Dil Dosti Dance SS... Yaadein

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Hi guys this is varshini and this is my ss hope u guys will like it😊



Story from 4 years ( from now on the show) and i will keep refering to past in between and iam not too confident in hindi so pls forgive and correct me if iam wrong and i feel my titlr is not so apt...pls help me to choose better one 😊



~~~~~Yaadein~~~~
Part -1

June 21st 2016, Newzeland

A girl standing in the front of the the window facing sea side starting at the calm sea trying to calm the waves of emotions running through her... she had thought that walking away will help...day by day its giving her more and more pain... after the bond she has developed with everyone of them... it is her 24th birthday and she is all alone ...alone by choice... may this the only thing she deserves in her life...LONLINESS Her thoughts were distracted by a call

Girl : Hello dad

Voice: Hai Sharon...Happy Birthday My Darling ...Kaisi ho

Sharon : Thank You Papa, Iam good aur aap?

GRP: am good too...beta i have got calls from your friends...i mean kab tak beta ye sab...they really love you

Sharon: Dad please please don't reveal them where i please...

GRP: Sharon i dunno ki tum kya soch ke ye sab kar rahi ho but beta trust me you should never leave your true friends...

Sharon : i know dad but please don't force me please

GRP: ok beta your wish... you know from past 4 years...there has been only two people who are constantly trying to know about your where abouts ...ek Rey aur doosara

Sharon: Swayam...( She went into a trance...)

After long silence

GRP : Beta are you there ?

Sharon : Ha dad sorry ...dad i got to go bye dad take care

GRP : Take care beta ...love you

Sharon : Love you dad

Tears she was holding up till now came out bursting... How much she tried not to think of him something or the other binds her thoughts with him...everything came to her mind...his love his passion...dancing with him ...his smile...her hurting him intentionally.. him never letting her go... she had to leave him she doesn't deserve him...

Sharon : I hope everything was normal... Iam sorry swayam...I Love You...I love so much that i had to leave you ...I Love you...Love you...

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~YAADEIN~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Part 2


June 21st , New Delhi

A young man sitting in his office just staring at the wall paper on his phone... Its been 4 years...$ long years since he smiled loved and lived a life...

" Happy Birthday SHARON...tum jaha bhi ho i hope you are really happy...Love You... "

He just got reminded of all the moments they had together ... be it her anger or love he loved every possible shade of her's...

10th October 2012

It was as usual for Swayam with her behaviour...Sharon trying hard to control her emotions and avoid Swayam and Swayam trying more harder to be with her.Some times it even became difficult for her to control her emotions...there were lot of times when she felt like melting in his arms ...she was trying to be be more rude...making him spend time with aashi...but she never succeeded he somehow bounced back to her...she herself dint know how to handle if he will ever leave her but she knew it is the correct decision for him and for them...

It was yet an another dance proutine set by rey in which she had to dance with swayam just to teach some others( Guys im imagining khamakha sequence )...Rey purposefully made sure that they were left alone...How much ever she tried not to dance ...she couln't help but drown in his chocolate browm eyes...just to find immense love in them for her...she kept dancing lost in his eyes...He was finding it different...he was able to notice a lot of emotions in her eyes...something more than love...he kept them dancing... as the music stpped she came out of trance and started to walk away only to be blocked by him...she knew this was gonna happen...he will demand an answer...she tried not melting in his eyes which she failed as usual...silence prevailed in the room...but their eyes were speaking it all...she was un intentionally conveying all she has in her heart for him...tears dwelled in her eyes ... so was he...she unintentionally ended up kissing him pouring all the love...finding solace in each other's arms... ...

They broke the kiss panting...melting in eachother's arms...smiling within...happy and content...as they stayed like that for how long just till Sharon came back to senses...she pushed him away and started running away from him...swayam was left speechless with her sudden change of moments...he followed her

Swayam : Sharon...Sharon

She kept running not to face him...she cant answer him neither can she pretend any more...she unintentionally ran to the road and stopped there confused within

Swayam kept running behind her...and saw her in middle of the road...and a truck approaching her...

Swayam : Sharon...Watchout...Sharon

She coulnt hear anything...she was so disturbed within...

Swayam rushed to her and he pushed her and he got hit by the truck...

Sharon : SWAYAAAMMM !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

He went into blank after seeing her rushing to himmm

21st June 2016,New Delhi

Swayam Shekhawat...Associate Chairman at Shekawat industries Delhi...it was usual for him to get lost on this day thinking of Sharon ... He dint see Sharon after the accident he had...

" Kyun tum muje chod ke chali gayi Sharon...akhir kyun...after i see so much love in ur eyes...after i get how much you panicked for me in hospital ...If i have to wait all my life just to be a minute with you ...i will gladly do that... there will never be another one for me

10th October 2012

She could believe the turns her life is taking today... she was dumb stuck...He was rushed to hospital ...only to find him in a little serious condition...how she wished she was hit by the truck instead of him...Everyone Rey ,Taani...entire gang rushed to hospital ...just to find sharon not responding to anyone...

Rey : Sharon...Shraon ye sab hua kaise

Taani( crying): Bhai kaise hai...aap kuch bolte kyun nahi...

Everyone rushed to see the doctor who just came... who just announced that he was in a better condition but they cant tell much until he gets back his consciousness ...everyone stared praying for his health...sharon was numb...

Rey : Sharon...SHARON speak up

Sharon: Sab mere waje sae hua haiii

Rey : What What are u talking...

Sharon.: Sab kuch mere waje se hua hai... agar use kuch hogaya tho mein kaise...how will i live

Rey: Sharon please calm down kuchnahi hoga

Sharon: No...no i wont let it happen he has to get up

She just ran off screaming swayam to his room and started crying...

Sharon : Swayam please get up... i love you swayam please look at me please im here please get up

She was next to him all the while till he responded a bit and till doctor's have declared he is safe...

21st June 2016, Newzeland

She opened her cupboard which was filled with his pictures and his gifts...

Sharon: I don't deserve you swayam...all the torture all the pain you got in life was because of me...i hope your having a peaceful life without me...I Love You
She knew how difficult was it for her to leave him in that condition...but she had to...as she made up her mind her he deserves some one whom he will be really happy with

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~~~~~~YAADEIN~~~~~~~

Part-3


21st June 2016,Mumbai....

A young man working out and getting ready to reach his studio...his phone rings

Voice: Hi Rey...Good Morning

Rey : Hey taani good morning. Love

Taani : Kaise ho aap...Studio ke liye nikal rahe ho?

Rey : Ha. Im good ...abhi nikal hi raha hoon tuim batao tum kaise ho...

Taani : Mein bilkul teek hoon

Rey: Aur Swayam?

Taani : Kaise honge...aaj aapko pata hai na...

Rey : Ha Sharon ka bday hai...

Taani : pata nahi Rey bhai kab normal honge... jab se Sharon bhabhi chali gayi ek din bhi aisa nahi hai jaha bhai ne zindagi jeeya...dance bhi chod diya ...woh pagalon ki tara kaam karta hai woh kaam jo woh karna hi nahi chatha...kuch batate bhi nahi hai rey...

Rey : hmmm tum uska khayal rakh rahi ho na

Taani : Ha rey im taking care of him...par aap ko bahut mis kar rahi hun...love you

Rey : mee too...

Taani : Aap dance ko leke tensed ho...??

Rey : tensed nahi taani satisfied nahi hun...taani mujhe woh wala feel nahi aa raha hai...jab mear poora group mere saath tha...jaise ki 4 saal pehle hum the...4 saal pehle hum sab ne milke dil dosti dance banaya...is d3 mein bacha hi kaun hai...

Taani: Aap udaas mat ho Rey...pata nahi mera dil kehta hai ki jaldi hi sab kuch normal ho jayega...sab kuch...

Rey i really hope so Taani... chalo bye mujhe der ho rahi hai...love u

Taani : love you too rey J

Rey : Happy Birthday Sharon... Please come back,,,,

Taani : Happy Birthday Sharon Bhabhi... Please Krishna ji sab kuch teek karde na...

Rey started remembering all the moments they shared entire D3 gang...

Rey : Hey dude...

Nilesh : Hey Rey...

Rey : Baaki log kaha hai??

Nilesh : Yahi hai aate hi honge...

Simmi : Hi guys...

" Hey Simmi"

Rinni : Hey guys...

" Hello rinni"

Bharat : Hello Bhai log...

" HEyyy"

Chale shuru kare routine...

They started practicing and students came one by one...they started teaching them... the troupe they started as d3 in early 2012...fro months they had to face lot of problems from college and they gave lot of performances in Mumbai...group started losing its charm as people left from the group ..First it was Sharon and then Swayam...

May 13th 2014

It was their farewell party...Swayam has just written the final exams and left to delhi...while taani was still pursuing her studies ( i made her 2 yrs junior in my story)...she made sure she arranged a grand farewell party fro all of them...apart from swayam everyone has decided to be a part of d3 which was a hit in Mumbai and try increasing its standard...

Vicky and Neha were as usual being together and were confused about their relationship...Neha a committed relationship from Vicky...and Vicky confused about his feelings

So were simmi and rinni by now they knew that they loved nilesh and amar dearly...they were eagerly waiting for boys to confess their feelings...

Bharat missed vishakha so much...as she has permanently shifted to banglore...

Entire gang were cherishing their last moments in college and badly missing Sharon and Swayam...

Rey and Taani were most loving couple...they stood by swayam all the while but they couldn't bring old swayam back...

They cried hugged,,,and promised to be in contact and will make d3 a great success...

It was a usual conversation Vicky was having with his Dazzler friends and Nilesh

Nihal : Hey yaar Vicky

Vikcy : Ha yaar ...

Nihal : So man finally college tho khatam hogaya im gonna miss u all

Vicky : Mee too...

Nihal : Aur neha ka kya dude

Vicky : Hey beech mein Neha kyun aayi...

Nihal : dude u were so called couple fro sometime...so man kya kya kiya thu

Nilesh : Nihal kya bol rahe ho yaar chod na vVicky tu chal na

Vicky : Yaar we were a couple not now...so leave the topic

Nihal : Rth ur dating anyone else?

Vicky : Nahi yaar

Nihal : So you plaaning to settle down with Neha

Vicky : What dude NOOO NO

Nihal : Common yaar...tu tho jaanta hai she was so behenji ..tho you ...u know...

Vicky got really angry...

Vicky :Yaar please just stop all these...

Nihal : Yaar mujhe pata y u made a weakling...u know...

Vicky : Ha u know na mein kyun apna usse GF tho happy mera answer sunke..

Neha was standing hearing all the she got so hurt after listening all these...Vicky saw her leaving with a hurt expression he followed her

Vicky : Kaguuu...Kagu please rukho...

She could'nt stop tears rolling from her eyes...

Vicky : Kaagu mere baat suno

Neha : Sab kuch suna na...aur kya bacha hai sunne ko...?

Vicky : KAgu...

Neha : Mat bulao Vicky aisa

Vicky : Vicky ??

Neha : You know baa sorry Vicky i neha thinkinh Vicky angry on her...but loves her...but knowing today ki he not wanting neha in life...ye English bhi...vicky im sorry ...bahut tang kiya maine...thanks for bearing me... bye

Vicky : KAgu ...wait woh mein

Neha: Please...bye

After that neha was not a part of d3 she couldn't handle the breakup well...Vicky as usual thought that he will patch up with her after a couple of days and was horrified to see that she left Mumbai...

He tried contacting her but she never responded...Angry with her and himself he became more intense and stopped being funny...he left India just to have peace...and to please his parents

June 21st 2016,Shimla

A young lady found teaching her students ... NEHA SINGH... she owns a dance studio in shimla...she stopped being chirpy after college and after Vicky...She had lost trust in herself and everyone else around her...she couldn't stay in D3 gang as Vicky will be there and she doesn't wanna face him anymore though deep in heart she cant imagine anyone else...

June 21st 2016,Newyork

Vikramjeet kalsi...Once a funny and happy going guy turned into a silent person...a perfectionist in locking and popping...went to do MBA but he dedicated himself to dance there ..not much friends and couldn't forgive himself for what he did to Neha though unintentionally...HE is hoping to meet her once atleast and plead for forgiveness...He realised how incomplete he felt without her...after she left him... but the thought that she could have moved on and had someone else in life always taunts him till today...

June 21st Mumbai...

Dance as a career dint go well with rest of their families too,...Even Rey had to struggle a lot fro D3

Even though in the start they dedicated all time to D3 eventually each one choose their own path of main career and they dedicate part of their life to D#

Nilesh has still ot realised his feelings for Simmi ...as he still takes her fro granted which hurts her a lot...

Amar was a part of D3 till 2015 but she had to support his family ...which could not happen through D3 so he opted for a Reality cooking show and won it and was busy in setting up a restaurant...He always loved Rinni who has been his support all along but he never dared to confess his feelings as he feels she deserves better...

Rinni on other hand is still waiting for Amar...

Bharat's life condition improved as he still muti taska btwn D3 and his garrage...he has improved a lot as a personality...he misses Vishaka still

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~~~~~~~~~~~~YAADEIN~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

PART -4

June 21st 2016,Newzeland

Someone is standing with lot of gifts and flowers and unable to carry them and trying hard to knock the door...

Suddenly door opens...

Sharon : WHERE THE HELL WERE YOU ???

X: Sorry,,,,

Sharon : What sorry ? ha you know how i feel and told you don't go anywhere...and !@#$%^&*()( sharon's as usual firing session)

Sharon: oh wait ur not even paying attention,,,,,,,KRIYAAA

Kriya : Finally Sorry baba...andar tho aane do please

Sharon : What ever come in...

Kriya : Happy Birthday Dear J J J

Sharon : Wow time dekho its 11 ab tujhe fursat mila...and ye sab lane ki kya zaroorat thi...u know

Kriya : chup bilkul chup...the one and only SHARON RAI PRAKASH ...meri behen ki bday hai and aise boring day jaise nikale ye kaise possible hai...ye Kriya ke Morals ke against hai...

Sharon : Morals...( Started laughing...) Kriya...seriously morals...

Kriya : Aur nahi tho kya...Bday pe boring aur sadness not allowed... and one thing Nashta ki tumne??

Sharon : Nahi mood nahi hai...

Kriya : Madam kisi great mata ne mujhse kaha ki mood jone ya na hone se khana ka koi lena dena nahi...chalo aao meri saath...

Sharon : kaha chalo...kuch nahi hai ... directly luch karte hai na

Kriya : Phir se...itna lazy...pata tha...ye lo...

Sharon : Salad? Ye kaha tha mujhe nahi mila...

Kriya : Body and mind ka coordination nahi ho tho aisa hi hota hai u know,...

Sharon : ok baba i agree i was lost...and thats all ur fault... akela chod ke chali gayi...

Kriya : yaar i went for just 3 hrs... chalo leave it...ye tumhare liye...

Sharon : Thanks darling... what will i do without u...

Kriya : ok baba...ye jyada senti hua nahi...chalo we are rock the day...i have got all the dvd's and pizza...tum nashta karna i'll set the room...

(Shocked Right)

Some time in 2014

Sharon Rai Prakash was really happy and excited as her dad was coming to visit her she was shocked to see Kriya with him... and more shocked to know that kriya was her father's daughter...With all the trauma she was going through this was a huge blow for her...thought of her father having another child...and that too Kriya...

She just couldn't accept the fact...

On the other hand Kriya din't know that Gautam Rai Prakash was her father until her mother told her in her last days she was too shocked to know the truth...then things went on so fast GRP getting to know about Smrithi and then coming to Kriya to take her with him,... she understood all the reasons why her mom hated her dancing and y she is so attached to dance ... GRP whom she thought as idol in dance she hated his presence...but if it was not her mom's last wish of staying her with him she would have never gone with him

Things were bitter between Sharon and Kriya... They dint like facing eachother even after being in same house...

GRP tried to talk to them both but couldn't as they looked at him in disgust...

Sharon couldn't imagine her dad doing this to her...Kriya couldn't come over her Mom's death and she couldn't accept her new family...

Sharon hated kriya for one more thing what she did for Rey...

Kriya wondered y Sharon was all alone without friends...

It was one day Sharon couldn't help but dance to let out her frustration...and she started coughing badly...Kriya was passing by and she couldn't see Sharon struggling and rushed to help her ans Sharon took her help by indicating her to get the inhaler...

Kriya took care of her till she became better and she understood that Sharon had aastma and felt really bad fro her as she actually loved and idealized her dance...

Kriya : Sharon are you ok ?

Sharon : Ya iam And Thank you

Kriya : Ya...aapko kisi cheez ki zaroorat hai

Sharon : Miss Kriya...just because mein ek baar tumhari help li iska matlab ye nahi ki u can show sympathy on me...

Kriya : What have you lost it...im helping you and...

Sharon : I don't need ur help im fine,.,... And pls don't pretend to be great ha... are like a snake...u diched Rey...u used him...and pls don't try tobe good and fool me

Kriya...: Sharon...y are u getting all these...look

Sharon : kya look ...i HATE U ... mere life waise hi...and u made it worse... how come u suddenly... may be u got ur mom's qualities... nahi tho dad aisa kabhi nahi...

Kriya : SHARON just shut up

Sharon : Oh... Truth is bitter

GRP : SHARONNN

Kriya looked at him in disgust and went her room...

Sharon was about to leave when GRP stopped her

GRP : tumhe paa bhi hai what all u spoke to her

\Sharon : Dad kyun maine kuch galat tho nahi kaha ... i know you dad... aap aise kabhi nahi kar sakte hai
GRP : NAhi...i was the wrong person...the selfish one...

Sharon : dad

GRP : Ha Smrithi and Mein classmates they...woh meri deewani thi... jab koi nahi tha mere paas she was the only one who encouraged me too follow my passion... she was my love...i was a normal guy and she made me confident and what iam...a star...after we finished our studies i wanted to pursue my carrer in dancing and she was working and her parents were forcing her to get married... she waited for me...all the while but after i got my recognition i was not able to give her time though i had her in my heart... and i was forced to marry ur mom...and tried my level best and when smrithi got to know that i got married...she left Mumbai without informing anyone... i tried finding her shaorn...but i couldn't atleast i wanted to ask for forgiveness... may be because of my guilt i could be happy at all...phir tum aayi meri zindagi mein and i was happy again...but i could never overcome the guilt...i never knew i fathered a child ...

Last month when i got a call from kriya to come to dehradun ... i met smrithi...she was on her death bed... then i got to know abt kriya... i still cant face kriya...all their struggles were because of me... i don't even know how im gonna give kriya a family...how can seek her forgiveness..."

Sharon : Dad...aap...

GRP : Sharon please beta im really sorry ,... But please accept Kriya...she has just lost her mother...if not love her please don't her her

Sharon : Dad ... Dad

Sharon never close to her mom but her father loved her and pampered her a lot...Sharon's mom never cared for her. She was always busy with her parties...and she died when Sharon was 10 year old ans Sharon doesn't miss her as she was never close to her mom...

Sharon really felt bad and disgusted over her own behaviour...

Sharon went to kriya's room and saw her crying badly...

Sharon : Kriya...

Kriya just got up and tried wiping her tears

Kriya : ab kyu aayi...u want to say more things...

Sharon : Woh mein...

Kriya : Please Sharon...Please leave me alone

Sharon : Kriya im sorry ...im really sorry

Kriya was surprised to see tears in sharon's eyes

Sharon: Can i sit?

Sharon sat as Kriya gave her some space...

Sharon : Kriya im really sorry and iam really disgusted over my behaviour and sorry for blaming you and your mom... im really sorry i dunno y maybe i was hurt i reacted that way...i dint know that you have lost your mother,,,, im really sorry... i hope you can forgive me

Kriya : It does hurts a lot Sharon... and u must be also hurt ...i had no intenstion to disturb your happy life

Sharon : I know... I hope you forgive me...and it will never happen again...i promise...

Kriya : Thank you ...

Sharon : Dinner ?

Kriya : what

Sharon : I mean dinner kare...

Kriya : tum dono karlo...im not in a mood

Sharon : Khane ka mood se kya lena dena chalo

It dint take long to both of them to become friends...being with eachother they took care of each other but they had their doubts... Sharon dint understand how this kriya can hurt Rey and Kriya dint understand y Sharon was alone

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hmm gud try continue soon :-)
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nice start...it was so mysterious...really interesting and i really want toknow what happens next so UPDATE SOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!pm me when you doo!!!!!!!!!
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waoo veryy nicc plzz update fast plzz
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it really veryy diff i have nt read something like dis yet... plzzz update karo diff concept ha plzz

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