EVERYTHING IS FAIR, WHEN LOVE IS WAR -ch19 - pg 84 - Page 40

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

By the awesome twosome...
Awww , that's such a lovely name😳.
I thought everyone called us ... THE EVIL 2'SOME😆!
ya even i thought so, but thats really a cute name.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 12
Uday was as usual , in a foul-mood. He had 1 huge problem, in that Maya was missing AGAIN ... now ; he has to dress up for a funeral!!!!!!!!! Akash was a Christian lad , therefore his funeral was to be held in the church , thereafter - the burial.
"Will u be giving a eulogy? " Arthi asked as she entered the room. "I'm not giving no f*cking eulogy!: , Uday grunted.
A : But he was your friend , and u are the only one left , to talk something about him.
U : Tell me something Arthi , when did u learn to NAG so much?
He shook his head and walked out, leaving a teary Arthi behind. The drive was a hauntingly silent one. Arthi stared at the poorly made tie-knot , that Uday mustered. She remembered all the times that Uday would ask HER to make the knot as she made a perfect triangle out of it. But NOW , he'd rather do it himself , even if it looked like a dog made it! After the priest spoke , Arthi delivered a small eulogy , saying : It's on behalf of my husband , Uday Singh ... who was a close friend of Akash Verma ; unfortunately , Uday is too emotional about the loss of his friend that he's unable to speak!" Uday just rolled his eyes after listening to her lie.
After the funeral inside , all had to go out for the burial. That's when he saw HER. Maya was looking stunning , dressed in a black outfit. He had to talk to her at once. He walked towards her , it was then , that he saw ... HER HANDS WERE INTERLOCKED IN ANOTHER MAN'S. Forgetting where he was , Uday charged towards her, gripped her arm and pulled her behind an oak tree.
M : What the Hell Uday?
U : I could ask you the same thing!
M : I don't know what you're talking about.
U : The guy u were with ... WHO IS HE?
M : A friend! (she answered calmly)
U : A friend? Ya right!!!!!!!! U are sleeping with him - right ; U bitch?
"Excuse me ... mind your language , this is a sacred place - control your tongue", Veer told commandingly to Uday , who was in no mood to have ANY-ONE talk to HIM in that manner! "F*ck off from here ... this is between me and her!" , Uday grabbed his Veer's collar and was about to punch him , when ...
"Veer" , Arthi called out in a surprised manner. " Yes Aunty , Hello !", Veer smiled at her. Uday and Maya had to quickly put up a pretence ... "Hello Arthi , nice to see u again. ", Maya greeted and Arthi wished her back.
"Uday - this is Veer .. he was the guy I was telling u about - HE SAVED TANI!" Veer held out his hand for Uday to shake , but Uday just walked away rudely , without saying a word. Arthi quickly apologised for Uday; and ran behind him. Veer and Maya shared sly smiles with each other.
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Arthi was doing her usual grocery shopping when she ran into Jaggat, he was there with a shopping bag and a list that looked like a mile long

A: ah!! Jaggat!! What brings you here, I mean, I never saw you shopping and that looks like a big list

J: what can I do arthi! My aunty has come to stay with me for a few days. Yesterday when I came at night, I got a earful for not stocking anything in the kitchen . I tried to tell her that I eat from the police officers canteen and so I don't need to cook at home, but she wont listen, you have met here na

A: she is that nurse na???

J: ya, the very same, she made me take leave today and shop, and this list looks likes hell, I hate shopping and now you see am stuck

A: let me see the list (she looks and adds) um, this is the usual things needed , rice, atta, soya beans, vegetables, eggs, I wil help you get it, even I have to get some

J: oh!! Arthi you are a life saver!!

As they were walking and picking up all the necessary things from the shelf arthi enquired

A: Jaggat? Can I discuss something with you?

J: sure arthi, feel free to say anything.

A: it is about uday

J: what is it arthi? Is he still going out alone, I told you na, to tell him to be careful. It is really not safe for him nowadays

A: I know that, he wont listen to me. But now iam worried about his behavior, I mean he is not the Uday who I had known all these years, he is now ... he is now CHANGED.

J: what sort of "change" , Arthi? (the police officer in jaggat was now awake)

A: Uday is highly distracted nowadays, you know na that day when you came (jaggat nods) we were fighting, it was because he forgot to bring Tani home, can you believe it? He forgot to pick up his own daughter!! When I enquired he said he was in office, but the office people said he had left office early, they told me uday left office at noon for many days and told them not to contact him. If he was not in office then where was he ... my question needed an answer , so , I decided to follow him

J: what arthi? Follow him!!!!!

A: ya, I did. He did not go straight to his office, he stopped in front of some shops and sat in his car for some 2 hours doing nothing, he did not even move a muscle, only after that did he go to office. He is changed,(tears in her eyes) he never used to shout at me!. That day he threatened to slap me if I don't stop my questioning. Nowadays he comes home drunk, he does not talk much to me or Tani, he is just so depressed. What should I do jaggat? I am totally confused

Jaggat comforts arthi, : don't worry arthi , we can sort all this soon. It could just be pressure at work ...

A: ... or it could be another woman , I don't know but my mind tells me like that, Jaggat could you help me to find about this

Jaggat thought for a while and said: Arthi, we don't have any evidence , so you cant just accuse your husband, I will look into the matter however, believe me. I will get to the bottom of this, before that can we complete this shopping?

Arthi wipes her tears and manages to give him small smile : ok

As they continued their shopping Jaggat thought: "Uday, it seems your present is as dirty as your past. You have not even changed 1 bit. More skeletons are likely to fall out from your closet soon!"

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It was 3 days since Akash's funeral .Maya was now working as a sales lady in a book store. Uday came to know about it and decided to talk to her. He made his way passing by shelves of books to where she was standing. At first she did not notice him

U: maya? Can we talk , please?

M: am busy, unlike you I got to work for a living

U: maya, just for 5 minutes.

M: ok

U: I am very, very sorry for being such a Ass*ole at Akash's funeral. You know, when I saw you with that guy, I just don't know what happened me, I '

M: you were jealous?

U: yes , I was, I could not bear to see my love with someone else, it was just unacceptable to me, it is even now. Please Maya, give me another chance

M: uday, when did I become your "love"?

U: maya, please. I love you so much, more than my life, you know that last few days without you, I was like a mad man, please Maya, come back, give me one more chance please

M: you really love me?

U: more than you can imagine

M: then will you leave your wife and kid for me?

U: wh.. what? But .. i' how' what'

M: stop stuttering Uday, I want a solid answer, yes or no

U: you know Maya - I love you more than my life but I just cannot leave my ...

M: (INTERRUPTED) then this relation cant work any longer, lets part ways Uday. You can go back to your family!

U: Maya, please'. Am pleading

M: I can't do this again Uday ... just leave me ALONE.

Uday who was not used of getting things out of HIS control, pulled Maya into a forceful kiss, she did resist in the beginning, but then; the desire in her was too strong that she kissed him back. They parted after a few minutes.

U: Maya, I really want you (he whispered sensually)

M:I want you too! but ... I need time to think!

U: I can give you time ... PLEASE don't say "NO"

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"And ...? " , Veer asked his mother.
Mother : What?
Veer : Mom , why don't u answer me properly? Why do we always end up talking in riddles?
"Veer , my Dear Son ... U are not old enough to have THIS conversation with your Mother", she laughed. "OKAY fine!!!!!!! Then , Manyataji - will u please answer my question?" , he tried another approach. "Haww - U called your mother by name ... God save u from me now!!!!!" , she tucked her sari in he skirt and chased behind Veer , who was running very fast , trying to out-run his mother. The loud laughter of mother and son echoed in the house.
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Posted: 12 years ago
yiupeee..me first!!!!

I rarely get this pleasure😔 (huge work pressure) ...but got now so lemme have a party first🥳

Awesome update as alwayz.. Andy and Navina 👏

Uday is just an a*****e in this story...

now I am veryyy angry wid him 😡

I just hate men of these kinds 😡

he deserves a punishment...

And I cannot stop my detective brain from thinking...

That Maya and Veer share some bigg mystery...🤓

I got it right that they are together in this plan

But what kind of relation she shares with Veer not getting it yet!!! 🤓 😕

She can't be Veer's sister coz no brother will want his sister around a man like Uday and she can't be his Girlfriend too for the very same reason...I thought she could be Manyata's cousin coz some of their features are similar...but could be a random girl too...though very less Indian girls are fair like Manyata...isn't it? (except some girls from north or hill stations like Simla; Manali; north east girls are fair but they looks bit like chinese)!!!! 🤓

Anyway I'll get that sooon 😉

And you guyz too update soon 😊
Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovelyyy part soo it finaly revealed that veer is manveer son and i m little confused did jagat knw about uday's past deeds if yes then hw overall fantastic update andvina
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey andi n navi again an awesome update frm ur side 4 us... Thank u
this story has nw bcome more intriguing, will b waiting to read what happens next
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Posted: 12 years ago
U guys r just brilliant god poor aarti feel so sorry for her jagat is right his present is dirty as his past... So confused with this maya and manyata maybe they r two individual people but maya is just part of this plan but what relation does she have with veer the please continue soon really can't wait for the next part
Edited by preya_radev - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: panchaali

yiupeee..me first!!!!


I rarely get this pleasure😔 (huge work pressure) ...but got now so lemme have a party first🥳

Awesome update as alwayz.. Andy and Navina 👏

Uday is just an a*****e in this story...

now I am veryyy angry wid him 😡

I just hate men of these kinds 😡

he deserves a punishment...

And I cannot stop my detective brain from thinking...

That Maya and Veer share some bigg mystery...🤓

I got it right that they are together in this plan

But what kind of relation she shares with Veer not getting it yet!!! 🤓 😕

She can't be Veer's sister coz no brother will want his sister around a man like Uday and she can't be his Girlfriend too for the very same reason...I thought she could be Manyata's cousin coz some of their features are similar...but could be a random girl too...though very less Indian girls are fair like Manyata...isn't it? (except some girls from north or hill stations like Simla; Manali; north east girls are fair but they looks bit like chinese)!!!! 🤓

Anyway I'll get that sooon 😉

And you guyz too update soon 😊


dear wat makes u think that north girls look like chinese?????????😕

Edited by Fantasyangel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Ravneet I said about north east girls; they looks bit like chinese not north girls...read my comment again 😉
Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update superb
loved it!!!!👍🏼
finally uday ne maya ko dhund liya
really good update
wowww

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