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Posted: 12 years ago
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First Entry:TRUE LOVE.


"tu kulkakshani hai'apni maa ke jaise'teri maa ne mere bete ki zindagi barbaad kar di..aab tu bhi yehi kar rahi hai'"(u are a badluck. like your mother. ur mom had spoiled my son's life. now u are also doing the same.)said an enraged lady.
"yeh aap kya bol rahi ho dadi ji..mere aur meri maa ke bare mein'mein maa ne aise kya kiya hai jo aap unhe aur mujhe har waqt jali katti suna thhi rehthi ho???"(what are u saying about me and my mom grandmother? what did my mom do that u are always after her?) replied a girl in tears'
"yeh tu mujhse nahi apni maa se jakar puch kulakshani"(u ask this to ur mother.)said the lady.
while this argument a man entered the home to witness this.
"papa dekho dadi maa ke bare mein kya keh rahi hai'.aab tho mere bare mein bhi keh rahi hai'app unse kuch kehthe kyun nahi???"(dad see what grandmother is saying. why don't u say anything?)said the girl to that man.
"maa aapko kya problem hai muskaan aur geet se'(mom what is ur problem with geet and muskaan)"said that man.
"problem mujhe nahi tujhe hone wali hai???"(problem will be for u.not me.)said that lady.
"aap kehena kya chathi hai??"(what do u want to say?)asked the man.
"jaise tu geet ka bhoj sari zindagi uttha raha hai waise hi iss ladki ka bhi bhoj saari zindagi utthana ke liye taiyaar ho jaa."(like u are having geet's burden on ur head get ready to have her burden too.)said that lady.
"matlab"(means?)said that man.
"isse puch itni raat ko kahan se muh kala kar ke aayi hai??"(ask her. where was she the whole night?)said the lady
"papa maine kuch galat nahi kiya. mein tho bas abhisek ki birthday party pe gayi thi..aur papa aap tho usse janthe hi ho."(I didn't do anything wrong. I had gone to abhisek's BD party. u know about him.)..said the girl.
"usse kolakshani ne bhi aise hi kiya tha'"(that irrespectable girl too did the same thing.)said that lady'
"maa bas kijiye'meine aap se kitne baar kaha hai ki aap aise mat bolna'"(mom enough. how many times had I told u don't say like this.)said man.
"tu mujhe nahi isse chup kara'kyunki tu mujhe chup karakar saari duniya ko chup nahi kara saktha'.pehle bhi is ke maa ke karan bohut badmani she chuke hai'aab aur nahi."(by shutting me u can't shut the whole world. already because of her mother we have faced a lot of humilation.)
"thik hai agar aapko mujhse aur meri maa se itni hi problem hai tho hum dono iss ghar ko chood kar chale jaathe hai. bachpan se dekh rahi hun aapko maa ke sang ka baartav"(ok. if u have problem with me and my mom will leave this place and go.)
"haan haan hume bhi aab iss badnami se mukht karo'waise bhi yahan tho naa koi tumahari dadi hai aur naa koi tumhara baap"(yes yes. now release us also from this humliation. also no one is ur grandmother and no one is ur dad here.)
"maa bas karo'"(mom enough.)
"kyun bas karu MAAN????mein tho isse saachai bata rahi hun.."(why should I stop maan? I am telling her the truth.)
"muskaan tum aandar jao'"(u go inside.)
"mein kyun aandar jao papa????mujhe aaj saachai jaanani hai'ki dadi aise kyun bol rahi hai'aap mere papa ho'"(y sholud I go inside dad? I want to know the truth that y is she saying this. u are my dad.)
"tu isse kya puch rahi hai..jaakar tu apni maa se puch ki who aapna muh kahan kala kar ke aayi thi???puch usse ki tera baap koun hai???"(what are u asking him? go and ask ur mom where did she go to spoil her name? ask he who is ur dad?)
crying muskan go to her mother's room to see her sitting in the corner and crying'maan and dadi followed her'
"muskaan ruko'"shouted maan'(wait.)
she slowly goes to her dreading the worst answer'.
"maa jo dadi jo keh rahi hai who sach hai????"(mom what ever dadi is saying is it correct?)
geet slowly sees her..she is so shameful that she cant see in her eyes'
"aapki jukhi hyi nazroo ne sab bata diya'koun hai mera baap????aapki aayishiyaan ka harzana mujhe bhukat na padh raha hai'.mein aaj najaaiyaz ban ke reh gayi hun'.aap muhje mujhe paide karne se pehle mar kyun nahi gayi???(ur lowered eyes tell everything. who is my dad? I have to pay for ur pleasures. I have become nazayiz today. y didn't u die before I came into this world?)
she received a slap from maan'
"aapne maa par ungli utthana se pehli puri saachai jaan lo'"(before raising a finger know the full truth.)
"mujhe yeh jaana hai ki mujhe iss duniya mein laana wala koun hai???koun mera baap hai??kya naam hai uska??"(I want to know who is my father.?)
"tho suno'tumhare baap ka naam DEV hai..mein, tumhari maa aur dev ek hi college mein padh the the. mein geet se bohut pyaar kartha tha par who sirf dev se pyaar karthi thi...lekin geet ke liye mein sirf ek aacha dost tha. mein aapne pyaar ko dosti ka naam nahi de saktha tha aur aapni feeing se haar kar mein AMERICA chala gaya'par mein aur geet humesha phone par baat karthe the'uske baate dev se suru ho kar ussi pe khatam hoti thi'par mujhe think insaan nahi laga'maine usse kahi baar usse samjha ne ki koshish kari par who uss insaan ke pyaar mein pagal thi'.(then listen. ur dad's name is DEV. we three studied in same college. I loved geet and she loved only dev.i was only a friend for her.i couldn't put the faade so losing from my feeling I went away to AMERICA.but we werealways in contact through phone.she would always talk about dev.but I always didn't like him.i made her understand many times.but she was blinded in his love.)
6 mahine baad geet ko phone aana band ho gaya'mujhe laga ki kuch bohut badi gadbad hai'meine turant INDIA wapas aane ka faisla kiya'mein airport se ghar aa hi raha thi hi ek ladki meri car se takrayi'maine dekha ki who koi aur nahi tumari maa thi'jab tak mein usse kuch puchtha who behosh ho chuki thi' hospital lekar gaya..wahan mujhe pata chala ki who maa baane wali hai'(after 6 months she stopped calling.i thought that something is very wrong.i immediately planned to return to india.while returning from the airport a girl dashed my car and she was none other that ur mother. before I could ask anything she fainted.i took her to hospital.there I came to know that she was expecting.)
tabhi mujhe laga ki mein jo soch raha tha who sahi hai' uske hosh mein aathe hi who mujhe maarna lagi yeh kehkar ki 'tumne mujhe kyu bachaya???mujhe marne diya hota''mere se yeh dekha nahi gaya aur meine usse hosh mein laane ke liye ek thappad maare'maine usse pucha ki yeh sab sab kya hai???woh rone lagi aur boli ki 'tum bhi mujhe sab ki tarah galat samaj rahe ho par isme meri koi galti nahi hai. maine tho sirf saacha pyaar kiya tha'.dhoka ussne mujhe diya'.mein bola''yeh sab kaise hua??' (at that time all my doubts came true.as soon as she came to consciousness she started beating me telling 'why did u save me?u could have let me died.'I was not able to bear it so inslapped her.i asked her that what was going on?she started crying saying'u too misunderstand me like all.what ever happened is not my mistake.i only loved he only cheated me'.i asked how did it all happen.)
who boli 'uss din dev ka birthday tha aur ussne late night party di thi'uske kafi force karne par aur aapne pyaar ka vasta dene par mein wahan ruk gayi..uska ek dost mere liye soft drink lekar aaya'uss pine ke baad mujhe chakkar sa aane laga'mujhe behoshi se chane lagi'dev aakar mere se bola ki tumhari tabiyat kuch thik nahi lag rahi hai aao tumne ghar chood do'yeh keh kar usse mujhe godh mein uttha liya'.uske baad mujhe hosh nahi raha'(she said 'that day was dev's BDay and it was a late night party.on his much forcing I stayed only after him giving promise on our love.his friend brought softdrink for me after dringing it I started to feel giddy.he came and said that as I am not feeling well he would leave me home.after saying that he lifted me.after that I was unconscious.')
jab subha meri aakh khuli tho meine aapna aap ko anjaane kamre mein aakala paaya'aur mujhe laga ki kuch galat hua par mein samaj nahi paayi ki kya hua'.mein wapas ghar chali gayi'.agle din se mujhe yeh laga ki dev ka behaviour change ho gaya'.na tho who mere se thik se baat kartha aur na who mera phone uttha'mein samaj nahi paayi ki dev aisa kyun kar raha tha'phir kuch dino mein mujhe pata chala ki mein maa baane wali hun'mein shock hogi'.mein ne bohut soocha aur phir muhje dev ki party ki yaad aayi'.mujhe yeh yaad aaya ki usse raat ko humare beech who hua jo nahi hona chaiye tha'yeh pata chathe hi mein uske ghar gayi'.uska ghar dulhan ki tarah saja hua tha'andar jaathe hi pata chala ki dev ki shaadi ho rahi hai'(when I opened my eyes the next day I found myself is a strange room.i was feeling that something bad had happened but couldn't find what.i returned home.from next day I found difference is dev's behaviour.he would not pick my phone and would not talk to me properly.after some days I came to know that I am pregnant.i was shocked.after thinkign a lot I remembered that night.that night all that happened between us that should not have happened.i rushed to his home to see that his home was decorated.going in I came to know that he is marriying.)
mein dev se baat karne pahunci'ussne mujhe pehcaan ne se hi inkaar kar diya aur kaha ki who mujhe jaantha tak nahi aur pyaar karna tho dur ki baat hai'jab maine usse kaha ki mein uske baache ki maa baan ne wali hun tho usse iss baat se saaf inkaar kar diya aur usse aapne hi baache ko najaaiyz kaha'aur kaha ki uska aur mera koi rishta nahi hai'aur meri aakhon ke saamne uski shaadi ho gayi aur mein kuch nahi kar saki'.(when I went to talk to dev he refused to recoginse me and said that that loving a far away. when I told him about the kid he completely refused it and called his own blood as illegal'and said that I have no relation with him'infront of my eyes he married and I couldn't do anything.)
aab mere paas ek hi raasta tha khud ko khatam karne ka'yehi soochte mein road par chali jaa rahi thi aur meina achanak tumhari gaadi se takra gayi..kismat ne bhi dev ki tarah dhoke diya dekho maut bhi naseeb nahi hua''(then I had only one way and that was to kill myself'thinking the same thing I was walking and suddenly I dashed your car'fate too cheated like dev..see death was also not fortunate.)

mujhe yeh sab sun kar bohut gussa aaya'.mein pehle geet se wada liya ki who aisa kadam kabhi nahi utthayigi aur iss bache ko janam degi aur mein isse baap pyaar dunga'mere kehne par hi ussne tume janam diya'.par iss hadse ne geet ko bilkul badal diya'jo ladki dusroon ke chere par muskaan lane mein bilkul samay nahi lagtha tha ussi ke chere se muskaan kooso duur thi'tumari maa ki jitni taari ki jaaye kam hai'tumari maa jaise shayeed hi koi aur hoga'.kuch mahino baad jab tumara janm hua tab maine tumari maa ke chere par halki si muskaan dekhi'issiliye maine tumhara naam muskaan rakha'.(hearing all this I got very angry'first I got promise from geet to not do anything like this again and will give birth to this child and I will give father's love'due to this only she gave u birth..but this incident entirely changed geet..the girl who would bring smile to other's face now smile was miles away from her face..she would bring smile to face in seconds..now much ever we praise will be less..no one is like ur mother..after somemonths when u were born I saw a smile on ur mother's face..so I named u muskaan.)
meri maa ke marzi ke khilaaf tumhare janm ke baad mein tum dono ko aapne ghar le aaya kyunki geet ka mere alawa iss duniya mein aur koi nahi tha'"(against my mother's wish I brought u two here because geet had no one except me.)
"par iss sab se yeh thodi na sabit ho jatha hai ki yeh bekasoor thi'"(but with this u cant prove that this girl is innocent..")said maan's mom..
"mein dev ko aise hi thodi na chood ne wala tha'geet se baath katne ke baad mein dev se milne gaya'uski shaadi ho chuki thi aur woh aapne honeymoon simla gaya hua tha'.mujhe gussa aa gaya'phir mein uske dostoon ke paas gaya'maine unse pucha 'jab tumhe pata tha ki dev geet se pyaar kartha hai tho tum logo ne dev ki shaadi kisi aur se kaise hone de??' uske doston ke javab ne mujhe hairan kar diya 'dev ne kabhi geet se pyaar nahi kiya'.' tho maine kaha 'agar usne geet se pyaar nahi kiya tho geet dev ke baache ki maa kaise ban gayi???' yeh sun kar uske dost hairaan ho gaye'(how would I leave dev like this??after talking to geet I went to meet him..but he was married and had gone to his honeymoon to shimla'I was angry..i went to meet his friends..i asked them 'when u know that dev lovedd geet then how could u let dev marry??'his friend s answer maddened me 'he never loved geet'I asked..'when he never loved geet then how could she become his child's mother??'hearing this his friends were shocked.)
who bole 'hume tho zara sa bhi andaaz nahi tha ki chota sa mazaak itna bada roop le lega'' mein ne unse kaha 'mazaak???kaisa mazaak???' tho dostoon ne kaha 'jab hum clg mein padh the tab geet kisi bhi ladke ko bhaav nahi daalthi thi'.tab dev ne humse kaha ki who usse aapne issarron par nacha ke dikhaeyga woh usse apni GF bana kar dikhayaga'tak humne usse sharth lagayi thi geet ko GF bana ke dikhane ki'par hume nahi pata tha ki woh uski zindagi barbaad kar dega'.usne aapne BD party wale din geet ko zabardasti raat ko rooka aur humse kaha ki usse geet ke sang dance karna tha isliye ussne humse uske drink mein nashili dava milyi'thodi deer baad ussne hum sab se ghar jaane ko kaha aur usse yeh bhi kaha ki who geet ko ghar chood dega'.phir hum sab chale gaye'uske baad unn dono ke beech kya hua hume nahi pata'(they replied'we never had any idea that a small joke would become so big.' 'joke??what joke??' 'in clg geet would never give importance to any boy..at that dev said that he would make her dance on her tunes..he would make her his GF..but we never knew that he would spoil her..on his BD party he forcefully stopped her and told us that he wanted to dance with her and asked us to mix drugs to her drink..after sometime we returned to our homes and after that what happened between them we don't know.)
agle din dev ka phone aaya aur usne kaha ki who sharth jeet chuka hun'ussne kaha ki hum ne kaha ki geet kisi ko chune bhi nahi dethi'ussne kaha ki who puri raat uske sang bith chuka hai usse apni bahoon mein le chuka hai'.tab hume usse kaha ki ussne galat kiya'kyunki sharth sirf GF banane tak ki thi'tho dev ne kaha ki who itni sexy thi ki mere se control nahi hua'humne usse geet se shaadi karne ko kaha'tho uska javab aaya ki who usse pyaar nahi tha'aur shaadi to who uss ladki se hi karega jise who pasand katha hai'aur ussne yeh bhi kaha ki agar hum uss ke bare mein baat karnege tho humari dosti khatam''uske dostoon se yeh sab jaankar mein seedhe shimla pahuch gaya'.meine dev se pucha ke geet ke saat yeh sab karke who shaadi kaise kar sakthe hai'.tho pata hai uska kya javab tha????(next day dev called and said that he had won the bet..he said that we told that geet would not let anyone touch her but he had spent the whole night with her..had her in his arms..we told him that this was all wrong because the bet was only for making GF..he said that she was so SEXY that I couldn't control we said him to marry geet..he replied that he doesn't love geet and he will marry the person whom he likes..and he also said us that again if we talk about this then our friendship will be over''after knowing all this from his friends I directly reached shimla..i asked dev that after doing like this with geet how could he marry someone else..then u know what answer he gave??)
usne kaha 'ussme bohut akkad thi'maine bas uske akkad tho thikane lagaya'.uski himmat kaise hui ki usse mujhe pure college ke samne thappad maara'.us thappad ke badle mein maine uske sang jo kiya who kam tha'. aab who zindagi mein kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak nahi rahegi...koi usse shaadi nahi karega'usse wapas mere paas hi aana hoga...'maine usse kaha ki who yeh samaj ne ki galathi na kare ki geet iss duniya mein aleki hai geet jaise ladki ko thukra kar uss se jyada bad naseeb insaan koi nahi hoga'aur who bhi tab jab who uske bacche ki maa banane wali thi'mahine usse geet ko humesha ke liye geet ko bhul jane ko kaha'isske baad mein waha se lout aaya par mein usse kabhi keh nahi paya ki main usse bohut pyaar kartha hun'aur naa hi mein usse kabhi shaadi kar paaye kyunki agar mein usse kehtha ki mein usse shadi karna chatha hun tho woh mujhe galat samajthi ki mein uss par raham kha raha hun'.par maine ek kaam zarur kiya uski beti ko ek baap ka pyaar dekar'mujhe jo sahi laga who hi maine kiya'"(he said'she had too much arrogance..i only broke it..how dare she slapped me in front of the whole college??for that whatever I did with her was less..she would never be able to show her face to anyone..no one would marry her...she will come back to me only...'I told he not to misunderstand that she doesn't have anyone beside her..rejecting a girl like geet is ur biggest mistake..and at that tme when she is pregnant'u forget geet forever..after that I returned from there..but I couldn't evpress myself in the fear that she might misunderstand that I am feeling pity on her..but I surely did one work that is giving a fatherly love to her daughter..what ever I thought was right I did it..)
"papa I am sorry'mujhe maaf kar do'aap se aache papa is duniya mein koi ho hi nahi saktha.."(I am sorry dad..no dad is good like my dad..)
"I am sorry geet beta maine tumhe itna saalo se galat samjha'"(I am soory geet bete I thought u wrong this many years.)
"aap maafi kyun maang rahi hai'maafi tho mujhe maangni chaiya'meri wajha se aapke bete ne kabhi shaadi nahi kari'.aur aap baho ke sukh se wanchit rahi'mujhe maaf kar dejiye'(why are u asking sorry..this should be asked by me because of me ur son never married and u never had the benefits of DIL..)"said a teary eyed geet who was speechless hearing all this'she always respected maan..but now her respect for him increased ten folds'.
"mein tumhe ek hi sharth par maaf karungi'.jab tum sach mein meri bahu banogi..mere bete ko har khusi dogi jiska who haqdaar hai'.(I will forgive u when u will really become my DIL..give my son all the happiness he deserves..)"
then started a new journey of Maaneet with muskaan and maan's mom in a new world filled with happiness and love..

****The End****

Edited by angel-ki-shona - 12 years ago
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Second Entry: 48 hrs of hell

A loud alarm sound alerted everyone.Suddenly the entire environment went quiet.Need to say that their angry young hot boss is entering the premises of their office.The last thing they would do on the very morning is to mess with their boss.One mistake and the fellow is fired.They are all scared for his temper.

There came the loud thudding sound indicating their boss is coming surrounded by the bodyguards.The entire team of body guards stopped at the entrance making way for their boss.The black shinig shoes,the three piece suit and the eyes with no emotion is all the trademark of their boss.

There was entire silence on the entry of their boss every one stood up and greeted him.He just gave them a curt nod and entered his cabin .He is the only heir of 300 crore property ,the number one business man,Girl's DD(Dhak Dhak) and he is none other than MSK.

Soon the entire office resumed their work.Maan came to his cabin took his seat and called Adi his chief accountant cum Right hand .

Adi barged into the room fearing not to rise his boss's temper.

"Good morning Sir."

"Morning Adi.Where is the files I have asked for?Have you checked it?"

"Wo Wo yess sir" Adi stammered.Usually he will not stammer in front of anyone but who could talk properly in front of this volcano.

"Stop stammering Aadi.Don't irritate me in the very morning"

"Yes sir"

"Now go and get the file after 15 mins till then ill check my mails."

"Yes sir" with that Adi escaped from their.

Maan started checking his mails.. While going through the unread mail his eyes caught a name and unknowingly his lips raised into a smile suddenly the smile turned into frown.

"What's the need for her to mail me?She can call me always .Anyways who can predict Geet handa." He was eager to raed the mail from her.

He opened it.

From: DrGeetHanda@gmail.com

To: MaanSinghKhurana@gmail.com

Bcc: Adithyachopra@gmail.com

Dear Sir,

I would like to bring to your kind notice that we both are involved in a business deal.The way your company shows negligence in this deal disheartens me.As far as I have heard Khurana's never been negligible in any of the work they take.But to mention in a sad note that i have a doubt whether the deal we have involved seems not to be satisfactory for you …I am bringing this to your notice since you have already missed two of our meetings.So this mail is to remaind you that today we have a meeting by 5 "o" clock.If in case you could not able to make up for this then am sorry in advance that this deal will hold no value to me or my concern.

Regards,

Geet Handa.

His face hold no emotions.The nerve of the girl what does she think of herself?

Adi barged into his room.Maan was really in a bad mood seeing the mail was about to erupt on him when the name he uttered stopped him.

"Sir I received an mail from Miss.Geet Handa"

"What??"

"Yes sir she has sent a copy of that mail to me also.Sir,but as fair as I know we have no project at present involving Miss.Geet or her Hospital Sanjeevani."

"Ya Adi I know.Just ignore it.Now go and get me the project report."

As soon as Adi went out Maan took his mobile and dialed the number Jaan.

He was desperately wating for her to pick up the call.He just wanted to scream at her for this stupidity .She has sent a copy of this mail to Adi.That too she mentioned their love as Business deal!

"Good morning Maanu dearie sweetie"

As soon hearing her voice he forgot everything else.He forgot the reason for the call also.

"Honey how many times do I need to say don't call me with these names.Am not a baby oki?"

"But what to do Maanu?Am most times spending my time with Kiddo's.And you also look like a chubby honey sweet baby"

Aww the way she admires and describes me Guyz will also loose the competition of describing girls such way.Hearing her voice and the way my name roll in her togue I just loose my senses.Maan get a grip on yourself.He mentally thought.

"Honey what have you done?"

"Maanu I just came back from rounds.I did nothing else from the morning.I wonder how you called me up suddenly.Do you even realize how happy am to just get a call from you.I just want to pull those cheeks of yours and eat it raw."

"Oh ho hold on Geet.Why did you sent such a mail and you have even sent that too Adi?"

"Oh ho buddu Geet you were over reacting.Dekhana Babji I thought my lover boy called me to wish me gud morning.Me and my crazy thoughts.How does great MSK will have time to wish me a good morning." She was going on cribbing to her babaji.

"Yes Geet your absolutely correct.I don't have time to speak with you.Just say what the mail is all about."

Geet's face has suddenly became pale.She nevr thought he will abruptly say that he don't have time for her.She curtly replied "You said we will go on for a romantic evening .You miseed last two date of ours and I called you to remind that I will be waiting for you.So to avoid the embarrassment am going to face today I mailed you.Mailing Adi would make my job easy.He will remind you about the date.."

He recognized her voice has become a murmur.He was about to manofy her when Adi entered his cabin saying some clients had come to meet him up.So he just hung the call.

Geet never expected this behavior from him.After all she knows she cannot expect Maan to do all romantic stuffs but expecting him to turn up on date is not a offence.

She just does not want to think wrong on Maan so she clarified her thoughts saying "Buddu Geet what he will do.He will be held up by the meetings.This time he will come on time.Now don worry and carry on with your duty."

Though she was trying to come out of Maan's thought the only thing her mind was gazing is their first meet.

Before 6 months.

Maan was asked by Daadima to meet the owner of Sanjeevani hospital .Daddima's friend who was the chief doctor by herself in Sanjeevani has asked Daadima whether they could take up a project for their hospital to build a children block sepreatly.

Daadima agreed readily.Since Maan was asked by Daadima he was not able to deny it.

Sanjeevani was owned by Geet Handa.She became a orphan when her parents passed away in a car accident..She was bought up by a maid.As soon as she turned 18 she was to take up her parents property that is Sanjeevani hospital.Her aim is to become a paediatrician.She balanced both her studies and hospital.Now she wanted to extend this hospital and build a Children block so that the children will not feel that they are in a hospital.

Maan entered the hospital and asked the way to Chief doctor room.When he entered her room he was greeted well .

"So Madam Daadi said you want KC to help you in your project.May I know the details of it."

"Oh ho Maan stop being formal.You can call me Aunty.Now I don't have any idea .I'll ask someone to take you to Madam Geet Handa she is the owner of Sanjeevani she will explain you all."

"ok Aunty"

"Nurse take him to paediatric ward .Madam Geet will be there."

"Sir this way please"

He was astonished to hear this big hiospital is being owned and managed by a woman.

As they were to enter the ward the nurse was called on emergency so she asked him to go inside where he can find madam geet.

Maan was not at ease because he has to search for some unknown person and that to a lady.Without any choice of escape he went inside the ward.They were many children in the ward.He mentally whacked himself if it's a pediatric ward then children will be there.But what amused him was that no child is there in their bed they were all gathered around a girl.He was not able to see that girl face because she was facing his back towards him.

He went near her and was amused to see her talking animatedly to the children and everyone were looking at her keenly as if she is explaining the newton's law of gravity.

He was about to ask her for the way to Mrs.Geet Handa.He thought she must be 70 years lady because organinsing such a big hospital only experienced and aged people could do.

When he was about to open his mouth a child near him poked him ,gave him a deathly glare and gestured him to shut his mouth .Maan was angered with the audacity of that small child but was mesmerized by a sweet voice who was explain the story.He too started to listen to her.

"There the baby lion was throwing tantrum to drink medicine.But mother lion was saying the baby lion to drink medicine but baby lion was too stubborn.Seeing the stubbornness Mother lion said baby lion if you are not going to take medicine then the big dinosaur will come from the Jurassic park and will eat you alive.Then I will not have my baby lion na?

Hearing this baby lion gulped the medicine.Mother lion was happy.Now my chubby honey sweey little kidoo if you also throw tantrums then Dinosaur will come and eat you alive then who will play hide and seek with di.?Then I will be alone na?" she faked a sob

The whole gang of children promised her that they will take medicine without any tantrums.

Suddenly one kid asked "Di if baby dinosaur did not eat medcine then who will eat it?"

That made Geet to turn back.Maan was mesmerized by her look.She was in a simple salwar suit hair left open and a little of lip stick..That made her look like a fairy from sky.Maan control yar first her voice now her face.She must be sure an angel.See her silky smooth skin and hazel eyes.Ufff Maan stop your drooling session and now come back here and carry out your work.

He looked at her eagerly.The look of shock in her face amused him.Now she is caught with this little devil.He was expectantly looking for an answer.She kept her finger in her chin and did a action as if she is thinking and said "King Kong will come and eat dinosaur"

"Di what if King kong did not eat medicine.?" The same little brat asked.

Now she dono what to answer.She searched way to escape and by that time Maan caught her sight.

"Wo see honey bunch Someone is here now you all go to your bed and have medicine I'll ask nurse aunty to check if you didn't take your medicine I will not play hide and seek with you."

"Par Di answer my question"

"Chalo mera Einstein Di will answer your question tomorrow some uncle is here .Theko na!!Maan looked at the little boy it was the same one who gave him the killer look when he was about to disturb his Di's story."

"Par Di you should surely answer."

"Sure Einstein I'll answer you now chalo."

"Sachi"

"Muchi"

The guy ran to his bed.

Maan was about to get the direction from her to Mrs.Handa room .

"Dekhona Babaji this little devils throw this much amount of tantrums everyday.And that little Einstein is too too much.I have to read extra to answer him.Thank god you sent this fellow then I would have answered this chotte einstein"

Her cribbing was disturebed by his call.

"Excuse me"

She turned suddenly and looked at his face.She suddenly felt some unknown pull to wards him.She gave him a smile and asked "Any help mister"

He came out of trance "Ya.Can you guide me to Mrs.Handa room"

She was surprised and asked him "May I know who you are."

"I wish I could explain who am I to Mrs.Handa." He said with an attitude.

"Oh fine then follow me."She was cool and composed.

He took him to the room where a name plate Geet Handa was hanged.Geet motioned him to sit and went inside a small room.

He was waiting for some hefty lady to walk with,steth and white coat but he was again greeted by the Angel's smiling face the only thing which is added to her beauty is that Her white coat and Steth.

Maan hurriedly spoke. "Where is mrs.Handa?"

"Here is Miss.Geet Handa.Now care to explain me who you are?"

He was dumbfounded .The look on his face made Geet to laugh out loud.

"Wo am sry.I thought someone of age in 70's would be the owner of Sanjeevani and moreover aunty was addressing you as madam so I was confused Miss.Handa.I am Maan Singh Khurana from Kc"

"Oh no problem ..Anyways did doc aunty said me as madam then I need to talk about it to her.Am I looking like a lady in 70's she calling me mada?Now you can call me Geet.Nice to meet you Maan."

"So Geet aunty said you need to construct some extension to Sanjeevani."

She came out of her thoughts when a nurse tapped her in shoulders.This is how she met Maan.Though the building work was completed for Sanjeevani within 4 months the contact between Maan and Geet continued and that bloomed into love.

She wonders how could such a person can fall for her.She eagerly awaited for a evening outing with maan.Everytime he would promise to spend time with her but he would fail miserably either forgetting that or not being there on time.That's why she mailed him today givng him a remainder.

As soon as Maan met with the clients he totally forget about Geet being upset and also the evening meeting with Geet.

It was 5.35 when Adi entered his cabin.

"What Adi?"

"Sir Geet madam had called me asking your whereabouts?"

That's when it striked him that he had to meet up with her."Ya I'll see to that."

"But sir she asked me to inform you that the deal is over and she doesnot wish to continue anything with Kc or you. Sensing his raising temper Adi thought of cooling him saying I even tried to make her accept for the deal you were discussing sir but she seems to be too upset with the turn outs and sensing her voice I felt that she has been deeply depressed."

Adi though being a employer has understood that both Geet and Maan are not discussing business and more than that.He so wanted to convince Geet but he failed miserably.

Maan's anger rose to the peak..Each and every time he will be late she use to brush it aside then whats up this time?The fact is that he was not able to accept that it was his fault due to which she is upset.

"You can go now".He screamed at him.

The guts of her.Why is she bringing Adi in everything?What is she thinking?Why can't she call me.He thought to give her a peace of mind and took his mobile that's when he saw it.There were nearly 35 missed calls and 20 messages from her within 15 mins interval.He kept his mobile in silent and forgot to release it.

He was restless seeing this much number of calls and mssages .Even though he is late she will never disturb him with these much calls.But whats up with her today?

He called her .The call was attended on th next ring.

"Geet"

"Chup .Not a word until I complete.Do you get me?"

He nodded his head fearing his love's anger.She is always a soft girl but when her anger reaches the peak even he cannot stand in front of her.

"As if she has seen his nod she continued screaming.Mr.Khurana what do you think of yourself?Am I sitting here jobless?Only you have work to do?This is the third time.I am fed up with you.Even after giving you a remainder.You are hopeless!Have you seen your mobile.What was it doing?sleeping in your packet?"

" Geet"

"I said to shut your stupid mouth.You really dono what is love?Am being the fool who is head over heels on you.Why am screaming to such a person who have no time for me?"

It pained him to hear her saying such thing.Of course he needs to admit that he was the one who said he was busy in the moning and not even tried to convince her when she was angry.

"Man the guts of you..Your such a A*******.I say you mark it in your dairy am not gonna even make a single call to you here after.If you wish to continue this relation you make some effort Mr.khurana."

She never calls him that way.It will always be Maanu.And he did a grave mistake by getting into her bad books.It will be hard for him to woo her back.

"I have sent you the bills for brokage you are going to pay it."

"Baby what do you say?"

"Oh ya cant you even pay for the breakage??????"

"No honey I was asking about you.Nothing happened to you na?What happened ?Which breakage?"

"Oh ya I was waiting for you and 4 rogues started teasing so I was left with no option to beat them black and blue which lead to the damage of restarunt.You made mistake of not coming so its you who is responsible to pay that."

"Ya dear sure." He was trying to make her normal but nothing is working.

"Yup forgot to mention one more thing Mr.Khurana don't ever try to enter Sanjevani regarding our love matter.As I have mentioned in the mail now our deal is over."

"Baby you can't be serious" but what he heard in the other end was a beep.He was now continuously trying her but nothing worked.She is not pickng up the call.

He dono what to do with a long face he went home not having heart to look up into office issues.

"Mammu you came back so soon.Take me to ice cream parlour na?" screamed Ansh and hugged Maan.

"Next time baby.Now Mamu is tired"

Ansh was Annie's 3 year son.Maan's favourite person ofcourse after his Geet.He gave Ansh a squeeze and went to his room.

Daadi and Annie witnessed the frown in Maan's face.This is not the way he behaves with Ansh.Whomever he may avoid but not Ansh.They both felt it strange.

Sometime later Maan being fed up with Geet avoiding his calls came down to relax.He cannot believe that she simply said that there is nothing more.Of course he knew nothing was from her heart but this felt different.She may get angry on anyone but not her Maannu.It was always Maan being stubborn in their relation and she being adjusting.Now this change of she becoming stubborn is hard for him.

Daadi and Annie was being the mute spectator.Ansh suddenly choked the water due to hiccups .Maan grinned eviliy and rushed to Ansh and patted his back.

"Ansh careful baby."

"Nothing mamu its just hiccups."

"No No Annie get him we will take him to hospital.See he is choking then it will lead to breathing trouble.Come come fast take him.Ansh come lets go to doctr."

"Par Bhai.Its just hiccups."

"Annie am saying na.Get him"

Daadi eyed his grandson curiously and motioned Annie to do what he was saying.He just wanted to find his grandson's strage actions a meaning.

Annie took ansh with her and they started to hospital.

"Bhai this is too much.He ws just choking dueto hiccups."

"Phir be he is my prince.Haina Ansh?"

"Yes mamu."

The car stopped in Sanjeevani and Maan rushed Annie to Paediatric ward.The receptionist seeing Maan allowed inside Geet's room without any queries.

Geet with the opening of door was jerked back from her thoughts.Seeing Maan her anger shoot up and she was about to throw paper weight on him but froze in track seeing Annie behind.

"Wo hai Annie.What brings you here?"

Annie knew Geet well because she was the one who treats Ansh from his birth.

"Nothing much Geet.Its Bhai.Ansh just choked water and he bought us here.Arrey Bhai how come you know Geet?"

Noe Geet understood that Annie is Maan's sis and created a scene just to meet her.Her Anger vanished but this time she is not going to make easy for Maan.He has to learn the basics of love.

"Ya Annie I know him professionally..Haina Mr.Khurana?"

"Yes Miss.Hnada"

Annie sensed something is going on between these two.

"Mera sweetu Ansh come here baby"

"Hai Didi.See am good your not going to give me any medicines na?"

"No sweetu chubby pie.I will just check u up.Your stupid Mamu bought you here for no matter."

She just checked him up and said Annie that he is fine and asked her to take Ansh to next room and check the weight of him.

Maan was boiling in anger.How dare she calls some one else by those sweet names Eventhough Ansh being kid he cannot tolerate it.And Ansh is calling her Di that means she will become her niece.yuck..

He said

"Ansh she is too big na so call her mammi wo sorry call her as madam not as didi"

"Par mamu She is my friend so lemme call her as my friend"

Annie confirmed what is going on.And thought of giving both sometime and took Ansh with her.

"Who asked you to come here.?She kept on throwing things at him"

He stood up and neared her she started to run around the room.He cornred her against the wall.

"Baby accept you cannot be without me.Don't give me your attitude.You know you cannot resist MSK"

"Back off Mr.Khurana.You don't threaten me.I can very well be without you.I can say the same thing Don't give me your Attitude.You know something you are such a jerk,duffer"

"Geet mind your words baby. I could make the same mouth to do others things to me"

"You could not do that to me"

"Don't use that tone of yours Geet.I Hate it"

"Am challenging you Maan.Ask sorry to me or your next 48 hours will be hell missing me."

"Do it if you can.Am not going to miss you.It will be you who will miss me"

"Don't dream Mr.Khurana"

"Lets see who is gonna miss whom.By the end of 48 hours you will be standing in front of me with your big eyes asking sorry to me"

"Lets see who is gonna ask sry"

They were disturbed by the knock in the door.Annie and Ansh came back.Maan sat in his chair.

After Geet saying Ansh is perfectly well they exited the room.Once they entered the car Annie said Maan she has missed her mobile in Geet's cabin and came back.

"Oh ho Geet mera Bahabi" Anie screamed and hugged her.

Geet was surprised."Annie."

"Wo Bhabhi maaf kardo na.i eves dropped your convo .Sachi I'll not do this again."

"But Annie.Your calling me."

Before she could complete Annie said in a go "My Bhai is never a person to express love but now since you have entered his life he has no other way than to change so now I'll be there with you for the challenge and we are going to win.I'll call you in the night Bahbi Bhai will get suspicious if I did not return now."

After placing a kiss in the cheks of Geet she flew away.Geet couldnot believe Maan's sis could be this sweet.

At night after Maan retired to the room Anie explained everything to Daadi .She was adamant to speak to Geet by that time itself.Without no option left Annie called Geet.

"Bahbhi its annie here."

Geet was blushing hard whenever Annie called her bhabhi.

"Bolo Annie.You said you need to speak with me"

"Before that Daadi is wishing to speak with you."

"Par Annie"

"No par war Jansi ki rani.I never thought someone could challenge Maan and that and that too a girl."Daddi spoke

"Namaste Dadima.Am sorry Daadi that I spoke such way to your pote.But you know he is such a jerk at times.I feel like hitting his head against the wall"

"I Know beta he is tough at times.Now am there with you "

"Love you Daadi.Thanks a lot.'

The three muskeeters then formulated a plan and went to sleep.

The morning dawned.Maan as usual took his mobile to check the message from his pyaar.But no messages was there then it struck him that they had an argument .He sadly sighed and went to take bath.

When he came out from his bath.He saw Geet lying in his bed.He was not able to believ himself that she has loosen that easily.not able to believe the fact that she is there he closed his eyes and opened it expecting her to be there.But she was not there.Then it struck him that he was imagining.He got ready and went down.Again he saw her standing in the stairs .Before he could reach she has disappeared.

He blamed himself for missing her so soon.He came and sat in the dinning but he was constantly checking his mobile for a call or a message.There has not been a day he would start his routines without her sweeyt good morning.Maan control yourself.He screamed at his heart.

"Anything important Beta you are constantly checking the phone"

"No Daadi just like that checking.He gave a sheepish smile and entered the car."

Annie ,Daadi hifived thinking their plan is working

Howmuch ever he is trying to shoo her thought away he was not able to do it.Now he understood how much she would have ached for his attention.He Is missing her terribly.Somehow he entered his cabin.Again he saw her there sitting in the couch giving him her adorable smile.With in the wink of his eye she is gone.

Half the day in office was like a hell to him.Many people were fired without reasons.By now atleast by 15 times he has imagined her everywhere.This is not helping him. He wondered if whether she will also feel the same restlessness or she will not miss him.Then he decided may be she will not because never once he called her or bothered her with the sweet talks .In ths relation it was always her who did for both.

He decided even if he is going to loose the challenge he is not going to give a shit all he now is to take her in his arms and say him he was sorry for his carelessness.

He entered Sanjeevani pediatric ward and stromed to Geet's room it was locked.He wonderd where she must be.Thinking to check her in her home he came out only to be greeted by receptionist who gave him a letter saying Geet has left it for him.

He opened it to read.

Ey Maan,

I Know you would come for me before 48 hours.You loose the challenge (Don't give me your MSK look) anyways this is to inform you that am going to one of my friend's house for a stay.I dono when will I turn up.(Now don't frown.)

I'll not disturb you from now on.Take care.Ya I didn't called you because you will have no time for me.

Take care

He chuckled at how well she knows him.But the last sentence pricked him.Of course it was him who said that.He felt like banging his head in the near by wall.

He called her up .She received the call.

"Geet"

"Ya Maan why did you call me missing me already" She asked in a chirpy tone.

He was at peace after he heard her voice "No no I called you to speak about the building that KC has constructed for you.I need it for some reference."

"Ufff Buddu Maan now am out with my friend I'll call you back after 3 days."

"But its imp.." his words froze in his mouth hearing a guys voice on the other end."One mocha choco will do.We will share it.Geetu is it oki for you we can share it na?"

"Sure sweety pie we can share it.Aww the smile of yours I just want to kiss those cheeks of yours baby."

Maan was boiling in rage hearing a guys voice sharing a ice cream with Geeet and she wants to kiss his cheeks."Who is it Geet?Why do you call him with such names?And what is about you kissing him?"

Geet then replied "Maan I said you ryt?He is my friend.Am quite busy now.Willl call later and answer ur questions."And she hung up the call.

The rest of the day was horrible for him.He went to KM soon said Daadi he is not feeling well and retired to bed .But sleep was far away from him..He was continuously gazing at her photo which was in his mobile.The convo with Geet made his heart restless.Who that guy must be.He is calling my geet as geetu.

The next morning was also the same he seeing her everywhere.He thought of calling her but decided not to.He entered his cabin and asked Adi not to disturb anyone.He was deeply in thought about his sweetie.The work which he use to place before her now never bothered him.He Slept off due to tiredness .He woke up suddenly when he heard a sound of some one closing the door.There was a note lying in his desk.He took the note it read

"Sorry Baby for making you wait.Love you .will wait for you in terrace.Come soon.Yours and only yours."

He was grinning like a madman and dashed to terrace of KC.

In Km Daadi called Nakul and asked him to go to KC and give him a file and that too only in his hands.Nakul came to KC and went to Maan's cabin when he found none he asked Adi who said he saw Maan going to Terrace so he followed Maan to terrace.

IN TERRACE:

There was a person standing fully covered by a red dupatta.The person's back was shown to maan.

Maan was happy to see her finally .He neared her and said "Baby am really really sorry for making you wait this much time.I should not have done this to you.But you know me na how busy I get once I enter my cabin.I promise you that I will not repeat it.Promise honey.Wll you not forgive your Maan"

"Oh baby don't ask sorry and all."

"Honey why is your voice thick"

"Must be due to cold"

"You even became fat?Where is the perfect structure of my Baby.You know after marriage I love to always carry u in my arms so please reduce your weight.With in a day you gained weght sweetie"

"Oh Baby you are making me blush haredr."

"Can I have the pleasure of taking your honey lips in mine.Show me your face baby."

Maan was startled by a loud shriek he looked ahead to see Nakul standing there shocked and moving out like a zombie.Maan was confused by his reactions .He thought may be seeing Geet with me he was worried.

When Maan turned the person he was more than shocked and stepped three steps back.

"Honey give me kiss na?" pleaded Manisha.

Maan gave a loud shriek."Who asked you to come here?Where is my Geet?She placed the letter in my cabin na?"

"Hottie who is Geet your only mine.I only placed that letter as a reply for your letter.Manish was coming close.Maan steeped back and composed himself and asked in a msk tone "Stop there.Where is the letter?And don't even try to open your mouth about this to any of staff members otherwise your dismissed"

Manish gave the letter and gone down with tears in his eyes longingly looking at his hottie.

The letter read

Hi my baby,

Sry for ignoring u all these days its all because of these stupid staffs of kc.But you know I love you a lot.Please I want to talk to you.Come to terrace before that cover up yourself well.

Love

Maan.

He was shocked who dared to write such a letter.He was already worried to top it all now this.The shrill call of his mobile made him come back to Earth .He noticed Daddi ma calling.

"Yes Daadi ma."

"Come to home now and within 10 mins"

"Daddi office?"

"I said now Maan and no excuse."

He was worried with Daadi's stubborn voice.He drove to mansion.When he entered Daadi was looking angrily at him.

"What happened Daadi ?" he sat beside her.

"What is all this Maan I never expected this cheap behavior from you.How could you do this?"

"But what did I do?"

"Don't act as if you dono.Am ashamed to say you're my grandson.You never said that to me and here am sitting like a fool and seeing girl photos for you.Are you a GAY Maan?"

"Gay and me?who said you Daadi?"

Daadi looked at Nakul and maan's gaze followed her .Then it struck him.Nakul had seen him with Manish.

"Daddi its all a mistake .Am in love Daadi!"

"Ya madam sir loves Manish" Nakul interrupted and shut his mouth with Maan's gaze.

"I love Geet not any one else. And now I miss her terribly"He shouted at Nakul.

"Jeeth gayi mei heath gayi.48 hours over" came a familiar voice .

He turned back to see Annie,Geet and Ansh laughing at him.Daadi is also smiling.He was confused.

"Can anyone care to explain whats happening?"

"My sweetu cherrypie, Daddi and my Sil helped me to win this challenge and thus I stayed here in my future sasural ,made you hallucinate me everywhere ,gave letter to Manish ji and made you a gayu.Poor NAkul BHAi was really scared you to see in such a situation"

"This is cheating Geetu."

"But all is fair in love and war."

He hugged her and said "Though this time you won by cheating I missed you terribly.Sorry I took you for granted.i'll be a proper lover and hubby hereafter.Don't leave me ever"

Geet's world stood at a place she never imagined Maan being this emotional "Cry baby stop it.Am all yours."

"And by the way who is that boy friend whom do you wanna kiss"

"Its me Mamu" screamed Ansh.

"Maanu are your jealous?"

"No I was not..Who said I was jealous" He was embarrsed by the teasing giggles of 3 ladies and ran to his room .

3 months later:

Km was dressed like a bride for the grand wedding of MSK.Maan was sitting in the mandap waiting for his Jaan

And there she is.He forgot to breath.She is indeed an angel from heaven came down for him.This is the day he was waiting for .To calim her as his.

Maan ki Geet.

The marriage was over and he was waiting for the night so that they could be alone.All he needed now was to drag her to his room and kiss her endless for teasing him for the past months with Daadi and Annie.

Atlast he was about to enter the room and he was stopped by a gang of children at his doorstep.

"Who are you all?"

"We are di's patients oops friends?" said little Einstein who gave him a death glare on his 1st meet with Geet

"What are you doing in My room"

"Came to warn you.Remember Jiju don't think she has no one we are there.One tear from her eye and you need to answer our fists." Said the little brat.

"Take care of Girlfriend mamu" said Ansh

Maan was highly irritated before he could blast annie dragged everyone out.

He went inside neared Geet and said "Baby get ready for 48 hours of heaven.You are not moving out for 48 hrs from my room.This is your punishment for teasing me"

Before she could utter a word he closed her lips with his.

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Third Entry: Inseparable
Geet Handa had just joined a job as a crime reporter. She was sitting in her bed reading a crime novel, when her mobile ringed. ''Hello Geet Handa speaking'' ''Geet, it's me Aadi'' ''Good Morning Aadi sir'' ''Geet open you TV on channel 3'' ''Why sir?'' ''Because that will be your first case.After watching the cover call me, back'' ''Ji Sir'' Geet switched on her television on channel 3. Superstar Maan Singh Khurana arrested for psychically abusing his co-stars Sasha Kapoor and Sameera Sharma, flashed on the TV screen.The Aaj Tak reporter Simi Seghal appeared on the screen. ''When superstar Maan Singh Khurana was arrested he walked into the police station, like he was attending one of his movie premiere's. There was no shame in his eyes. And when one of our reporters asked if he felt guilty of the way he threated his heriones this is what he had to say'' The showed Maan walking inside the police station,with his head held high. He looked calm but there was a hidden anger and rage in his eyes, which Geet noticed. A reporter walked over to Maan. ''Mr Khurana, don't you feel a litle bit bad about the way you behaved'' Maan looked directly into the reporter's eyes.
''Why should I, when I have done absolutely nothing to be ashamed of''
''So Mr.Khurana are you stating that both the girls lied''
''Yes''
''Why would both of them lie, wha
Before the reporter could continue, the policemen asked them to back off. They took Maan inside. The channel switched back to Simi.
''So you can see how easliy Maan said that both the girls where lying. When we asked Sasha and Sameera what they have to say about Maan's statement, this is what they had to say''
The same reporter that had interviewd Maan was now sitting with in Sameera's home. Sasha was also there present.
''Ms. Sharma can you tell us what happened between you and Mr.Khurana''
Sameera who was crying wiped her tears, she tried to make her voice steady so she could talk normally.
''Well me and Maan meet on the sets of Tum hi ho. He was really friendly and caring at the beginning. I started to like his company a lot. I didn't realise when I fell in love with him and I thought he loved me too.At the last day of the shooting I decided to tell Maan about my feelings''
''Then what happened''
''When I told him I loved him, he smiled and said he also loved me. We started dating. The first two months everything was fine, my life seemed like a fairytail. But one day I started hearing rumours about him and Sasha. I asked Maan about that''
''What was Maan's reaction to that''
''He got angry he told me how I dared asking him what was going on between him and Sasha. I told him I trust him and he doesn't need to get upset. He told me if I better trust him and he stormed out of my apartment. Latter on the day I called him but he didn't pick up. I thought I must have really upset him, so I decided to go to his house. When I rang the bell Maan opened the door, he wasn't to happy to see me. He asked me to leave. I begged him to let me in so that we could talk, but he didn't budge. I thought it might be better if I leave. I was about to leave when I heard a female voice. I heard he asking who it was at the door. Maan replied no-one. Before Maan could close the door the women who is his dadima was already standing behind Maan. She sweetly greeted me, she asked me who I was. Before I could answer Maan said I was his co-star in the movie Tum hi ho. Dadima asked me in, but before I could reply Maan again answered for me and said that I had to go. But I really wanted Maan to talk to me and I thought saying yes to dadima was a way. So I told dadi I would love to come in. Maan shot me a angry glare. Me and dadi talked for a while, after a while dadi left.
Sameera's started crying by now.
''Calm down Ms. Sharma''
Sameera wiped her tears away.
''Sorry''
''It's okay Mr.Sharma, what happened when dadi ,left''
''When dadi left Maan grabbed my arm and took me to his room. He trew me on the floor and closed to door behind him. When I asked him to calm down. He walked over to me and slapped me right in my face. This was the first time that he had hit me. I cried and asked what my fault was that he was treating me like that. He told me I deserved to be threaten like that after I disobeyed his orders, when he made it clear that he wanted me to leave. I told him I came here to talk to him, he slapped me again and told me don't I understand that he isn't interested in talking to me. He told me to leave before he would hit me again. I was really scared I left from there. After that day I hadn't spoken or heard anything from him for two weeks. And everyone around me kept telling me he and sasha where seen going out. I didn't know what to do, then one night the bell rang. I was shocked to see Maan at the door. He told me he was sorry for the way he behaved and he didn't come before cause he didn't know how to face me, but he couldn't stay away from me any longer. I was the entire night in his arms. The next day when I wanted to go out he didn't let me he told me he missed me too much. We stayed a week in my apartment. I was really happy after a week when I talked to my friends they told me I was a moron. Maan was just using me. they told me Sasha had gone abroad for a week that's why he was with me and now that Sasha was back he was again all over her. I ignored that because I wanted to trust Maan. But after that week he started abusing me again. He used to get angry on litle things, my life had become a living hell. I was so scared of him. One day when I couldn't handle it anymore I tried breaking up with him but when I uttered the words of our break up to him he started abusing me again. I didn't know what to do and how to come out of this hell, untill one day I saw him with Sasha. Now I knew my friends where right he was two timing me. I decided to meet up with Sasha I realised he wasn't only two timing me but also her. She told me Maan and she meet on the film sets. They where dating for a couple of months by now. He used to be really nice but he started abusing her two. He abused her for the first time a week ago, before we meet up. He did that when some of her friends told her that he was dating me and she asked him about it. We realised he just used girls and trew them away and if we wouldn't speak up now, a lot of girls would go through the hell we went.
'' Oh my you went through a lot''
''Yes I did''
''And so did you Ms.kapoor, do you have something to say''
''No Sameera told you everything''
''Alright before leaving I want to show you something''
He showed Sameera and Sasha the tape where Maan told the interviewer he hadn't done anything wrong, and both the grils where lying.
''What is your take on this''
''Of course no-one will admitt that they commited a crime, but we will get justice''
The interview got cut off when, breaking news flashed on the screen. Maan Singh Khurana is a free man again. Maan Singh Khurna got bail.Simi again apeared on the screen.
'' We just heard Ms. Sharma saying she and Ms.Kapoor will get justice. But will they, really? Mr.Khurna just got bailed
Geet turned off the TV. She called up Aadi.
''Aadi I am taking the this case, I will get those girls their justice''
''Prefect''
When geet hung up her mind went to what Sameera said. (ST) Hmmm so he dates his heriones and then he abuses them. The best way to meet him would probably be on a movieset. But for that I will have to wait.
Months went by after Maan's controversy. Geet was still waiting for the right moment to strike. By now she had meet up with Sasha and Sameera and promised then to get them justice. The girls had warned Geet that it wouldn't be easy as Maan would be really carefull this time. But Geet had assured them that she will get them justice. She had also find out that his Dadima had support him saying Sameera and Sasha where lying, Sameera had come over to KM but she left while she was still there. Geet thought it was wrong of Maan's dadi to lie for her grandson even if she loved him with all her heart. She also was a women she should have supported the truth. Geet was lying in her bed thinking what to so next. She switced on her TV, she turned to Channel 3. She saw the reporter Simi again covering up a story about Maan. Geet sat up as the news got her attention. Because of the controversy no herione was ready to work with Maan on his new movie Pyaar huwa, the producers where freaking out. Geet smiled and plan strike her mind. She stood up to grab her laptop, she googled information about the movie. She smirked.
''Time to audtion Geet Handa''
She told herself.Geet wore a simple salwaar kameez made her hair lose. She went on the sets of Pyaar huwa. She saw the producer Romeo talking on the phone trying to convince Naintara a big herione to work with Maan. But it seemed like she kept refusing, Romeo slammed his mobile off in anger.
''Sir''
Romeo turned around.
''Yes how can I help you''
''Sir I came to audition for the movie Pyaar huwa''
''What, idar koi auditions nahi chal reh, you can leave''
Just them Maan arrived he was awe struck by her beauty, she look so simply yet so beautifull.
''Please sir koi be chota roll chale ga. I really need some work''
''Listen, that's
Maan cut Romeo off.
''Madame you wait here, Romeo you come with me''
Romeo and Maan are childhood friends, there the best buddy's and are always their for each other.
''Kya hai Maan''
''Look Romeo after what happened no-one will want to work for me for a while. I will have to start from the beginning, again to build up my career. So the best thing now is to let this new girl become the herione of the movie''
''But what if she can't act''
''We have no choice and more important then her acting will be my perfomance. I will have to win not only the audince back but also the producers and actress. Once this movie becomes a hit everyone will again want to work with me''
''Hmmm you do have a point there, but we have to make sure this movie becomes a huge hit then''
''It will the scrip is amazing and we needed a simple girl, a girl next door for this movie, right''
''Right''
Maan pointed at Geet.
''And look there she is standing''
''Hmmm I guess''
''Well let's tell her the good news then''
Maan and Romeo walked over to Geet.
''Young lady why don't you do a screentest with Maan, after that I will decide''
Maan gave a Romeo a what the hell look, which Romeo srugged away.(ST)Why does Romeo always try to play hard, anyway who cares so long I can start shooting the movie as soon as possible.BTW what's the name of this new girl.
Maan forwarded his hand.
''Hi Maan Singh Khurana''
''Hi Geet Handa''
''Nice to meet you Geet''
Geet gave him a sweet smile.After the screen test Geet was had got the roll she was trilled, she could finally put her plan into action. Geet went to her caravan, opened her bag and grabbed her flower hairband out of it. In the flower there was a miny camera which would record Maan's every move. She quikly wore it and left her caravan. When she came out she saw Maan packing his stuff.She walked over to him.
''Mr.Khurana''
Maan turned around.
''Call me Maan''
''Alright, Maan I was hoping or you could help me with my dialogus for tomorrow. I am really nervous and I don't wanna mess up on my first day''
(ST) I don't mind helping her but been seen with her will only led up to more rumours and I really need a break from all this.
''Sorry Geet I have to go now''
''Theek hai''
Maan saw the dissapoinment in her eyes, for some reason he didn't like that.
(ST)Maan since when do you think what other people saw or think.Just help that poor girl.Haan but to be sure you don't seek to much attention it might be better to go to her place instead of mine. In from of my house there will be probably a lot of journalists.
''You now what let's go to your place and rehearsal there''
''Okay''
They arrived at Geet's place.Geet knew she had to get friendly with him. He had to fall for her and that to quik. She wanted to end this case as soon as possible, cause she wasn't planning to acteully shoot the movie. She and acting no way.Everyday they would rehearsal together.They had become pretty good friends, by now. It had been a month now and this news had spread around like fire. Geet woke up to find a text from Aadi saying to switch on the TV. When Geet opened her TV she saw that every channel was talking about the same. Was Geet Handa, Maan's next victum. Just then her mobile ringed.
''Hi Maan''
''Geet I need to talk to you, right now. Can I come to your place?''
''Haan Maan I will be waiting for you''
Geet hung up. She smirked to herself she knew what was coming. She quikly got ready. She made Maan's favorite pasta. She had just set the table when the bell rang. She opened the door a disturbed Maan walked in. He was shocked when he saw the table set up.
''Maan sit done I will serve you pasta''
''Geet why did you make this for me?''
Geet walked over to him grabbed his arm and him sit.
''Maan I knew you would be disturbed, and must have skipped breakfast.''
Maan looked at her with questions in his eyes.
''I saw the news''
Maan sighed.
''Geet I don't now what you already now about me and this case, but let me tell you
Geet interupted Maan.
''You don't have to tell me anything. I don't wanna now anything about all that, because I know all I need to now about you. And that is that you are a great guy, really humble and down to earth. Ever since I know you I never felt out of place. You always made me feel comfortable and special''
Geet looked straight in Maan's eyes and said.
''All I know is that I trust you and I don't like to see you tensed face''
Maan was overwhelmed by her words. (ST) Is she feeling the same I am feeling since the first time I saw her. Does she also love me?.
''Why Geet why do you trust me so much. Why do you care so much about me, Why??''
Geet looked down at her hands.
''I don't know''
Maan lifted her chin so that she was looking at him.
''I think you do''
Geet didn't reply she tried looking down again. Maan smiled and carresed her face.He came close to her and whispered in her ear.
''I think you love me Misty''
Geet blushed.Maan smiled and whispered in ear.
''I love you too''
Geet looked up now, she stood up from her place and hugged Maan tight. Maan felt all his tension slip away. After the Sameera & Sasha controversy this is the first time he felt so relaxed.Geet was sitting now in his lap, with her head on his chest. Maan was carressing her hair,but that annoying hairband was working on his nerves. He was about to take it off, when Geet stopped him.
''Maan please, woh my mom gift me this and ever since she left me.I never took it off''
Maan hugged her tighter.(ST) Sorry mom, that I have to lie but you understand na, I have no choice''
''I am sorry baby I didn't now''
''It's okay Maan, please tum sorry mat bholo''
Maan smiled her loved the way she loved and cared for him. He kissed her cheek.
''Geet won't you tell me that you love me, Misty''
Geet shook her head saying no.
''Acha''
Maan started tickling her.
''Tell me you love me''
''Maan please, stop''
Geet said between her laughter.
''No not untill you tell me you love me''
''Acha baba I love you''
Maan smiled and kissed her forhead.Maneet where now dating for two weeks. Till now Maan was behaving like a perfect boyfriend and the shooting of the movie was almost wrapped up. Geet was thinking of ways to make Maan show his true colors faster. She decided to meet up with Sameera, maybe she could help her.
''Hi Sam''
''Geet so I heard your finally dating Maan''
''Haan till now he is acting like the perfect boyfriend''
''Yes he seemed like that to me to in the beginning''
''Do you know how I can make him show his true colors''
''Haan seduce him and when he tries to come close, tell him your not ready yet. Deny him for litle things, just stuff like that''
''Hmmm okay thanks''
Geet sat in her car to drive home. (ST) Hmmm mein Maan ko seduce kaisi karoon ghi.
Just then her phone ringed.
''Hi Maan''
''Geet come to my place I need to talk to you''
''Hmmm theek hai''(ST) Why is he sounding so serious, what happened now''
Geet entered KM. Nakul told her that Maan was waiting in his room for her after that Nakul left the place.(ST) Oh so he called me and send everyone away. Looks like the drama is about to begin.
Geet checked her hairband. She took a deep breath and walked to his room. What shaking hands she opened the door. Maan was sitting on his bed. When he saw he standing at the door he signaled her to come in and sit next to her.Geet put a hand on Maan's shoulder.
''Kya huwa Maan. Why are you so disturbed''
''Kuch nahi Geet I just needed you, where were you''
Geet carresed Maan's face.
''Why do you take so much tension Maan. Tell you Geet what happened''
'I am fine Misty, you tell me where were you today''
''I just came from shopping''
Maan stood up and walked over to the window.(ST) Why do I think he knows I meet Sameera today. Geet better tell him yourself, before you plan flops''
''Maan I went for shopping, there is meet Sameera. She insisted me to listen to her. First I didn't want to but then I thought I might be able to convince her to take back her accusations, so that you name will get cleared. So we went to her place. But there is tried to convince me that everything she blamed you for was true, she told me to look out''
Geet stood up and walked over to Maan, she hugged him from behind and put her chin on his shoulder.
''But why should I look out when my Maan is here to take care of me''
She kissed his shoulder.Maan turned her around and hugged her.
''Misty I saw your car in front of her house and got worried. I thought you didn't trust your Maan''
''Jab tak jaan hai jab tak Geet ko apne Maan pe yakeen hai''
Maan hugged her tighter.
''Misty when I have you trust. I don't care what anyone else thinks. I love you Misty, I love you more then you can ever imagene. Never leave me this Maan won't be able to life without you.''
''kahbhi nahi Maan. Yeh Geet hamesha aapke paas hogi''(ST) Geet seduce toh tere seh nahi hoga. But I think I can deny Maan and make him feel not so important. Haan that will have do''
She came out of his embrace.
''Maan tum bhi na kitna senti kardiya muhjhe''
Maan smiled.
''Sorry Misty'''
''Kaha na never say sorry''
Maan kissed her forhead.
''Maan I should go now''
''No Stay with me''
(ST) Good, now deny him
''Nahi Maan I am tired I need to go''
''Misty rest here, this is also your place, na''
''Nahi Maan staying here before marriage is weird''
Maan pulled Geet towards him.
''Then lets get married Misty''
''Maan your joking, right''
''No Misty I am serious. let's get married''
''No Maan I still want to work a couple of years''
''You can also work after marriage''
''After I get married I just want to take care of you and our childeren''
Geet blushed while saying that.Maan kissed her cheek.
''Acha''
Geet nodded, Maan smiled.
''As you wish ma'am. But just stay for another hour'''
''Theek hai''
''Thank you''
Five weeks had past ever since that night. Geet had tried everything to make his true colors come out. She tried to jealousy came but that didn't work. Maan only showed blind trust on her, then she tried to do her best and seduce him anyway, but when she told him not to cross his limits he didn't. She was going crazy, she knew she was falling for him, or already fell for him so she needed to end this case asap. So now she decided her latest plan, she hoped this would work. Geet singed a ad deal and she trew a party to celebrate it but she didn't invite Maan. In fact Maan she even didn't know she had singhed any such deal. He heard it from Romeo. Romeo also told him about the party Maan was shocked. He called up Geet but she didn't pick up. The next day Geet went to KM.Nakul told her Maan was in the gym. When she entered the gym she saw him doing dangerous moves. She ran towards him and hugged him from the back. Maan didn't hug her back he just kept standing there.
''Maan''
''What do you want Geet''
''Why are you sounding so angry''
Maan jerked Geet away from him and turned around. (ST)Finally.
''What has happened to you lately. You don't pick up my calls you ignore me and this time you even told me you got a new ad. Forget telling me you even didn't invite me at your party''
''I am sorry Maan please listen to me''
''Forget it Geet these last weeks it's every time the same story''
''Please Maan just listen this once at me, please baby''
''Fine''
''Maan I know how you hate parties and I thought I will tell you latter and we will celebrate privately. I didn't pick up your calls because I didn't hear my phone, it was on vibrate and baby I ain't ignoring you I am just so busy lately. But trust me I miss you every single moment. Please trust your Geet like she trusts you.
Maan always melted with her words and acts he hugged her.
''Stop acting like this,it hurst jaan''
''Sorry'' (ST) He is nothing like Sameera described him I think I need to go and meet Sasha I might figure out more, about what the real story is.
After spending some time with Maan Geet went to Sasha's place. She wasn't home so Geet decided to go home, but on her way she saw Sasha with another girl sitting at a bench. Geet walked over to them she was about to call Sasha but stopped when she heard them talk about Sameera's plan.
''Sasha when will you get the money, for helping Sam in her plan to marry Maan''
''She told me as soon as Maan says yes''
''What makes her think he will say yes''
''Well she ruined is career and even his new movie Pyaar huwa didn't release yet because of Sameera. If he wants to earn a living for himself and his dadima marrying Sameera is the only way out''
''Why does she wanna marry him''
''She hated rejection, she tried to seduce him and failed now out of revenge she promised him and herself that he will begg her to marry in front of the whole world''
''Oh so that;'s her plan''
(ST)Oh so that is the real reason behind the delay of the movie. That B**** Sameera lied and used me to marry Maan. That's never gonna happen.
Geet smirked her hairband had recorded everything. (ST)Game over Sameera Sharma.
Geet left from there she had to meet Maan and tell him everything before she took any step. She was sure Maan would forgive her. When she entered KM, Nakul told her Maan was sitting in the garden. She walked over to him and sat next to him on the bench. She put her head on his shoulder. Maan glanced over to her.
''You are not wearing you hairband today, why??''
''There is no need to wear it anymore''
''Why, I thought it meant a lot to you and your mom gave it to you''
Geet didn' t reply she closed her eyes. She was searching the strength to tell him the truth. Suddenly she felt Maan taking the hairband out of her hand.Maan shoved Geet's head away from his shoulder and stood up.
''You know Geet who I meet to day. Sameera Sharma''
Maan glanced over to Geet to see her reaction he saw fear in her eyes. Maan thought it was fear of being caught. If only he knew it was the fear of losing him. First time Geet feared of losing him, she had never heard Maan's voice this cold.
''You know Misty she told me a interesting fact about this hairband.She told me it has a miny camera in it, so that it can capture the real beast inside of me, that I am hidding from the whole world.Weird na Misty, why would your mom gift you something like that.''
Geet could feel the disgust when he called her Misty, the same word he used to say with so much love. She closed her eyes and tears made their way out. She knew what Sameera must have told Maan more, she didn't had the strength to hear it.
''Please Maan''
''Itni jhaldi jaan, but she told me even more interesting facts. You now Misty she told me that if I don't want her to ruin my career and image I should marry her. You know Misty when I told her I don't care what the world thinks about me so long my Misty is with me, I will be fine. I will build up me career again and she can do nothing to destroy me.You know Misty she laughed at me.She told me my Misty acted like she loved me infact she was not even a actress but a crime journalist. And every time she told me she loved me it was nothing but a lie. But you now Misty I got angry at her and made my guards trew her out. How dare she lie about my Jaan, My jaan trust me more then her life, haina. What is it that you said haan, jab tak jaan hai jab tak geet ko apne Maan pe yakeen hai, right??
''Ma aa an I a m so rr y''
Maan let out a sarcastic chuckle.
''You know Geet just then Romeo came in, he told he that he saw you with Aadi the bigest crime reporter. Romeo found it weird that you where talking to him, so he deicded to follow you and Romeo told me the same story that Sam told me.But I have to say jaan you should quit this journalist work and become a actress cause you dahm good at it, our kya dialogue bholti hoon, mind blowing''
''Maaa an ple ase I am so rry, plea se lis ten to me''
''Aahhh there comes you hit line. I am sorry, litsen so me just this once, right. Thoda boring hora hai Geet. Don't repeat the same line the entire time the public will get bored jaan. Anyway you performace is over you can leave, now.''
''Maaa ann ple ase I re ally love you ju st
''One minute what did you just say. You really love me, right like you trusted me, right. Just get the hell out of here''
''Maan''
''I said GET OUT OR I WILL TROW YOU OUT''
A crying Geet walked over to Maan and put a hand on his shoulder.Maan shoved to hand away.
''Guards trow her out and make sure she never enters KM again''
The guards took Geet away while she cried begging Maan to listen to her just this once.Suddenly Maan stopped the guards Geet felt hope risen, but that hope cam crashing down.When Maan shoved her hairband in her hand.
''You almost forgot your precious hairband Jaan''
''Maaan''
''trow her out''
When the guards took Geet out Maan walked towards the garden and started breaking everything. He trew the bech and fell on his knees screaming. Just then Dadi walked into the garden she was shocked to see all this she ran towards Maan and sat on the ground next to him. Maan put his head in her lap.
''Kyu dadi kyu, what is my fault. I loved her so much and she''
Tears made their way out way off Maan's eyes. He cried like a baby,dadi tried to sooth him. But nothing could sooth Maan's broken heart. At the other side Geet was also crying she had started loving Maan in all this and it pained her so much not to only loss her first love but also to see him in so much pain and that to thanks to her. She decided she needed to clear Maan's name the next day she realesed the tape. Maan's name was cleared. But Maan had given up acting he started singing he felt that he could let his emotions out in the form of songs. Geet still tried contacting Maan. He had just texted her once a thank you so much message after his name was cleared, after that he never picked up her phone or replied to her texts. But Geet decided so wouldn't give up that quik, she went to one of his concerts. Maan was about to perform when his eyes fell on her. He looked straight in her eyes and started singing whatever came in his mind.
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All this time I was wasting,
Hoping you would come around
I've been giving out chances every time
And all you do is let me down
Both Maneet though about the time Geet ignored him, hurt him but he forgave her each and every time.

And it's taking me this long
Baby but I figured you out
And you're thinking we'll be fine again,
But not this time around
He looked straight into her eyes while he sang the last sentence. Geet looked at him with pleading eyes.
You don't have to call anymore
I won't pick up the phone
This is the last straw
Don't wanna hurt anymore!!!!
Geet mounted a I am sorry, while tears where fighting to come out of her eyes.
And you can tell me that you're sorry
But I don't believe you baby
Like I did - before
You're not sorry, no no oh
Geet could see lack of trust in his eyes. She could see in his eyes that he was thinking that Geet was still acting.It hurted her so much, that she closed her eyes for a minute so that she could get the courage again the watch the entire perfomance. She knew it was not gonna be easy.When Geet opened her eyes Maan smirked at her and sang.
Looking so innocent,
I might believe you if I didn't know
Could've loved you all my life
If you hadn't left me waiting in the cold
And you got your share of secrets
And I'm tired of being last to know
And now you're asking me to listen
Cause it's worked each time before
Maaneet went back to the time the meet last. The time when Maan figured out the real face of Geet.
You had me crawling for you honey
And it never would've gone away, no
You used to shine so bright
But I watched all of it fade
Geet couldn't take it anymore she ran away from there and went outside to catch some breath. She hated herself to hurt her Maan so much.After a long while she saw Maan coming out from the back door. This was the only chance she had to talk to him.She took a deep breath a walked over to him. Suddenly out of no where a gang came and started shooting around. The shot was about to hit Maan but Geet jumped in front of him. Maan ran to her and took her in his arms.
''Geeet''
''I am sorry''
''sssh don't waste you energy''
''I love you Maan''
Geet caresed his face and her eyes closed.Maan shook her.
''Nooo Geet you can leave me, again''
Before they knew it guards had overpowerd the gang. Geet was lying in the hospital. Maan was sitting was dadi, tears kept flowing from his eyes.
''dadi yeh meine kya kiya. I should have understand it was her job. dadi she kept telling me she loved me our mein. Chi I hate myself dadi, aaj just to proof her love usne meri jaan bechane ke liye apne jaan ko gharere mein dala''
''Sshh Maan everything will be fine''
Just then the doctor came out.He told Maan that Geet was out of danger and he could go and meet her. Maan ran towards the room in which Geet was. He walked inside and sat next to her. He kissed her forhead. Geet slowly opened her eyes.
''I am sorry Misty for not believing you''
''No Maan I am sorry for breaking you trust''
''Nahi Misty I should understand that it was your job''
''But I should not play with you feelings like that''
''The only thing you shoudln't have done was what you just did. How could you risk my jaan's life. What would I do without you Misty''
Geet smiled she felt all her pain go away seeing the same love and care in her Maan's eyes.
''Kya karoon Maan I am selfish I couldn't let anything happen to my jaan''
Maan kissed her forhead.
''I got so scared Misty''
''Sssh I am fine now''
''I love you Misty''
''I love you too''
Geet got discharged from the hospital.After that accident Maaneet was inseparable.
Five years latter
''Ufff Maansi, Maaneet both of you come her and drink you milk''
''Nahi''
Both said at the same time. Just then Maan came in and Maneet's twin hided behind Maan'
''Dad mom is running behind us with monster milk''
Maansi said.
''Hmmm but what if my two champs get yummy yummy chocolate after they have finsihed yucky monster milk''
Both of them gulped in milk down in one go. Geet came and took maan arm and put her head on his shoulder.
''Only you can control these two''
Maan smiled and kissed her forhead.
''I love you Geet''
''Love you and trust you forever Maan''
Maan hugged her tight and kissed her head.
''I am happy you got rid of that stupid hairband''
Geet chuckled she knew Maan hated anything in her hair, specially that hairband.Her Maan could be so over possesive at times.
THE END
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Fourth entry: Meri Biwi... Kho Gayi...

Maan Singh Khurana big business man in the field of Construction hot & dashing bachelor in town till he met his love of his life & got married to Geet Khurana 6 months back. He who rules the whole world is ruled by his Geet. He could manage n number of projects at once without any pressure but today he is really frustrated and making everything difficult for his staff too, reason being his Geet not picking his calls from morning. After it seems like eternity he gets call from Geet to the relief of his or should I say all his staff but who knew that it would turn into worst.

MSK: Hello Geet where are you?? I have been calling you from long time

Chindi Don: MSK

MSK: Who is this...How did you get this phone...

CD: aap ke liye ek ChiDi (CD-ROM) beji hai ... dekhlena

MSK: Who are you

CD: what's so hurry... Jaldi ka kaam shaitaan ka hota hai

MSK: No... The sooner the better.

Same time there is a knock on the door

Adi: Sir Sir ... we have a received a CD.

MSK: ok play it

And in the wide screen video starts & in the phone CD repeats the same lines

Duniya mein logo ne Phir apne dil thaame

Aaya hoon lekar main Phir kitne hungaame

Phir maine socha hai Main jeetu sab haare

Darwaaje khul jaaye Gir jaaye deewarein

Mujhse takra paaya hai Mujhko pehchan lo

Main Hoon Don

Adi : he he he he he yeh tho SRK hai in DON...Sir aapne yeh movie nahi dehki thi isliye CD mangavi hai par abhi tho meeting hai... aap please baad mein dekhlena

MSK: stop it...what's this non sense...Is this a joke...

CD: Yeh wait wait ... haar ache kaam shuru karte waqt hum Don Sir ko yaad karte hai jaise aap logo Ganeshji ki puja karte ho vaise hi...2 min aur hai phir bata tha hoon

Duniya mujhe jo bhi kahe Iski mujhe parwah kya

Mujhe toh ye dekhna Jeetnay ki hai raah kya

Jo mujhe rokna chahe Unko hai kya yeh pata

Don ko pakadna mushqil hi nahi

Namumkin hai

Duniya phir jeetne aaya kaun

Mujhko pehchan lo

Main hoon Don

MSK: Hogaya drama...ab jaldi batha Yeh phone kaise aya tumare paas

CD: Sirf phone nahi uski malkin bhi hai mere paas...

MSK: What...

Same time in the screen Geet is shown lying unconscious

MSK: Geeet ... What do you need?

CD: badi jaldi hai apne biwi se milne ke... Sabar ka fal meetha hota hai...itni hi jaldi hai tho 500 cr dedo hume aur ise lejaov

MSK: 500 cr... kab aur kaha deni hai...

CD: kya yeh itni jaldi mangaya...socha tha yeh abhi bolega ... thoda kaam nahi ho saktha ... yeh bina bargain kiye hi mangaya... 500 cr itni choti rahkam hai kya...I thought of getting 5 crs... par mera tho lottery lagayi

MSK: Hello ... kab aur kaha deni hai batha do ...

CD: haan hello ...aap paise tayar rahko ... hum address bolte hai...aur kabhar dar jo police ko phone kiya tho...

Thud goes the line...

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CD: Ladki pe nazar rahkna...aur woh hosh mein aye tho muhje bathana...

Chela 1: Yes Boss...

C1 to C2: Go to that room & keep a watch on her...

C2 to C3: ja us kamre main aur gadi rahkna uspar

C3 to C2: kaunsa room hai...

C2 to C3: hare wali mein hai

C3 turns to pass the message to next chella but not finding any hits his head ... uff Why should I be the last one here... ab muhje hi karni padegi... Mehnat hum kare aur yeh unke mazze lute...

After a while

C3 to C2: waha pe woh nahi hai

C2 to C1: waha pe nahi hai

C1: What...

C2: aapne kaam diya na abhi woh waha nahi hai

C1: How did she escape from here? Follow me... let's see how she escaped

C1, 2 & 3 goes to room

C1: She is still lying here unconscious ... you all scared me

C3: par maine puri karma search kiya par woh nahi mili thi

C1: Don't you see she is lying on this bed...

C2 & C3: kaha kaha kaha

C1: wait ...what are you both searching

C2 & C3: Gadi

C1: what ...why are you searching a watch

C2: aapne kahana gadi uspar rahkne ke liye

C1: not that watch... I was saying ...tries to remember the right word...boss did mention ... yes nazar

C2 & C3: wooo... teek hai

C1: One of you wait here till she wakes up

C2 stays there ... while C1 & 3 leaves... after sometime...

GK: ouch ...my head ...why is it so heavy ...she looks around...but there are only walls and before she could figure out someone just runs outside seeing her.

GK: where am I? ... Who was that? ... Why did he run away seeing me? Am i looking like ghost... where is my mirror? ...Looks around to find her favourite pink bag... not finding it around her anger rouse in her veins ...She marched out of the room and banged the door, gaining everyone's attention.

Only to find mens dressed in design lungi with purple coat unbuttoned to show their green inners with purple shoes. They were all standing with a gun in their hand at every pillar seeing them GK burst into laugh. In between her laugh fits...she asked

GK: Are you all here for my today's entertainment? What to do of my MSK, how many times I have said not to make these arrangements I just wanted to spend a day all alone with my friend in the city ... But no he would do one or the other bookings for me... Where am I now tell me? Who are you all? Give me proper introduction... you all are dressed like this for any show or what? I always wanted to watch serials & films shooting... but I never got a chance ...Koi tho jawab do... chodo... First tell me how did I come here? Arey I have seen you... you were the one na who gave me that tissue paper? And you ...why did you run away seeing me? And where is my bag?? I have to set my face.

CD: shut your mouth girl... I will become deaf with your nonstop laugh & questionnaire...Kis tote ko pakad laye ullu ka patto. Aur Ladki tu chup chap beti reh ...ek aur shabd nikla na tho teri moo mein pura ka pura is banduk ki goliya teri through & through nikal jayega...

GK: Oye chup kar chidiya ka gonsnla ... seede seede aapna entertainment shuru karo...mera dimag karab mat kar...

CD: Chup ... hum sab ne tuhje kidnap kiya hai kidnap

GK: (shocked)... tum log aur ... Kidnappers...shakal se tho kisi sade huve comedy show ke actors lagte ho...

CD: Tum ... tum... tum humare mazak uda rahe ho.. yeh hamara uniform hai

GK: Kidnappers ke bhi uniform hoti hai

CD: Haan...in an authoritive voice

GK: Kisne banayi ... head mistress ne kya

CD: nahi...humari CCC ki guidleines hai

*****

MSK: GK maine araha hoon ... tum daro mat...speaks to the screen...

Adi: Siiir... Siiir...

Coming out of his revive MSK: Yes Adi

Adi: mein cheque bandu 500 cr ke liye...

MSK: You can make it but if I sign then Police will put us behind bars for fraud case

Adi: frrraud case

MSK: Mere paas itne paise kaha hai... Sare tho geet ke naam pe hai...woh sign nahi karegi tho bank se paise kaise nikalo ge...

Adi: ohhh... tho phir hum kya kare siiirr ... police ko phone karte hai...

Adi picks his phone & calls 100...

MSK: Nahi ruhko ... marvaoge kya muhje... we can't inform police... they may hurt my GK

Adi : phir kya kare... Sir Idea...I had seen a ad in the newspaper of Akhri Pasta's New High Tech Detective Agency ... they take case through calls & solve it

MSK: You have their number...

Adi: Yes Sir...here it is...

Adi dial's it & handover it to MSK...

MSK opens his mouth to speak but he is stopped by the wacky voice of a man at the other end...

Welcome

To

||| Akhri Pasta's Hightech Detective Agency |||

Kiski janam kundli nikal ne ho

Ya kiski gair samband ki shak ho

Koi gayab hogaye hai ya gayab hona ho

kiska piche karna ho ya chudana ho

Chori, jalasaji, gabana, ya katl ho

Sab mushkil ka ek uttar

||| Akhri Pasta's Hightech Detective Agency |||

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Trust us & you will forget to trust others

I am a joking...

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Maan trying to be patient for his Jaan... As it is the matter of life & death for him

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Age ki jankari Hindi maine jane keliye: 1 dabaye

To continue in English: Press 2

=>2

To know more about us: Press 1

Corporate services: Press 2

Personal Services: Press 3

To repeat the menu: press 9

=>3

Civil crime service: Press 1

Criminal crime service: Press 2

For help in selecting the before menus: Press 3

To repeat the menu: press 9

=>2

In case of theft/burglary/break-in: Press 1

In case of Murder: Press 2

In case of Kidnapping: Press 3

For any other issues: Press 4

To repeat the menu: press 9

=>3

You have selected Kidnapping

Choose the person who has been kidnapped

Self: Press 1

Spouse: Press 2

Sibbli...

=>2

Invalid selection

Free advice: Never select your choice before given a chance..

Thank you for availing the services of

||| Akhri Pasta's Hightech Detective Agency |||

Trust us & you will forget to trust others

I am a joking...

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Maan gets irritated...& instructs

MSK: Adi... get this basic intro done... then I will take it forward...

Adi: Yeees siiir & takes up the phone & puts on the speaker & the same records starts again to boil Maan's anger...

Welcome

To

||| Akhri Pasta's Hightech Detective Agency |||

... Blah...

You have selected Kidnapping

Choose the person who has been kidnapped

Self: Press 1

Spouse: Press 2

Sibblings: Press 3

Friends: Press 4

Others: Press 5

=>2

And then suddenly Adi is shocked & the next moment scared with the glares he was getting from MSK

Adi: Siiirrr Maine galt press nahi kiya...yeh aapne aap start huvi hai...

Aao na gale lagalo na lagi bujha do na O Jaane Ja

Dekho Seene mein kaisi hulchul machi hai O Saajna

pa pa pa..

MSK mock: Thoo kya humare liye free add-on FM service hai ...jo mil rahi hai

Adi: Siiir maine phele try thodi kiya tha...

Dekho Seene mein kaisi hulchul machi hai O Saajna

Maana ki Life bohat busy hai parkabhi kabhi break lo

kitkat kaov kya patha aagle pal tumare liye kya leaye

Kitkat break bantha hai

Adi: Siiir yeh tho commercial break tha ... maine tho darr gaya kahi maine sach mein FM ka button tho press nahi kiya tha...

MSK: Shut up & continue with it Adi...

Adi: Yes Siiirrr..

Thank you for your patience

Precap of your selection:

English=> personal Services =>Criminal=>Kidnapping=>Spouse

And now select the detective category for your case

Local: Press 1

National: Press 2

International: Press 3

Adi: Siiirr Kaunsa choose karunu...

MSK starts thinking...well National & International ke liye paise bhi zyaada lagenge aur advance mange tho nahi de saktha main ab ... waqt bhi lagega une yaha tak ane mein...

Adi: Siiirrr kaha ko gaye...jaldi boliye ...warna yeh call bhi cut ho jayega...

MSK: Local ... press 1

Adi: Please Please please call cut mat hona please please please

=>1

Currently all the local detectives are busy please try after some days

Free Advice: Try calling us again ... you may get a detective available next second...

We solve cases in seconds

Thank you for availing the services of

||| Akhri Pasta's Hightech Detective Agency |||

Trust us & you will forget to trust others

I am a joking...

****

Adi: Siiirrr Meri galti nahi hai...phir se ek baar try karoon

But MSK was lost in his own misery... Seeing him so lost Adi starts to give another try...

<><><> Flashback <><><>

Today Morning

MSK: No means no GK...you are not going alone...

GK: Mr. MSK... If I have decided once means I won't hear mine too... understood or should I make you understand.

MSK: GK pls yaar kuch tho samaj neki koshi karo... you are Mrs. MSK & you want to explore the city all alone in that metro.

GK: Yes Yes ... jane dona jaanu...I am really tired of going with all this security... nothing will happen to me aur waise bhi you very well know how to track my whereabouts too na...

MSK: But...

GK: Chup bilkul chup!!! And & don't act smart ...you are not sending my security behind me without my knowledge like last time ... agar kuch aisa huva na ... aapki kehar nahi.

MSK: Jo hukkum mere akka... par Jaan be careful & yes I know how to keep track of you.

GK: Chalo bye me leaving...sham ko milte hai... till then be busy with your clients... metro here I come.

MSK: Give me a call anytime... I will be at your service.

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Adi: Siirrr Siirrr...

MSK coming out of his thoughts: Yes Adi... what happened to the call?

Adi: Siiir... woh' no detective was available

MSK: What' we wasted so much time on this record'

Adi: Nahi Siir' I tried again ' and found one of them is available & he will be here in a while ... you can brief him everything.

MSK: Is that detective good... how is his track record...

Adi: 100% hai sir...ek bhi case hare nahi hai...sab solve karde the hai...

S: Heeelllooo...

Both turn to the new intruder ... both are shocked to see the person in the cabin who was trying to stabilise himself from falling as his head was spinning... MSK gets some water for him and helps him sit on the couch... Thud...Adi fell with the shock.

M: How can I help you Sir...

S: well ...coughs in between ...I am here to help you son

M: Me...

S: Yes son ... I am the detective you called for

M: But...

S: yes yes I know what will be your next Q... Why am I working in this age... But after my Geeta left me my bad luck started... and even my health started to deteriorate ... I put on weight...I lost my speed with that... and the production house who use to follow all my adventures left me saying the TRP's are less... & my commission which I use to get from the telecast band hogayi ... ab pura din main sirf criminals ko pakadtha rahonga tho ... aapne pet ke liye kya karonga... So had to stop my free service to the people & joined this detective agency for my earnings.

By that time Adi wakes up

Adi: Siiir sir... yeh tho tho tho tho woh woh woh... Adddbhut... Adddhamya Saaahas Ki Paaribhasha Hai...Yee Mit Ti Maaanavta Ki Ek Aaasha Hai ...Ye Srrrushti ki Shhakti ka Waardaan Hain...Ye Avvvtaar Naahin Hai ...Ye Innnsaan Hai ... Yeh ... Yeh... SSShaakktimmmaaan

Yee Attmashhakti Haai ...Duuuniya Baddal Sakkti Haai ...Phhhoolon Mein Dhhhal Saaakti Hai ...Shhholon Si Jjjal Sssakti Hai ...Hooota Hai Jaaab Aaadmi Ko Apppna Gyaaan ...Keeehlaye wo...Shhhaktttimaannn

S: Teek se bolna tho seeklo beta... is tara bolege tho kya samaj ayega sab ko... Yese bolte hai use...

Adbhut, Adhamya Saahas Ki Paribhasha Hai Ye Mit Ti Manavta Ki Ek Aasha Hai

Ye Srushti ki Shakti ka Wardaan Hain Ye Avtaar Nahin Hai Ye Insaan Hai

Shaktimaan Shaktimaan Shaktimaan

Ye Atmashakti Hai Duniya Badal Sakti Hai Phoolon Mein Dhal Sakti Hai

Sholon Si Jal Sakti Hai Hota Hai Jab Aadmi Ko Apna Gyaan Kehlaye wo...Shaktimaan

Shaktimaan ...Shaktimaan ...Shaktimaan ...Shaktimaan

S starts coughing by the time he ends this: Kitne din ho gaye the yeh sun kar... kabhi kabhi muhje youtube mein browse kar ke suna padega ise phele ki mein ise bhool javooo...I feel so energetic after hearing this theme of mine.

MSK: What's going on... are you telling me that you will help us in getting my Geet

S: I am here for that itself son... now let's make a plan & solve it... Now tell me how everything happened ... who has been kidnapped ... from where?

Adi:Uff... mera kya hoga ... ab shuru hoga meri geet ...meri geet ka jap

MSK: Meri Geet ... She wanted to go out alone in metro without guards so morning we had a discussion about the same but as always she won & Meri Geet went all alone after that I came to Office... & when I tried calling her after my first meeting but her mobile was switched off

S: Don't worry when I am here... I will search her soon

MSK: how sir...

S: I have my own communication lines, but don't tell anyone about this if the government gets to know they will encroach my space & will ended with another scam of 5G

MSK: how much time will it take...

S: I take 5-10 mins...

MSK: That will be great

After 10 mins

MSK: Sir...

S: Don't disturb me in between, once my connection breaks I will have to start it from the beginning

MSK: ok but your 10 mins are over...

S: Yes but now with so many other networks obstructing my flow 5 will become 15 sometimes

MSK: where are you GK

MSK: Adi ... you take care of the meetings ... and postpone which ever needs my attention

Adi: Yes Sir...

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GK: Yeh CCC kya hai

CD: Central Criminals Council

GK: kyaaa yesi bhi hoti hai kya

CD: hume yeh regulations sab follow karna padtha hai..aap log ko kabar nahi kitni mushkil hoti hai hume unki requirements puri karna...humari license cancel ho sakthi hai... har saal hume report deni padthi hai humane kithna kaam kiya hai...humare performance ko dekh kar humare territory expand karte hai ... aur tho aur achi locations bhi allot hoti hai...tak ki maal dara party mile...

GK: Par aapko yeh rules aur regulations samjatha kaun hai... aapko dehke kar lagtha nahi ki aap pade like ho

CD: Is liye tho yeh angrez jadne wale rahka hai

GK: Mera bag kaha hai... muhje apni mobile chaiye

CD: Nahi milegi

GK: Kyuuu meri mobile nahi dogi tho maine kise baath karungi...

CD: tum kise se bhi baath nahi karo gi

GK: Maine GK ... kise se bhi baath kiye bagair kaise rehsahkthi hoon.. aur waha MSK bhi tho pareshan ho raha hoga...

CD: hone de ... hume use kya... hume tho sirf paisa chaiye paisa... woh bhi tumare MSK ke se...

GK: kyu loan baki rehgaya tha kya

CD: loan nahi lodging charges ... thuje yaha rahkne ki...

GK: Yeh le muhje yaha rehne ki kya zarrorat hai ... aur maine thodi apne marzi se ayi hoon ... muhje tho aap log ne yaha leke aye ho ... ohh teri ...maine yaha kaise ayi

*****

<><><> Flashback <><><>

In the Metro

GK: Uff... finally I could grab a seat... babaji kitni beed hai yaha... sans lena muskil kardiya hai... how am I supposed to spend some quality time with my friend...

Metro stops at a station & when the door was about to close a guy enters in & bump into GK spilling water on her.

Guy: Sorry ...I am so sorry... Take this tissue...

GK: It's ok...

Guy: let's use the washroom

GK: Uff... washroom aur yaha ...we are in ...a...mee...ttrooo naa.a...& she falls uncousious

<><><>Flashback ends<><><>

C1: I suggest you reduce your weight... It was quite a difficult job to get you here...

GK mouth opens as big O...: You are not fit enough... You know my MSK carried me all along the camp site last time...

C1: Shhh... Don't talk... my boss will get angry

GK: par mein bore ho rahi hoon... mera bag tho dona

C2: tho teri bag mein entertainment hai kya

GK: time pass karne ka samgri tho hai

C2: par mobile...

GK: haan haan... mallom hai nahi dogi

C2 => C3: bag de iska par mobile nikal de

C3: maine phele he nikal diya hai guru.. boss ne mangi thi na to call MSK

GK: Aap ko sharma nahi athi ladies bag ko haath lagte huve... chi ... kaisa rules aur regulations banathe ho aap log...

C1: There is no rule in our Guidlines that we can't touch any ladies bag

GK: but why isn't there, added it in this time budget...

C1: What budget we don't have anything like that. This is in't the Government where we increase the value by 4 bucks all of a sudden & then decrease it by 1 cent to eyewash the people. Once a rule is made there can't be any deviation or reservation.

GK: Ok... give me your group kya naam tha... haan CCC ka address I will personally sit & draft all my suggestions & complaints in it.

C1: Get this thing straight lady... It isn't any movie where the hero writes letter after letter to get an approval from the government to build a post office in his village. These are top secret councils we can't be just letting everyone know about these things.

GK: uff ek cheez keliye itni mehnat... mera sar chakara raha hai... uff mera bag tho do phele...

C3 gets GK's bag

Everyone looks into that to know what is there in it to time pass... GK takes out her mirror n starts setting her hair then takes out all her makeup accessories to correct herself as she had woken up just now... ie after her sedition sleep... while everyone around her presume her to be another mad of the makeup and leaves from there.

Once she gets ready... she takes out the camera and starts clicking the pictures and uploads it in Facebook and with the default setting of tagging all her friends in the pictures.

****

In the Front Office of KC:

Pinky, receptionist as usual munching her chips & replying to the calls with the same as per MSK orders that MSK is not available & would revert back to you at the earliest... Tired she opens the facebook

Pinky: which place is this... It has such a beautiful backdrop.

P to Adi: this weekend yaha chalte haina

Adi: phirse karcha ... kaha...

P: yeh dekho na GK ma'am ne pictures add kiya hai FB Maine...woh bhi abhi

A: really ... dekhavo muhje... oh yes ... I have to inform Sir... aur late hogaye tho woh devdas banjayenge..

P: kyu undono ka mein fight huvi hai kya

A: bad mein bolunga... bye

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Adi comes running into the MSK cabin (i.e. without knocking) making a huge sound & breaking the revive of Shaktimaan & thereby receiving a deadly glare from MSK

MSK: Adi why are running around like this can't you see he is trying to locate GK... ab inka dyaan bang kar diya...

Adi: Siiir ... aap tho yese keh rahe hai ki Menak ne Vishwamitr ki tapasya bang kardiya waise mein Shaktimaan ka kar diya he he he he he he

MSK: shut up Adi... Sir aap ko kuch pata chala kaha hai meri GK

S: Son I was so close to...

MSK: to find my GK location...

S: Let me complete it son ... I was so close to get a glimpse of my Geeta

MSK: What... you are searching your Geeta

S: Relax son I was searching everywhere but when I reached the place where Geeta is living I couldnot stop my heart to have atleast a look at her

MSK: Sir just find my GK's location...

Adi: Siiir you have to see this first...

MSK: Adi I am busy ... come afterwards

Adi: This is also important just open your facebook.

MSK: Adi have you gone mad... here I am going mad for not able to find my GK & you want me to login into FB & what should I do there ... update my status... Meri Biwi... Kho Gayi...

Adi: sir please check it once ... you will be proud of me

MSK: Ok get my laptop

After waiting for some seconds... which felt like decades to MSK, his wall opened to be greeted by security question update... after skipping it... he could see lovely wife's pictures in different angles... uploaded just 30 mins before...

MSK: she must have escaped from kidnappers...he picks up his phone and tries GK's number but it came as switched off

Adi: Sir... It seems like a jungle... Do you know which one this is

MSK: No Adi... I have no idea about this place

Adi: how come you don't know this... you are supposed to be well versed in all jungles...

MSK: oh really... but these are trees not buildings with signboards so that I can identify that easily

Adi: But putting signboards are compulsory

MSK: I wish there was a law for putting up the signboards in jungles too... neither I would get lost nor it would be difficult to track GK

S: I may be able to help you in this... it looks like the G1A forest ... I can locate the exact location too...

MSK: that's great... then what are we waiting for ... let's get her

Adi: Sir... She isn't lost in a trip that you can just go and pick her up. We need a plan

MSK: don't tell me you have one brilliant plan

Adi: actually I do Sir... we can all go there in disguise ... just like in Amar Akbar Anthony film climax... & can rescue Ma'am

MSK: let me get this straight... you think we three will go there in disguise and dance in front of those bandars ... and we will sing Maan Shakthimaan Adi the superman...

Adi: he he he he sir main superman...

MSK: shut up Adi...

S: why are you guys even thinking... we can just go & nab them... then hand them over to Police... let's move in our own transportation and meet at G1A forest... Saying so he zooms out...

MSK: Adi where are you going

Adi: to catch metro whose last stop is near our destination?

MSK: why are you going to catch a metro ... you can accompany me in car

Adi: but S told to use own transportation

MSK: shut up and come with me.

G1A forest

Adi: Sir how are we going to find where is there hideout

MSK: Let's check with the forest inspector here

Adi: Why haven't you been here before Sir

MSK: I always thought I should but never got a chance to... you find where the inspector is

Adi: Yes sir... but don't you think we should wait till the kidnappers call back

MSK: I have forwarded all my calls to Office landline so if he tries again then Pinky will just ask them to give their number & tell them that I will call back ... so in no situation we can get there call connected to me.

Adi: But why you don't want to talk to them

MSK: To buy some more time... they will do some or the other mistake

Adi: Yes Sir ... It has to work... Kidnap film mein yesa hi huva tha

MSK: what... ok forget it... but they have not called back yet as I had specifically instructed Pinky to tell me if she gets a call from GK's mobile

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Shrill shrill...

C1: run run run police police... we have 10 mins by that time we need to escape

GK: woh phoh phoh ... yeh tho meri MSK ki siren hai...

Hearing her words everyone stopped...

CD: police lekhe agaya kya... C1 check cameras...

GK: arey nahi ... meri MSK ke gadi mein siren lagi hai... to make everyone alert

C1: No only cars are there...

GK: nothing is mission impossible for my MSK... show her thumb like a kid who won the toffee from her elder sibling. He found me...

Outside:

3 Mercedes black car comes to a halt... making everyone know of their presence... the left door opens... a man in formals with black glasses comes out of the middle car while his security guards from the other cars cover him and after a while right door flung open.

MSK: oye gadho... you are guards of me not of Adi...you were supposed to open the door for me...now wait for me here itself...

MSK makes an entry in full attitude oozing out in his walk... Here GK sensing MSK's presence runs towards a direction like iron pulled towards the magnet.

C2: C1 rok ise kahi baag rahi hai... par ise darwaza kis taraf hai kaise pata chala

But before anyone could react GK was in her MSK's arms

GK: what took you so much time... missed you

MSK: sorry... I was so lost in your pics ki I forgot what was happening around.

GK: oh... you forgot to check my pics and were lost ki you didn't know what's happening around.

MSK bites his tongue getting caught in his lie...

GK: enough of your lies...

MSK: ok ab bache ki jaan loge kya ...chalo chalte hai

CD: Rukho... yaha atho gaye aapne marzi se par humare ijazat ke bina bhaar nahi ja pavoge

GK: aapke bodyguard's kaha hai

MSK: woh car ke pass

GK: kyu

MSK: agar koi phirse tyre chori ke legaye tho hum wapis kaise jayenge... yahi reh jani hai Adam aur Eve banke

GK: tho ab aapko fight karke mujhe lejana padega

MSK: mujhe fight karna nahi atha

GK: tho yeh dole shole aur yeh tai chai kisske liye hai

MSK: woh tho anger management ke liye hai... ab mein insaano pe aapna gussa nahi nikal saktha na...

GK: ab humara kya hoga ... ok main bolti hoon kaise karthey hai

MSK: meri hote huve tum fight karo acha nahi lagega

GK: woh ho ... main sirf bolungi karna tho aapko hi padega... sab log meri baath teek se suno ... MSK ke saath sab one on one fight karenge... no guns no other weapons... jab tak yeh bandar log katam nahi hote tab tak yeh fight chaltha rahega...

CD: par yeh tho nainsaafi huvi na... hum char aur yeh 1 ... waise hum tumare baath kyu manye

GK: paise chaiye... tho meri kehna mana padega...

CD: na tumara na humara... hum in 2 loandonko haraenge aur yeh hum 4 ko

MSK: par mein akhela in 4 ko marunga... tum meri biwi ho

Adi: sir sir main bhi fight karunga ... GK meri...

MSK gives his famous angry glare

Adi: Bbbehan sir

MSK: nahi sirf main

GK: teek hai... aapaas mein nahi ladthe... phele MSK fight karenge uske baad Adi...

MSK & Adi: done

MSK: Maine insab ko hara dunga tho... tho Adi ka number hi nahi ayega

GK: 30 mins hai fight ke liye ready hojavo

MSK: GK ab bolo kaise fight karni hai

GK: aapne dono hatho se ek saath kan ke neech marna aur uske baad sar pe marna jaise nailing on their head...ise 3 baar repeat karna ok ...

MSK: teek hai... par kuch familer lagthi hai

GK: haan na woh Rowdy Rathore mein haina chintha tha chitha chitha chintha tha ... bus vahi karni hai bus un bandaro ka sar hai bech mein... waise saath mein aapna sar bhi hilana tab perfect hoga...

Adi: itna sab kuch main nahi kar saktha par end mein fullstop tho dal saktha hoon na...

Adi: sir aap yeh sab karna uske baad meri pass bejna mein unke pichwade pe lat marunga

MSK: Done...

Round 1: MSK vs C3

Both step inside the ring... and start circling analysing how to begin... finally C3 raise to punch MSK but when he was about a mere an inch away... he freezes there and taking advantage of this MSK starts beat him exactly how GK had mentioned before and after 3 times C1 just crumbles down...

Round 2 & 3 went the same way but one thing none understood is after some time how did the Chela's have freezed to their place.

CD: Is he playing statue statue with my chela's... I should be careful... before he say's it I will freeze him... thinking so he enters the ring...

CD: Freeze... Statue...

MSK: What... what did you say?

CD: This is cheating... you made my chela's freeze but now you are not following that...

Before he could think what was happening MSK beats him up & falls down...

Adi: Sir this is cheating... you didn't let me beat anyone... they all have fallen down before I could kick them...

GK: Kyu tension le rahe ho Adi sir... jab yeh log utt jayenge na tab mar lena...chalo phele hum yaha se bhaag chalet hai...

MSK: par phele ek insaan ka shukriya karni hogi... unone hi tho in logo ko freeze kar diya tak ki main mar sakhu aur fight jeet javu

GK & Adi: Kisne...

MSK points out to an old person sitting on a chair, who was not noticed by anyone till now. GK rubs her eyes twice to believe who was there infront of her was real or a dream... then screams

GK: Shaktimaan... mera phela superhero... MSK yeh kaha mile aapko... Mein aapki bohat badi fan hoo... mein na humesha school se bhaag kar athi thi to watch the episodes... mein ne na ek bhi episode nahi miss kiya... aur tho aur repeat telecast bhi miss nahi karti thi... MSK meri friend kho lo aur yeh moments ko golden moments bana do...

MSK: tumari friend... tum hi samalo... baad mein tum complain karogi... isme light nahi hai... isme shake huva hai... isme angle sahi nahi hai... in sab se tho acha hai tum hi setup karo aur photo shoot karlo...

GK: aap mere saath photo shoot karoge na

S: Mera photo shoot... kyu nahi aapne purane fans ke saath tho offcourse yes... avo beta... tume yaha koi taklef tho nahi huvi haina...

GK: kiski majal hai GK ko taklef de...

MSK: tab tak mein in Bandar ko unki jaga puchatha hoon... par sabut doond na padega...

GK: arey koi CCC naam ka council hai waha se inka hi nahi sab criminals ka record milega... the end of all the criminals.

MSK: wah meri GK...

Outside...

MSK: Police kab tak yaha honge...

Guard: 5 mins sir...

MSK: ok.

G: Siir ek problem hogayi hai

MSK: what now...

G: All tyres of the cars have flattened... they had put nails on the way...

MSK: but that one tyre looks fine... use the Stepney from all the cars to fix one car & get the remaining tyres fixed.

G: yes sir...

Guards leave to fix the tyres, after photo shoot GK comes out searching MSK, who will be looking around the place...

GK: Oh teri ... phir se chori hogayi kya sab tyres

MSK: no just puncture... where is Shaktimaan Sir & Adi..

GK: both left... I thanked Shaktimaan again and Adi wished for a ride with him.

MSK: hope Adi survives the ride...

GK: why did you say that...

MSK: I meant he might become ill after super speed ride.

GK: Ok... I got so many pictures... can we stay here for more time... I want to capture more moments in my Friend aka Camera

MSK: yes we have time till our cars are back... let's go for a walk around...If you want we can put up a tent too & stay for the night...

GK: really... I can get night pictures of this place too... she pecks him

MSK: Raho aapni pictures ki duniya mein... sare romance ka kachra kar diya...

GK: oh... Poor baby...gussa hogaye... chalo aaj aapki sunti hoon...

MSK: tumara ya mera... woh farak nahi padtha... bus Meri Biwi mil gayi bus...

MSK: And from now on you are not allowed go alone anywhere...

GK: tho aap meri hutch dog banogi...

MSK: nahi tum

GK: aap

MSK: tum...

& there tu tu mein mein continues...
*****
THE END
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Fifth entry: Oh Girl! You Are Mine!!

One night at KM…..

Dadi is waiting for Maan…aaj Maan thoda late ho gaya…..

Maan is surprised to see Dadi still awake….

" Dadi, aap abhi bhi jaag rahe hain?"

" kya karein? Maan Singh Khurana ka darshan milna toh babaji ka darshan se bhi mushkil hotha hai"

Maan smiles and comes and sits near Dadi….

"Dadima, kya baat hai?"

" aapse kya baat kar sakthe hain hum? Aap toh business ke alawa kuch sochthe hi nahi"

"please Dadima, aap phir se shadhi ki baat shuru mat kijiye"

" ab toh hum bhi woh baat ko bhool gaye hai"

Maan is surprised….

Ye laise ho saktha?...ye zaroor Dadi ka agla plan hi lagtha hai, reverse psychology? Who bhi Maan singn Khurana ko?

" kya soch rahe hai bete?"

" kuch nahi Dadi, toh aap kya baat kar rahe the?"

" hum ek naya project ke barein mein soch rahe the"

" kaisa project?"

" ye toh aapke zindagi ka bahut badiya project hoga, it happens once in a lifetime, you know?"

" aaise kaunsa project hai?"

" ye project toh aapki zindagi badal dega"

" hummare " Green Valley" project se bhi badiya?"

Maan is very keen to know about it…..

Waise Dadi bhi kC ki founder members mein ek haina?

She is still active in KC……

" haan bete, ye aapka sabse badiya project hoga"

" then tell me more Dadima"

" ye toh aapko kal iss project ke creative head hi batha sakthe"

" what? Ye hummara project hai toh hummare curatives se discuss karna padega haina? Mein Adi ko inform kartha hoon"

" hare, itne bhi kya jaldhi hai, pehle aap pasand kijiye"

" kya?"

" Maan bete, ye toh joint venture hai"

"lekhin hum joint ventures nahi karthe"

" wahi toh, ab aapko solo projects kea age bhi sochna chahiye"

" kaunse company ke saath joint venture hoga?"

" woh toh hum badh mein bathayenge, pehle aap unnkke representative ko kal milliye, phir hum aage ka plan bathayenge"

" kya?"

" hare, project ka plan"

Maan still has some doubts in his mind….he decides to clear it himself….

He can't trust this old lady, MSK ka Dadi haina?

"toh Dadima, kal mujhe kissi milna hoga?"

"woh toh hum bhi nahi jaathe"

"kya"

"hummra matlab hai, ab woh apne kaunse representative ko bhejenge? Ye toh hum kaise jaan sakthe? Haina? Who aapko kal hotel Le Meridien mein afternoon 1'o clock millenge"

" Hotel mein kyun? Hum ussko KC bhulathe hai"

" par humne toh unko Hotel mein milne ko kehdiya, abs are arrangements ho gaye toh aap unko Hotel mein hi millijiye"

"teek hai Dadi"

" Maan bete, kal, teek ek bajhe, bhooliyega mat"

"ji Dadi, gud night"

Next day….

Geet waits for her client at the Hotel…..

She looks into the details of the client….

" Maan? Ye kaissa naam hai? purane zamaane ka naam lagtha, haina babaji? Toh naaam ko 2/10, ye teek hoga"

Geet ko apne boss ka chehra yaad aatha….

" itna kyun dethi ho? Kam karo"

"lekhin meinne do hi toh diya hai"

"aur kam karo"

"teek hai. 1/10, ye chalega haina?"

Geet turns back and finds him missing…..ye Geet ka vaham tha…..

"babaji, yahan bhi aake mujhe daratha hai, sadoo Sharma"

Maan comes and looks for his table….

Maan is surprised to see some girl waiting for him, this is ridiculous, itna important project ko ye kaise handle karegi? Maan expected some one worthy of KC and its reputation…..what's this silly girl got to do with KC? Dadi ke liye toh isse milna hi padega…..

" Maan Singh Khurana"

"halo"

Geet gets up to greet him and also offers a hand for handshake….

Maan ignores it and sits….

"ye kaisa manners hai? koi bhi ladhki issko bardaast nahi kar sakthi…..0/10"

Sharmaji is happy…

"very good, aaise hi score karna chahiye, jaldhi hi samaj gayi"

Ye Sharma ji bar bar wrong time pe kyun entry dethe?

"aap pehle jaayiye"

"what? Tumne kuch kaha?"

"nahi, aapko nahi"

Geet takes a look at him…..from top to bottom….

"kya dekh rahi ho?"

"handsome and good looking toh hai, 10/10"

Geet smiles at him….

Maan responds with his trademark angry look….

"ye kaisa look hai? 10-5"

Agla kya? Geet looks into the list….haan dressing sense…ye bahut important hai….

Maan has come in his office attire…..

" ye bhi koi dress hotha hai kya? ladhki ke saath bahar jaane ka hai toh wear something cool, haina babaji? Toh 2/10….nahi 1/10"

"kade kade aaise kya dekh rahi ho? Pehle kissi mard ko dekha nahi hai kya? Beito"

Geet sits and continues her work….

"toh kaam ki baat karein"

"hare naam bhi nahi poocha? Drinks bhi nahi order kiya? Aur seedha kaam? Kaisa kaam?"

Social ethics – 0/10

"ye kaisa project hai? tummare paas koi plan hai?"

Geet looks into her bag…….

"hare ye pamphlet kahan hai?"

"kya doondh rahi ho?"

"sorry, lagtha hai mein pamphlet ko ghar pe choadke aagayi"

Maan gets angry….how irresponsible? Najaane kaise namoonon ko kaam pe rakthe hai ye log? Inkke saath mein kabhi kaam nahi kar saktha, kaas kar iss bewakoof ladhki ke saath toh kbhi nahi….

"what? Bhool gayi? Toh yahan kyun aayi ho? Mera waqt barbad karne?"

"itna gussa? Pleasant nature ? issko toh isska matlab hi maloom nahi hoga! 0/10"

Waiter comes….

"would you like to order something m'am?"

Maan grabs the menu….

"number 30"

Waiter is waiting for further order….do log haina?

Geet aur intrezaar nahi kar sakthi….

Sge snatches the menu card from Maan and orders for herself….

Next qualification……dance…..

"aap salsa toh jaanthe honge? Haina? Hip hop? Belly dance?"

Geet stops for a second and thinks of Maan doing a belly dance…..

She looks at his waist and starts laughing….

"aap belly dance kaise kar sakhte?"

Maan just keeps staring and staring…..

Usska bhi mahadev ki tarah theesra aankh hotha toh Geet jal jaathi….

"no sense of humour? Phir toh koi bhi ladhki inkke paas bhi nahi aayegi, haina babaji….

Sense of humour –ye bhi zero"

:tummare company kitne saal se iss field mein hai?"

Geet blinks….

"experience? Koi toh experience hoga? Aapne ab tak litne projects kiya hai?"

"woh, hoga koi do then saal ki experience "

"kya? Toh aaplog amateurs ho?"

"yahan toh har koi amateur hi hotha hai, koi bhi experienced persons ko pasand nahi karthe"

"toh kitne projects kiya hai?"

" ye toh hummara 100th project hai"

"kya? Then saal mein 100 projects? "

"lagtha hai bahut chote mote kaam karthe hai"

"nahi nahi humne sheher ki bade bade ghar ka projects bhi kiya hai"

"najaane kahan se Dadi ko aaise log milhte?"

"ab aakhri qualification – IQ, ye toh shuru se hi ulta seedha sawaal kartha rehtha, IQ bhi bahut kam? 2/10"

"tum har waqt kya likhthe rehthi ho?"

"woh… aapke ratimgs"

"kya? Teri itni himmat? Maan Singh Khurana ko rate karthi ho?"

"yahi toh mera kaam hai"

Geet looks into his eyes…Maan is mersmerised by her innocent eyes….

Maneet eyelock…..Geet hears the BG…mahiii….

Maan ke dimag mein ganti bhajtha……aur ek Ghana bhi…."Oh Girl! U R Mine!!"…..his dil goes ummm…ummm……"Oh Girl! U R Mine!!"

Maan decides to leave that place immediately…

"ye mujhe kya ho raha hai? ye ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardhegi"

Maan gets angry…….

"tum aur teri bakwaas project, mujhe toh yahan aana hi nahi chahiye tha, Dadimaaa"

Maan ka gussa bahut badh jaatha aur Maan wahan se chale jaatha…..

"hare suno, tera score toh jaankke jao, babaji ab mein kya karoon? Panchi toh haath se udgayi, sharmaji ko kya jawab doon?"

Just then the waiter comes…

"m'am, aapka bill"

"mera bill?"

"haan m'am, 1350 rupees only"

"kya? 1350 rupees only? Oye kuthe kamine, ullu ke patte, sahi waqt pe bhaag gaya sala"

"m'am?"

Dadi comes in to check them….

She just saw Maan getting out…

"ye lo mera paisa, 675, woh 420 toh bhaag gaya"

"bakhi paise diye bina aap nahi jaa sakhte"

"kya?"

"waiter, paise humdedenge"

"ji ma'am?

Waiter leaves….

"m'am, aap?"

"hum toh uss 420 ke Dadima hai"

"kya? Dadi? Mein toh bas aawein kehdhi"

"it's OK Ms……."

"Geet, Geet Handa from "Match makers" "

"toh aaplog maachis banathe hai?"

"nahi nahi, aapne suna nahi Matches made in heaven, woh wala matches, meinne kitne bar Sahrmaji se kaha tha, iss faltu naam ko badalthe hai, par woh maanthe hi nahi"

"toh aap Heaven mein kaam karthe hai?"

Geet laughs at Dadi's joke…..

"aap unkke Dadi kaise?"

"toh aap ko Mr.sharma ne bheja?"

"haan, aap unkko jaanthe hai?"

"hum toh aap ka hi intrezaar kar arhe the"

"aapki shadhi? Koi problem nahi, mere paas dadajis ka profiles bhi hai"

"you naughty girl, I mean Maan ki shadhi"

"par woh toh bhaag gaye, sorry, chale gaye"

"koi baat nahi, woh thoda jaldhi mein hai, hummare Maan ke liye koi achchi ladhki miljaayegi, haina?"

"ussja koi umeed nahi hai"

"kyun bete?"

"aapke pothe ka score card dekhiye, 12/100"

"very good"

"kya?"

"humme laga Maan single digit mein score karenge, toh isska matlab humme bahut jaldh bahu mil jaayegi"

"haan, agar aapke pothe hummare naye crash course join karthe toh"

"kya? "

"ye dekhiye, 'Getting ready for your first date'"

"dating?"

"haan, aajkal ke ladhkiyan shadhi ke pehle kam se kam dus bees ladhkon ko date karthe, they need a lot of variety to choose , sandal ho ya shadhi"

"that's true, ye toh bahut achcha business lagtha?"

"haan, ab toh shadhi ka business hi achcha chaltha hai"

" toh ye kaisa course hai?"

"bas ek din ka course hai, ye lijiye details, aap unkko Monday hummare office bhejdijiye"

"no no no, that's not possible"

"kyun? Bahut mehenga lagtha? Hum aapko 12% discount denge, aapke pothe ne 12 marks jo score kiya haina?"

Dadi laughs…

"that's not the problem, problem toh Maan hai"

"mujhe pehle hi patha tha, jahan woh honge problem toh hoga hi"

"hummara matlab hai, Maan wahan nahi aayenge, ek kaam karthe hai, aap Monday hummara office chale aayiye, Khurana Constructions, ye lijiye hummra card"

"lekhin m'am, hum personnel classes nahi karthe"

"I'll pay you double"

"lekhin m'am"

"aap Mr.Sharma ko call kijiye, I'll speak to him"

Dadi convinces Mr.Sharma and asks Geet to come to KC on Monday….

It's Monday……Geet comes to KC….

Maan is very busy…..

Geet tries very hard to meet him…..she keeps running after him….

"pehle inkke naam ko badalna padega, Maan Singh? "

KC mein har koi Maan ka naam hi lethe hai….

"Mr.Maan Singh Khurana aagaye hai kya?"

"ye Maan Singh Khurana ka office hai"

"Maan sir aagaye"

"Maan sir meeting mein hai"

Geet ko bhi ye naam sunthe hi dil kush ho jaatha….

"Maan Singh Khurana! Ye bhi achcha hi hai,haina babaji? woh bhi jab Maan kudh kehthe hai, MSK aaisa hai, MSK waisa hai"

Geet ka achcha timepass hotha, she keeps drooling….

Maan ka meeting katam hotha….

Geet waits for him….when Maan comes out of the meeting hall she runs towards him….

She barges into him….loses her balance and falls….

Maan holds her….Maneet eyelock….Maan ka dil goes…

"Oh Girl! U R mine!!"

Dadi comes…..

"toh Geet, aap aagaye? Very good"

Maan gets back to his senses…

"tum yahan kya kar arhi ho? Ye mera office hai, get out, security"

"Maan bete, Geet ko humne hire kiya hai"

"par ye mera office hai, ye yahan ek pal bhi nahi reh sakthi"

"kya? Aapka office? Maan bete hum abhi bhi zionda hai"

"toh teek hai, mein chaltha hoon"

Adi comes…..

"Maan sir, Mr.Khanna aaj hi aarahe hai"

"kya? Par meeting toh kal haina?"

"kal unnke wife ki b'day hai, unkko abhi abhi yaad aaya hai, toh unhone meeting prepone kardhi"

"ye log shadhi karkke mera dimag karab karthe hai"

Adi laughs…ha ha ha ha ha…..

Maan stares him….

"Adi, presentation tayaar haina? Sasha ko bhulao"

"sir, Sasha is on leave, aaj ussko ladhkewale dekhne aarahe hai"

"toh Tasha ko bhulao"

"sorry sir, aaj usski bhai ki shadhi hai"

"ye KC hai ya koi matrimonial office?"

"kya? Toh aap hummare rival hai? hummare naye program ko copy karna chahthe hai, ye Sharma ji ka exclusive copy right hai"

"tum abhi tak nahi gayi?"

"Maan bete Geet kahin nahi jayenge, aayiye Geet bete hum apne cabin jaathe hai"

Maan looks worried…Geet feels bad…..

"m'am, mein madat karoon?"

"sure, lekhin pehle Maan apne problems katam toh karein"

"woh mein bhi designing kar sakthi hoon"

Maan hears this and his dil goes……….

"Oh Gir! U R mine"

Maan Geet ke haath pakadke andar lekhe jaatha….

"toh shuru karo"

"kya?"

"apna kaam, tummare paas abhi bhi ek ganta hai,Adi"

Adi comes running….

"Adi will help you"

"yes sir"

Geet takes a look at the presentation and makes a few changes…

She is ready…Mr.Khanna comes and Geet does a wonderful job……

Mr.Khanna is very much impressed….

"Mr.Maan, aapke naya partner ne toh kamaal kardhi, thie revised plan is just mind blowing"

Maan is also happy…

He turns back, smikes(?) and congratulates her….

"good job"

"ye toh hasthe bhi hai"

Dadi calls Geet…

"ma'm aapne bhulaya?"

"ab Maan thoda free hai, aap apna kaam shuru kar sakthe hai, all the best"

Geet knocks…

"come in"

"kya aapke paas mere liye 5 min hai?"

Man's heart goes…hmm hmmm..

"Oh Girl! U R mine!!"

"paanch min kya? Meri puri zindagi tummra hi hai"

"sir….siiirrr"

Maan hosh mein aatha…..

"5 min? OK, your time starts now"

Maan looks at his watch….

"kya? Toh mein bhi aapko aapke basha mein hi samjaathi hoon, pehle aap uttiye"

"what?"

Geet drags him off his seat and goes and takes his place….

"ab samjo mein MSK hoon, maano aapko milne ek sundar ladhki aathi hai, samjo aap ek sundar ladhki ho"

"tumne MSK ko ladhki kaha?"

"hare, sundar ladhki toh hi kaha tha, you must be proud"

Maan stares……

"aaise nahi, thoda hasso, aaise"

Geet shows him how to smile….

Geet comes forward to receive him and takes him to the chair…..

She pulls the chair for him…..

"take your seat, young lady"

Maan couldn't tolerate….

"kya dekh rahe ho? beito?"

Maan sits on the chair…..Geet goes to her seat…..

Geet keeps smiling….

"your sweet name please, gorgeous"

"tum samajthe kya apne aapko?"

"MR. Maan singh Khurana"

"kya?"

"mujhe disturb mat karo"

"mein distub kartha hoon?"

"would you like some coffee?"

Geet calls the boy and orders coffee….

"tummare paanch min katam ho gaye"

"aap kabhi nahi sudhrenge"

Geet tries to leave ….

Maan catches hold of her hand…

"kahan jaa rahi ho? ab MSK ka style bhi dekhkke jao"

He pulls her closer, hold her against the wall and locks her in his arms….

Maneet eyeloch….

"Oh Girl! U R mine!!"

Maan ka dil phir ghane laga…….

Maan is puzzled…… why the hell he is hearing such nonsense?…..

He loosens his hold and releases her….Geet runs away….

Mr.Khanna ka deal pakki ho gayi…..Maan arranges a party for Mr.Khanna that evening…..

Dadi invites Geet to the party….

At the party……

Maan keeps gazing Geet…she couldn't escape his killer looks…..

Mr.Khanna's CEO Rahul asks Geet for a dance…..

Geet accepts…..

Maan couldn't bear the sight of Geet holding someone else……

Maan snatches her hand from Rahul…..

"Geet, tum meri ho, sirf meri"

Maan starts singing…."Oh Girl! U R Mine"

Maneet passionate dance……

Dadi is very happy that finally she succeeded in her mission…..

"toh Geet, Ab Maan ka score kya hai?"

"200/100"

"toh deal pakki"

"haan pakki"

Geet sharmathi…..

Maan is still mesmerized……

"Oh Girl! U R mine"……………….

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sixth entry: JANGAL MEIN MANGAL

Maan's Guest house…situated inside a dense forest……

Maan is all alone here, totally on his own in the company of wild animals…..

This is Maan's favourite holiday spot….whenever he gets a break from business he heads to the forest……far from the mad rush of the city's concrete jungle….

It's only noon and Maan is already drinking……normally he drinks only at bedtime…..

But this time everything is different.

It's the worst vacation ever….he had to spend a whole three days with this girl…Geet Handa….

The name itself makes him dizzy….his mind is fully occupied by this Geet Handa….

He is just trying to douse the fire inside him set by her with alcohol…..

Poor Maan, doesn't he know alcohol is highly inflammable ?

Who is this Geet Handa and how on earth Maan met her in this jungle……

Koi jungle ki rani hai kya? Nahi hummari apni Hoshiarpur express hi hai……

Now back to the mulakaat……..

Maan is cutting wood in the forest as usual…..

He hears some noise and it's not the familiar sound of the forest……

It is different….Maan moves in the direction of the noise & he gets closer & closer…..

Some girl is running towards him……before he could realize what's happening she crashes on him…..

"mujhe bachao…..mujhe bachao…"

Maan pushes her aside and finds some goons chasing her.

He punches one on the face & he falls down unconscious.

The others run away seeing Maan in action.

Maan gets back to his work, collecting wood.

That girl follows him……

"mujhe ghar jaana hai"

She keeps on chanting this…….

Maan is least bothered. He loads the wood in the jeep.

That girl has already got in. Maan stares. She doesn't care.

"mujhe ghar jaana hai"

Maan drives back to his Guest house.

"ye mujhe kahan lekhe aaye ho?"

No response from Maan.

He takes the wood inside and never returns.

Poor girl! She just waits there for over an hour. It's getting darker and darker.

She is scared hearing the howling of the wolves.

It also starts to drizzle. Now she has to get in.

She peeps in with a lot of caution.

Maan is sitting in front of the fire place with his black coffee…..

That girl comes near….

"mujhe ghar jaana hai"

Maan takes a sip and looks at her….

She is looking tired and scared…..

He offers her coffee. She refuses it and starts repeating,

"mujhe jaana hai"

Maan opens his lappy & works for a while…..

That girl gets angry…she just waits there hoping that he would take her home after finishing his job which he won't…..

Maan closes his lappy and the girl gets ready to go home….

She is all smiles….but Maan starts walking in….

She keeps following him…..

He enters the kitchen, makes some sandwiches, has one and serves her one which she won't touch….

She keeps standing looking at him in wonder, how the hell should I tell him?

Just as she keeps thinking of her next move he had gone to his room….

As soon as he leaves that girl grabs the sandwich and bites in….

She is very hungry…after that she goes looking for him…..

She finds him inside a room….she looks thru the door opening….

He is still awake…maybe she could talk to him now….

He is getting his drinks ready….

She just enters……

"mujhe abji ghar lekhe jao"

Maan doesn't like someone entering his private space that too at this time….

"bahar jao"

That girl won't listen……

"mujhe yahan nahi rehna"

Maan has lost his temper by now….

He catches hold of her hand, takes her to the window and opens it….

It's pouring out there….

"tumme abhi jaana hai? toh jao, meinne kahan rokha?"

She now understands that it's not wise to leave this place now…..

"mujhe neendh aarahi hai"

He takes her to the nearby room and locks her in….

She knocks the door for some time and gives up….

As she was tired after a very bad day of running in the jungle she falls asleep.

Next morning Maan sprinkles water to wake her….

Geet wakes up…..she looks at him and blinks…..

She slowly recalls yesterday……

"chalo"

She quickly follows him…..

He is taking her back to the town.

She tries to say something….he stares and she keeps quiet.

He stops at the check post, goes and speaks with the guard.

The guard says something bad, she could find it from his expressions.

He comes back and starts driving back to the Guest house.

"hum wapas kyun jaa rahe hai?"

Bang comes the reply……

"kyunki tum meri mehmaan haina? Ek din mein jaane kaise de saktha?

Do din aur rukh jao"

On hearing this she gets mad….she tries to stop the jeep, Maan looses control and hits a tree.

Now the only mode of transport is also ruined. Maan finds that it's impossible to fix it now.

Mr. Gurmeet Choudhary !!!
He is really furious…however harder he tries to keep himself cool he can't, b'coz of her foolish acts.

"tujhe marna hai? toh teek hai, par mujhe jeena hai"

So saying he leaves her alone there and starts walking back thru the woods.

She thinks for a minute and starts following him.

"kya hua?", she asks politely.

This time he has the courtesy to reply, he tells her about last nights floods and the washing away of the only bridge connecting the town. It will take a couple of days to repair. So she has to stay here till then.

He just moves so fast that she is left behind and had to catch up running….

Suddenly she starts screaming….

"bachao…bachao…"

Have the goons found them again?

Maan turns back and she comes and hugs him tight, he looks at her, she keeps shouting with her eyes closed.

He holds her just to assure that she is safe as long as she is with him.

It is just a wild boar(?) chasing its prey. It has passed them.

"aankhen kolo, it's gone"

She slowly opens her eyes and looks into his eyes. He couldn't face her eye to eye and he turns away.

Now he slows down so that she won't get lost. She starts following him very close, almost touching him.

Generally he hates women, typical MSK.

This is the first time he has felt a girl so close, drowning in her fragrance. It's a new experience for him, the one he had successfully avoided all these years. He feels that something is wrong, this should not happen, this is not good. He turns back and shouts….

"mujhse dhoor raho, just stay away"

She stops and follows him at a safe distance.

Back at the house……

Now that she has to stay with him for the next two days she decides to follow his rules.

NO SPEAKING, NO SMILING AND DEFINETELY NO TOUCHING

He leaves her at the house, takes his tools and goes back to fix the jeep.

She takes a look around. She feels hungry.

She prepares food, haves her lunch and takes a nap.

He returns back hungry and goes to have something light. Maybe some cornflakes with fruits.

But he smells something delicious, find something on the table.

He takes a look, it's pasta.

Geet could only find this in Maan's kitchen.

He tries it. Its good, masaledar pasta, pasta with a desi touch.

He enjoys his food and its nice to have some one at home to cook for you,

Of course Nakul is there at KM, but he is only a paid worker.

Then he searches her and finds her sleeping.

He couldn't stop staring at her. The more he stares the more she looks beautiful.

It's now becoming hard to suppress his feelings for her.

This girl has something that disturbs him a loy. Maybe her eyes, that keep chatting with him however hard he tries to avoid them,so innocent yet so powerful. She has got that magical power to captivate him and enslave him. that girl too feels something strange happening to her since she met him.

Maan hides himself seeing her wake up, he leaves immediately but that girl knows very well that he was there even though her eyes were closed.

That evening…..

Geet takes a look around the house and finds Maan's punching bag, you know Maan is a kick boxer. She wears his gloves and starts punching it with all her strength, left punch… right punch….

But she couldn't even move it , she gets angry…. She now tries punching with both the hands…yeah! Here goes the bag…… oh no! it comes right back, straight towards her ….luckily the bag stops just in front of her face…It's Maan who had stopped it from behind…….

"yahan kya kar rahi ho?"

Geet shows the gloves and poses like a boxer in the ring……

"mein toh boxing practice kar rahi thi"

Geet tries to repeat what she did…… Maan stops her…..

"mere cheezon pe haath mat lagao"

Geet is in no mood to listen,

"himmat hai toh mujhe rokho"

Geet gets ready to fight….

Maan doesn't take her seriously….

"mein itna bhi kamzoor nahi hoon kit ere saath ladoon"

Geet laughs…..

"dar gaye ho"

Maan gets angry and steps forward staring her….

Geet punches him….. Maan didn't expect this….. so doesn't defend…

He is hurt….around the right eye… Geet thought that he would stop her….

He is in pain….. she is worried….

"sorry…sorry"

She gets closer and takes a look at his wound….

She raises her feet to reach his eyes and she blows….

"bahut dard hotha hai kya?"

She holds his hand and takes him with her….

He follows her like a little boy …. She takes him to the dining table….

"beito"

Maan sits still staring her…….

She comes back with the ice cubes…

"aankhen band karo"

She applies ice on his wound….

Maan thinks, if at all he got hurt in Delhi….. what would happen?

"Maan sir ko chot lag gayi"

"someone call the doctor"

"ambulance bhulaoon kya?"

"stupid, first aid kit lekhe aao"

Everyone would rush to get get help…. Off they go leaving Maan alone…..

Who would dare to come near Maan Singh Khurana?

For a change, this is goog…being at the receiving end, be it the punch or the care that followed ….

"aap aaram karo"

Here comes the next command which he readily accepts…..

Geet prepares dineer….

After a quiet dinner he goes to his room. She too finishes her dinner and gets ready to sleep.

She likes to have a look at him before going to bed, maybe he is still in pain……

She opens the door and peeps in…..

She finds him drinking…….

"daru? Roz pithe ho?"

He just pushes her out and locks the door…. He is afraid that he might loose control……

Next morning…. Maan is up late….last night's hang over ?

He goes to find out what this girl is upto?

She is not in her room. Maan is worried, what if she had left and what if she gets lost in the jungle.

Maan wonders, why is he so concerned? If she left without even informing him, then it's fine, it's her decision, why should he bother? As he was thinking about her, he hears the washroom door opening…

It's Geet…. She comes out after a shower……

Maan couldn't take his eyes off her. Maneet eyelock… Mahi….

Maan gets angry looking at her clothes…..it's Maan's dress….

How dare she did this? Maan looks at her and she knows why he is so angry,

Maan gets closer, she steps back only to hit the wall behind her.

There is silence for a moment…… this time Maan could only whisper, he doesn't have the strength to shout……

"ye mera hai"

Geet is not scared….

"toh"

Maan has no answer for that, she continues….

"meinne pura ghar doondhliya, bas yahi mila tha, aap yahan akhele rehthe ho?"

"haan"

On hearing this she is curious to know more…

"kyun? Aapka family?"

"Dadi yahan nahi aathe"

"aapka Dadi kahan hai?"

"Delhi mein"

"yahan akhele rehne mein aapko dar nahi lagtha?"

"aaj tak dar nahi laga. Lekhin ab lagtha hai"

"kya?"

"tum paas ho toh dar kagega hi haina?"

"mein kya itni bhuri hoon?"

"haan"

Maan leaves before she could say something, he doesn't want to stay there…he leaves only to return late at night….

This girl has changed him a lot, he is talking about his Dadi with a complete stranger, this is not the Maan singh khurana that everyone knows, he himself finds it strange that he has softened within a couple of days, that too without his knowledge. If this continues Dadi would not recognize him, though he went away from her he kept thinking about her all day.

Maan returns. He has got the jeep ready and the bridge too will be fixed by morning…..

Geet has already slept. Maan knocks. Geet opens the door.

"kya?"

"kal subhe jaldhi tayaar ho jao, tum ghar jaa sakthi"

Geet is happy yet disappointed to leave this place so soon.

"Good night…." , he tries to recall her name.

He doesn't even cared to know her name yet….

"Geet, Geet Handa"

"Good night Geet"

Geet too didn't bother to know his name as he is Dust Danav for her.

"aapka naam"

"Maan, Maan Singh Khurana"

That was a very long night for both of them.they kept thinking of those two days they had spent together, all through the night.

Next morning…

Geet is preparing breakfast. Maan comes….

Geet is chopping veggies.

"Good morning Mr.Maan"

"morning"

Geet cuts her finger looking at him….

"ouch"

Maan rushes to help her.

"tumme khana pakane ki kya zaroori hai? ghar jaake kha nahi sakthi?"

Geet looks at him…..he is really worried…..

That is the first time she is seeing him worry about something. He seemed to be a quiet tough guy, not bothered by mishaps, always angry with her, angry with himself and life. After all he is also a human with all kinds of emotions and feelings. He had been shielding himself with anger as his shield which is now broken by Geet's care and attention.

"apne mere itni madat ki, toh meinne socha aap ke liye kuch special dish banaoon"

"usski koi zaroorat nahi, tum beito"

Maan makes pasta for her.

"pehle hi patha hotha ki aap itne achche cooking karthe ho toh aapke haath ke khana hi kathi"

Maan doesn't reply…..

Geet finishes her pasta within seconds leaving Maan hungry.

Maan has to be satisfied with his cornfakes.

"chalein", Maan gets the jeep ready. They leave.

On the way…..

Maan keeps quiet and he avoids any conversation, not even eye contact, he just keeps looking at the road and drives. Geet is not comfortable with the silence,

"thanks"

No reaction from Maan.

" apne meri jaan bachayi, aur izzat bhi, aap nahi hothe toh patha nahi mera kya hotha?"

Still no answer. Geet keeps on chatting as she is used to MSK's antics.

At a certain point Maan takes out his mobile and checks, network hai….

He gives it to Geet…..

"lo, gharwalon ko bhulao"

Geet gives it back,

"koi zaroorat nahi, Dev toh yahi hoga, station pe"

Maan is puzzled, who is this Dev?

"tera bhai?"

Geet laughs,

"mera magetar, Dev mujhe bahut pyaar kartha, dus din mein hummare shadhi hai, aap zaroor aana"

"pyaar? Rishta? Sab bakwaas hai"

Geet already knows him very well, she is not at all surprised by this reaction.

"issiliye aap aaise Dust danav bangaye ho, mein kehthi hoon ki aap bhi shadhi karko, mere jaise ladhki aapko mina bahut mushkil hai, lekhin thoda koshish karoge toh zaroor koi jungle ki rani miljayegi"

Maan stares hearing this.

"aaise chehre lekhe goomoge toh jaanwar bhi paas nahi aayega"

Maan gets even more angry. He stops the jeep.

Geet is scared.

"mere saath aana hai toh chup, bilkul chup. Warna yahi uthro"

Geet keeps quiet. Mann takes her to the station.

At the station….

Maan goes and talks with the inspector.

No one had come there reporting the missing of Geet.

When everyone asked about Geet after Dev returned alone without her, Dev told everyone that Geet ran away. Dev had blamed her so that he could escape.

Darji believed Dev and is angry with Geet. They had not repoeted her missing as family honour is much important than Geet herself.

Maan now gives her the mobile as there is no one waiting for her.

Geet is disappointed, yet she believes that Dev might be in trouble and calls him in a hurry.

"Dev, tum kahan ho? Tum teek toh haina?"

Dev is shocked to hear from her….

"kahan bhaag gayo ho?"

Geet didn't expect this….she goes speechless….

Maan snatches the mobile and speaks with dev informing about Geet.

Maan stays with her till dev comes to take her.

Dev thanks Maan and Geet goes with him without any interest.

She looks scared and unwilling to go, Maan has read her face.

He is also not happy sending her with this Dev, but he is helpless.

Geet keeps on talking about her adventures and Maan. This annoys Dev who already has doubts about her spending two nights alone with Maan.

After a week….. back at the jungle guest house…..

Maan has been drinking all day struggling to keep Geet away from his mind which seems impossible even after so much drinking. All of a sudden he finds Geet standing in front of him. This is why he is drinking, he has been seeing her everywhere since she left him.

This time she comes and hugs him.

"Maan, I missed you so much"

This is really Geet. What's she doing here? She is to get married in a couple of days.

Maan pushes her away.

"tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?"

"mein aapko bhool nahi sakthi, woh do din ko mein kaise bhool sakthi?"

Maan is confused….

"pagal ho gayi ho kya?"

"haan, pagal ho gayi hoon"

She goes and hugs him once again.

Dev enters clapping….

"wah! Kya scene hai?"

Geet laughs….

"ab tum kush hona?"

Maan doesn't understand what's going on,

"ye kya ho raha hai?"

Dev gets angry……. He tries to slap her when Maan stops him….

Geet keeps laughing at Dev….

"pakad gayi ho, toh hasthi ho?"

Geet now gets serious….

"tum yahi dekhne ke liye mere peeche chup chupkke aaye hona? toh meinne bhi socha, hare hummare honnewale pathi ko kaise niraash kar sakthi? "

Dev had come to spy her, he had asked her to go and invite Maan personally and followed her to see what happens.

"toh tumme pehle hi maloom tha?"

"haan, dus din se tere shak ko meinne bardaast karki, ab aur nahi"

"lekhin mera shak toh sahi haina?"

"tum kaun hothe ho shak karnewale? Mein toh pura yakeen se keh sakthi hoon ki, haan hummare beech kuch toh nahi, bahut kuch hai, abhi dekhlo"

She goes and kisses Maan on both the cheeks. Maan tries to push her off.

Maan now understands the problem.

"aapko galatfami ho gayi hai"

"isse baat karke koi faida nahi, Dev, tum chale jao yahan se, humme akhela chodthi"

"mujhe yahan rehne ki koi shok nahi, good bye" Dev leaves.

Maan is worried….

"tum kya kar rahi ho?"

Geet looks onto his eyes and replies…..

"kyun? Meinne shai kiya haina?"

"Geet, do din mein teri shadhi hai"

"kaunsi shadhi?"

"Geet?"

Geet explains how Dev had tortured her all these days suspecting her character.

"chalo, tumme tummare ghar chodtha hoon"

"ghar? Yahi mera ghar hai?"

"Geet, tum kya keh rahi ho?"

"Maan, mujhe yahi rehna hai, please mujhe yahan rehne do, mein vada karthi hoon ki mein aapko disturb nahim karoongi, aur aap jo bhi kehthe ho wahi karoongi"

"pacca"

"haan, pacca"

"toh yahan aao, mere paas"

Maan hugs her and kisses her….like a man….

"ab tumme aaise hi hamesha mere paas rehna hoga, tumne vada kiya hai"

"aap chaho toh bhi mujhe yahan se nikhaal nahi sakthe, samje aap?"

Maneet passionate hug….Mahi……

Geet is very hungry…..

"Maan, aap mere liye pasta banao"

"kya?"

"mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai"

"toh tum hummare liye pasta banao, hum saath mein khathe hai"

"nahi, aap bahut achche banathe ho, aap hi banao"

"Geet, abhi abhi tumne vada kiya hai"

"toh?"

"toh tumme hi banana hoga"

"nahi aaj toh aap hi banaoge"

"nahi tum"

"nahi aap"

"achcha tum mere liye banao aur mei tere liye banatha hoon"

"toh ho jaye, dekhthe hai ki kaun pehle banatha?"

Geet shuru ho jaathi……

Maan ko patha nahi kya karein….

"babaji, aap hi bathao, kya ye pasta banane ka waqt hai? aap nahi sambal paye toh aapne issko Maan singh Khurana ke paas bhej diya?"

Maan follows Geet to the kitchen?...

That's my jungle mein mangal……howzaattt?

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Seventh entry: What kind of separation is this?

Maan and Geet were travelling by car.Suddenly he stopped the car.
GEET:Why did you stop the car?
He smiled:To ask you something.
GEET:What?
MAAN:Now a days I am not able to sleep.But I dream a lot about you.Am I in love with you?Tell me Geet.
She was surprised.She blushed.
Her romantic facial expression made his heart bloom with happiness as he realized that his lady love also loves him back.

He opened the car's door and got out of the car.
She was smiling like a flower.She appeared to him like a colourful butterfly.He held her hand and caressed it.He took out a gold ring which had a ruby stone on it from his pocket.He kneeled down before her.
MAAN:Geet,will you marry me?
She blushed nodding her head.
He slipped the ring on her finger.They both smiled.
Suddenly they heard a voice from behind.
"Gold?Give us gold".
They turned back.They saw some scary men.They had an evil smile on their faces.Suddenly they surrounded them.
Maan and Geet got scared.
1 guy:Give us that gold ring.
GEET:No.I won't…just because this is my lover's love.If it was some other costly ring i would have sacrificed it.
They slapped her.Maan roared like an animal.He raised his hand to beat them.But before that they hit him.His face got injured.Maan fell down.
Geet cried loudly.
GEET:Nooo!
She ran towards him.She held him tightly.She looked at his wounds.She touched his wounds.He felt pain.She took his hand and made him touch the blood on his face and kept his fingers on her forehead.Now her forehead has a red mark which looked like vermillion.She looked like a married lady.
Maan held her close to him:Geet,why did you do this?


Geet held him even more closer to her:I am happy that now you married me.I am your wife now.


MAAN:Geet...i can't understand anything.
GEET:What if we won't be able to get married?So i decided to conduct our wedding now.
MAAN:Geet...what are you saying?I know that we are in danger now.But nothing will happen to our lives.


Geet's tears rolled down her cheeks.
They came towards them.
One guy:Are you guys having romance?You both can't excape from us.
Maan and Geet looked at them with fear.


They stood up.
One guy:You people refused to obey us by not giving your gold.So we can't forgive you both.
One of them hit Geet's head with a stick.
She screamed:Maan!


Maan was shocked:Geet!
Geet was about to fall down.Maan held her and sat down keeping her head on his lap.
MAAN:Geet...my love...
GEET:I have no worries.In fact I am happy as we are married.I would have been sad if i had died before becoming your wife.
Maan's tears fell on her face.She closed her eyes.Maan cried loudly:Geetiii!
His heart cried out of pain.His heart was bleeding...
MAAN:What kind of a separation was this Geet?
He became numb.



He felt that he was in a dark room.He was extremely weak.He was surprised to see Geet in front of him.He could not believe his eyes.He was too weak to utter her name.His eyes were blinking due to extreme tiresome.He kept his arm on her shoulder.His hand was shivering.His lips shivered:Geet!


She wiped the blood stain on his face with her shawl.He closed his eyes.

MAAN:I feel better now.

Then he opened his eyes slowly.He looked at her deeply.
GEET:Why are you looking at me like this?
MAAN:Geet,you had gone away from me forever.Right?You are a dream now.You left me forever.
He cried.
GEET:Maan!
MAAN:Please Geet...please let me cry.

GEET:Please don't cry Maan.I am here.
Maan looked at her with surprise.He touched her face.


Suddenly she disappeared.
He was shattered.
He thought of Geet's smiling face.Then he remembered her death scene.He cried loudly.

The thieves hit him.His shirt got torn.
One of them pointed the gun at him.
He was least bothered about it as his heart was sunk completely in thoughts about Geet .

He did'nt make any attempt to escape from them as he wanted to go near his Geet in heaven.That man shot him.Maan fell down dead.
Those thieves brought Geet's dead body and put it near Maan's dead body.One of them removed the gold ring from her finger.The thieves laughed as they got the gold ring for which they killed two innocent lovers.

The end...

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eigth entry: Heavenly marriage

Maan was waiting for this moment;the moment he reaches India to meet his Geet…to make her his.

3 years back he left India for higher studies.But his heart was in India with Geet.

He reached Geet's house to see her …his eyes thirsted to get a glimpse of his beloved.

Garima;Geet's mother opened the door for him.Her eyes became wet.

MAAN:Hello aunty…how are you?

G:I am ok beta.

MAAN:Where is Geet?I am longing to see her.I know that she is also longing to see me.Call her soon aunty.I can't wait anymore.These 3 years moved so slowly like a snail.

Garima went inside to call Geet.But she came alone without Geet.

MAAN:Geet?

G:Geet does'nt want to see you.

MAAN:She may be planning some tantrums.

Garima became emotional:No…seriously.She said she has broken up her relationship with you.

Maan was shocked:No….she can't say that.

Garima shed tears:She said so.So please go back…

MAAN:No.Without seeing Geet I can't go back.I will go crazy without her.

He ran inside Geet's room.Garima was too weak to stop him.

Maan's eyes fell on Geet.She was sitting on a wheel chair shedding tears.He could'nt believe his eyes.

MAAN:Geet…

He ran towards her.

Geet cried holding his hand.

GEET:Let us get separated Maan.Destiny was so cruel that it made my legs weak after an accident.I can't walk.

Maan's tears fell down on her hand.

MAAN:So that's why you refused to see me.

GEET:Go Maan.I don't deserve you.Maan Singh Raizada will get a better beautiful healthy girl.Forget Geet.

MAAN:Stop it Geet.I rushed to India only for you.Only to make you mine and I will make you mine.

He was adamant.

GEET:Maan!

MAAN:Obey me…

He opened his bag and took out a red lehenga.

MAAN:I bought this for you and you will be wearing it.

He placed her on a tall table and started undressing her closing his eyes.He made her wear ithe lehenga.

She looked gorgeous.

MAAN:Still no one is as beautiful as my Geet.

Her eyes were still wet:Maan….try to understand.It's not a dream.It's reality.Be practical.I can't even walk holding your hand around sacred fire.Then how can our wedding take place?

He did'nt listen to her.He tied mangalsuthra around her neck and put svermillion on the parting of her hair.She was numb.She could'nt believe what was happening to her.

He lifted her up in his hands and carried her to the terrace.

She saw fire there.

She saw Garima weeping.It was Garima who did the arrangement.She could'nt believe it.

Maan started walking around the fire carrying Geet.
GEET:Maan...what are you doing?


Her words fell on his deaf ears.

Maan took seven steps around the fire carrying Geet.Geet was becoming too emotional.

MAAN:Now you are my wife Geet…

Geet looked at him emotionally:Maan!

Her tears rolled down her cheeks.She rested her head on his shoulder which made him happy.Garima was emotional seeing the marital status of her daughter.

Geet felt that she was in a heaven as she believed that this kind of a wedding could take place only in heaven.

The end

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9th entry: Autumn Melancholy

Maan wrapped a sheet around his beloved wife Geet's body.She was sick.She was having high fever.
"Sweety...have a good sleep.When you wake up in the morning you will be cured completely".
She smiled,but her face was pale as it had lost it's charm.
She closed her eyes pretending to sleep as she did not want Maan to know that she was not able to sleep.

The next morning...
Maan woke up when sun rays fell on his face.He saw Geet sleeping like a cute baby.He touched her forehead.Still she had high temperature.He felt sad.He did not want to wake her up as she was weak.He looked outside through the window.It was Autumn;his favourite season.He loved Autumn as it made nature colourful and beautiful.He loved the colour change in leaves which occurs during Autumn.He became pleasant seeing the beautiful nature.

He ran out.
He went near a tree.It was shedding leaves.Leaves fell on him.He felt relief.Autumn always gave him hopes.

It was during an Autumn season that he met his wife Geet for the first time.They met daily.Their friendship grew stronger turning them into lovers.
One day Maan proposed,
"Geet...I can't live without you.Will you be with me forever?Will you marry me?"
She blushed,"Yes Maan".
He was very happy.
She asked him,"But will you promise me that you will be with me forever?"
Maan did not wait to reply,"Yes,I promise.I will be always there with you.Our love is so deep that we will always be with each other".
Autumn leaves fell upon them.
Maan felt very happy,
"This tree is blessing us by shedding it's colourful leaves on us".
But Geet's face was fading.
"No Maan.It is not blessing,it's cursing us.Unfortunately Autumn's evil eyes have fallen on us...that hints that we can't be with each other forever".
"What are you saying Geet?"
Tears covered her eyes making her vision unclear.
"Leaves falling down...that also on our body is a bad omen".
"No,it's such a beautiful scene.I feel nice when leaves fall upon me".
"But my heart felt the pain of separation when leaves fell on us.It was during Autumn that I lost my family.I cursed the moment which poured leaves on us.From then onwards I hate Autumn.I am scared of Fall.We should not have met during Autumn.We should not have fallen in love during Autumn.We falling in love would be tragic like the leaves falling during Autumn.We should not have opened our heart to each other when leaves were falling upon us".
She was pouring out her emotions through her tears.
He wiped her tears.
"No Geet.I still believe that our love life will be as beautiful as Autumn.I am happy that our love blossomed during the most beautiful season.We will be always be with each other Geet.Autumn cannot always snatch your loved ones from you".
He embraced her with warmth and affection.Her tears still had the taste of fear.

Two years have passed.
They had a blissful life.But Geet fell ill.Her fever was getting worse making her extremely weak.

Maan went back to the room.Maan touched Geet's face.
"Geet.."He called her softly.
Geet was finding hard to open her eyes.
Maan felt really upset seeing her condition.
He called the doctor home.
The Doctor examined her.
"Doctor...Geet took medicines regularly.Still she has high temperature",Maan talked about her condition.
The Doctor was gloomy,
"Sorry to say Maan.Your wife's is not a silly fever.She is suffering from pneumonia".
Maan was shocked.
The Doctor continued,
"You people did'nt realize it.So it has become really worse.Take her to the hospital immediately.Otherwise it is going to be very dangerous".
Maan got scared of losing Geet.
The Doctor left.
Maan saw Geet looking at him.After the sky turned blue now only Geet opened her eyes properly.That gave him hope.
He sat near her.
Her lips shivered,
"I am having pneumonia.Right?"
Maan could not speak.He was scared whether he will burst into tears if he speaks.
"Maan...I told you...Autumn is the season of loss for me.Will i die?Will i lose you?Will we get separated?"
She was really emotional.
Maan wanted to burst into tears.But he controlled his tears.He did not allow his tears to flow out as he knew that his tears would make Geet weaker.
He cupped her face in his hands.
"No.For me Autumn is the season of hope.I have hope Geet.Nothing bad will happen".


Her tears were rolling down her cheeks while listening to him.


He embraced her giving her comfort.
"I will change my clothes and come.We will go to the hospital now".
She nodded her head slowly.
He went to change his clothes.
Geet said in her mind,
"I know Maan.My death is near.I can't be saved.There is no use of hoping as it is Autumn".

He got ready and came out of the dressing room.Geet was sleeping.
"You slept again?Must be tired".
He lifted her up in his arms and started walking to the car.Suddenly he felt strange.His hands started shivering.He placed her down and held her hand.
"Geet".
His fingers moved towards her nose to feel her breath.
But she was not breathing.
To his shock he realized that he has lost his beloved forever.Geet's fear was right.Autumn has separated them from each other.They can never be together again.
Maan's hopes were shattered and he cried loudly calling his beloved's name:Geetiii!
Now even for Maan,Autumn is the season of loss.Just ne second made him hate Autumn.Maan could hear only the sad song of Autumn.

Leaves fell upon them.Maan who loved leaf fall could only find melancholy in the leaves.

After a year...
Again an Autumn...
Maan shed tears as it was Geet's first death Anniversary.
He saw a lone leaf flying towards him.

It fell on his shoulder.He took it from his shoulder and looked at it.He could see Geet's smiling face in it.Time has changed...may be Maan also changed along with the time.Otherwise he would not have felt that this leaf was bringing his hope back after he buried his hopes when he lost his love.
He kept the leaf close to his heart.
He whispered to himself,
"My Geet is back to me in the form of a leaf".
That leaf gave him hope to live with his Geet.
It was sweet and sour moment: sweet memories of her made him smile, but when he remembered his loss sadness enveloped him.

The end

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