehlaye

is dil ki khwahisho ka koi ant nahi...
Maza to tab hai jub koi khwahish zindagi ka ant ban jaaye!!!

red crystal heart line

Hope you guys read and like it...do like and leave comment!!!
m not sending pm's for same...if you like it..nd think it worth to share tham plz forward ..
thanks
Regards Himani

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kehte hai ehsaas ko alfaaz dene jaruri hain...
maza to tab hai jub koi ankahe ehsaas sune

Feelings...unspoken..hidden deep inside ur heart...everyone can understand ur words...when ur silence gets translated ...that bond is special

kehte hai hal-E-dil panno pe likhe ho...
Maza to tab hai jub koi aankhein padhe

So true...when someone is able to see through ur eyes and read ur soul...

nam aankho se ashq to gair bhi ponch let hai ...
Maza to tab hai jub koi un ashqo ko sanjoye

When someone counts ur tear drops ...ur tears are precious for that special someone

bechain nigahon ki talash to anjaan bhi samajhta hai...
Maza to tab hai jub koi un nigahon ki manzil bane

That desperation can be visible to everyone...but when that desperation meets another pair of searching eyes...magic happens

Dil pe lage zakhmo ko samajhta to har ek hai...
Maza to tab hai jub koi zakhmo pe marham sehlaye

Those wounds of hearts are visible to everyone...those wounds won't heal through that sympathy...they need the warmth of love and affection..

is dil ki khwahisho ka koi ant nahi...
Maza to tab hai jub koi khwahish zindagi ka ant ban jaaye!!!

Wishes of heart..heart full of love...love of dreams..dreams about life...when those dreams turn into ur life...life becomes a fairytale...

Such a beautiful poem baby...i loved it so much.deep..soulful...heart warming ..u are such gifted poetess ..proud of u 😊...Love u my Rockstar..😳

Luv
Ur Di

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...
really beautiful and awsm...
now i know how damn lame was my poem...
anyways..,
this one was really grt...
loved the contrast in each line...
it was vry vry vry vry vry vry vry vry vry vry nice...

Hatss off...!!!!!

Rohan :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
betiii

beauuutiiful poem!!!

itna beautiful ke alfaaz dena mushkil hai...mere ankahe alfaazo ko samajh le...

i always love your poems.. u r a fab kavayitri...muah muah

i wish u write atleast 1 poem a day 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! This is such a wonderful poem. One of the best poems of this forum, in my opinion.

It had such beautiful meaning and every word, every detail, showed a different emotion and feeling!

It was such a pleasure to read it! Simply loved it to the core 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You left me speechless with such an egg-straw-ordinary poem! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hims 🤗🤗🤗
Finally aapke darshan ho gaye! Mai toh dhanya ho gayi ^_^
Aur jo aapne likhaa! Dude kya likhaa!!
You sincerely killed it.
Before reading i was 😃 while reading i was 🤓 after reading i am ❤️
❤️❤️
Splendid

bechain nigahon ki talash to anjaan bhi samajhta hai...
Maza to tab hai jub koi un nigahon ki manzil bane

Hayyyee meri nigaahon ko kab manzil milegi!!
Tannnuu ^_^

is dil ki khwahisho ka koi ant nahi...
Maza to tab hai jub koi khwahish zindagi ka ant ban jaaye!!!

Wow! Wat a line man, lovely execution.
Superb hims!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful and awsm... peom ... him😃😃😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The poem was WOW it left me speechless how can someone write something so beautiful honestly I am someone who understands poetry but this one has left me mesmerised..😳
The use of words the way it was penned down the feelings the emotions so deep so beautiful wow I just have no words to say ur an amazing writer himani that's all I have to say keep writing and keep giving us such beautiful works to read..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful poem!!!
amazing writing!
thanks for the pm:)

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