I am extremely sorry about the lateness, but I guess I have already told you everything I could about this chapter, albeit in an incoherent way.
But here is a random list of things I might have missed..
1. I like that you brought in other issues, apart from the whole past..I hadn't even thought about that much like A. Reminds me of 10 years ago and the similar predicament that Anjali and NK found themselves in.
2. The beautiful balance between wanting them to give it a go vs wanting them to part ways. Need I say more? You really should have written IPK dammit!
3. I love that Arnav is the one to fall in this first, almost thoughtlessly...but the beautiful thing is its not just that he wants her in the sexual pheelz way, because than we wouldn't be seeing him consciously and genuinely making subtle changes..oh how beautifully you described his conflict..NK vs K. The love does win..and it makes me hopeful. Although I am worried that he is just pushing this in the recess of his mind, rather than having dealt with it..would it come blow up later? Then there is him letting her pray, even if he is a bit uncomfortable..Then the finale with the trust, tum theek ho..And I am pretty sure he has ended up at her door in the end.
4. I love that you brought back together to the worst possible nightmarish place, and kept the nafrat real..but also the subtle care and love was palpable. Things have changed..and I think K is too afraid (understandably so) to give it another go, looking away because she thought she would see hatred.
5. TRUST. My favourite word..is heer. But as always I cannot for the life of me articulate. And also I just got this weird flashback for a second..its almost like the current A has become like K 10 years ago hopeful without a caution wanting to see this through and K on the other hand has become more guarded just like A was 10 years ago. I am freaking weird, and I blame you your story is taking over my life dammit.
6. K has a LOT on her plate, first her parents in communal riots and than the guilt over anjali. And now she is in yeh ishq hai with arnav..so really there isn't going to be any easy way to move on in life without him. Cant be with him and cant be without him. J, you made me cry again..just thinking about her situation. As always your K's are stubborn to jumping into the no-name relationships that A proposes..although the situation is a supremely complicated heer, I feel not much has changed. Because once K gives in, she is all in..there is no backing out no matter the hurt the pain. The scene in her apartment beautiful.
7. A full circle from K to A! - "What if I wasn't your boss? What if...we had never met before? What if there was no past between us?"
8. One way I see out of this if A accepts that the past isn't just HER fault! Anyhow wonder what he is upto now...leaving us on cliffs since 5eva, but dont worry I will keep calm and not predict!
WONDERFUL CHAPTER.
You already know of blowed up ovaries and tear ducts..and the PHEELZ, the battlefield wale pheelz. Not just the ones between them, but within them too. This is shaping up to be the IPK, I would have wanted. The drama, the intensity and above all the force (the pyaar).
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ps. sorry about the lack of looneyness..something's wrong with luna.
Edited by LooneyLuna - 12 years ago
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