ARSHI FF- THE PURSUIT-Chpt-60/5,p.118,23rd Feb. - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
for part 41...😊

šŸ˜†šŸ˜†...truly arnav is such a tease...he knows how to rotate the equations...šŸ˜‰..but khushi has entered his life like a Strom and arnav failed to see the enigma in her but now he is realising it slowly...

raj singhvi is really on sumthing dangerous...wht he has tht he will print and he wanted to make a deal about tht printable stuff with arnav...well, now who is this lady and looks like she has to do sumthing with raizada...whtever it is i think they are not able to count on arnav and the damage he will do to both of them for blackmailing him...

the story is going on perbect track with the blooming romance in between khushi and arnav with the danger luring in dark...

lovely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di hv left my comment on he blog. Plz chk it. Infact I hd a comnt on chap 52/2 as well. But I m not sure if u noticed. So bringing to notice.
And thank u agn..for his beautiful story. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update... waiting for rest of the past story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
for part 42/1...

lovely update di...fantastic lines..." this is rathod territory and here raizada can not hav last word"...wonderful...šŸ‘šŸ‘...maan is on duty of guard just for the sake of his childhood sweetheart and thts true arnav and khushi will never be able to repay the things he is doing for them...i don't know why but i love maan's part more thn arnav-khushi romance...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

khushi is just being a kid here...acting like a one...but arnav is no less...he is not gonna leave her even on a settee...
superb update di...ā­ļøā­ļø
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all parts in one go ... Really awesome update love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
THE PURSUIT-53/2
THE MIRAGE-II



"Kya kiya tuney?" ( what did you do) The rest of the gang hissed at Ritesh!


"Arey thandayi mein thoda daala! Woh ek ghanta taq hosh mein reh key bhi nahi rahegi aur jab behosh ho jaayegi phir apni yaad daasth kho baithegi!" Ritesh replied smugly.

( I mixed it in that drink! She will appear to be normal for about an hour but in reality she would be knocked off after an hour and then suffer concussion)


"Turanth behosh nahi hogi?" ( Won't she faint immediately?) Munna asked!

"Nahi! Kyun ki utna nahi milaaya myney! Reyaaacsun [reaction]hovey ga na tho marjaayegi tho thoda daala! Jab taq hosh mein rahegi tab tak usey kuch sudh na rahvey per woh kisee ko pathaa na chaley!" Ritesh spoke in his friends tongue aping him!

(No! Coz I did not add much of that powder! If her body does not agree then an over dose might kill her! As long as she is still on,... she won''t know what she is doing! None can figure out[ she would appear normal]


"Dekh! Yahan theek nahi hain!! Usey yahaan sey mere Mehraan gadh ke farm house le jaayengey!" Ritesh was blabbering looking around casting glances in Khuhsi's direction!

( see! its not safe here! Lets tke her to my farm house at Mehraan Gadh!)


"Chotey baba woh ladki..." ( Chotey baba that girl) Birju tried telling something but Sunder exclaimed..." Arey yeh! Yeh tho Rathore hain!"

( Hey but thats Rathore there!)

"Kya?" ( What?) The rest exclaimed.


"Haan! Aur woh uskey paas kyun jaarahaa hain?

Oye! Thuney usey mobile kyun diya yaar? "Sunder exclaimed.

(Yeah! And why is Rathore going to that girl? Why did you give that mobile to her!)


"Arey I thought she was calling home and it would not be a threat! How do I know she came with someone! I found her alone all the while!" Ritesh shouted at Sunder!


"Koi bath nahi usey bhi ludkaayengey!"( No problem! Lets knock him down too!) Shikhar said!

"Nahi!"( No) Sunder said!

"Woh... woh... khatarnaak hain!" ( He is dangerous) Sunder said.



"Kyun? Humsey bhi?" ( Why? Dangerous than me?) Shikhar asked!

"Woh waqeel hain!" ( he is a lawyer) Sunder said!

"Uskey pappa aur mera baap dunnon dosth hain!" ( His father and mine are buddies) he added.


"Tho?" ( So?) Shikhar was too arrogant to admit a young lawyer could be dangerous than him!


"Samjho yaar!" ( Try to understand) Sunder pleaded!

"Aei usey bhaang tho pilaa sakthey haina?"( We can always make him go typsy) Ritesh said..

"Tum log us ladki ko rehney doh!" ( You guys just leave that girl alone) Sunder said warily.

"Nahi Humey wahee chahiye!" ( I want that one only) Shikhar was adamant!And he added,"chorey ko bhaang pilaa...kadak"( Make the guy drink bhaang and strong one at that) to the vendor who nodded.



Edited by anukat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read the last two chaps in one go.It good to see how past is unfolding towards us...
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was acliff hanger dear... waiting for next one...As always awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update Anu. Khushi is very naive and gullible. She should not have trusted the stranger. Maan does not know that Khushi's under some influence and that is why her words are not coherent. He hears what his heart desires and assumes that Khushi is confessing her love for him when she is just mentioning their bond as best friends. I'm actually scared of the next chapter because my heart dreads the aftermath of Khushi's intoxicated state.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update read last two parts together
thanks for updating

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