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Posted: 12 years ago
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A thought just came so i wrote it down hope you like it

"Aye Miss Call...Areee sunna Miss Call,kya karrahe hai ,areee ruk" Raghu's voice echoed in the dark and quite jungle.

"Kaha phas gaya mein.Mujhe isse bachana hi nahi chahiye tha ",he thought as he ran after her.

Finally he caught her hand and swung her around with such a force that she crashed on his chest and to support her weight Raghu placed his hand on her waist.

Antara who was shocked at the sudden pull turned to look in the eyes of a his that were so fascinating.She could drown in those orbs and yet not get enough.

"Yeh mein kya soch rahi hui,iski vajese mein yaha hui"she mentally smacked herself.

As both stood staring at eachother Antara tried to break free by wriggling herself.

"Chodo mujhe kya kar rahe ho tum,sharam nahi aati ya bech diya"

"Chod du,thik hai"
Saying so Raghu left her so abruptly that Antara fell on the ground.

"You tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe chodne ki"Antara again shouted as she dusted off her clothes.

"Tumhari vajahe se hum yaha pe hai aur tumne mujhe giraya bhi,akhir samajhte kya ho apne aap ko,gunda kahinka"

Now Raghu got angry.😡 😡 😡

He pulled her hand and pinned her to the nearby tree.Antara shivered at the rage in his eyes.Raghu went more closer to her so much that both could hear eachother's heartbeats.

"Dekh teri bakwass bohot bardash karli mene,ek toh tere vajah se yaha phas gaye aur tu mujhe bahv de rahi hai"

"Meri karan ya tumhare,dekho tum hato"

"Accha agar tujhe mein nahi bachata toh yaha thodi phas te.Kya jarurat thi tujhe unse panga leneki,mein samhal raha tha na"

"Bohot acche se samhalrahe the,dekha meine.Ek toh woh tumhari kitni burai kar rahe the aur tumhe maar sakte the agar tumhe kuch hojata toh"the minute antara spoke this,she bit her tongue.

She looked the other way as Raghu kept on staring at her.

"Haan toh phir bhi tujhe nahi aana chahiye tha,ek toh usse danda se maar diya aur ab woh lage hai hamare piche.Itni ghani jungle mein kya karenge"

"Ek toh meine help ki aur tum ulta mujhe hi daat rahe ho,chale jao"
Saying so she pushed him and started walking away.

"Abe yaar kya musi baat hai,aye Miss Call,oye sun na Antara"he shouted going behind her.

"Dekh ruk ja nahi toh pata nahi yaha kitne janwar honge jo tujhe Antara Mata kehke namaste nahi balki khana samjhkar kha jayenge aur tera antimsanskar bhi nahi hoga"

Hearing this Antara stopped and looked around her.He was right and she was scared so slowly when Raghu came besides her she entwined their hands and held him tightly while Raghu shook his head and griped their hands stronger.

As they went on they found a little place where they could sit and above it there was a roof too so both sat down waiting for the sun.Both were tired and Antara slept on his shoulder and soon he too fell asleep resting his head on hers.

Suddenly rain started pouring as a sign of blessing for these two sleeping peacefully finding solace in eachother's arms.

THE END

so how was it,this is my first one on rantara so do like and comment


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Christeee


so how was it,this is my first one on rantara so do like and comment


👏Hey Christeee! Amazing. I just loved it. <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rantara ne sabko Sweet bana diya ..so sweet 😆
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😳OMGOMG
This is like the cutest thing ever! I wish this happens! Thanks for sharing

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