Kick my bum if I forget to edit 🤔
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The thing I love about your writing is that you don't write something that's dramatic .. We can all relate to our lives with what you write. This OS just touched my heart. Each and every thing each and every word says how good writer you are. Riddhima doesn't look like some soap actress here.. She's just a normal girl. The diary bits were amazing. It's actually hard to write from someone's POV .. I dunno about other but I suck big time at it but the way you wrote it was outstanding. The best part for me was actually the first time they met.. I know everyone might like the confession part but I'm a little khiskeli isliye I think different 😆 😆 The way you portrayed Riddhima's feelings in that part was absolutely wonderful. Being a girl I can completely relate to it. All in all this OS was just out of the world. I've got no words to you. You are just fantastic. I am always at a loss of words when I comment on your writing and still I manage to comment itna 😆 Just keep on writing moree. Even if I won't be able to comment I'll surely read.. And waise bhi you promised me reserved spots 😆 So I'll comment after 1 saal 😆
Love you loads 🤗
Aditi. xoxo