FF PV.Jindegi ki Talash -- Pt 10 Updated on page 136 - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago

PROMO : 1

Yash looks at Arti. She is shivering badly. For being in rain since long her whole body turned cold. Yash looks around but there is nothing in the broken hut. Rain water is still dropping from the roof for which all the pieces of wood became wet and it's just impossible to make fire with them. Yash goes near Arti and rubbes her palm and feet but it seems nothing is working on her. Arti clutches Yash's sleeves and said ' "Yash everything within m'me is getting fre'freeze. Plz do something Yash."

Arti's teeth are hitting each other. The chill breeze is entering the hut from every corner which makes Arti trembling more. Yash iss feeling very helpless. He can't understand who can help them in this forest. But Arti needs heat as her blood circulation is not working for cold. Yash removes his shirt and huggs Arti tightly to give her his body temperature but since he was also in the rain for hours and now is shivering in cold so his body is not responding..."How can I save my Arti'? I cant let her suffer like this. But in this dense forest there is no one to help us. We cant go out coz of the storm and rain. But if Arti doesn't get heat and temperature her life will be I danger. But I cant let it happen. Yash looks at Arti who is holding him tightly and decided to do it

Yash pats on her face and said "Arti look at me. We will have to do it. There is no other option to save you. Do you get me? We will have to do it."

Arti opens her eyes forcefully and looks at Yash.. " Yash ..Yash I cant go any where now. You leave me here and go' but Ansh'Plz Yash look after my Ansh...My son has no one except me..." tears are rolling from her eyes.

Yash saw that Arti is losing her sense and didn't get what he actually told her. If she once gets fainted then it will be impossible to save her. So Yash grabbed Arti and pulls her close to him. He lowers his lips on her and started to kiss. While kissing Arti Yash was pressing Arti to his body to produce heat within her. Yash himself couldn't realize while the smooth kiss for saving Arti's life turns into a passionate one. After sometime Yash lies down Arti on the hay bed and places his shirtless body on her. He is still kissing Arti passionately but the only difference is that this time Arti is also kissing Yash with equal passion.

In the morning Arti find herself in Yash's cuddle.

Plz friends dont forget to click the Like button and also let me know your views about the Promo...😉😉😉

Edited by nusratjahan505 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
holding ears or the late comment...but was serioualy stuck with some stuff

awesome update mukti...wow..loving the way it is proceeding...levely romantic update

aarya were initially madly in love eachother..the photoframe scene is awesome yaar...hehehe...loved the way u showed poor aarti getting jealous of those girls who were drolling over yashu..poor she...and awww the tissue message..was a wow in it..the sweet blackmail and the restroom excuse...hehe..loved it..loved all the romantic scenes dear...awesome imagination girl...

now..sp and gayu are repenting for whatever they did...to yash..they now know yash was never at fault...loved it...but yash still doesnot and cannot go to his house...due to his illness...
pity for him

hate this buaji to the core...always behind my aarti...but i m glad gayu handled the situation normally...

loving palak and yash bond;...n now sp will uae palak as a cupid to brng them together...awesome

please continue soon as i simply cannot wait

Edited by princess121993 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi mukti dear...🤗
I am new reader of your story..Will read all updates and then i will comment dear😳
Thanks for pm...😊
Me going now..Take care and Good night dear..Have a sweet aarya dreams🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finished reading all the parts😛...U r Wonderful writer mukti dear👏 👏 👏
Great ff👏 👏

Interesting concept⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️..Loved every bit of it⭐️ ⭐️

In past aarya madly love with each other😳..Big MU between came our aarya🥺

Yash left aarti for to save arpitha which aarti made think that yash betrayed her😭 😭..All SP disowned yash..And also prashant married aarti..

Aarya engangement scene☺️,Their first kiss.❤️..Awesome parts😳

Now in present...
Sp regretting what he did to yash...Felt sad for aarya.😭 🥺 🥺

Prashant is jerk😡 😡..He leaved aarti and his parents married to nida..Glad that yash came to revenge prashant...👏

Aarti is divorcee living alone with her only son ansh.😭 😭.Where as yash also suffering from disease..Now aarti hating yash to the core...😭 😭

WOW...Pandit suggested to do PV for aarya..😃

Loved palak character❤️..Glad to hear that palak going to cupid between our aarya

Loved ansh and yash bonding/Palak and yash scene nice...😳❤️

Waiting for the truth to be revealed

Wonderful promo👏 👏...Loved it..aarya in forest😳..How did they went Aarya moment is so passionate ☺️ ☺️

Eagerly waiting for next part
Continue soon
Thanks for pm😊
Edited by Sri_Radha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I give Hats off to you for this awesome update dear 🤗

You made me so happy with your super romantic update da ❤️

wow the start with arya's photo frame itself is enough to build up my imagination dear..
And OMG i cant even imagine such a beauty couple ever in this world.. and the girls drooling over my yashu made me itself so angry.. how will poor arthi bear it 😆 and the girls are tooo late hehe..

but my poor arthi getting upset without getting her yash's praise on her beauty !!! And the tissue message . awww so sweet of yash...

finally the dangerous blackmail from yash was simply superb da...
And everytime this restroom excuse is the best to get escape hai na 😉

Wow i knew yash is planning something for his love and yes its true !!!
Arthi's fake cute anger and yash's naughty looks.. OMG i am dead yaar 🤢 and when he went closer to arthi proving he succeeded in breaking her fake anger is so sweet da...

When yash placed his hands on her waist arthi would have been dead with the sweet torture but the passionate kiss they had took me to the dream land of arya Aww how close they are !!! and naughty arpita capturing their lovely private moment ...

Yes the moon has a great competition with arthi.. she is beautiful than it 😳 and the promises they made are so superb da

but poor arthi out of all the frustation broke her love into pieces...

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So sweet of g3 and sp for repenting for the sin they made...
but yash , man of his words will have to give them pain to hide the dreadful truth of his health...

palak.. i love this sweet sister so much dear... yash has a loving family and hope he gets with his love too soon 😭
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This bua ji ... when will she stop all this taunting on arthi...
Stupid lady she blurted out all the truth to g3 but thank god she did not punish her daughter...

Finally the punar vivaah of arya is the most awaited one.. i am so excited to read how will they get convinced and get back their love 😛

NOW COMES THE PROMO !!!!!

OMG how come u hid this much talent in u dear 😛
This promo made me so restless to read the next update immediately dear ...🥳

shirtless yash and arthi stuck in storm and their kissing..☺️

I cant wait for long dear... continue soon sweeto
Edited by maha9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a very beautiful and emotional update Mukti 👏 You can potray all emotions in your writing so beautifully 😃

The flash back scene was so beautiful and it portrayed the love Yash and Arati had for each other. Even now they both love each other but because of the misunderstanding Arati is behaving like this.

But its still sad to see Yash suffering all this time for no fault of him. He loved everyone selflessly but they all gave him pain only 😭

Now SP and G3 wants him back, but I guess they will have to struggle to get him back.

So the talks about PV of Arati and Yash are on with Palak too.

Waiting for next update and the promo 😳
Edited by jikky_84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww...beautifull update dear..😃 luvd flashback part.. ❤️..👏 very well written..👍🏼 n wow palak n sp gonna team up 4 aarya's pv.. Really very excited n OMG what a promo...now m eagerly waiting 4 d next update..😃 n thanx 4 d pm..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your update is beyond magnificence! Loved it very much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
very emotional update.eagerly waiting for the next part after reading the promo.thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Arti heard a girl saying.. "OMG..OMG!!! Till today I have heard a lot about Yash Scindhia but I didn't know that he is such a handsome hunk. Just look at his M shaped lips , his brown colored eyes , his smile.. I just cant resist myself. I swear dear from today he will come to dream every night."

Another girl said "You are looking at his face and I am drooling over his body. What a body shape he has Yaar. I am sure under the Sherwaani there will be his six pack abs. Really Yash Scindhia is the most sexiest person that I have ever seen.

"I just wish I could see him before. Then today I would be in Arti's place."

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Mukti while reading this I was not at all feeling like I'm reading and fictional story. 😕

To me it felt like my naughty perverted Friend, Who's name is also Mukti is talking with one of her another perverted friend, who's name is NIKKI or PRIYA 😉.

You wrote it exactly the way, you'd have talked with Priya. OMG it really reminded me of our drooling sessions ☺️.

The six packs scene reminded me of Maansi on AarYa's engagement scene. OMG when Yash stepped out of the car that pervert Maansi was literally drooling on him 😡. But can we blame that poor girl? Well this is the effect of Mr. Six Pack on everyone ☺️

And then the whole scene on the terrace. OMG AarYa kissed and I was 🤢.

And then suddenly the whole scene changed to such an emotional one. OMG my heart went out for Yash in that scene. I'm so happy that SP apologized to Yash and they patched up. And now they are thinking of doing AarYa's PV, for which I can't wait anymore.

Mukti you are amazing the way you wrote Gayatri and Aarti scene. In fact all the scenes from start till end deserves an 👏 ⭐️.

And I'm "THUD" 🤢 and then once again " LOUD THUD" 🤢 🤢 After reading the promo. And I'm not in a state to say anything further. 😉

Love you sweety for such an amazing update 👏 ❤️

Edited by lovely_nikki - 12 years ago

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