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Another random OS, sorry for all these emotional stories, you can blame the Virman track that inspires them. I was excited for the new twist in the Virman track and decided to write this. Enjoy the story and if possible don't murder me for cliffhanger ending I left you with.

Shattered Dreams

"BAACHA, MERA BAACHA!," she screamed as she woke up in a sweat on the hospital bed, her arms protectively around her stomach. She stared around at the room and felt her stomach for a while before she realized she wasn't the same, something was missing. "Virat mera baacha kaha hai," she asked feeling around her stomach, trying to feel the lump of happiness that was once in her. Virat had no answer for her now, what would he tell her, he killed his own child, all the dreams she had of their baby , he killed it all. Mr. Vadhera, your wife is not strong enough to carry the baby. You will have to abort the baby otherwise Manvi may be in danger. He didn't even think twice after he heard the doctor speak before getting an appointment for the abortion, but he was shattered now. He had forced Manvi to get the abortion telling her it was just a procedure to make her stronger for the birth because of her previous cancer, he was a good husband right, NO! he looked at his wife's eyes and all he could see was he was a murderer; he killed their child. "Manvi please mujhe maaf kardo, I had to do it" he barely whispered finally breaking the truth. She understood the meaning at once; in an instant her nightmare became reality. "YOU DIDN'T, VIRAT HOW COULD YOU. MUJHE PATA THA TUM NE JHOOT BOLA BUT I STILL TRUSTED YOU!", she said as tears streamed down her cheeks as the realization hit her IT WAS DEAD, her baby, her dreams everything was shattered. She looked over at Virat who was in tears. "CHALE JAU YAHA SE, AAJ SE TUMHARA AUR MERA KOI RISHTA NAHI HAI, TUM NE MERA BABY KO NAHI HAMARE RISHTE AUR PYAAR KO MAR DALA!" she screamed pointing fiercely at the door. "Manvi please, try to understand. I am just as hurt as you are, but I couldn't lose you, you mean too much to me, we can try for another one when you are stronger but you wouldn't be here if we didn't abort, shaant ho jau. Please try to understand my decision," he said breaking down. "Ha I mean a lot to you na, aur yeh baby. This baby had always been a burden to you, you must be jumping with joy now that its DEAD!," she screamed. Virat knew there was no fighting with her, this time he wouldn't be forgiven, she was already weak and him in the room would just give her more stress; he closed his eyes and walked out lifelessly, I couldn't lose you Manvi, I couldn't his mind chanted trying in vain to give it self-relief for killing his child.

He sat down outside the window and took out his wallet and stared at the sonography pictures. "Baby, aap ka papa bhout bura hai. I killed you baby. Mujhe maaf kardo, please. I love you baby, I just just mama a little more, is that so bad," he asked the paper. Bhagwan ji ki paas ho na ab tum, please un se kehedo na tumhare mummy ki kushiyan lautade. I promised you that I would be the best papa, ab kya papa banungi. When you first came, I took you as a burden, and now I am facing the punishment. I finally started feeling the happiness of becoming a father and you left me, akele hi chodiya tumne mujhe baby he said clutching the piece of paper as he cried and cried, just begging the lifeless piece of paper to give him back the happiness that he was finally starting to accept. He looked inside and closed his watery eyes seeing his wife in that condition, she was in complete shock.

She felt around her stomach, her tears just falling uncontrollably, baby kyu chale gaye mujhe chod ke? I know I was not the world's best mama, but please give me another chance, I will give you everything, please mujhse door maat jau she screamed as the reality hit her more and more. After 9 months she would be holding a baby in her arms, she would have her perfect family with Virat and her baby, they would be one happy family right? She hugged her stomach as she uncontrollably cried and screamed for her baby to come back to make this dream come true. Virat took one more glance at her from the window and looked back down at the sonography. "Baby please jaldi wapas aau," is all he could say through his tears. He was broken because he killed his child, but now was more worried about Manvi. Would she ever forgive him? He sighed at how complicated everything just became. Their dreams, happiness, everything was gone in the blink of a second and it managed to shatter all the trust Manvi had for Virat along with it.

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Strikhedonia thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...šŸ‘

It was really emotional...😭

Loved it a lot...šŸ˜›

Good work...šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U made me cry...
Well written n emotional os
Keep writing more n more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice...
Too good..
Fab os dear...
Liked it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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feelings are beautifully written...
nyc work!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab ..loved it...
sry couldt like ur post..
some prblem with the like button..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one ...
made me cry ...
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oh! how emotional!!...the sad mumma and papa...
really cute and emotional story...
very beautifully written... loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Emotional n hear touching os !!! ;'( Awesome !!!!šŸ‘šŸ¼ superb piece of work :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful n emotional update...😭
Virat's talk wid the baby wz truly heart touching...

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