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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
swaron dance😳
thank u so much for adding haye rama😃..
n picture are perfect..am in tanha dreamland😳
rey concern for sharon was so nice..
swayam is right that her friend will understand her..
now wanna read more how she will reveal her secret infront of her friend..
plz plz update soon ..
n thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Whoa finally u updated...it's really amazing loved reading it...update the next part soon...eagerly waiting for it
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb
just so much loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

SUperb Awosm chpter😉😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zk456789

Wow awesome update that too after long time
Super duper hit
Love the dance sequence


Thank you so much dear 😃


Originally posted by: pooja123456

awesum!
loved the update!
u updated after soo long
waiitng for the next part!
update sooon!!!!!


Thank you so much Pooja 😃


Originally posted by: nature2

res plz til read Done

SUperb mindblowing PART
n n n once again Hey ramaaa
kya baat hai ani
love it
n rey kya bolu usay toh kuch bol skte hai
update soon fab update date😉


Thank you so much Neeraj 😃




Originally posted by: swaronlove001

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unres

woaoo veryyy nicc update.. .

dance sequence is good its a oswm update

plzzz update soon nd fast..


Thank you so much dear 😃




Originally posted by: vrushan11swaron

wow...this was awesom...
but nxt part bhi jaldi do
n thx for d pm


Thanks dear. N yes I will try to update fast from now on 😳


Originally posted by: Twinkle_d3

Nyc update finally they r going to disclose their relatinshp
waiting for nxt part


Thank you so much Saloni 😃


Originally posted by: -Chaitra-

wow u updated it finally after ages...

very nice update...
the way u described the dance was lovely...
pls update next part soon...


Thank you so much Chaitra 😃 I am glad u liked the dancing part 😳


Originally posted by: -spongy-

that was a beautiful chapter


lovely

i really like the way you add pics... 😳😳

amazing

the dance was really well described

wanting to read more

please update soon

thanks for the PM

update soon


Thank you so much dear 😃 N about the pics, I really love adding them, especially in this FF. 😳


Originally posted by: cenation123

yayyy
update after so long that too this awesome one
awww the dance was super hot i was reliving the haaye rama dance again the pics didnt help either
loved how swayam just loves sharon so much finally they are going to tell everyone aww rey so protective of his best frien loved it update asap


Thank you so much dear 😃 I am glad u liked the dancing part and the pics also. Thanks 😳


Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

awesome update

dat too after a long long tym
loved the dance sequence n the way u described it was 👍🏼n dat to haye rama 😳
loved the update
thanx for the pm
plz now give updates soon



Thank you so much dear 😃 I am glad u liked the dancing part 😳


Originally posted by: sadafarsha

It was awsum i luved it alooot

OMG rey itna gussa kerta hai plzzz koi roko usey hehehe:)
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me
Thanx for the pm


😆 Rey is a protective friend. N thank you so much for ur lovely comment 😃

Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lassipriya

Ausum update... Loved it😊

Dance part was beautifully discribed...👍🏼 Just releived those moments..
Waitg for nxt update...


Thank you so much di 😃 I am glad u liked the dancing part 😳


Originally posted by: sanstina

Awesome update 😊

Sharon scared of her friends' reaction
Loved the way Swayam consoled her
Dance was beautifully penned


Thank you so much Tina 😃


Originally posted by: 8085548022

why did y stop I wanted to read further

it was an awesome threesome update really it was very good
the dance sequence
the teraace portion and then rey coccern for Sharon
I so wanted to read it further
plz update the next part soon


😳 I am glad u liked the chapter. Thank you so much 😃


Originally posted by: piyu1990

yes finally u update
awesome as always
loved dance sequence that to on haye rama😳
loved terrace portion too & then rey's concern for sharon
plz update the next part soon


Thank you so much Piyu 😃


Originally posted by: kritikasoni

nice update😊

waiting for next update


Thank you so much dear 😃


Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan

super duper awesome!!!

loved it!!
sharons hesitation to reveal their relationship reys concern all elements perfectly blended with each other!!
the sensual hayye rama dance was extremely well written!!
thanks for the pm anindita!!
your writings always make me happy!!


Thank you so much Raj 😃 I am so glad and honoured to know that my writing make you happy. Thanks a ton 😳



Thank you so much Aruba 😃


Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA

Nicely written... Finally they are going to admitt front of friends 😊

You know how much I love the photo you insert in between...😳
The photos directly took me to TANHA land 😊


Thank you so much Somi Di. N as you love see those pics, I also love to insert them. Thanks 😳


Originally posted by: austen4ever

thank you thank you thank you so much for adding haye rama there😃
its one of the most iconic SwaRon dances and reading about it made me so happily nostalgic😳
The understanding between these two is inspirational.
Loved Rey in this update,he is a great friend and I'm sure Swayam's right when he says that their friends will understand.Still wanna see how the revelation goes down so waiting for the next update.
The pics were really nice and definitely made the update more effective.
Good job.


Thank you so much dear 😃 I am glad u liked this update 😳


Originally posted by: anushka1129

awesome update..
swaron dance😳
thank u so much for adding haye rama😃..
n picture are perfect..am in tanha dreamland😳
rey concern for sharon was so nice..
swayam is right that her friend will understand her..
now wanna read more how she will reveal her secret infront of her friend..
plz plz update soon ..
n thanks for the pm :)


Thank you so much Anushka 😃 I am glad u liked this chapter n the pics. Thanks a lot 😳


Originally posted by: Pankhuri295

Whoa finally u updated...it's really amazing loved reading it...update the next part soon...eagerly waiting for it


Thank you so much Pankhuri 😃


Originally posted by: dazzlingmanavi

superb

just so much loved it


Thank you so much Manavi 😃


Originally posted by: TANHA_H

SUperb Awosm chpter😉😆😆


Thank you so much dear 😃

Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Chapter 19

In the rehearsal hall

Rey slowly removed his hands from Swayam's collar and asked Sharon totally confused.

Rey: if he didn't do anything then why are you crying Sharon?

She looked up at Swayam who gave her a smile which says go on and tell them and i am always with you. She took a deep breath and said in a breath.

Sharon: we are a couple.

Everyone was looking at her and then Swayam with mouth and eyes wide.

Sharon was getting restless to know what they are thinking but they were not saying anything, not reacting and only looking at her and Swayam shocked. This suspense was killing her.

Simmi: what did you just say?

Sharon didn't answer. She just wanted to know what they are thinking. She didn't want to repeat the same thing that they are a couple.

Swayam: she said that we are a couple.

Rey: [sternly] but you guys met last Friday and you became a couple in one day? Don't you think this is weird?

Swayam: Rey..

Rey put up a hand to stop him from saying further and glared at him and said in a stern voice.

Rey: listen Swayam we thought you to be a good person but [he shook his head] forget it. Just stay away from our friend. We know her very well and she never give a damn to any boy and now she is with you just in one day? What have you done with her huh?

Sharon was hell shocked. How could they blame and suspect Swayam. How could they even think that he would do anything to hurt her? How could they think that he is not a good person?

Sharon: Rey please..

But she was cut off. Rey hold her hand and told her to come with him.

Rey: Sharon please you don't need to say anything. We are there for you. Just forget him.

Sharon: but Rey..

He was dragging Sharon with him outside the hall and she tried her best to free herself from his grip. But she couldn't. Swayam hold her other hand to stop Rey.

Swayam: listen Rey stop pulling her away from me. She is not a rope so let's just stop playing this tug of war with her and talk.

Rey: THERE IS NOTHING TO TALK SWAYAM. JUST STAY AWAY FROM HER.

He yelled. Swayam shook his head and said.

Swayam: Rey i understand you love her and you no not only you but all of you love her and wants to see her happy but first listen to her at least.

Kriya: Rey please let's just listen to them.

Sharon: Rey..

Rey: Kriya please, he had already brain washed her and Sharon i don't want to listen to anything just let's go.

He again started to drag her outside but she stopped him with all her strength.

Sharon: REY JUST STOP IT. I TOLD YOU HE CAN NEVER HURT ME.

She snapped at him.

Rey: SHARON ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND? You don't even know him properly. You just met him last Friday and in a day you started to trust him and so much that now you are not listening to your best friend?

Sharon: YES I TRUST HIM AND MORE THAN MYSELF.

She yelled back. Rey groaned and everyone was shocked. They were hell shock and confused with her behaviour. Till morning on Friday she was fighting with Swayam. When they went for the meeting, at that time also she was fighting and now she trusts him more than herself. She has never opposed to Rey in anything ever. And now.. They couldn't digest it.

Rey: what has he done to you Sharon? Has he threaten..

Sharon frowned. This was the limit for her. She couldn't take a single word against him, her Donald.

Sharon: JUST STOP IT PLEASE. HE WILL THREATEN ME?

She was shaking cause of anger. Swayam knew that she needs him. He knew it very well when someone says something bad to her Donald it makes her go crazy. She can't take it. He went beside her, holds her hand and started to soothe the back of her hand with his thumb. Everyone glared at him and his hand. Sharon continued.

Sharon: HE LOVES ME MORE THAN HIS LIFE. HE..

Rey: Sharon what rubbish is this? He just said few words and you started to trust him. There were so many boys who said that they loved you. But you never gave a damn to them. N now..

Sharon: OH GOD REY THEY WERE NOT DONALD.

Chorus: DONALD?

They asked shocked. She looked at them and then at Swayam. She knew she was almost there..Just another word and her truth will be revealed. She was feeling numb and scared. But she can't back out. She will have to tell them the truth. They can't misunderstand her Donald. If they want they can misunderstand her but she will not let them misunderstand him. Yes it will kill her from inside if they didn't understand her but she can't see anyone bad mouthing her Donald NO. A big NO.

Swayam could sense that she is going through emotional turmoil. He told them calmly.

Swayam: guys can we please sit and talk. Please. Do this for her.

They agreed and all of them settled down. All of them were looking at Sharon to continue but she was looking at her Donald.

Swayam: do you want me to tell them?

He asked quietly. She nodded her head to a no. She wanted to tell them. She wanted to tell them that her Donald can never hurt her. She wanted to tell them what he is for her and how he makes her feel alive.

Simmi: Sharon please say something. We are really getting worried for you.

Rinni: yes Sharon please tell us what is it?

She cleared her throat.

Sharon: i know Swayam from my childhood days..

Chorus: WHAT?

Rey: then why were you fighting with him that day?

Sharon: because i didn't know at that time that he is my Donald. I came to know about it this Saturday.

Vicky: [smirked] oh so you were saving yourself these years for him?

Simmi: shut up Vicky. Sharon i am not getting anything please..

But she was cut off by Swayam.

Swayam: guys let her complete.

She looked at her Donald then back at her friends. She took a deep breath and then continued.

Sharon: we are best friends from childhood. When we were seven his dad's took his business from here to London and we got separated. But he promised me that he will come back and we will be together..

Kriya: but Sharon at seven you were too small and how could you promise of being together?

She blushed and looked at a smirking Swayam. She glared at him and continued.

Sharon: guys that's our secret and we can't tell you what and how we promised. So don't ask me or him about it.

Everyone cleared their throat and teased them.

Sharon: STOP.

They laughed.

Sharon: we..

Rey: Sharon before you continue first let me say sorry to Swayam. [he looked at him] Swayam..

Swayam: [cut him off] Rey it's not needed. I honestly understand. But please let her complete.

He smiled and nods his head and looked back to Sharon.

Sharon: Friday something happened [she shivered and Swayam took her hand in his to soothe her] and he took me to his house. There i came to know that he is Donald.

Neha: why calling him Donald?

Sharon: because we used to call each other Donald and Daisy and still do.

All the boys laughed and girls said "awe" in a dreamy way.

Simmi: but Sharon this is so not you. How could you let anyone call you 'Daisy'?

She air quoted. She looked at Swayam and he blinked his eyes to tell her to continue.

Sharon: this is me guys. This is the real me. The arrogant bit*h you know was never me.

Chorus: WHAT?

She looked down guilty.

Sharon: [almost crying] guys i know i have always hidden myself from the world, even from you guys. But i had to. I was scared and this was just a shield to protect me. [they were looking at her confused] i know i should have told you. Trust me guys it's not that i don't trust you. I trust you fully but i was just scared.

Rey: Sharon you are scaring us. What happened to you that you had to hide yourself from us?

Her eyes couldn't hold back the tears anymore. When the memories of that deadly day came rushing back to her, it made her shiver like hell. Swayam hugged her to comfort her.

Rey: guys please tell us what is it? Sharon why are you crying like this?

Swayam knew till now it was fine for her but the further details..She will never be able to tell it to anyone other than him. He knew now he will have to take over. They were looking at the vulnerable Sharon worried, confused. It was the first time in their life they have seen her vulnerable, crying hysterically, holding on to someone so tightly. It made them feel as if she is scared for her life. They couldn't see their friend like this.

Rey: Sharon? Please stop crying. What happened?

Swayam: guys..

He was cut off by the peon. He said that RDX sir has called them in his cabin. They had to go reluctantly. Swayam told them to go ahead and he will bring Sharon with him. He soothed her and took her to RDX sir's cabin by holding her hands. When they entered his cabin she clinged into Swayam more tightly by seeing someone and he also hold her tightly to him. They both were shocked to see that person.

I wrote this chapter very fast so I practically don't know what I have written. 🤔 Please forgive me for my mistakes and bear with this chapter if its boring or something.

Do hit the like button and leave your precious comments. 😳


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Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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I loved this chapter baby...Daisey cant hear a word against her Donald...loved her outburst when Rey tried to beat Swayam...loved her lines ..her trust on her Donald..he loves her the most in the entire world...her donald...😳

Loved the update...beautifully written😊

Love u baby🤗
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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so finally Sharon told everything about them to the team..
loved how sharon can't take a single word against her donald.. n how both love each other😳
loved sharey n gang bond..
i thought that is d same person who is in lift
loved it.. update soon..
Edited by piyu1990 - 12 years ago
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nice update👏👏👏
so finally Sharon told everything about them to the team
I like the caring rey and the teasing Vicky
swayam so much loves Sharon
I just wish the man n the rdx office is not swayam dad's partner
thanks for the pm 😊😊

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