Poem-Saras to Kumud...Page2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shama ban ke jalraha tha
Jab tum aayi zindagi main
Akeli kashthi khi tara beh raha tha jazbaton ke toofan main
Jab tum aayi zindagi main kinara bankar
Mere tukrane par bhi tum nahi hui mujhse naraz
Mere har gusthaki koi karke maaf
Mujpe tumne saaya kiya
Aur bhula diye mere dil ke zakaam
Shayad khuda ko manzoor nahi tha humara milan
Isiliye ujad diya mera kushiyon ka daman
Kar diya mujshe judha tumhe
Pata nahi kyun mujhe tha yakeen
Tum zindagi bar karogi mera intezaar
Pal bar ki bhul hogayi zindagi bar ki tadap
Par abhi yakeen hai mujhe milenge hum doobara kahin na kahin
Is janam mein nahi to agle main hi sahi
Kayamat tak karunga main tumhara intezaar
Tum bhula na dena mujhe kahin Tum bhula na dena kahin
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Posted: 12 years ago
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One more that i had written when he was unconcious
Har zara kar raha tha thujko besabri se yaad
Behoshi ke alam mein bhi lab pe tha sirf thumara naam
Hum tho aye the tumhe manane
Jo mere apnone diye zakhm zindagi bar unhe tumhe dikhane
Sochata maine ke kash ek din mujhe milegi kushi
Pahunga main tumhare pyar ke achal main sukun
Magar kismat ko tha kuch aur hi manzoor
Bichad gaye do pyaar karne wale bin kiye koi kasur
Abh rota hai mera dil yaad karke woh pal
Par umeed abhi bhi baki hai
hum milenge kabhi na kabhi zaroor
Agar dhatri pe na mil paye tho aasmanon mein hi sahi
Behoshi ke alam main bhi kartha hun main rab se dhua yahi
kartha hun main rab se dhua yahi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful. 👏 👍🏼 ⭐️ 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb! Fantastic!

Both of them are marvelous! 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for these lovely words, wish I had the same talent, but you are here, so why worry.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i'm poor in hindi so i didnt understand
but i know ur poem will be awesome
hats off
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks a lot all of you for appreciating
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Posted: 12 years ago
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One more on behalf of Kumud
Dard main hi dethi hun tumhe
Ansu bhi meri hi chalakthe hain kyun
Nafrat bhi karti hun tumhi se
Par dil bhi dadaktha hain sirf tere liye kyun
Teri bewafai bhul na pahungi
Par pyar pe tere ab bhi fida hun kyun
Bhula dena chahthi hun teri har yaad
Par kayalon pe chahe ho sirf tum kyun
Irada to tha ki teri har yaad mitadhun maan se
Par dil ke leheron pe tera kabsa hai kyun
Agar bichadna hi tha humari kismat main
To saya ban kar saath humesha rehte ho kyun
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Posted: 12 years ago
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All 3 are beautiful...
Too good...!!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Saras to Kumud
Mere pyar ki keemat chukarahi ho kyun
Duniya ke sitam chupa rahi ho kyun
Samne mere bale hi nafrat karne ka dawa karo tum
Mere chale jane par aansu bahathe ho kyun
Duniya ne bale hi humare rishte ko anjan samjha
Par aaj bhi maan ki dor bandhi hain kyun
Apne se door hone ki dua karthi ho
Par nazaron se ojhal hone par mujhe dhundthi ho kyun
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