TaaRey OS - An Eternal Love

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Everyone!! How are you all??
Guys, I have written an OS on TaaRey...
Here it is..



TaaRey OS - An Eternal Love



Rey was sitting in his room lost in his own thoughts..He had the same pendant in his hands which he had gifted to Taani on their first Valentines Day..His face, which was covered with tears seemed really very weak ..His eyes expressed so much pain and anxiety...His body was shivering...
Not due to chillness but due to the unbearable pain inside him..The pain which he had always hidden in these 2 years, just due to the promise given to Taani...Just for her sake, he lived till now covering his face with a fake smile..Taani!!! How much he missed her in these 2 years.. He had not even heard of her for such a long time..He did not even know about her where abouts..He was living like a body without a soul.

He looked around his room which had only and only HER memories all around it... The walls were fully covered with her pictures... He stood up and walked to one of her pictures...
He raised his trembling hands upto her Picture and caressed it..
Now, it was not at all in his hands to control himself..Today, he was totally shattered... How could he control himself today?? Today was the day when he had confessed his love for her.. Today was the day when Taani and Rey had become TaaRey...

Rey(crying) -- Ta.. Taani.. Kahaan chali gayi tum.. Kyun Taani.. Kyun di mujhe itni badi punishment.. koi kisi ko itna punish karta hai kya.. Tum nahi jaanti Taani ke main tum se kitna pyaar karta hoon..Tum nahi jaanti ke ye 2 saal maine kaise guzaare tumhaare bina Taani.. Main jee to raha hoon, laikin sirf aur sirf tumhaare liye..Sirf tumhaare promise ke liye.. Is umeed main ki shaayad tum mujhe kabhi to maaf kar dogi.. Taani!! Plz. Plz. mere paas wapas aajao.. Plz.. One chance.. One last chance.. . I miss you so much Taani.. I miss you..



Plz. Do play it in the background.





Jaaniye Heeriye
Jaaniye Heeriye
Mere Mann Ye Bata De Tu
Kis Or Chala Hai Tu
Kya Paya Nahi Tune
Kya Dhundh Raha Hai Tu
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa Kahe Dhadkan Hai Tujhse Pyar
Mitwa Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa


He fell down on his knees and started crying badly clutching his hair due to the unbearable pain of separation from his love..

He wanted to feel her..He wanted to refresh his memories again..So, he decided to visit the college...




Mere Mann Ye Bata De Tu
Kis Or Chala Hai Tu
Kya Paya Nahi Tune
Kya Dhundh Raha Hai Tu
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa Kahe Dhadkan Hain Tujhse Pyar
Mitwa Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa



He got ready and got into his car... He was driving completely lost in his Taani's memories..He remembered how Taani left him forever and went away leaving him all alone..The forehead kiss Taani gave him..Her Tears seeing him hurt..Their last meet..Their last hug..He closed his eyes in pain and the tears fell off his eyes depicting his pain..

Jeevan Dagar Mein Prem Nagar Mein - 2
Aaya Nazar Mein Jab Se Koi Hain
Tu Sochta Hain Tu Puchata Hain
Jiski Kami Thi Kya Yeh Wohi Hain
Haa Yeh Wohi Hain - 2
Tu Ek Pyasa Aur Yeh Nadi Hain
Kaahe Nahi Isko Tu Khulke Bataye
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa Kahe Dhadkan Hai Tujhse Pyar
Mitwa Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa



He remembered their first meet.. The way they fell upon each other.. Her cuteness..How her being with Shivam mattered to him so much..The way he used to hide his love with his anger and by hurting her..Her sparkling eyes, her naughty smile..


Teri Nigaahen
Par Tu Yeh Soche Jaaun Na Jaaun
Yeh Zindagi Jo Hai Naachti Toh
Kyon Bediyon Mein Hai Tere Paanv
Preet Ki Dhun Par Naach Le Paagal
Udta Agar Hai Udne De Aanchal
Kaahe Koi Apne Ko Aaise Tarsaaye
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa Kahe Dhadkan Hai Tujhse Pyar
Mitwa Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa



He remembered the time when for the first time he surrendered himself to her..The first time they indirectly confessed their love for each other..The closeness they shared..The Food fight scene..He remembered each and every hug they shared...He cannot forget anything related to her...



Mere Mann Ye Bata De Tu
Kis Or Chala Hai Tu
Kya Paya Nahi Tune
Kya Dhundh Raha Hai Tu
Mitwa...


He was so much lost in his thoughts that he did not notice a man walking on the road and his car moving towards him.. Soon, he came out of his thoughts and tried to control the direction and speed of his car...He managed to control to some extent.. But still, the man was injured, though not severely.. Rey felt really guilty.. And forced him and took him to the hospital...


He took him inside and waited for him to get dressed.. He was seated outside the dressing room when he saw a nurse running to a doctor nearby..He was least interested..But he could hear their conversation..

Nurse(in a hurry) -- Doctor, Doctor.. Wo.. ward no. 11 patient ki condition bohot critical hogayi hai..Plz. Jaldi chaliye..

Dr. -- You mean.. Ms. Taani Shekhawat, the CANCER patient.. Oh!! God!! Chalo Jaldi..

And he rushed towards the ward..

------With Rey----

Rey, who was least interested in their conversation, was left shocked after hearing the Patient's name.. Taani Shekhawat.. Thats what they said..

He was too numb to react..But still his heart which craved to see her once was constantly praying that it should not be HER..

He slowly slowly moved towards ward no 11.. And what he saw through the window rooted him to the place where he was standing..He felt the world being snatched all over again from him..Even the tears which were continuously flowing from his eyes seemed to freeze upon the sight.. It was HIS Taani..His Love.. his Life lying there on the bed with the oxygen mask on her face and several drips attached to her hands...She looked terribly weak..

Taani was suffering from cancer..Now everything was falling on its place.. The reason why she left him..

He really did not know how to react.. Just then the medical staff came out of the room and were speaking among themselves..

Dr. -- She does not have much time.. She is breathing her last hours..

Rey who was completely numb walked into the ward..Taani, whose eyes were closed felt his presence.. She opened her eyes slowly, with great difficulty...

Their eyes met and tears were continuously flowing from them..Rey sat next to her and held her hands with his trembling hands.. His body was again shivering with a fear to lose HER..
She smiled at him... He kissed her palm.. Gosh!! He craved so much to touch her.. And she craved so much for his love..

Taani tried to speak something but Rey placed his fingers on her lips and stopped her from doing so..

Rey(crying) -- shhh.. Taani...

He then cupped her face and continued..

Kyun kiya tum ne aisa.. Itna pyaar karti ho mujhe se.. Laikin ek baar bhi nahi socha ke main kaise jiyoonga tumhaare bina..
In 2 saal main jeeya to sirf tumhaare liye Taani..Har pal, har waqt sirf aur sirf tumhaara intezaar karta raha main..
Aur tum, ye sab sehti rahi.. Ek baar bhi mujhe bataana zaroori nahi samjha...

Taani(crying) -- R.. Rey main aapse bo... bohot Pyaar Karti hoon..
Main aapko apni waja se takleef main nahi dekh sakti thi.. Isliye main sabko chod kar chali gayi.. Main bhi aapke pyaar ke liye bohot tadpi hoon Rey.. Bohot Zyaada..Laikin ab aap mile bhi to kab.. Jab mere paas waqt hai hi nahi..Apna khayaal rakhna Rey..

Rey (Crying) -- Taani, agar Taani hai to Rey hai.. Tumhaari saanse jab tak chalengi, mera dil bhi dhadkega.. Tumhaare bina mera koi wajood nahi hai.. Sirf main hi jaanta hoon ke main tumhaare liya kitna tadpa hoon..Bohot Pyaar karta hoon main tumse.. Bohot Zyaada...

He saw that suddenly Taani had started breathing heavily..He
did not know what to do.. He wanted to make her feel his love.. He was crying bitterly.. He bent down and kissed her softly on her lips..Both of them closed their eyes feeling the moment..

Rey(his lips still on hers) -- I Love You, Taani.. I love you!!!

But he did not get any response from her.. He opened his eyes to see her eyes still closed.. their was no movement in her body..He was silent.. He kissed her forehead... Tears from his eyes fell on her eyes.. He then laid his head on her chest holding her hand in his... And along with Taani, his heartbeat stopped too..

Background voice

Rey-- Taani jab tak tumhaari saanse chalengi, mera dil bhi dhadkega..



TaaRey, who could not live together in this world, passed away together.. Their souls became one forever and ever...


-------TaaRey - An eternal Lovestory--------


So, how was it?? I am so sorry as I know Its very lengthy..
But, I really wanted to write this...

If you liked it, plz. do hit like and comment..

Love you all..

Ayesha😛

TaaRey forever..😳
Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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[ 😭 😭
Subah subah rulana jaroori tha kya...im still crying ayesha 😭 ...loved it!!
Itna dimag chalta kaha se hai...n chalta bhi hai to itne emotional direction me kaise chalta hai!!
For such an awesome dimaag 👏
Starting wid rey missing taani...so sad sad 😭
N den he was remembering all d past...saare taarey scenes yaad aa gaye...missing dem 😭 😭
Song bhi itna perfect choose kiya...m telling u...dis song is my fav now for my lyftym 😭
Muje to laga while reading dat u will show rey ka accident...bt den he was safe...i was soo relieved
Bt usme bhi ur intension was to make me cry 😭 😭 ...
Hospital me he met taani...n taani ko cancer n she is gng to die 😭 😭 😭
Loved taarey ka chotasa romance bt even here d dialouges were soo emotional 😭
Rey kissing taani n taani 😭 ...i cant even say dat...n even rey.. 😭
Just like lovebirds who die widout each other 😭 😭 😭
Samaj nai aa raha ki should i hug u for dis lovely os or should i come n beat u fot making me cry soo much 👏 👏
N yup d title was perfect 👍🏼 ...luv u bolu yaa hate u 😕 🤗
Edited by shikha1997 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shikha its not fair but koi baat nahi first place tum lo ya mai kya farak padta hai😉😉

yipeee me second

coming to os you know what ayesha when i recevied your pm so i thought like your previous os it also contain some romance but yeh to full opposite hai it made my cry 😭😭😭 its too emotinal now today i realize that when i wrote emotional work on taarey so how much you gusy cried so sorry for that coming to os its awesome i loved it so much , aww the way remembering taani and her memories was so emotional and heart touchy , loved teh way you portrayed his feelings and when he goes to college and lost in their memory lane haye fir se touch kar diya tune 😆😆 , or perfect choice os song mitwa taarey ki yaad dila di 😭😭 , omg taani had a cancer that's why she left rey thank god show mai aisa khuch nahi hua otherwise i'll die too , 🤢🤢 , aww their convo and last scenes 😭😭 cant able to write more i dont have a words its awesome totally perfect ...

keep writing but yeah not emotional lovey dovey likha karo ohkk😃😃

Edited by --taareylove--- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG !! Dii ... This really made me cry !! It was really beautiful !
Every single word was really mesmerising !!
I am really speechless after reading the OS !!
It was really very beautiful !

I'm so sorry for the late comment !
Edited by TaaReyD3_Neha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome superb os
totally loved it
taarey forever
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shikha1997

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[ 😭 😭
Subah subah rulana jaroori tha kya...im still crying ayesha 😭 ...loved it!!
Itna dimag chalta kaha se hai...n chalta bhi hai to itne emotional direction me kaise chalta hai!!
For such an awesome dimaag 👏
Starting wid rey missing taani...so sad sad 😭
N den he was remembering all d past...saare taarey scenes yaad aa gaye...missing dem 😭 😭
Song bhi itna perfect choose kiya...m telling u...dis song is my fav now for my lyftym 😭
Muje to laga while reading dat u will show rey ka accident...bt den he was safe...i was soo relieved
Bt usme bhi ur intension was to make me cry 😭 😭 ...
Hospital me he met taani...n taani ko cancer n she is gng to die 😭 😭 😭
Loved taarey ka chotasa romance bt even here d dialouges were soo emotional 😭
Rey kissing taani n taani 😭 ...i cant even say dat...n even rey.. 😭
Just like lovebirds who die widout each other 😭 😭 😭
Samaj nai aa raha ki should i hug u for dis lovely os or should i come n beat u fot making me cry soo much 👏 👏
N yup d title was perfect 👍🏼 ...luv u bolu yaa hate u 😕 🤗



😭😭Shikhu!!! Main bhi bohot ro rahi thi ye likhte hue..
Isliye itni late hogayi post karne main...
Pata hai, Mujhe bhi taaRey ki bohot Yaad aarahi hai..
Kaash Ab bhi wo hote..
Anyways, Love you, Shikhu for such a heartfelt comment..
Long comments dena to hobby hai na..
But, ye comment.. this comment made me cry..
Love you dear..
And Plz. Dont cry!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya yr
suva suva rula dia
brilint os
😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

Awesome superb os
totally loved it
taarey forever



Thank you so much, dear..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chand91

kya yr

suva suva rula dia
brilint os
😭



Sorry😭
Plz. Dont cry😭
And thank you so much, dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Subah suabh tr os n itna ... emotional but still it ws tr n dey both went together so I m happy u know love is d best thing ever just love taaarey miss dem n u did a fab job awesome my csj luv u <3

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