All about our love (Virika & Virman) OS

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Hi, Im Tammy to those who dont know me I wrote an OS on the awsome foursome. Wasnt sure to post or not but my Ammu [B]insisted I post she even helped me also
I got thumb up from other little sis Tanya so herr it goes.


ALL ABOUT OUR LOVE (VIRIKA & VIRMAN) OS
Swamini bua goes to Vanshika maa's room to talk about Vidhi. SB : Bhabi I have been thinking why don't Viren and Jeevika have a weekend break and go for an outing so that we can talk to Vidhi and make her realise that Viren belongs to Jeevika.
Vmum: Thats good idea di but do you think that Viren and Jeevika will agree to go? They are concerned about Vidhi and the baby.
SB: Leave it with me.

Meanwhile in Hrishikesh Virman are still in the room. Virat started having a flashback of the cute lil moments he had wid Maanvi and started laughing. Manvi: Why do you laugh like a joker are u enjoying being locked in this room?
Virat: Well if my bandariya is with me anytime is enjoyable. Manvi just moved on to the other side facing her back to Virat.
Virat: Manvi I know your are very hurt for wat I said about the baby. I was so confused my insecurity made me say all those but now I realise my responsibility. I will do anything for u and our baby.
Virat kneeled down infront of Manvi,who had a teary eye.
Virat: Plz Manvi I cant live without you don't separate me from your life.
Manvi couldnt control any more she hugged him tightly n started sobbing.
Manvi: Virat even I cant live without you, when Dabbu told me that he put 6 sleeping pills in your water I was so scared.That's the only reason for yesterday's mishappening
Virat: What! He put sleeping pills in my water? But why?
Manvi: Oh you know Dhabu I blackmailed with rakhi to help me win this challenge and send you back to Chandigar. But dont be angry at him.
Virat: Ok I won't be angry at him but you coming back with me home plz.
Manvi: Ok but after my check up tomorrow.
Virat: ok

Vadhera house- Viren entered their room to find Jeevika at dressing table combing her hair. He goes near her and hugged her from the back and started kissing her. Jeevika tilted her head to give him more space. He started attacking her neck while she moaned. But their romance was disturbed by a knock. Virika jerked hearing SB's voice outside. Jeevika was blushing hard, trying to hide her red neck. Viren went to open the door.He was surprised to see Vmum n SB together at that time.
Viren: Maa! Baari Maa is everything ok?
SB: Yeah everything is ok but we have a surprise for you two. Arent you gonna invite us inside Viren?He blushed.
Viren : of course come in.
SB: Well Viren n Jeevika we thought since from next few months your hands are gonna be full of work especially Jeevika coz u have to take care of both Maanvi n Vidhi n then when the babies are born you won't have time for yourself.
Vmum: So we booked you two a weekend trip to Goa.
Viren: Wow Goa!!
Jeevika: How can we go leaving Vidhi in this state?
SB: Jeevikaa! Cant we look after her and Vidhi is not a child she can look after herself.
Vmum: Betaa be selfish for once and enjoy yourself after the baby's born you won't get a chance.
SB: Imagine you two in Goa n no interuption this time,coz no bodyguard this time!
She winked at Virika,who blushed.
Virika: thank you!
Vmum:Ok rest now your flight id at 9am
Virika: ok goodnight.

Hrishikesh-Bheeji is very anxious. She stood waiting outside the door n listening to no sound coming from their room. When suddenly they hear Manvi moan louder Virat's name, Bheeji got scared and open the door in a go and found Manvi seated on Virat's lap kissing him passionately. Virman were embarased n Bheeji left the room.

Next Morning Virika had to leave early in the morning at 7am since the flight is at 9am. They didn't get a chance to say bye to Vidhi.
At the airport,
Viren: Mrs Vadhera this time just you an me!! Jeevika blushed.Vadhera house- at dining table Vidhi came to have breakfast but she can't find virika so She asked about them.
SB: Ooh!!!Viren planned a surprise for Jeevika and took her to Goa to spend some quality time with her alone.
Vidhi: How can he do that?
VMum: Vidhii, Viren doesnt need anyone's permission to take his wife and if he has to definitely he'll not ask you.
Vidhi: I didnt mean that, I meant I have checkup on monday thats the reason.
SB: Dont worry we r here to look after you.

Hrishikesh hospital -
Dr: Manvi why didnt you tell me that you r a cancer survivor? Manvi: I didnt think it was necessary.
Dr: It is. Manvi its very risky that you conceieved too early. Im afraid your life could be at risk.My advise is better you terminate this before anything happens.
Virman: WHAT??
Manvi: Look dr I dont think its an option.I'm not going to kill my baby thats it.!!
Virat: Manvi is right. Just like we beat cancer I'm sure we can beat anything when we r together. Manvi hugged Virat then they went back home. Bheeji asked them how was the check up,but Maanvi started to cry and explained everything.
Hrishikesh in Virmans room-Manvi: Virat I want my Di plz take me to her.
Virat:We will go home but you remember bhai called in the morning to bid us farewell.They are on a Goa trip,we can't disturb them now. But we can go back home even today if you want to.
Goa in Virika's hotel room -Jeevika sent Viren out to get her phone which she misplaced at the reception. She did that purposely, so she can surprise her husband. Viren enterd the room to find the candles lit and placed every where,while in the middle stood Jeevika wearing black knee length night dress with very deep neckline exposing her long neck. So too was the back with a deep cut n left open. Viren was admiring his wife unaware of the fact that he moved slowly towards her as if being pulled by magnet.Their heart started beating very fast.She turned red like tomato coz of blushing..
Viren: Sexy Mrs Vadhera you look so damn hot. He was saying while his finger traced her forehead slowly going down to her lips and stared her lips so slowly. Jeevika moaned.Then he travelled towards her throat then to the end of her neck line. Jeevika moaned. Viren didnt give her chance to do anything.He pressed his lips on to hers. They kissed passionately.His hands roaming all over Jeevika's body and her hand are on viren's hair then she moved them to his shirt and started unbuttoning fast. Viren was shocked with her attitude but he was loving it. In no time his shirt was on the floor. Viren started kissing n giving love bites on Jeevika's neck while his hand got hold of jeevika's nightie and in no time removed it from her body then he carried her to the bed, spending the whole night making love.

Hrishikesh -Manvi insist that she wants her Di coz she always make everything better for her.She wanted to leave for Chandigar but Bheeji asked her to wait until monday so that Virika too wud return. Manvi agreed but felt that she needs her Di at her side now.

Monday Morning Virman left Hrishikesh, Meanwhile in Chandigar Vidhi heard that virika are coming back she went and change her clothes, wearing one of her new suits given by Jeevika.She looked herself in the mirror but she wasn't satisfied so she went to Virika's room and put on Jeevika's earring then sprayed Jeevika's scent and got ready to greet Viren.
When SB and Vmum heard that Manvi is returning they decided to tell Manvi abt Vidhi and get her help to make Vidhi understand her position.

SB and Vmum were waiting for Virika's arrival,They were so excited to meet Manvi since she left the home heart broken. They were shocked to see Vidhi dress herself up like Jeevika.Vmum: Vidhi why did you wear Jeevika's earring and her perfume?
Vidhi: woh...aaah...woh
Vmum: woh.. aah kya?
SB: Vidhi stop this madness Viren wont love u. He loves Jeevika so much and Jeevika loves him equally.Their love is very unique and deep.You are just a surrogate mother of their child.
Vidhi: I cant help it. I love Virenji so much.
" WHAT?" They all look at the door to see Virika and Virman standing. Jeevika came near Vidhi.
Jeevika: What did you say?
Vidhi: I have fallen in love with Virenji.. I...*SLAP* Everyone was shocked never in their dreams have they seen Jeevika slapping anyone.
Jeevika: I CAN STAND ANYTHING BUT NOT SOMEOTHER WOMAN WANTING MY HUSBAND WHO BELONGS TO ME ONLY. I AM THE ONLY ONE WHO HAS FULL RIGHTS ON HIM. IF U HAVE THAT THOUGHT AND COME NEAR MY HUSBAND I WILL BREAK YOUR FEET. IF YOU SPEAK TO HIM I WILL CUT YOUR TOUNGE AND IF U LOOK AT HIM I WILL TAKE OUT YOUR EYES. I AM EVERYTHING TO HIM AND HE IS TO ME. STOP DREAMING ABOUT MY HUSBAND THERE'S NOTHING HE NEEDS FROM YOU Vidhi angrily: There is something he needs from me which you cant give him A BABY. Everyone was shocked.
Viren: You are wrong Vidhi.. I want a baby which symbolise mine and Jeevika''s love...you are here because Jeevika wanted surrogaacy. I dont need baby, I have everything within my Jeevika. She is everything to me n i don't have a life without her.You got it?
Jeevika had tears in her eyes Viren held her face and told her I Love you then kissed her forehead. Vidhi ran to her room crying.
Manvi: Virat pinch me
Virat pinched her so hard
Manvi: Aagh not so hard look you really hurted my skin
Virat: you asked me to pinch you so I did
Manvi: aaagh dekhlungi. Btw Di I love the bonding of yours. Jeevika smiling: What can I say bhehenhu tumhari khoon ka rishta hai humari... also dont forget grandma is Bheeji somewhere deep down I have her quality. Everybody laughed and started greeting other.

Dining table -everyone was present except Vidhi who wanted to have her food in the room. Jeevika found something wrong with her Mannu.
Jeevika: Mannu kya hua?
Manvi tried to hide her tears: nothing Di missing Hrishikesh
Jeevika: mannu tell me the truth you know na I can feel you.Manvi started crying so hard n everyone was shocked. Jeevika went near Manvi and held her hand.
Manvi: Di I need you. You make everything better n you always do.
Jeevika: Sure I will you just tell me what it is.Virat explained everything everyone was shocked.
Jeevika: Mannu dont worry we will go see the dr and we will face everything together. We have a wonderful husbands and a family. Maanvi nodded and stopped crying.

The whole Vadhera as usual all went with Maanvi to the hospital everyone was waiting outside only Jeevika and Virat were inside seeing the doctor.
Dr: Mrs. Vadhera its true for a cancer survivor conceiving is very difficult and if you conceive then atleast few years after your treatm not whithin a year. But dont worry there's injections which will help your health.Jeevika: Doctor isnt there any other treatment.This will be hard for Mannu.
Manvi: Di dont worry I can bare anything for my baby as long as I have you and Virat besides me.Jeevika: Ooh Mannu you are going to be fine and the baby will be a good one like u.
Manvi: Di I learnt it from you they say a child learns from their parents and you are my parent.
Virat: Manvi n bhabi we r at the hospital and the dr has other patients to see.Shall we see this movie at home? They all laugh
Dr: Ok Mrs Vadhera we will start d injection tomorrow and yeah rest alot.
Manvi: Ok
Jeevika made sure Manvi was resting on well. Virat also makes sure that he takes a good care of Maanvi.

One week after Vidhi's incident Viren was at office, SB and V mum went Mandir and only Vidhi, Virman and Jeevika were at home. Jeevika was massaging Manvi's feet while Virat was feeding her when all of a sudden they heard screaming and something fell. They rushed and saw Vidhi fell from the stairs she strted crying holding her tummy. Virat carried her to her room and Jeevika called the doctor then Jeevika was trying to help her drink water when she spoted blood in her dress. They rushed hospital. Virman wanted to come with Jeevika,but she asked them to stay at home for Manvi. Jeevika and Viren were waiting outside for doctor to come out. Doctor came out and told the the baby got aborted but she is doing good. Virika cried their hearts out. Next day Vidhi was discharged and went back to her house and was paid her final payment. Meanwhile Viren and Jeevika accepted the fact of being childless.

One month passed Jeevika was busy arranging the house coz today is Dadaji's 70th bithday and everyone wanted to surprise him so SB and Vansh convinced him to go Mandhir with them Dadaji was surprised when he saw everyone gathered for his birthday and made all d arrangements when he returned.They were all celebrating the day, dancing n singing when suddenly Jeevika felt tired n sweaty. Before she knew wat was happenening she fell on Viren's arms unconcious. They took her in the room and called the doctor who examined her n advised them to take her to hospital coz her sugar level is dangerous low.

In the hospital Jeevika was having full check up. While everyone was outside waiting. After a while the doctor called Viren to come in.
Viren: Is everything ok with Jeevika?
Dr: Mr. Vadhera your wife is pregnant. But she is weak as she is not eating well and the sugar level went really down.
Viren: What did you just said?
Jeevika: She said Im pregnant. We r having our own baby and I will carry the baby in my womb. Viren hugged her tightly and then kissed her forehead.
Dr: Mrs Vadhera you will need to take complete bedrest.
Virika thanked the dr.Everyone was very happy for Virika.

Six months passed Jeevika was seven months pregnant and Manvi was eight and half. After their dinner everyone retired to their rooms. Virika were sleeping peacefully Viren's hand on Jeevikas waist. Jeevika woke up felt some strong pain coming from her tummy. Viren woke up seeing Jeevika cry.
Jeevika: virenji Im loosing our baby do sumthing plz.
Viren rushed out and screamd for Virat to take the car. everyone woke up and followed them to thehospital. Jeevika's pain was increasing.The dr said that she's in labor. After 3hrs Viren came out from delivery theatre and anounced that they have baby girl but since she's premature she is in incubator
Everyone went to see Jeevika.Maanvi: Di your daughter wanted to be the elder sister of mine and decided to come too early.

Three weeks passed and today Virika's baby,Jaanvi is coming home so everyone is excited.Jeevika was sitting with Maanvi while SB n Vmum are playing wid baby jaanvi , meanwhile vv bro are watching cricket.
Manvi: Haaa Di yeah kaise hua Jeevika: kya Mannu
Maanvi:I peei on myself and its still coming
Jeevika :Mannu you r in labor Maanvi: KYAAA VIRAT IM IN LABOR!!
Everyone rushed to take her hospital. After hours Manvi gave birth to baby girl named Dhivya

Six years later-The two girls of JeeMaan are coming back from school.
Divya: Di why did you go and clean that?
Jaanvi: Because you messed it up Divya: But they deserve it why they laugh at you I cant take it.Jaanvi: Divya try and control yourself. I can't tolerate someone say or do anything to my Sis!
Divya: how can you. Akheer bhehenhu tumhari khun ka rishta hai humara.

Everone admired their sisterly relationship which came from their mother's blood

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Posted: 12 years ago
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What an adorable os!!!
loved the way you portrayed each relation so beautifully !!!!!👏
virika were sooo cute standing by each other through everything!😳😳
and maanvi and virat are too funny !!!!
loved the way you handled the vidhi track though hope the cv's can see and learn from all our if writers😃
great job!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww
wat an awesome os
loved oit especially all virika part .. the romance n all
lol i loved it ..
i wish u could send this story to cvs so they can make the crap sjhow a lil better :p lol
thank u fr such awesome

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Absolutely awesome too good loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is an awesome os ...
complete ehmmbh happily ever after ...loved it
and yu have written is soo beautifully
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Posted: 12 years ago
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In love with you Os
Good Job girl
Keep writing more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omggg
This is so adorable!!
I want something like this to happen in the show as well 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aw! This is beautiful! Excellent work!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww! Loved it! ❤️
Thanks for the PM 😊
I hope something like this happens.
Ok off to read it again! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...its amazing!!!!
i love ur os...
beautifully written...
hope cvs get some brain...nd do something like this!!!!!!

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