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THIS IS MY FIRST OS ON THIS FORUM . MAY YOU LIKE IT AND SEE IT . PLEASE COMMENT ON IT .

SHE KEPT ASIDE ALL THE THINKS AND SAT ON THE SIDE OF THE WINDOW THINKING ABOUT THE MAN SHE HAD LOVED SO MUCH. THE MAN WHO HELPED EVERYONE AND WAS A VERY KIND PERSON . THEN SUDDENLY THE IMAGE OF THE MAN CAME IN HER LIFE WHO SHE HAD SEEN JUST TWO OR THREE DAYS BEFORE .THE MAN LOOKED EXACTLY LIKE MOHAN BUT SHE THOGHT THAT MOHAN IS DIED AND HE IS SOMEBODY ELSE. TEARS ROLLED FROM HER EYES WHEN SHE HAD FB'S OF THE BEAUTIFUL MOMENTS SHE HAD SPEND WITH HUSBAND. SHE THOUGHT HOW CAN A PERSON BE JUST THE OPPOSITE OF A PERSON BUT THEY BOTH LOOKED LIKE THE SAME . SHE DECIDED TO LEAVE THE MOHALA WHERE SHE HAD SEEN THT MAN WHO EXACTLY LOOKED LIKE MOHAN BHATTNAGAR . SHE WORRIED THAT IF HER DAUGHTER WOULD SEE THAT PERSON THEN SHE WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO STOP HER . SHE DECIDES TO LEAVE . WHEN SHE IS LEAVING WITH RIMJHIM GOONS COME AND STOP HER FROM GOING . THE GOONS WERE SEND BY NONE AND ONLY BUT VASU WHO'S AAI WANTED TO MEET HER . MEGHA WAS NOT WILING TO GO BUT THE GOONS PUSHED HER AGAINST HER WILL AND BROUGHT IT IN FRONT OF VASU. RIMJHIM WAS ALSO SEEING THIS AND WAS ALSO CAPTURED BY THE GOONS . SHE IS ALSO TAKEN WITH MEGHA TO VASU BHAO. MEGHA HAD NOT SEEN VASU FACE AND ASK HIM WHO YOU ARE ? AND WHAT YOU WANT? VASU RAISED HIS HAND ABOVE IN AIR AND THEN TURNED AND WHEN MEGHA SAW HIM WAS SHOCKED . SHE IMMEDIATELY LOOK TO SEE FOR RIMJHIM HER LITTLE ANGEL WHO HAD SEEN VASU AND NOW BECAME UNCONSICIOUS . VASU THE LOOK ALIKE OF MOHAN ASKED MEGHA TO BE TAKE N AWAY AND KEPT IN A STOREROOM WITH RIMJHIM UNTILL AAI DOES NOT COME . THE GOONS TAKE THE BEAUTIFUL LADY WITH HER CHILD AND LOCK HER IN A STOREROOM. WHILE GOING WITH THE GOONS VASU AND MEGHA CAME FACE TO FACE WITH MEGHA AND MEGHA IMMEDIATELY SLAPED VASU EVERYBODY WAS SHOCKED . MEGHA SAID TO VASU THAT HE DOES NOT HAVE A HEART IT IS STONE. VASU IMMEDIATELY GETTING FURIOS,ORDERED THE GOONS TO TAKE AWAY MEGHA FROM THERE .MEGHA INSIDE THE STOREROOM SAT IN A CORNER AND SAW A GOON COMING WITH WATER IN HIS HAND AND CREAM WHICH WAS SEND BY VASU BHAO. THE GOON GAVE WATER TO MEGHA AND SAID TO HER THAT VASU HAS GIVEN TO SPRINKLE ON RIMJHIM SO THAT CAN REGAIN CONSCIOSNESS. AND CREAM FOR PUTTING ON HURTS. MEGHA SPRINKLED WATER ON THE LITTLE BODY AND SAW HER REGAINING CONSCIOUSNESS. ON GETTING CONSCIOUSNESS THE CHILD ASKED WHO IS THIS MAN ? IS THIS PAPPU ? TELL ME YASHODAMAIYYA PLEASE ? WHAT COULD HER YASHODA MAIYA SAY BECAUSE SHE HERSELF WAS CONFUSED . SHE DID NOT KNEW ONE TIME THE MAN BECAME JUST THE OPPOSITE OF MOHAN AND AFTER SOMETIME LIKE MOHAN . SHE COULD UNDERSTAND THE THEORY OF THAT PERSON. SHE NOW TRIED TO ESCAPE FORM THAT PLACE SO THAT RIMJHIM DOES NOT SEE VASU AGAIN

SHE STILL REMEMBERD THE WORDS OF MOHAN THAT SHE HAD TO NOT LOSE POWER AND ALL THE RESPONSIBILITY IS IN THE HANDS OF HER .

SHE ESCAPES FROM THE WINDOW IN THE SIDE WITH HER LITTLE CHID WHEN THE GOONS ARE NOT SEEING AND RUNS . VASU IS ALSO SITTING THERE HE SEES AND RUNS WITH TO THREE GOONS . LADY WITH HER CHILD RUNS AND RUNS AND HIDES IN A PLACE WHERE VASU AND HIS GOONS CANNOT SEE .

SHE THEN AGAIN STARTS RUNNING AFTER SOMETIME BUT STOPS IMMEDIATELY WHEN SHE SEE THAT BLOOD IS COMING OUT FOR RIMJHIM BODY BADLY . SHE HAS GOT TO MUCH HURT AND HAS TO BE ADMITTED IN THE HOSPITAL . MEGHA GETS A AUTO FROM THAT PLACE AND GOES . MEAN WHILE A GOON SEES HER AND REPORTS VASU. VASU IN HIS JEEP CHASES MEGHA AND MEETS INTO AN ACCIDENT . THE GOONS WITH HIM GET HIM ADMITTED IN THE SAME HOSPITAL WERE MIRCHI MADAM AND JAAN ARE THER . VASU GETS HURT IN HIS HEAD BADLY. ACTUALLY HE IS THE LOST MOHAN AN D. HE IS PUT ON VENTILATOR . MEGHA SEES VASU . RUKKU AND AAI REACHED THE HOSPITAL AND SEE VASU . VASU OPERATION TAKES PLACE . HIS OPERATION IS SUCCESFUL AND HIS MEMORY COMES BACK . THE DOCTOR SAYS THAT RUKKU AND AAI CAN MEET VASU . VASU OR MOHAN IS SAYING SOMETHING .

HE SEES MEGHA STANDING OUTSIDE THE ICU AND SAYS 'MEGHA MEGHA . MEGHA IS STUNNED TO HEAR THAT . THE SAME WAY THAT MOHAN USE TO STAY .AAI AND RUKKU ARE SHOCKED TO LISTEN THAT . AAI THEN SUDDENLY THINKS OF SOMETHING AND HOLDS RUKKU HANDS AND MOVES OUT . MEGHA SLOWLY MOVES INSIDE SLOWLY AND SLOWLY WITH SOME HAPPINESS AND SOME FEAR WHERE SEEING VASU OR LOST MOHAN SAYING MIRCHI MADAM . TEARS ROLLED FROM HER FACE WHEN SHE HEARD THIS FROM HIM . SHE HAD A LITTLE SMILE ON HER FACE . THEN VASU TRIES TO SAY SOMETHING . MIRCHI MADAM GOES NEAR MOHAN MOUTH AND LISTENS THAT ' EK WADA KIYA THA KHUDSE KI TUMHARE SAAMNE ZAROOR AAUNGA MIRCHI MADAM' . THE SMILE ON MEGHA FACE DEPICTED THAT SHE HAD GOT HER LOST MOHAN AND RIMJHIM HAD GOT HER LOST PAPPU .

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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊good post climax was filmy...👏👏
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wow so nice of it. but it just filmy the last part but all over its out standing 👏
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Awsum work👏 and the end was very filmy😆..I liked it, keep writing😉
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THANKS ALL FOR GIVING YOUR COMPLIMENTS . I WILL KEEP WRITING😃

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