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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Read both the chapters at a go. .
And it is mind blowing..
Am waiting for the volcano to erupt..
was missing her karate. .
Love to have a pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 1 beautiful intro...about zoya.. 😊

Chapter 2 Asad and zoya meet... 🤣

and zoya adventure...👏... since you are going to stretch one night into few chapter.. so update also must be fast... 😃 coz i like it ❤️ ❤️ ❤️






It is really encouraging to write more when people say they want to read more...😃
I will be updating really soon. I'm glad you loved it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Amazing part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
hey tis is really amazing...read it all in one go...
very nice concept...wow luv the way both asad n zoya meet each other...
please continue soon n do pm me...
beautifully written...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is really amazing...read it all in one go...

very nice concept...wow luv the way both asad n zoya meet each other...
please continue soon n do pm me...
beautifully written...



I'm glad that you liked their meeting. I like to write things that are very realistic and their meeting is something that can happen to people in reality. And Yes I will definitely pm as soon as I update..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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both part is superb..plz do continue soon n PM ME
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was superb plz update nxt 1 soon and pm me...i had send you the buddy request
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This is a amazing story plzzz PM me I have sent u a buddy request and update soon :):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

both part is superb..plz do continue soon n PM ME


Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

it was superb plz update nxt 1 soon and pm me...i had send you the buddy request



Originally posted by: princess101

This is a amazing story plzzz PM me I have sent u a buddy request and update soon :):):)



I'm glad that all of you guys liked it so far...I will definitely pm once I update the next chapter.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys!! Here is the next chapter. I hope you like it...

Chapter 3

"Mr. Khan. What's going on? I can't see anything. Before you start again, let me tell you I had nothing to do with this. So don't blame me. Please don't tell me that we are going to be stuck here all night. The darkness is really creeping me out. I am already suffocating. Do something!!!!" Zoya screamed in the pitch dark elevator. She knew that she was the one who suggested taking the elevator rather than using the stairs. So what even if his office was only on the 3rd floor, Zoya still didn't want to walk up the stairs. But there is nothing they can do now. Asad knew that elevator is stuck due to power loss and will definitely take some time for the generator to start up. He tried to just ignore Zoya. She would shut up eventually but no.

"Mr. Khan, are you even listening to me? DO SOMETHING!!!" Zoya screamed with ten time louder volume. This was the final straw and Asad lost his cool. He just wanted her to shut up and this was the only way he could think of. Zoya had no idea what just hit her. Asad was so annoyed that he just pushed her against the wall with one arm around her waist and another covering her mouth to stop her rambling. Next thing Zoya knew, she was pinned against the elevator wall with a very muscular arm round her waist and an enormously soft hand covering her mouth. Even though she couldn't see him, she could feel his breath on her face that sent chills down her spine. Her heart was beating faster by the second. He was really really close. "Shut up. Your screaming is not going to help." Said Asad, unaware of what he just did or is still doing. It was not until the emergency lights went on and Asad realized what happened.

But with lights back on, the first thing that caught Asad's attention were her eyes. Zoya's almond shaped brown eyes full of innocence were so mesmerizing that he couldn't break the stare. No matter how annoying she was, her eyes were so calm, stable and peaceful. They were so intoxicating that he didn't want to look anywhere but just gaze at them and listen to what they were saying. Neither one of them dare to break the eye-lock. Zoya never knew that even though his words were full of arrogance, his eyes said a whole different story. They were sincere, quite yet spoke volumes. She didn't see any form of anger in them. As much as Zoya loved this staring contest, she felt shortness of breath. She tried to speak but with his hand against her mouth it was impossible. After couple more attempts, she finally dragged Asad out of her eyes. He looked down to find his hand on her and realize what just happened. As soon as he let go, Zoya took the deepest breath possible to compensate. He quickly stepped back to get out of this awkward position. But instead he pulled her along with him; totally unaware that his other hand was still around her waist. Realizing that the situation is getting awkward by the second, both stepped away as the like poles of a magnet. Silence took over for couple of moments as both drawn themselves back to normal self. Asad was surprised at his actions and Zoya at this emotion she felt for the first time.

"Allah Miyaa, What's wrong with you Mr. Khan?" Zoya said trying to sound normal.

"Ms. Farooqui. It is your fault…" Asad answered but was soon interrupted by Zoya.

"Oh really! I don't remember telling you to push me against the wall and stand so close to me that I could feel your breath." Zoya rambled. With a very awkward eye-lock, she realized what she just said and told herself to shut up.

"Instead of blaming me, can you find a way out of this?" Zoya said folding her arms. "Ms. Farooqui, emergency lights are on so the generator should kick in couple of minutes." said Asad trying to explain but found Zoya rolling her eyes in response.

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In 10 minutes, power came back and now their awkwardness can finally come to an end. Both took a deep breath and walked out of the elevator as it reached the 3rd floor. Zoya was impressed by the interior design and organization of the office after all it was Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan's. "Ms. Farooqui, wait here at the reception. I will be back in couple of minutes. Also, don't wonder around. I don't have to search for you. We have already wasted way too much time." Asad ordered and walked towards the corridor on right. Zoya stood there and observed him as he walked away. He has a really sexy butt; Zoya thought and then in a second realized how inappropriate it was. Oh well, it was true!!

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"Make sure this doesn't happen next time," said Asad finishing up all the paper work. "I want this deal to be finalized by tomorrow," ordered Asad but soon realized that it is after midnight. "Prasad, you can fax these tomorrow morning. It is very late. You should go home," said the softer side of Asad that came out once in a while. Though he was an extremely workaholic, he understood that everybody had different priorities. Both of them wrapped up and parted their ways. Asad headed back towards the reception to finally head back home. It has been a really long day and night. He doesn't want any more adventure but he didn't know that trouble is Zoya Farooqui's middle name.

He reached the reception but Ms. Farooqui was nowhere to be found. Where did she go now? I should have known this would happen, Asad thought rubbing his temple. Now where is he going to find her in office? Couldn't she just do what he asked but no. Ms. Farooqui has mind of her own. He stood in the middle of corridor and screamed, "Ms. Farooqui. Where are you? Come back here right now. I don't have time for this. We need to head home," with hands on his hips. He was expecting some reply but much to his surprise he heard nothing. After giving couple more tries of calling her, Asad got worried. May be she already went back to the car. He picked up the phone from reception and speed dialed the watchman.

"Ramu, did you see anybody head out of the office?" Asad asked hoping this will be end to his quest.

"Yes. Prasad Sir just left." Watchman answered.

"No. Did you see any girl leave?" Asad said with somewhat angry tone.

"No Sir."

"Okay" saying this Asad slammed the phone back down. He was mad at her for not following his instructions but moreover he was getting worried. After all, she is his responsibility until they reach home safely. He tried to focus on finding her but naturally his mind started imaginations of how worse the situations can get. She didn't leave the office because watchmen would have seen her then she has to be in the office, Asad thought. He ran down the corridor on the right, opening every door hoping she would be sitting there will her infectious smile. His concern increased with every door he opened and didn't find her. So where is Zoya Farooqui?

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I know it's a bit short. Sorry about that… Also, next chapter will be updated little late…probably Tuesday. I am aiming for Monday but I want to spend some quality time with my family before I leave for pharmacy school next month.

Anyways, let me know what you think of this one. Good, bad, awful or horrendous…anything thing is welcomed. 😃 Hit like and Leave comments 😊

Thank you so much… Adios amigos!!! 😎

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