TaaRey FF- Innocently in Love(Part 2 Updated) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Res ! Yippee !! Me First !!
So Update Ke Baare Mein Jo bolu kam hai ... You guys seriously shocked me ! Well Taani really OMG ... She is so Cute and Sweet ! Beautiful and Handsome, Wow !! Love her character !!
Well She was soo excited to meet Rey but all her hopes went to Waste ! Rey is really mean and rude ! How he could forget his best friend for Kriya !
Taani is really hurt ! I hope She starts ignoring Rey and Rey realises his mistake ! He really deserves an earful from Taani, I really want him to feel bad and Feel horrible !! I don't know why but I hope that happens !!
Anyways awesome update !




Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran

awesome start...

rey ws so rude...
flashback ws really sweet...
plz update soon



Thanks a lot Neha and viji..
Thanks a lot for your lovely comments..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

Awesome update
rey is so rude
flashback was sweet
update soon




Originally posted by: taarey1fan

awesome update...

loved it...
poor taani... how could rey shout at her...
love reys daadi...😆😆 hope she helps rey to realise the importance of taani...
and the flash back is tooo good...
finally loved ur update...
thank u 4 d pm...
plzzz update soon...😊😊



Originally posted by: Mon_tr

Awesome part.luvd it.granny is so swt..egarly waitng 4 nxt part



Originally posted by: miss_neha

That was a brilliant start, omg rey was soo rude!!!!

But the flashback was soo cute, I already love lil rey n lil taani loll




Originally posted by: Natasha.

Ayesha and Aims u guys did a superb job
Aww Taani is so adorable I love her bonding with Rey parents
Taani so excitied to see Rey
I want to hit Rey over the head how dare he say all those hurtful things to Taani
Their childhood flashback was awesome, they were so close
I hope Taani ignore Rey now
I love the entire update...




Originally posted by: kriti094

It was a fabulous updt
but d flashback was super cuteee
plz updt d nxt part soon
i m really eager to read d nxt ch n see wat daadi wil do to make rey realize importance of taani




Originally posted by: shiksha_03

awesome update loved it
pls continue soon




Originally posted by: premlata

super update ...taani is so cute and rey is so rude ... update soon ...





Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

Awesome updaterey is so rude
flashback was sweet
update soon




Thanks a lot everyone for your wonderful comments..😳
Love you all..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: XxMevKhanxX

amazing update👏 rey is so damn rude😡



Originally posted by: shamanbk

Awesome start

rey was really rude to Taani
loved the cuteness in little Taarey
hope Dadi get Rey to realize Taani's importance soon
please update soon and pm me



Originally posted by: aishapie

Awsome update...thanx for pm.



Originally posted by: dh19

awesome banner.
awesome update.
nicely written there friendship
loved the convo between taani and rey's parent
but how could rey do this to taani?
hope he will realize his value soon.



Originally posted by: PRASSI

Awesome update dear...😊👏

loved it a lot...😊




Originally posted by: -sanjy-

AWWW TAAANI IS SO CUTE!!!!

and what is wrong with rey? ainvayi gussa hogaya. Mood swings.
and aw little Taani and Rey were so cute
and finally Team daadi go!



Originally posted by: sweet_angel09

Awesome update...luvd it... 😳



Originally posted by: drmgal

.plz update soon n pm me. ^_^




You all are so sweet..
Love you all for such wonderful comments..😳


@ Sanjy Mood swings!!! 🤣
No Sanjy, he got angry because Taani hugged him and also Kriya saw that..😳
No mood swings..😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#94


Originally posted by: riachandnani

Amazing update! Loved it! Rey was so mean!!! Urrrgh! Taani was so excited to meet him n he??! Stupid person!! Waiting to see what dadi does!! Update soon n thnx for d pm... 😊



Originally posted by: sharonfernandes

Awesome update
loved it
update soon





Originally posted by: disha93

Awesome!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!! 😊



Originally posted by: hirudawda

Really mindblowing thnx alot for pm



Originally posted by: sonakshigupta

Gr8 1 chap...bt no precap :(


M sure yeh stry mei bahot maza aayega :D

Plz update soon :)



Originally posted by: dildostidance09

gr8 start..!!

rey was so rude..!1 😡
feeling so sad for taani..!!
flashback was so cute..!!
hope everything get fine between the..!!
do update soon and thanx for the pm..!!




Thank you so so so so much for such heartfelt comments everyone...
Love you all..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: vihaa

GOD!!!! WHAT AN AMAZINGLY EXCELLENT CHAPTER!! LOVED REY'S MOM AND REY'S DAD CONVO SOOO CUTE AND THE THE DRESS WOULD LOOK AMAZING ON TAANI JUST IMAGING

AND THE THE DANCE PART CAME GOD TAANI WAS SOO EXCITED AND REY HE IS WITH KRIYA😭 AND THE FALL WAS ROMANTIC 😳

BUT REALLY WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER
THE FLASH BACK WAS OUTSTANDING 😳



Originally posted by: patie

hw dare he ?? 😡 hw cn he shout at her like dis m hating rey ...hope taani wil answer him back ...great update 😃



Originally posted by: hima_crazyD3fan

Hey guyzz its awesome yr i luved it.. The concept is tooo amazing n the chap is juzt mindblowing.. Update soon yr n can u plz pm me.. Plz yr i really wana read this..!!



Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Oh Wow!!!


Awesome chapter...

U made me go back to the Taarey world..

Lovely...!!

Please continue soon...!!

Please!!




Originally posted by: TAAREY786

i loved this concept and first chapter its awesome and taani 's dress is adorable i really really loved it

plz update soon and pm me plz








Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

awesome part 👏👏

awww Taani's conversation with Rey's parents 😊😊
amazing 👏👏
then her bonding with Rey's granny 👏👏
superb 👏👏
her meeting with Rey 😳😳
It was like cherry on the cake 😳😳
but then Kriya's part 😡😡
Rey's outburst on her 😡😡
hate it 😡😡
update soon 😊😊




Originally posted by: zami376

Super cute. Realy nice
LOVED IT.
SORY FOR LATE REPLY😳




OMG!! You all will make me cry with such sweet comments..
Thanks a TON to all of you for these lovely comments..Thanks a TON to all of you for these lovely comments..
Really thanks a lot..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: srivi01TRpmlist

Poor Taani. Hate
Rrey fr hurting her




Originally posted by: velvetrose

hey amazing concept n first part is awesome
update soon n plz pm me :)



Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Superb start di
Luved rey mom n dad n taani part it was adorable
Then rey was rude to taani
Feeling sad for her
N flashback was so so cute
Thanx for PM di
N sry really sry for late comment

N baaner is so beautiful
Update soon n PM me






Originally posted by: dreamyworld

awesome... i had tears in my eyes when taani was crying... awee poor baby.. i din't like rey mush though... loved dadi ! ty for the pm and pls continue soon...






Originally posted by: sapnagrl1992

Thanks for the PM!


I really liked the first part and this concept! 😃I hope rey ki daadi rey ki achchi si class le!! koi apna bff ke saath aisa karta hai??




Originally posted by: --taareylove---

awesome update dear loved it so much nit really upset with Rey how can he say something like this about her she is his bff awww love chottu taarey so much they are simply adorable loved their promises and bond, reyaam patents was so nice with taani love them and grany plz khuch karo na taarey ko pass lane k liye ab aap hi humari hope ho, awesome update thanks for the pm and update soon ..

sorry for being late




Thanks a lot for all of these lovely comments one and all..
Really love you all a lot..
You all made our day with such sweet comments of yours..
Love you..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: zulfinazi

updt sn na i lvd dis story aur tum ho ki updt he nai karre plz plz plz updt asap



I am so sorry dear for not updating..
I have sent you a pm..
Do check..
Gonna update soon..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Hello everyone!!!!😳
We know We know that we are really very very late..😳😆
But we apologise to you all for the delay...
We were really caught up with our schedule since it is Ramzan..
And then you know the recent mishap..😒
But, still we will keep our taarey Alive in our hearts...😭😛

Thank you one and all for your wonderful encouraging comments..







Love you all so much...🤗

Aimen & Ayesha😳

Plz. Scroll down for the update..😳
Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

This Chapter is specially dedicated to Payal(payu_taarey), Fatima(cuppypie121) and zulfinazi...Love you all..


And And Payal, Sweetheart.. MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY TO YOU!!! Enjoy your day, dear... May all your wishes come true..😳



CHAPTER 2



------The next day------



The sun rose and the sun rays disturbed the beautiful princess sleeping on her bed as they were directly falling on her face..She let out a sweet moan and slowly opened her eyes..Her head felt heavy since she had been crying for so much time..


But, this new day brought new hopes for her.. She was not gonna think about him anymore..If he does not care, even she would not..What does he think of himself?? Now she would show that he did not even matter to him..



She quickly got up and got ready.. Today was her first day in the college..She was gonna study in the same college as Rey did.. And this would make her mission "AVOID REY" more difficult..



Firstly, she went and prayed to GOD and took his blessings..She was lost in her prayers..At the same time, Rey entered.. His eyes caught the sight of her.. He remembered yesterday's events..He remebered the fall and how beautiful she looked.. And again he was lost in her beauty..She looked so innocent while praying..She was constantly making faces as if having a conversation with god..Damn!! How can someone be so cute.. But, then he remembered Kriya's anger and his mind was again filled with anger..



Rey's mom asked Taani to distribute the offerings to everyone.'She turned and gave it to every one..But when she saw Rey, she felt her eyes getting filled with tears and pain..But she controlled herself and reminded herself to be strong..Rey looked at her and forwarded his hands for the offerings but Taani steeped back and called out..



Taani(loudly) -- Kaka!!!


The servant of the house came running..


Taani -- Kaka!! Maine sab ko offerings dedi hai..Agar KOI(looking at Rey) Bach gaya ho to aap de dena..



She handed him the plate and moved away from there...


Rey was shocked and stared at her with irritation..

And in irritation, he too moved from there without taking the offerings..



---At the dining table---



Everyone sat at the dining table for breakfast, except TaaRey..


Taani was about to sit on a chair when Rey forcefully moved the chair from its place..



Taani -- What is this, haan??


Rey -- Ye meri jagah hai to yahaan main baithoonga..


Taani -- kya yahaan par aap ne apna naam engrave karwaaya hai kya jo ye aapko aapki chair lag rahi hai..Nahi na.. To main yahaan baithoongi.


Rey -- par main yahaan hamesha baith ta hoon..


Taani -- Par ab main baithoongi..


Rey -- This is my place..


Taani -- Main yahaan pehle aayi thi..


TaaRey -- Dekho tum/ Dekhiye aap..


Daadi -- are are bas karo tum dono..Rey baithne do na usse wahaan par..Tum yahaan baith jao..


Rey -- Par daadi..


Daadi -- Rey!!!!


Rey(in a low tone) -- Ok daadi..



He stamped his foot and went towards the other chair while

staring at Taani..And Taani gave him a WHATEVER look..



Rey quickly had his breakfast as he had to go to Kriya's home and explain her everything about yesterday..So, after finishing his breakfast, he was about to go when he was stopped by his parents..



Rey's Mom(R.M) -- Are beta, tum itni jaldi kahaan jaa rahe ho??


Rey -- Mom.. ummm.. wo.. main.. Haan.. Mujhe college main kuch kaam hai to mujhe jaldi jaana hoga..


Rey's Dad(R.D) -- to beta, apne saath Taani ko bhi le jao..



TaaRey's eyes popped out listening to this.. Rey had to go to Kriya and taking Taani with him..NO!!! And Taani had to avoid rey.. So, No WAYS!!!



TaaRey(at the same time) -- NO!!!


Everyone was staring at them..


Taani(stammering) -- wo.. Handsome.. Its ok.. Umm.. Main chali jaoungi..



Rey -- haan dad.. Wo koi choti bachi thodi na hai jo mujhe usko apne saath carefully le kar jaana pade..



Taani glared at him but he did not even bother to look at her increasing her anger even more..



R.D -- Rey!!! Maine kaha na tum Taani ko apne saath hi lekar jaoge..Samjhe tum..Wo yahaan par nai hai so usse problem ho sakti hai..Aur jab tum dono same college main ho to kya problem hai..


Rey -- Par dad..


R.D -- YOU ARE TAKING HER WITH YOU AND THAT'S FINAL..


Rey -- OK..



Now Rey was irritated more.. Firstly, Taani was the reason behind Kriya's misunderstading and then now because of her, he could not even meet Kriya..



Rey marched towards his car in anger while taani followed him..



Rey sat on the driver's seat and was waiting for Taani to sit..She did not want to sit with him on the front seat.. So, she moved towards the back seat..Actually, she was nervous to sit with HIM..


Rey looked at her confused..



Rey(irritated) -- Oh hello!! Main koi tumhaara driver nahi hoon jo tum wahaan baithi hui ho.. Utro wahaan se aur mere paas baitho..



Taani looked at him.. Rey realised what he said and



Rey-- Umm. I mean saamne baitho..



But taani was in no mood to listen to him..


Rey knew that she has always been stubborn since childhood..Her behaviour was irritating him even more..He got out of his car and marched towards her door..He opened the door and dragged her out..He pushed her inside the car and shut the door and made himself seated at the driver's seat..


Rey -- Taani apna seat belt lagao..


Taani ignored him..


Rey -- Maine kaha apna seat belt lagao..


Taani -- Mujhe nahi lagaana..Aapki problem kya hai haan.. Kyun aap mujhse itni zabardasti kar rahe ho..Dekho Re..



The words did not come out of her mouth when she noticed him moving towards her..By each passing second, his face moved closer to hers..


Taani -- Rey.. Re..



But he did not stop.. He moved towards her.. He was so close to her that she was breathing heavily'His face was in her hair and he was getting lost in her sweet smell..And here taani could not bear this much proximity..She closed her eyes unknowingly..


Rey managed to brush away his thoughts and fastened her seatbelt and moved away..Taani too composed herself and sat straight'And then, they drove to the college...



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So, how was it??

Hope you all liked it..

If Yes, plz. do hit the like button and plz. comment..

We really love to read your comments..

Love you all..

Aimen && Ayesha😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab.plz while updating the nxt pt give little bit of precap of the previous one

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