Virika SS:I'll stand by you! ~Thd II|Part 24 pg 67|11 Dec - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee madhu it was a beautiful update 👏

i just loved how barun treated swamini and manvi they both deserved that 😃

ohhh my gosh Twins awwwieee 😳
one chutku viren and one chutki jeevika ❤️

hayeee i loved ur update totally 😊

do continue soon
thanku for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
madhu!!!!!!!!
this update was brilliant!!!!!!!👏
iam soo glad that barun gave swamini and maanvi a taste of their own medicine😆😆😆
ughhh both of them irritate me soo much 😡
and TWINS yipeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i hope its one girl and one boy😃😃😃

great update and sorry because i have not been commenting on your last few updates, was not very active!! but now iam back😊😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
so nice
how dare that maanvi nd swamini yell at manorama nd barun..he should hav slapped both of them
wow jeevs having twins...aww...virika r so happy
viren yell at jeevs on her parents' death aniverssary :(
updt soon yr
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited by Kays94 - July 17 2013 at 6:03pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm the only one who is late 😭
Madhu u love Marzi n Karina more than me 😭
I'm heart broken 😭

But anyways,
I loved the update 😳
Manvi and Swamini are bitches 😡
I hate them 😡
Manorama and Barun are such sweet hearts ❤️
Hope Barun gets her Miss Perfect soon too 😆

My Viren Jeevika having twins??
TWINS!!
Wowww
omg I can't tell you how excited I'm to read further.. 😳

I felt bad for Jeevika that Viren yelled at her
Hope he pacifies her soon 😕
I can't wait to read more 😃
Continue Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Madhu
im sooo proud of barun for talking to Sb n manvi like dat😃dey deserve it
nt more thn dis😆
OMG virika gonna hav twins❤️
ekesss
awww jeevs parents death anniversary
Awwwi Barun gonna met his soulmate Sanaya hogi😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Charucrazy

I'm the only one who is late 😭
Madhu u love Marzi n Karina more than me 😭
I'm heart broken 😭

But anyways,
I loved the update 😳
Manvi and Swamini are bitches 😡
I hate them 😡
Manorama and Barun are such sweet hearts ❤️
Hope Barun gets her Miss Perfect soon too 😆

My Viren Jeevika having twins??
TWINS!!
Wowww
omg I can't tell you how excited I'm to read further.. 😳

I felt bad for Jeevika that Viren yelled at her
Hope he pacifies her soon 😕
I can't wait to read more 😃
Continue Soon



aww charu what did i do now???😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello all, i know i updated just two days back and i am back again. this time its a little short mainly coz of two reasons, one being time and other the story had to be stopped there! 😛 you will know why when you read it! But why i updated in the first place? Coz i wanted it to be a surprise to my friends who have actually read and commented without me pming any body! Thank you for following my story guys..love you all!! 😳😳


PART 21

viren was yelling at her and jeevika felt very sad, tears welled up and she spoke,"virenji I am sorry…"

"keep your sorry to yourself jeevika, what would have happened if I lost you or we lost the baby? I know puja was important but don't you think being a pregnant you should eat something! I don't understand for a small puja, you had to do all this"

"ITS NOT SMALL PUJA VIRENJI, TODAY IS MY PARENTS DEATH ANNIVERSARY!"

Viren was shocked and tears formed in his eyes, he ran by her side and hugged her and asked,"What did you say jeevika?"

Jeevika was very angry so she yelled, "I told you na, how many times should I repeat it?" viren understood that jeevika was angry at him, so he hugged her but she pushed him away. Viren made a puppy face but jeevika was in no mood to fall for his antics. She was missing her parents badly. Viren knew what exactly he needed to do. He went to the doctor, got the required things done and took made them discharge jeevika. He helped her get into the car and he started off. She so badly wanted to ask where but she kept quiet, viren didn't want to tell her. So the drive was silent, she dozed off getting bored so she didn't knew the route he took. He stopped in a dhaba and woke her up, "Jeevika get up.."

Jeevika woke up and looked at the surroundings, she didn't understand where she was, so she asked, "Why? Where are we?"

Viren smiled and said, "You will know, come inside"

Jeevika was getting mad at viren but followed him. They ordered some food and jeevika asked, "To have food you brought me all the way here?"

Viren smirked and continued to eat. "Uff ye virenji na, what does he think of himself, " thought jeevika. After finishing the food they left and viren started off their journey. He made sure jeevika was comfortable and also he played soft music, with the tiredness, food and music and of course cool breeze jeevika dozed off. Viren thought that its better she slept so she wouldn't really know where they were going.

After a couple viren and jeevika the GANGA GHAT! The place jeevika finds comfort especially when missing her parents and he knew she would be missing them badly. Viren woke up jeevika and she was surprised to find that they were in Hrishikesh and that too ganga ghat! She gave a faint smile and rushed to the water. Viren knew he did a great thing by bringing her here. Jeevika sat near the rock and was weeping silently, viren sat beside her and she hugged him and spoke, "Why did they leave me virenji? What was my mistake? I wish I had gone with them too…" "Jeevika"

Jeevika realized what she spoke so she said, "Sorry virenji, but what to do, I miss them badly.." Viren patted her and after a while she calmed down and spoke, virenji lets go, I want to go to the temple." Viren nodded and said, "you go to the car, I will come in a minute" jeevika nodded and left.

After jeevika left, viren spoke, "Mummy papa, I know you are very angry at me for making your daughter cry na..I am sorry, I will never make her cry again, she means a lot to me, I cant live without her. I know how she is feeling, I am missing you too. I know I have never met but I miss you and your love, and also the pampering a damad gets.." saying so he chuckled and immediately he found two arms wrapping his neck. He turned and saw jeevika smiling at him with tears in her eyes.

He stood up and hugged her she hugged him back and spoke, "virenji were you shy to speak in front of me?" Viren knew jeevika was playing so he spoke, "Shy? Why would I be shy? But don't you have manners that you shouldn't smeak into others personal matters and secrets?" jeevika made and 'O' shaped expression and spoke "Personal matters? Secrets?" viren continued, "yes secrets between me and my parents!" jeevika was overwhelmed to see viren acknowledging her parents as his parents, she hugged him tightly. Viren understood what she meant as definitely they didn't need words to express themselves. They can understand each other before the other person speaks.

Jeevika and viren left to the temple, viren prayed, "Hey bhagwan, my jeevika saw amny things in her life, first parents, baby, and now leaving manvi and the family, please keep her happy atleast from now.."

Jeevika prayed, "Hey bhagwan virenji is the best husband one can have, please keep him happy and safe, I know he is missing his badi ma a lot, but he doesn't say anything as it might affect me, please God please keep him safe and happy"

Jeevika and viren took the Prasad and left the mandir. They sat on a rock near Ganga Ghat when viren asked ,"Jeevika I want to know things about you? I mean you and your childhood and your parents"


to be continued...

Precap: Jeevika's past!


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Posted: 12 years ago
res ❤️
unres

Am first again on my favorite story by my musketeer 😃
Aww ur the sweetest madhu,, for giving us the surprise update
I love u more n more...update was superb
Viren indeed is the best husband anyone could ever have
I so wish i get a husband like him😳😆
cant wait to read moree...update soon...miss u <3
Edited by Marzii - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res 😳
unres 😃

hayeee madhu the update was awesome blossom 👏
i totally loved it ❤️

awww viren takes soo much care of jeevika 😳
he brought her at ganga ghaat as she was missing her parents !!

viren's secret talks with jeevs parents was lovelyyy 😳

and the wish which Virika prayed for each other from god was tooo sweet

now m excited to know about jeevika's childhood days 😃
update soon !!

thanku for the pm 😊
Edited by -Latty- - 12 years ago

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