#5:VIRMAN FF*kyu DARD hai itna*IMP NOTE AT 98 - Page 26

actually ur updates r so long n so full of masalas n dhamakas that evrytime i finish reading i take a break n think of commenting later bt then forget commenting on it.and also because i'm always at loss of words after readin them.
n plz tell me how do i criticize somethin that's perfect?i looove ur updates."koi doubt mat rakhna"'
delete me if u want.bt then i'll stalk u again.n i promise to praise u after evry update as i can't criticize them.love u.

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see?? see???i came first.😃
again masalas n dhamakas.😛ah..ha virat fighting karan😃😃😃😃
manvi sensing virat's presence...n vice versa...very filmy.n ya the cool breeze.👏
karan will strike later.i know.is that the surprise??no..that can't be it.or else u wouldn't wink.😆
is it virman SR?plz say yes.plz plz.😃
love u shilpa!!!🤗

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I dont knw about any one else but i am loving this story very much!!! and this upd8 was quite a surprise as i was really not expecting that u would be updating so soon ! not that i am complaining but is that i loved this surprise! So senior singhania was behind all this! i too had a dbt for karan doing this as as far as i have understood his character, he doesnt attack so vigorously! he is the one who attacks by his sweet poisons and actions and not that openly! he will surely play his cards but not that openly and predictable way! he knows Virat's insecurity and loopholes and am sure he will strike on them !!!!

Coming to maanvi! the girl is seriously in love what wwe call as true love with virat! what she can think every time is of virat and how she can win over him and also save him from any miss happening! love her!

One request shilpa lolzzz **** i really pester u with my requests **** i wanna see a bold maanvi! lolzzz bcz Virat to VIshwamitra se kaafi inspired lagte h!!! he is kind of working on setting an example of self control to the people!!! It should be maanvi who will be breaking the ice!!!!!!!

and yeah !! please dont end the story until it reaches the point u have planned it to continue or to a point till when it seems that further writing the story will lose it's essence or will seem to be a drag!



*****loads of love and hugss******

shilpa.pls dnt end this story...

Originally posted by: myvirman

hey plez don't disconnect this story im really in lovewith this story first wen it started i wasnt that bother but now after i red all of it im loving it i always wait for the updates i checi every day to see if u update and i really loved ur story emoet i was a bit upset wen it finished but im happy u started thsi story if u can will u update every day may be sometimes u wont get my comments becuz i just press lile but promise from next time i will try to comment plez dont disconnnect it and if u can will u update today plezzz reply soon

dear... i wasnt going to discontinue but was thinking of ending it...

Brilliant up date please continue hard work