MG SS ~Shadow Of His Love~ {NOTE iN pg 81}

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

emotional update.feel very sad for geet..poor girl ..seeking for love..hope babaji will give her all the love inform of maan😃😃..pls pls cont soon..

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sandymg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

lovely update...😊

continue soon!!!

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Ash1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Amazing update...
Poor geet feeling sooo lonely...
Loved the update...

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Amazing parts. Aadi ki shaadi me 2 dil mil rhe h magr chupke chupke.

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punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

MAAN COMFORTED HER WHEN SHE WAS UPSET

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

~~Shadow of his love~~
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Part 4:::
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Maan leaves geet room...
Geet was sleeping in her bed...
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Maan came down & joined the marriage again..
He was there but heart was only thinking about GEET...
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Bidaai time::
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pinky hugged her dad & cried a lot...
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pinky: dad where is geet??
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rajveer: don't knw beta.. wait main abhi dekh ke aata hu...
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rajveer was about to go but he stopped when he saw geet was coming frm stairs...
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rajveer: dekh pinky teri GEET aa gaye...
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Geet came down & hugged pinky tightly...
geet: will miss u a lot pink.. you're my jaan... take care ...
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pinky: u too take care... u r very careless but nw promise me u will take care of ur self...
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geet : i will pinky {both cried}
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GEET went near the car as ADI was there...
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Adi was siting in the back seat waiting for pinky...
when geet come to car window...
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geet: hey adi... pinky is very innocent never scold her,ok?? if she make any mistake then don't get angry... she is my baby... u have to care of her... will u??
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addi: i'll will... you don't need worried about her... she will safe with me... trust me...
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geet: i knw...take care byye..
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geet turn to leave but bumped with MAAN...
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Maan was shocked to see her & again start drooling on GEET...
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GEET saw him & pushed her angryly & leave frm there...
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maan wasagain shocked with her behave...
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MAAN POV :::
What happened to her?? why there was so anger in her eyes??
but what did i do??
Is she is angry for my beheiver that i hugged her??
But she also hugged me back...
What is the problem???
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ADDI called MAAN:
addi: hey maan come sits in our car...
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M: No addi i have so work to finish... will come later...
arjun will come with you...
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addi: but maan ...
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m: plz addi it's urgent...
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addi: ok.. but come soon...
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m: hmm { thn he left from there}
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here pinky come & sits beside addi...
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addi's car left...
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MAAN walked to malhotra's garden...
MAAN::
Why she is angry with me?? i have to find out...
but i don't even knw her nameShocked... what wrongs with you maan...
you don't even ask her name...
but i hv to met her... her angry eyes are troubling me...
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but what shoul i do???
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yes IDEA...
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>>>>>>> In Geet's room <<<<<<<<<
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Geet was removing her jewelary but tear drop was coming out from her eyes...
and she was thinking about what happened with MAAN ...
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but her thought get broken when she someone was knocking in her window...
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GEET: Yeh khirki pe kon knock kar raha hain?? Agar chor hua toh??
Ha geet chor he hoga... par chor knock karke thore aate hain...
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AGAIN :: Knock knock??
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geet: agar chor nahi hua toh khirki se kyun aaye ga??
babaji aap fikar na karo main hu na... dekk na aase itai karungi..
ruk ja chor kahike aa rahe main...
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again : knock knock???
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geet run & take flower vase to hit the chor...
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thn she slowly open the video...
the Chor just enter his head & geet start beating him...
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GEET: salle chor kahike...(beat) mere ghar main chori kare ga?? tu janta bhi hain tera kisse pala para hain..(beat ) abhi maza chakhate hu
She was about to beat again but he pushed geet to the bed & he held geet's both hand toghtly & pushed to bed...
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Chor/MAAN: Chup bilkul chup...
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geet was shocked : aap???
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Flashback::
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maan: Idea...
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we was in her room... yes main sidha uske room main chala jata hu..
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par agar uska room nahi hua toh??
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but i should try first...
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here window i come...
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Flashback end...
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maan: ji haa main... tumhara chor??
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geet: no i'm really very very Sorry mujhe laga koi chor hoga... kyun ki baki sab toh door se aate hain, hain na??
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maan: main door se kesa aata?? mujhe toh sirf tumse mill na tha..
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both was still in each others arms
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geet: mujhse?? par kyun???
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maan: kuch sawal ke jawab chahiye??
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geet: kesa sawal??
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maan: why you are angry with me???
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Maan question made geet back to his sense...
geet push maan & stand in her feet...
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maan: i'm asking u something...
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geet: why should i reply u??
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maan: cuz if u don't reply me, i will not leave frm here...
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geet : hello MR. get out from my room..
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maan: i wll not {she start coming close to geet}
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geet : dur rahiye mujhse warna main chillana shuru kar dunge...
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maan: karoo...
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geet: kya??
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maan: chillao.. sab ko keh do ke main tumhare room main jabar daste aaya hu...
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geet: aa jao yaha se??
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maan: {now both very close to each other} : kyun??
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geet: cuz i will not reply u...
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maan: u will...
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geet: main aapse nahi naraz u jao yaha se ...
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maan: agar naraz nahi ho toh tumhare aankho main mere liye itna ghusa kyun hain??
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geet: {turned her eyes} : i;m not angry...
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maan: you're...
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geet: no...
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maan: yes..
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geet: no...
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maan: i said yes yes yes u r angry...
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geet pushed maan: yes yes yes i'm angry
mill gaya jawab now leave...
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maan: kyun ghusa ho??
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geet: main aap waja batana jaruri nahi samajte...
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maan pushesd geet to the wall...
maan: mujhse naraz ho to wajh bhi bato... main kya kiya hain??
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geet was trying to pushed hin but maan tight the grip more...
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geet: choriye mujhe...
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maan: i will not... main kiya kya hain jo tum itna gussa ho?? uss time maine tumhe gaale lagaya agar uss baat ke liye gussa to toh let me remind u u also hugged me back ri8??
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geet: did i say that i angry for that??
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maan : then why??
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geet : cuz i hate you...
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maan : what?? 😲
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>> Precap:...
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Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago