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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kanug

awesome update😊

thnx
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update😊😊..loved itā¤ļø...waiting for the next update..and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

amazing update😊😊..loved itā¤ļø...waiting for the next update..and thanks for the pm😃

thnxxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey thnxxx for d pm,amazingly good. Very well written. Keep updating
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww Awesome...
love it..ā¤ļø
thankxx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..FlOrA..

Awww Awesome...

love it..ā¤ļø
thankxx fr d pm...

thnx
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu3003

unresd my comment😃

thnkuu
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello guyxx here is the next update...

part 6

arnav and khushi dono kapre change karte hain...phir arnav coffee banata hai phir lawn pe bethte hn dono...

a-coffee?

k-tumne banayi hai?

a-han kyun nahi bana sakta?

k-mene esa kab kaha bana sakte ho akhir tumara ghar hai ye..

a-hmm peeyo

k-not bad achi bani hai

a-thanks

k-so tum sheetal ko kab se jante ho?

a-bachpan se!

k-tumne use abhi tak kyun nahi bata ke tum us se pyaar karte ho?

a-pehle me ye ghar banaoon ga phir use bataoon ga..

k-tum tension mat lo tumara ye sapna zaroor pura hoga...

a-tume itna yakeen hai muj pe?

k-han dekho me tumare ghar me rehti hoon kabi tumne muje galat nazroon se nahi dekha...or tumara dil bhi saaf hai..DM har ache insan ki help karti hn tumari bhi karen gi...

arnav lost in khushi...

k-ese kya dekh re ho?

a-soch raha hoon tum itni bhi buri nahi ho miss bak bak bas bolne ka problem hai but tum bolte ve achi lagti ho..

k-akhir tumre muh se bhi meri tareef nikal gayi na wese me hoon hi esi...

arnav smiling at khshi.

k-tum smile bhi karte ho?

arnav stop smiling...

k-smile karte raha karo ache lagte ho ok gud nyt ..

khushi left...

flashback...

s-arnav i dont think ke tum ye ghar bana pao ge!

a-why? kyun nahi bana sakta tume muj per yakeen nahi..?

s-no esi bat nai hai just friend hone ke natte me tume kehna chati hoon ye ghar bana ne ka sapna chor do is se kuch hasil nahi hoga...

a-no sheetal ye ghar me bana ke dekhaoon ga or tum dekhti reh jao gi bas...i promise..

flashback end...

a-khushi ko muj pe kitna yakeen hai or sheetal ko bilkul bhi nahi..khushi kitni alag hai sheetal se use kisi bat se fark nahi parta wo sirf dosro ki madad karna janti hai she was such an innocent soul ...

next day..

k-arnav mere sath shopping pe chalo na?

a-me?

k-han tum yahan koi or dekh ra hai kya tume?

a-but khushi shopping pe tum akeli bhi ja sakti ho?

k-ek girlfriend apne boyfriend ke bageer jaye gi acha lagta hai kya?

a-ok wait drame bazi band karo chal raha hoon...

just 3 hours...

k-mere liye kaffi hen...

they went for sum mall and they did sum shopping then retrn home..

a-khushi tum 1st girl ho jis ke sath mene shopping ki hai...

k-really! how lucky i am..

a-why?

k-cuz mene the great asr ko shopping karwai yayayaya...

khushi start dancing

a-God tum sach me pagal ho...

k-tumare pyaar me..

arnav shocked!

a-what? what u said?

k-nothing me dialoug mar rahi thi..

a-ohk...

k-me abhi ayi..

a-why i feel happy when khushi say that words...why i feel special when em with khushi...

then khushi come...

k-kya badbada re ho akele me?

a-nothing i was just..

k-acha choro tum sheetal...ko kese propose karo ge?

a-simple i said her that i love her...

k-what ese kaho ge..tum kya order dere ho ya pyar ka izhaar kare ho?

a-kyun kya problm hai isme?

k-problm hai?

a-tum to ese kehri ho jese tumhe bara pata hai pyar k bare me?

k-han pata hai

a-achaa ..to batao?

k-get down on ur knees?

a-kya?

k-go na

a-now?

k-now proposed me?

a-whattt?

k-oho dont be shy ?

a-wht the...

k-ohk tum muje sheetal samjho?

a-ohkkk

k-karo?

a-ok i love you

k-stupid ese karoge ...first u wil feel me than say it...

arnav then close his eyes and thinking about khushi her smile her cuteness har naughtness her every moment then arnav open his eyes nd saying...

a-mujhe nahi pata pyar kya hota hai or yeh kyun hota hai mujhe to pyar shabd ka matlab hi nahi pata tha par jab tum meri life me ayi to mujhe esa laga k meri life complete hogyi tum jab meri life me nahi thi to meri life pheeki or berang thi tumne isme aake rang bhar diye mujhe zindagi jeena sikhaya mujhe pyar karna sikhaya jab b me tumhe dekhta hoon mujhe ek sukoon sa milta hai mano k me dunya ka sabse khushnaseeb insan hoon me tumhare bina ek pal bhi nahi jee sakta ...mujhe kabhi chor k mat jana i love you i really love you...will u be mine forever?

khuhsi usey bare pyar se dekhti hai usko arnav ki yeh sare baten ek sapna lagti hain ...wo bohat acha feel karti hai suddenly khuhsi ko sheetal ka khayal aata hai...then khushi says

k-wow...fantastic mindblowing...

arnav uthta hai or phir kehta hai..

a-khushi wo...

k-mujhe nhi pata tha tum itni pyari baten krte ho (hiding her tears) me to tumhe bohat khadoos samjhti thi ,,, but tum to romantic hero nikle sheetal tumhare sath bohat khush rahegi...

a-shetal?

k-han tum itne shock kyun hore ho?

a-noth...nothing..

k-ohk gud nyt...

a-gud nyt..

khushi room me jati hai or lying on bed nd crying...

k-me kyun ro rahi hoon mere ansoon kyun nahi ruk rahe arnav ne esa kya keh diya hai mujhe esa laga arnav wo sari baten mujhse kehraha ho par esa kese hosakta hai wo mujhse esa kyun bolega akhir mujhe itni takleef kyun horahi hai...

arnav room...

a-kya wo sab mene khuhsi ko bola ...haan kyun k usi ki waja se mujhe aj apni zinadgi itni khoobsurat lagri hai par mujhe bura kyun laga jab khushi ne sheetal ka nam liya ...wo sab tumhare liye tah khushi ...sheetal k liye nahi...

next morning...

a-good morning khuhsi

a-good morning. tum betho me nashta lagati hoon.

a-hmm

breakfast table

a-umm yummy paratha bohat tasty hai

k-thnx (smile)

a-(yeh isy kya hua hai wese to bohat bolti hai aj itna chup kyun hai) khushi

k-han

a-nashta kar k tum reday hojao

k-kyun?

a-cux we are leavin

k-where?

a-hangout

k-no am not in mood u go..

a-wht hapnd? are u ok na?

k-yah am fine ...

a-come on khushi ...its fun

k-i said na am not goin anywhere ..plx leave me alone ...dont force me plx...i req to u..

khushi left


a-whts wrong wid here itna strange behave?

khuhsi in room...arnav enter

a-khushi why u behaved so stange? is there any problm?

k-no

a-then?

k-nothing like that arnav

a-plx tel me?


here is part end...

do comments and hit the like button...

love
sam


Edited by Sahiba_doll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back dear u come after many days.😃
Love reading your updates after so longšŸ˜†
Both are slowly falling for each other. Arnav started loving her and he propose her not considering sheetal but khushi itself but khushi is thinking he loves sheetal. Hope arnav tell her his true feelings to her before sheetal come and create problems between them.
Nice update loved it. Keep it up.šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww baby you are falling for one another
But she thinks its for sheetal
Whereas we know it wasn't for her
Man so touching proposal
And he said it to right person
Well they were bound to fall for one another
But will they both accept it
Guess time will tell
Arnie can see there is so much difference between the two
One hardly knows him and yet she has faith in him
While the other knows him from long and yet she can't have any faith in him
Tells you something Arnie my boy
Cheers for pm

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