MG SS ~Shadow Of His Love~ {NOTE iN pg 81}

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

beautiful start dear

adi and pinky are getting married

maaneet going to meet in the marriage

Quote

nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

MG SS ~Shadow Of His Love~
.

.
.
Part 2 :::
.
.
.
>>>>>>
After entering Malhotra house, maan get a call so excuse himself...
.
On the other side...
GEET, rajji & their frnds group welcome ADDI...
.
.
GEET hugged addi : congrats addi...
.
addi: thanks my baby sister...
where is ur sis?? aaj bhi late ho ge kya??
.
geet: no addi she is just coming... ok u wait i'll take her...
.
addi: that like my sis..
.
geet smiles & went to take pinky...
.
geet was about to enter when pinky's room when pinky's aunt called her...
.
geet to rajji: tu pinky ko leke niche jaa main abhi aunty ko jawab deke aate hu...
.
rajji: ok but come soon...
.
geet: yap...
.
...then geet went to aunty's room...
.
aunty give her two thali..one of vermalla & next one of flowers..
.
aunty: geet take in in mandap... vermalla ka time ho gaya hain...
.
geet smiles : ok aunty abhi jata hu...
.
She turn & start coming down from stairs when her dupptta got stuck in her sandals, so she was about to fall...
.
nd MAAN's call also got ended so he was coming dwn from stairs when HE saw someone is about to fall so he run & pull her by her waist...
.
GEET get very scared so she closed her eyes very tightly...
.
but suddenly her heart start beating very firstly...
geet thought she maybe died that why she is feeling so strange...
.
geet {st} : kya main maar gaye hu?? mera dil itne joor se kyun dharak raha?? mujhe itna secure feel kyun ho raha hain?? like main BABAJI ke pass hu aue mujhe kuch nahi hoga... i feel like humesha bass yahi rahu apne aankhe kabhi na kholu...
.
but geet ek baar ankhe kholke dekh toh sahe??
ri8 i should open my eyes...
.
.
>>so she slowly open her eyes & see that A Prince in black dress
.
is holding her her... & seeing her with full desire...
.
Geet start blushing😳😳
.
both was fully lost in their eyes...
.
MAAN {ST}: how can someone be so beautiful?? she is looking like & angel... i'm feeling like i should take her with me away from everyone... i want to live my whole life with her... i want to make her mine...
.
Hey maan what r thinking?? just stop...
.
Maan broke the eyelock & help geet to stand in her feet...
.
geet smiles : thank you {she blushed & run away before maan reply }
.
maan: pagal ladki...{smiles}... but very beautiful...
.
then Maan went near addi... but his eyes was searching for geet
.
MAAN: where did she go??? kabse dekh raha hu , par mil he nahi rahe... but why i'm not feeling good if she is not near me??? what happened?? no MAAN u should control maybe it is just a attraction?? Right i should forget her & enjoy addi's marriage...
.
.
then ARJUN & MAAN Take addi to mandap...
.
panditji: wadhu ko le ke aaye...
.
rajveer: ji abhi ladkiya late hi honge...
.
.
Then everyones eyes went to the stairs as the bridge was coming...
.
GEET {geet was dressed in white & red mix lehenga}

,
Geet, rajji was coming with pinky...
.
>>Every1 was seeing pinky... but MAAN'S was lost in GEET'S beauty...
maan {st}: She is looking like a queen...
.
maan was amazed to see her beauty...
.
Sometimes later GEET'S eyes meet with maan's...
.
GEET saw that MAAN was looking at her in one eyelock...
.
.
Geet blushed to see him ...😳
.
Both pinky to the mandap...
.
addi slowly in pinky's ear: u r looking amazing...
.
pinky blushed ..😳
.
panditji: warmala ka samay ho gaya hain...
.
aunty to geet: geet vermala do panditji ko...
.
geet: jii... geet pass the vermala thal to addi & pinky ... both take vermala...
.
.
then geet take another thal & give every1 rose petal to shower on them...
.
.
She was giving everone then time to give MAAN...
.
She pass the thal to him but maan was lost in his eyes...
.
geet smiles : suniye??
.
maan : {no reply}
.
geet : suniyeee...
.
maan back to his sense : hmm oh jii i mean yes ji apne kuch kaha???
.
geet smiles to see him like this: yeh lijiye {she showed him thal}.
.
maan: oh thanks...
.
geet : hmmm... {she went away from him}
.
.
.
.
.
.
.>>>PRECAP : Marriage continue...
.
PS: GUYS DO LIKE & PLZ BIG BIG COMMENTS 😊
.
.
LOVE NELU

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Maya.Maan
so nice dear, and both the parts were amazing, nice meeting by Maan and Geet, good work once again...

Maya Rhea😳

.

thnks dear 😊

Quote

6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow...wonderful start...

sorry for responding late because of net problem...

Maan ne Geet ko girne se bachchaya and he lost himself in just one look of Geet...

he is fully impressed by her beauty...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

Quote

Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

read part 1 & 2..amazing..hmmm😳😳😳love at first sight...maan is totally flat over geet.pls cont soon..

Quote

aditimaan

@aditimaan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wow so lovely amazing ud.maan lost in geet.waiting 4 next

Quote

Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awsome update
Maan toh Gaya. Lol

Quote

nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

MG SS ~Shadow of his love~
.
Part 3::
.

.

Panditji: Kanyadan ke liye wadhu ke pita (dad) aage aaye...
.
rajveer: jiii panditji...
.
then he go & done pinky's kanyadan...
.
.
.
IN THIS WHOLE TIME MAAN WAS watching GEET...
.
HE was drooling & drooling...
.
When HE saw that suddenly geet's eyes get moist... Maan get worried for her...
.
He trun to what was geet eyes looking...
.
GEET was seeing the kanyadan rasam...

{Geet was missing her parents mohindar-rano... they was not her real parents...
but still GEET passed 5 years with them... they shared a great bonding }
.
A dropped of tear came from geet eyes, so she run to her room {so that nobody can se her}
.
but MAAN's eyes was only at GEET... HE saw that geet run from there, so he also followed her...
.
GEET went to her room & pushed herself in the bed & start crying loudly...
.
Nobody was hearning her Cry with MAAN as there was lots of sound of music...
.
Maan was watching her from her room window...
.
geet open the bed drawer & take out her Parents picture & kiss them...
.
GEET : *sob* i miss u mama-papa... why u leave me alone?? Mama apne toh promise kiya tha na,, aap humesha apke beti ke sath rahoge?? phir kyun...
.
maan was about to go frm there as he don't want hear her about her personal life without her permission... but he stop when she heared geet saying...
.
geet: Nobody is near me papa to console me... *sob* whom i can hugged tightly & can cry my heart out... I knw BABAJI needs you more then me, so he take u both away from me...
But i'm also a human na... i also need someone *sob* i need someone who loved me mama..like papa loved you... You should not do this to me... & *sob* *sob*
.

MAAN can't take it anymore...
{MAAN a MAN who can't see anyoune in pain... he just can't take it. }
.
HE can't able to see geet like this...so he runned to her room...
.
Maan runnned to her & take geet for hugged...
.
geet was shocked to see MAAN but when HE HUGGED HER...
.

geet forget everything & hugged him back tightly & cried a lot...
.
.
geet: why they *sob* leave me *sob*alone here???
.
maan hugged her more toghtly to take her pain away...
.
maan: chup ho jao Angel... everything will be alright...
.
geet: *sob* kab ?? kab sab thik hoga?? kab mujhe koi pyar *sob*karega?? kab koi assa aayega jo sirf mera *sob* hoga... jo mere har dard *SOB* ko dur karega?? bolo na...bolo...
.
maan: BELIEVE ME Angel ... everything will alright...Chup ho jao plzz...
.
geet: nahi chup hona mujhe... mujhe bohot *sob* jiyada rona hain...plz mujhe chup maat hone do na..
Mujhe ki godi (lap) main sona hain... {she start crying more loudly}
.
maan: sshhh chup ho jao naa... Itna roo oo ge toh sab yaha aajayenge... tumhara make-up bhi karab ho jaye ga na...
.
geet rubbed her nose in maan's shirt : mujhe sachi main rona hain...
.
maan: rone se sab thik ho jayega??
.
geet nodded for no...
.
maan: toh phir??
.
geet: par mujhe mama ke pass jana hain ... {she was crying like a baby}
.
maan: ooo my angel.. do you think your mama will be happy to see you like this?? bolo??
.
geet : no...
.
maan: then for mama's seck plz stop crying na... you're a good girl na??
.
geet: hmm... maan broke the hugged & wipe her tears...
.
maan: that's like a good girl... Then GEET pulled to bed made him sit & she put her head in his lap...
Geet hugged him by his waist...
.
Maan was shocked but he didn't say anything... just let her do what she want...
.
geet was feeling relax in her lap...
She get sleep in his sleep...
maan was just watching... he was trying to understand her...
.
MAAN'S POV::
She is such an innocent soul... she even don't knw me.. but she trust me...
She is a small child... jo bhi iss ke pass aata hain sayad woh isse apna maan lete hain...
but if she back to her sense, she may be feel guilty,,,.. i should go away from there...
.
MAAN Put geet's head to the pillow & leave from there...
.
.
.
PRECAP :...
.
>> See below the next comment for Special NOTE Must read 😊😊
.
.
love NELU...

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

Quote

nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Special Note:::
.
.
GEET::::
A innocent soul... who just want love... true love nothing else...
She want someone who will be just her...
Who can her pain away from her...
And will full her life with true love...
.
.
.
MAAN :::
A Man who can't see anyone in pain...
.
.
love NELU...😊