THE SECOND SHADOW#2, chap 39 pg 43 new!! - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

superb update...uday again make a fool of manyata...hope his plan got succed...and thanks for pm...

thanks so much prerna, glad that you liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: preya_radev

awesome andy just loved it..thanks priya. when manyata wakes up she will prb find herself in udays arm wonder how she will escape that situation he he he nice idea, i will write it and the and liked the flashback scene of the convo between the doc and uday now the little confusion i heard has been clearedglad that it is cleared please update soon and thanks for the pmwelcome

thanks for the lovely comment priya loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update andy do pm me n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Karkit

Nice update andy do pm me n update soon

thanks dear. Please buddy me for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Hey, how u?
Omg, wow Uday is such a good actor
Love how he thinks
Sorry for the late reply, internet problems
Loved the candle light diner idea and how they were talking in their minds
Very cute
Loved the update a lot
Thanks for the pm
Plz continue soon
Eagerly waiting to find out more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: andy.a

thanks so much navi for this awsome comment. really loved it sooo much

Awww . I'm so glad😃! and hope you like the track i plan to take in the future If it involves Adhiraj's Murder ... then I ALREADY LOVE IT❤️.

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 32

It was early morning when manyta woke up, she realized that she was hugging uday and sleeping, she wanted to move away but then the feel was just tempting . it felt so right to be in his arms, it made her feel safe, it gave her a sense of belonging, she looked at uday's sleeping face. He looked so innocent. She kissed his forehead, her lips trailing there more than necessary.

Uday had woken up the moment manyta has stirred, he closed his eyes to see her reaction and he was surprised to feel her lips on his forehead, he wished he could kiss her back, but no, it would mean giving up all that he had done till now

Manyta checked the clock, it was 5 30, she held uday tightly and slept…

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Manveer woke up hearing the shrilling cry of the calling bell, manyta lazily got up and went to answer the door, uday woke up and followed her

It was jai at the door

"hi jiji" she said as she entered.

" what are you doing here? " asked manyta as she panicked

J: why are you so tensed??

It was when she spotted uday coming out of manyta's room, she raised her eyebrows in a questioning manner

J: jiji how could you? Pointing at uday . you are engaged , and still…

M: jai, its not like what you think

J: how exactly is this ??? I am not a small kid not to understand all these

M: jai, just come with me , I will explain it all now

Manyta pulled jai along with her, and explained how she ended up with uday

J: oh jiji I am so sorry. I really…

M: I know jai, anyone could get suspicious , but I am glad that you understood.

J: how could not I understand, I am your sister na, go get ready, now, let me prepare you some coffee

M: ok jai, and make one cup of tea for uday too

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" iam very sorry about that, "said uday as manyta walked out of the kitchen

'its ok uday, anyone would think so, but just don't feel guilty . "

Uday wanted to know if she was leaving for office today." Um manyta?"

M: yes uday?

U: are you going for work today?

M: yes!! I have to . cant afford to lose time there

Uday smiled at thought, I know how to keep you at home princess, wait and watch!!!!

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Adding the pesticide to the soup, and stirring it well, along with a lot of sause and cornflower to mask the taste of the pesticide, the soup was ready to go

Manyta was going through her laptop when a hot cup of soup was placed in front of her, she looked up and smiled

"you should not have done all this"

"ah!! This is the least thing I can do after the morning incident na"

"you should forget it, I already forgot about it"

" I knw, but still I am so sorry, drink your soup before it becomes cold"

"ok mom!!!!! Said an exasperated manyta

Manyta tasted the soup and wrinkled her forehead," it tastes a bit funny"

" ah!!! I am hurt!!! I spend my time making soup and still you say…"

"maybe it's the vegetables, I think" said manyta to pacify

Manyta drank the soup completely and it was then she noticed she had not even offered some

" iam sorry , I drank it fully, I mean, we could have shared

"no problem, it was meant only for you (winks)

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As she was about to leave for her office, manyta felt her head was about to split, somedays ago she had a slight fever and headache too, and now this!!!

Uday who was coming from the kitchen saw her and rushed to her

" are you alright?" asked a concerned uday

Manyta was still clutching her forehead " I am fine." She said through gritted teeth

" manyta? I don't think so, you better rest today"

"no uday, I am ok"she was still clutching her head

"manyta, listen to me, you look, weak and feverish too, take rest today na, tomorrow you can leave, please?" uday pleaded

Manyta who was already feeling weak said

"ok"

YES!!!!!! Screamed uday in his mind

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The whole day uday spend with manyta . she was very weak, her face was still pale, uday massaged her feet and she felt great relief too. Uday fed her in the afternoon, he was a perfect nurse to her, taking care of her every needs, they talked a lot

Manyta felt like she was falling again for uday and his charms, she was safe in his arms

OR SHE FELT SO!!!!

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Sorry!!! For this small update

This is just part 1, tmrw I will post part2

Tell me how you felt when uday poisoned manyta????

Hope you like this part, please hit the like button and do comment

Bw::: I am not pming today , will do it after the 2 parts

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i felt like hugging Uday when he poisoned Manyata. cum on Uday will be Uday. he'll get what he wants. though his way of getting things r twisted nd nt so noble. how can he be a saint after all he's my papa's creation na*wink*. Small bt cute update. do update tom.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg for the first tym i'm the first one to cmt* shocked* bt happy . 🥳

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