Mohit-Sonarika FC#9 We Set Screen On Fire - Page 100

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks aru for making the new FC. This will be my only hangout if Sona goes from DKDM because the forum will not be the same after Sona goes from the show.
We will continue celebrating Moharika.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi😃I read the part 1 and loved it..especially the end👏..just awesome..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RoseFairy

Link to Previous Update - KaJal SS : Prologue

Part-1

"You Too left me Vrinda?" tears rolled down by his cheek " how could you do this to me? don't you know how lonely your Jalandhar is in this Universe ,? No vrinda no I can't let you go , come back my love , come back , I promise you I won't leave you ever for any reason , he shakes her madly again and again "please open your eyes darling , won't you obey your husband's words? .Vrindaa are you listening you can't go? You have to come back

Collapsed Trilokadhipati Jalandhar clutching Vrinda's corpse

"Why fate had been so cruel to me? every time I think I have got everything I end up with nothing" why my world had been destroyed from me again and again? At first mother , then my honor , then Shukracharya and now Vrinda, each time I want to start my life in a new way my dear one is being snatched from me , why me all the time why?

Cries Jalandhar as a child holding Vrinda tight , just few time back he considered himself the most powerful person in the world when he successfully knocked Kartik and Ganesh down in the battlefield , although he had to take help of the illusion in doing so but its said everything is fair in love and war. But then only he felt something is going wrong when he found himself feeling weak as if the shield that used to be his protection from all deadly weapons is no more with us , the shield which was his strength due to Vrinda's love and loyalty , sensing something had happened wrong with vrinda he rushed to her but it was late , Vrinda had left him forever making him alone in the Universe again.

"I won't leave the Devas for who you parted from me , specially I won't leave the one who is responsible for my ill fate , I will destroy his world the way today my world had been ruined , Mahadev I will destroy you" took oath Jalandhar touching funeral pyre of Vrinda,

"Trilokadhipati what order is for us brothers? How can we help you in taking revenge?" asked Asur King Shumbh who along with his brother Nishumbh had been reached there getting the news of departure of Trilokadhipati's dear wife

"go Senapati and destroy everything related to Devas , destroy the sristi created by the tridev , Brahma-Vishnu and Mahadev , go and torment everything I want to hear helpless cry of Devas everywhere go" roared Jalandhar

"as you wish trilokadhipati, in this Universe none is capable to stop us any more , Laughed Shumbh and Nishumbh we will turn this Universe as cremation ground since Adi Shakti is made captive by you we are immortal " Shumbh and Nishumbh disappeared for next step of destruction.

"Adi Shakti"'.Asur brother's words made Jalandhar reminding about Parvati who is kept hostage in his magical world

"Par-vati"..source of Devon Ke Dev's all strength, if there is no Shakti then no Shiva, yes the way my world destroyed I will destroy Mahadev's world , my Vrinda is no more , mahadev's Parvati should not be alive any more too " Jalandhar's eyes burned in thought of revenge..

With all his ignorance he stormed into the the cave where Parvati was still in her Samadhi , she didn't open her eye for a moment since Jalandhar transferred the cave in his magical world. Since then Jalandhar also didn't care to go near her. He was sure he is successful to keep her captive forever ..let her practice as much meditation as she wants.

An enraged Jalandhar broke into the cave and clunked the sword to meditative Parvati's throat and only then Vrinda's word echoed in his ears..

"kidnapping a meditative woman is not a sign of bravery" he pulled down his sword automatically

"No , I am Not Devraj Indra , I can't attack a helpless meditating woman, Mahadev for now your world is left untouched , today I am granting life to your life , Parvati . he swaged arrogantly "it will remain the debt of mine over both Mahadev and his Adi Shakti"..

The word from his lips didn't got completed , a ray of light from Parvati's body fell upon his eyes making him momentarily blind , his hand holding sword seemed had been electrified, he cried in pain throwing the sword down , covered his eyes with another hand

"You are granting life to the source of Life herself , ignorant demon !!!!" ..millions of thunder roared together making him momentarily deaf". with much effort when he succeeded to move his hand from eyes the sight in front him was what he never ever imagined in his worst nightmare. The meditating lady whom he considered an ordinary helpless woman had taken a form whose head had been reached to the sky , having 100 arms , holding different weapons in each ,mounting on lion , all her three eyes were red in anger whose gaze was enough to turn him into dust , light from her third eye of forehead added fire to every corner of Jalandhar's Imaginary world

Adi Shakti's beauty was indescribable in this ferocious form. Jalandhar left with no power to utter a single word.



Wow fabulous updates aru. Jalandhar if depicted this way would have garnered the most trp's in DKDM especially the way Adishakti is shown in all grandeur in your story not the Kajal part which is only for our happiness. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Patrarekha

when i don't go to dkdm forum anymore why she is concerned about my ip address?? if higher authority says anything regarding this i wouldn't have any problem banning myself forever from i-f but why the particular one mod has so much concern?? many other mod knows about my ids they never said a word
and do i or aru create problem in that forum?? this banning thing is related to problem users

and kadambari story is almost like a daily soap so much characters and twist and turns very complicated

Originally posted by: jayvenk

actually that particular mod had a problem with sona fans. i noticed she comes to sona at now and then to keep tabs. dictatorship that is what it is out there

Originally posted by: speedgal

Whatever...hope this is sorted out now and does not cause any more problem. Some Mods do get God syndrome at times. Since the rest of us don't have the time and energy to moderate a forum we have to put up with the nonsense that gets dished out at times.

Discussing moderation in open forum is against rules and will not be allowed here. We don't allow people to make discussions on banning members either. People who are facing issues with moderation can direct their concerns to higher admins so they can sort out the issue in their own way however, making discussions openly on moderators/moderation will not help anyone and it also disrupt peace of the section. I'm editing all those posts for now but, please keep in mind that such posts will not be entertained in future.
-CFC DT

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