And Then I Saw The Real You:Killers pg 51 - Page 18

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: devilangel

i didnt mean it like that.. i meant i liked your post😳 .. and im not telling you some parts becaue you can imagine it then. for example you can think that alekh was very happy, and he hugged her and told her to go for it. or you can think that he was very angry and sad, and told her to stay away from him. in anyway, its you who decides what he is thinking. and that helps the reader being close to the characters.. in that way, you are almost a character inthe story, because youre so close to them..

make sense? 😕😆.. im srry for it tho.. i always try to keep my writings within the boundaries of literature 😆😳.

hope you like this part,

love always,

shreyasi


I'm so glad u know ur literary boundaries.... thats why it is said writing is a better medium than motion pictures.... it can bring emotions more varied than in videos😆😳

btw... the next part again great......
but i was pretty shocked when Raj said he loved Ritu and Naina was shattered....
i hope things get well soon😭😳😳

luv
kanak
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Posted: 18 years ago
dat was amazing shreyasi dear! 👏 abt da preview... i have absolutely NO clue 😕 😭 nyways... plzzz write da next part asap! 😛 😉 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Trust me Sreyasi..........It's the best I've read so far. I'm so happy to read your story
You r the best 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks guys for the amazing response. i will post the next part soon.

and things will get better and worse at the same time.. there will be quite a bit of action now.. basically to solve a few odds and ends and to make the story realistic.. because i cannot write romances very well..

keep reading guya
shreyasi
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Posted: 18 years ago

Delhi. She was back at her workplace, after a brief and overly cheerful goodbye to Alekh. She knew Captain Rajveer would be returning soon, and she did want to keep her promise but at the same time she didn't want to hear him talk about Ritu. Muddling over her thoughts, she decided to help him find out where Ritu was. But for that, she had to know what had happened and she knew just the person who would tell her.

****

The phone was ringing, and he felt complied to pick it up. Slowly he trudged to the phone, but couldn't keep the grumpiness out of the voice for the person who had decided to call at such a time.

'Hello.'

'Naina here.'

'Major Singh! Pray tell, what can I do for you?'

'Well..' her voice was embarrassed, 'I was wondering if I could come over right now. I'm not very far from your place.'

His eyebrows rose up significantly, part of him wanting to tell her that it was an ungodly hour for discussion, the other part wanting to know what had happened.

'If you must.' He replied.

Half an hour later saw her sitting on the couch in his living room, sipping coffee from a hot mug.

'Nice place you have here.' She said conversationally.

'Major Singh! I am sure you have not come to discuss my taste in interior decoration. Please come to the point.'

She looked away embarrassed, still not used to his blunt and often truthful nature.' I need your help.'

'Is that so?'

'Yes. I believe you live with Captain Rajveer?'

He nodded.

'And I believe he is divorced?'

'No.'

His simple reply caught her off guard, and she raised her eyebrows, her mind returning to a previous conversation on the plane.

'And how is your wife. You mentioned you share an apartment with Bhargav, but surely..'

'I'm divorced.'

'Oh. And ..' but she was cut off..

'How did that happen, Madam? Well, let's just say we weren't happy together. And I also doubt that not divulging my personal information will earn me a demotion, will it Madam?'

So that meant he had lied? He clearly loved Ritu, then why had he said he wasn't happy? And why had he said he was divorced?'

'No?' she repeated.

'No.' he affirmed, ' They had some very serious.. problems, if you will. And then she left. He received a note a few days later asking him to cut off all contacts with her, because she was unwilling to contact him. But she never sent divorce papers, and he was too heartbroken to even consider it.'

'Oh, so they're still married?'

'Technically yes.'

She sat down, not knowing what to do or say. He was married! That crushed her hopes even more. She cursed herself for being weak, and had to literally bite the inside of her cheek to restrain from crying.

'But why do you need to know about it?' Bhargav asked.

'No—No reason.' She hastily replied, refusing to blink so that he couldn't see her tears.

He stared at her for a long moment, and she could see the emotions passing through him. First confusion, followed by surprise, distrust, anger, a sudden realization and then pride.

'You're in love with him, aren't you?' She didn't deny it, his simple question broke free all the emotions she had been carrying. Her chest tightened as she cried freely not caring where she was at the moment. And showing a rare act of kindness, he came forward and wrapped his arms around her, letting her cry on his shoulders.

'I – I'm sorry, I didn't mean to wet your shirt.' She blubbered at last, her face still blotchy from crying.

'Of course.'

They sat together for a long time, neither of them speaking a word, but she leaned on him, trying to get some support a fatherly figure.

'Imagine Navin's reaction.' He said at last, 'His best friend and his sister.'

She laughed softly. 'He would've flipped.' She replied, half crying and half laughing.

Then she stood up, preparing to leave, as it was already quite late outside.

'Thanks, Major Bhargav… for listening to me.'

He nodded, and called her back when she was moving towards the door, 'Major Singh.'

'Yes?'

'Don't forget our spying tactics. Sometimes they come in good use.'

She laughed, 'I don't intend to, Major. And manipulation as well. They come in handy.'

He smiled back at her, 'Manipulation was always the thing I did best, Major.'

Her laughter could be heard as she walked down the corridor.

****

'We have to act fast. Stupid woman broke free from our clutches. Cannot let the Army know the truth. I'm coming down tomorrow. Meet me 6 p.m. Army Headquarters, HER office, sharp. Kill her if you have to.'

Yours etc.

Preview for Part 13

'Not the details, no.'

'And she is on friendly terms with Capt. Shekhawat.'

'I presume so.'

'Jesus Christ.'

Ali was bewildered. What was his superior getting to? 'I beg your pardon, sir?'

'Major Baig, Major Singh is in fatal danger.'

And then he hung up.

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Posted: 18 years ago
hope you like it.. its getting a bit suspenseful i hope ;)and all will be explained pretty soon.. well it depends because the sooner you comment, the sooner i post!! :P:P

and do reply guys, they really keep me going

happy reading
shreyasi
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Posted: 18 years ago
its very nice do continue soon fast asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
dat was awesome shreyasi! 👏 me cant even imagine bhargav wid his arms around naina tryin 2 comfort her 😆 nyways... da suspense is killin me!! 😭 who is HER??? whose office??who is etc?? who does he or she want 2 kill?? who escaped?? 😭😭plzzzz continu asap... me cant wait 2 kno whose escaped! 😃 n abt da preview... seems like its bhargav n ali 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Dat was simply Awesome Shreyu!!!!!!!!👏 Naina in fatal danger.......I m loving dat bit of suspense.

Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: angeliclooks_me

dat was awesome shreyasi! 👏 me cant even imagine bhargav wid his arms around naina tryin 2 comfort her 😆 nyways... da suspense is killin me!! 😭 who is HER??? whose office??who is etc?? who does he or she want 2 kill?? who escaped?? 😭😭plzzzz continu asap... me cant wait 2 kno whose escaped! 😃 n abt da preview... seems like its bhargav n ali 😉

i cant imagine it either. thats why i put it😆😆

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