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IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

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It's amazing how life will break two people in such a way that they fit perfectly together.

Happiness is what i feel for them. They have suffered enough.

Good that they don't have to give up much to be together because they have sacrificed enough.

Forgive even those who cannot forgive themselves. Especially them.

Glad that Arnav is moving on and making sure that Khushi is on the same path. His guidance will ensure that Khushi forgives herself. If not completely then at least some what.

"Yehki bood. Yehki na bood."

Farsi: "There was one. And there was one that was not."

And they are the one for each other =)

Old habits die hard. Hahaha Nani p piyar agaya. She's again trying to dictate a life with her decision. Thought she would have learnt looking at Anjali's example but here i felt she was right since Khushi actually does have a interest. It was always at the back of my mind that perhaps Nani will ask her to take over after her Grandsons refusal. So i'm glad to see this happening.

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Leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Juhi!!! Been waiting darling! :-)

Beautiful! :) Is not the word!

I felt so so good after the read! Could not have ended in a better way! :)

Dunno why you had your apprehensions of the way you ended it! I thought it was perfect and not cliche! It was not atleast like a dreadful one such as separation.. the way i had started imagining after your A/N where you had expressed abt the ending!

Honestly ... i quite anticipated Nani's move on this!! :)

But was not sure of Khushi and Arnav's thoughts ... I am with Arnav on this now though!! Indian Politics is something i have always at bay!! for reasons more than 1... anyways lets not get into that now! So ya my thoughts abt Khushi joining politics though its been something she has been aspiring of - doesn't sit well with me!

Lets see what you finally will lay in front of us in the form of epilogue! :)

I really loved the whole bit!! This was way different a SS so far!

Thanks a lot for sharing this wonderful SS with us Juhi! its been an awesome journey and i am glad to have been a part of the same from day ! :)

Hoping to hear from you soon! :)

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Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

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RES 😊

Ah Thank you Juhi, thank you for this incredible incredible journey!

Reading up this chapter I had this anxiety, I didn't want it to end I wanted to cherish every memory you created somehow it didn't end for me it kept going and even towards the end I am still going with them! I won't talk about the end now because we also have ourselves an epilogue and thank goodness for that otherwise there is scope for so much more after "Nothing mothers except you and you and Hamesha"!

Their feelings towards each other is so intense, so pure, so genuine and so mutual yet they couldn't call it love, who are they kidding, their actions and willingness to sacrifice and change their life for eachother definitely spoke volumes about their feelings.

As always LOVED all the situations you created, that brief moment where Khushi panicked and asked him if it was only a temporary thing for him, little did she know that he is willing to move for her and him. Their moments of passion, Arnav's words were just so INTENSE I could feel em all way here sitting in my room!😳 Oh and that photo moment was so beautiful, they were both carrying around the same photo of their special moment! Moving from there I must tell you how baffled I am by the very convenient way you created that middle ground where none of them had to sacrifice their dream jobs, they can still have eachother and pursue their careers at the same time.👏 I did anticipate Nani's proposition (particularly knowing that Arnav and Akash weren't interested in pursuing politics at all) but I didn't see Khushi's reaction coming, how she didn't instantly agree and acknowledged arnav's say in it as well even if he wasn't her husband or anything, she still gave him that same respect one gives to one's partner!👏

I shall not ramble on and repeat everything you wrote in the chapter because I loved everything about this last chapter, "Nothing matters except, you and you.. Hamesha"... what a perfect Finish! * sighs *Sniff * Sniff 👏 Looking forward to the Epilogue now!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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This ends over here!😭

I know it is not the right thing to start the comment with this but I just couldn't stop myself from saying after the realization that this was supposed to be the last chapter.

Back to the update…it was dhamaakedaar as usual! I loved the way you incorporated Lucknow. When it comes to closing the loops, you never leave anything behind. While the last chapter was about Akash and Payal, this one was about Lucknow. It wouldn't have remained in readers' minds had you not mentioned it but that you did only showcased your proficiency to cover every aspect in a story.😊

Red chiffon Saree! It might not have been the one that Arnav saw as he entered her house but that it made an appearance itself was enough to leave a grin on my face. Several other such moments were the cooking disaster for Khushi as also the regular racing of her heart.😳

Trust you to follow the 'rules' yet not disappoint the readers in any way. Ab kya kahoon…the face was utilized very well.😉

It was sure a curveball to know that Khushi had decided to give away everything that she had in India and go to US; that 'he' was the prime reason behind it is justified and although I am devoted to my country, I found her reasoning to be the one that warranted support. Thank you for the insight on PAHO.😊

But the bigger surprise was Arnav's decision to relocate to India. And with the reasons that he supported for the same; apart from Khushi of course, it seemed like the easiest thing to do.

Devyani is one smart woman; smart being the key over here. She hasn't been in the story frequently yet hasn't failed to make an impact and her suggestion to groom Khushi for politics speaks of her as one shrewd politician herself. She might harbor some wishes of her own and then fulfill them through Khushi, but the fact that she was honest as also thought of something like that earns her brownie points.👍🏼

I would have gone on a strike had Khushi not told Devyani that she intended to talk it but with Arnav before she conveyed her decision to her. What followed was ethereal; the talk amongst the stars, the unsaid profession of love and the hamesha…oh yes Hamesha it s going to be!😃

Have fun with the relatives and here's hoping that the epilogue is posted soon. Soon, not because I'm eager for it; of course I want to know what is going to happen in the epilogue but then it is only after this story ends that I'm going to start campaigning for Steamiest! Asli duniya might take over for you but that isn't going to stop me…bachke rehna!😆

P.S. Since this was the last chapter, a cliffhanger wouldn't have been right yet I expected you to spring a surprise. But you didn't and I am going to have a good sleep because of that.😉

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kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

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And i was still refreshing page 13. 😕

**Edited **

So this is going to the last but one update of yours that i am going to comment on till you are back. 😔

Juhi i am going to miss that anxious wait that i endure every time you are due for an update.

I have said this earlier too but i am banking on the writting keeda to ensure that you don't stay away for too long. You will truly be missed and i need to stop this right now and save this when you update the epilogue.

Wow juhi what an update. Arnav and khushi both wanting to take steps to make things better for their well 'better half'. Arnav willing to give up his dream that he was living in America and move to India. Well he did move for his family too but in case khushi was not in his life then the motivation to move to India would not have been there.

And khushi doing all those research and finding similar opportunity workwise for herself to make a move to US and not just her but moving her entire family as well.

Both walking the line to meet each other midway.

Yeh hua na Pyaar, hamesha wala.

And what an apt title - HAMESHA, ALWAYS and forever. Because they give strength to each other to carry on and face all the hurdles that come their way.

Loved the way you wrote the sexual pull that existed between A & K and Arnav kissing Khushi at the door after a drought of so many days. Toe curling wala sensation for me Juhi, splendid. 😳

As usual loved this naniji for being such a good pragmatic person and accepting Khushi so lovingly into her family just for her grandson's happiness.

I loved the scene where khushi sees Anjali's portrait it was so vivid and touched the chords at all the right places the way Arnav supported her physically at that time.

Love this khushi for reaffirming to Arnav once again how much he means to her by simply telling nani that she would convey her decision after consulting with Arnav. Without saying much Khushi has conveyed and given a meaning to this nameless relationship of theirs and let everyone know what he means to her.

Happy sighs Juhi and i can't wait to read the epilogue to give us a glimpse into the future life of Arnav and khushi, which we will carry in our minds for a very long time.

The hamesha wala Forever love which can cross religious borders and societal norms as well.

Bas aab tum book likhna shuru karo and hum khareed ne ke liye tayaar khade hain. BAS

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mbbsrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Well I wasnot Expecting that they will go to this extent for eachother..If THIS is not love and THIS cant be named then better forget there is a thing like Love..

And Personally i dont want Khushi to Join Politics..they can somehow contribute to Nani in other ways na..

And please In epoiloge Show them Married LOL

I am so waiting to see them like this..

Please Juhi...

and waiting for your A/N too..

Please say something Hopeful😉😉

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