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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey peeps!!!
Yes...its me...again...! Wrote an os on virika..hope u all like it !!

Bond Unbroken

'Why arent you picking up my call love..everything fine?" He texted her.
"I am sorry viren jii..i am busy in a transplantation surgery,will talk in an hour or so..can u do me a favour?" she texted back.
"Ehh..shut up..i can do anything for you..bolo kya karna h?"
"can u call d driver n ask him to receive him from school at 1 as he has an early off today"
"As you say..waise m free now..no more meetings for today!"
"Thats good.Will talk you in 25 mins..just a little left.Take care.Miss u a lot..luv u! "
"U too take care..i miss u tooo..n ya love u a lottt!!"
A perfect couple,viren and jeevika,their beautiful journey of love with a bundle of joy,their sugarheart,their heartbeat,the only reason for their existence,their revolves around only one person,their son,Aarav.A 7 year old naughty boy with cuteness at its peek,xerox copy of his dad..wid a little touch of his mom.A perfect son a parent could wish for..always teasing his mom and dad,intelligent and smart as his dad.Viren and jeevika,she was his salt and he was her pepper.Their love had no bounds.It grew more and more each passing day but the fact that they lived apart always affected them.Yes,they lived in same country but in different cities.Viren is a lawyer,lives in Sheffeild,UK.Jeevika is a dental surgeon,lives in London,UK.Aarav lives with jeevika.Due to their professions they had to do this compromise.It was difficult for jeevika to daily up down to london from sheffeild and coming back totally exhausted so the family had to take this decision and then jeevika lived with aarav in london.They meet each other on weekends..sometimes viren travels to london and sometimes jeevika.In week days also when any one is free they travel to each others place.Aarav is the most happiest one to meet his father,his best companion.
Viren in mind- Why to call the driver ? I will go myself to pick him up frm the school.Tommorrow is saturday and i have no more meetings this week..will spend time there only.Its 10:00 now it will take three hours to drive there,i can reach on time at school if i leave now.Chal beta viren,nikal le..and he left his place taking the required things.
In the car
His phone finally buzzed after a long wait wid the photo of them in which viren was kissing her cheek on their last anniversary clicked none other by Aarav viren vadhera,the detective.He got it clicked when they were caught romancing in the balcony of their house on his ipad.He quickly picked up the call after seeing the pic and smiling at it remembering aarav.
"Finallly..mohtarma free ho gai"
"Virenjii..aap bhi na..".
"Main bhi na.."
"Kuch nahii.."
"Look at your face red tomato"and she blushed even more on the phone"Jeevika stop it now.I am dying to see you in this state..I will die one day if you will"
"Viren ji.."
"Ok..sorry.."
"Hmm..thats like my patii.."
"So patni ji..good morning waise.."
"Good morning my baby! Umm..did you call the driver ?"
"Umm..yea..i called him..how is aarav?"
"Aarav..my god..your son is no less than you even more than you.He is getting naughtier day by day."
"Afterall he is my son.Done with the surgery?"
"Hmm...i am free now..Viren jii.."
"Hmm..what happened ? Everything fine ? Are you fine ?"
"Easyyy..eassyy..yes everything fine and yes i am also fine"
"You scared me.."
"Haha..i just wanted to say that i miss you a lot and aarav,he misses you more than me.." she said with a teary voice.
"Jeevika,calm down love..even i miss you both a lottt..my morning starts with both of you and my day ends at you."
"Viren jii..same is here..but even aftr skypeeing and meeting at weekends it somewhere affects both of us.We really miss you."
"I miss you more than you miss me"
"And you know aarav..he is the craziest one to meet you.His morning starts with you rather than me.The first thing in morning he does after waking up is ask for a kiss just like you and then to call you and if you are busy in morning then he gets upset and then finally breaks his fast to speak that say my good morning to him.He acts like you,he speaks like you,his hairs and his eyes just like you..i see my viren in my love aarav."
"I miss my aarav too..when i see the two most precious people in my life my day gets the best.In morning talking to you both is the best happening of the day and skypeeing at night adds a star to the day.But the thing i miss the most is you,you kissing me..my good mrning kiss..my good night kiss..that kiss which ends my tiredness..i miss everything!! I miss you so much"
"I tooo miss you,kissing you..your naughtiness..everything!!! But i dont miss you that much bcz i see you in aarav"
"And i want to see you in my little jeevika...i love you jeevika,i love you the most and i will love my daughter more than anything in this world."
"I love you too.."
"And now stop missing me..i will be there in few hours with aarav"
"whatt ??"
"Yes !! I will be reaching there in two n half hours"
"You are sooo unpredictable!"
"I wanted to give you and aarav surprise but seeing you in this teary state i could not cntrol myself and then spilled the beans"
"You lied to me that you called the driver ? You going to pick him up from school?"
"Yeahh..you got it right.I am going to pick him up today.…sorry!! I lied to you but i wanted to give d surprise.."
"Its okk viren ji..! He will be really happy seeing you.."
"Hmm.."
"And please,i have a request dont bring the chocolates m toffees for him..he finish it all in a week.His teeth will get spoiled"
"So what !! His mommy is a dentist,she will get his teeth correct.We both should also have an advantage of being your dentist.I have told this thing to you earlier also and now telling this the fifty eighth time.And now no more arguements at this topic."
"Its no use arguing wid you when u want something to be happened related to him and his favourite chocolates bought by his dad."
"yeaaa..thats like my wifey! Waise which one i got last time ?"
"How come i knoe..its known by you,your aarav and your chocolates..none of my business.."
"Ohh !"
"You have got the whole chocolate factory for him i wonder if any left.
Everytime you come,you bring a new brand and it barely happens he doesnt like any.."
"I suppose..yes you are right!"
"Have got some patients..Please dont drive fast..drive safely..take care! Byee"
"Hmm..you too take care of yours..Goodbye"
He finally reached the school after a drive of three hours.He,standing behind his red audi,waiting fr the school bell to ring and to see him.Finally,the bell rang and the students started coming out of the gate.When he saw the ninth tenth graders passing by him,actually a correction,when he saw the teen love birds with an action of a girl to a boys reaction or you say a boys reaction to a girls action,their eye talks passing by him...he went into his own world.He remembered his and jeevika's time when they also used to do all this at that age.Their destinies wanted them to be together.Their teen love blossomed to a true love..Different colleges,different streams though hearts connected..A perfect love story !!! And then imagine the day when the confession for the marriage would have happened to the day when a new pair of feet stepped in their life to give their life a 360 degree angle..when their happiness,their love had no limits.
The first graders also started coming out of the gate and finally viren's gaze fell at his son,which made him come out of his own world.But he was shocked to see his son..He and his friend karan(no doubt aarav was the most handsome one in the class,,afterall viren's son.)with bunch of his class girls around them bidding good bye to one another.And the most adorable view when a girl came to him and gave her a flying kiss to which aarav blushed and bid her a special goodbye with a take care.At that time viren was having he-is-my-son reaction on his face,he had a smile on his face.When aarav was free from his girlfriends he started walking towards the main gate and his eyes fell on his beloved papa.He rubbed his eyes with his tiny hands as he thought that it was his dream.When he was sure that it was his papa,he was just speechless and he rushed towards him with his arms open and viren kneeled down and opened his arms too to welcome him.They were few inches apart.
"Papaaa..." he finally hitted his superhero's body and they hugged each other.It was the perfect moment.Viren kissed him on his cheek while stroking his hand between his hair.
"Kaisa hai shaitaan.."
"I am very much fine papa..how are you ?"
"I was not fine but after seeing you i am very much fine" and they shared a cute laugh.
"And you will be finest after seeing mumma.." he teased him and ran as he knew his papa will not leave him.
"Aaravvv...ruk beta tu.." and he ran after him.He finally caught him and tickled him to which he giggled.He had him in his one arm and his bag in his other hand.They made their way to the car,he made him sit at the front..kept his bag at the back seat and drove to jeevika's hospital.
"What a pleasant surprise papa..!when did u decide to come here?"
"Actually i decided so in the morning only..was done with the work so decided to spend some time with my"
"With my mumma.." he interrupted him.
"Aarav..y are you always into teasing me..?"he asked him with a look on his face.
"Because i like it doing with my mommy and papa" he giggled.
"Ooo...can i have the privilige to ask you something gentlemen"
"Yeah sure..you can"
"Umm..so who was that girl mm..?"
"Which girl?" he knew what he was talking about but even then he acted like an innocent one..
"Really now ? You wont tell me han..you will hide from me ?" and now he was jeevika's boy,he blushed at this question of him "Hahaha..aarav..you blushing!"
"Papa..stop it !! And leave dis topic.." "You cant end it or else.."
"Or else you wont give me my chocolates..okk then..let me tell you" "yeahh !! Thats like my boy.."
"That girl was lauren"
"She was really pretty..She is your.."
"Papa we are just friends..what are you saying ? Please..leave it"
"Okk.." and he smiled at him.
"I really missed you papa.."
"Me too..i missed you a lot and ya your muma too.." he took her name also as he knew that what was going to happen next! His son will again start teasing him.
"Hmm..now see who is blushing"
"Ehh..i am not blushing."
"You are.."
"No,am not..chocolates ?"
"Chocolates...where ? Where chocolates ?"
"You chocolate freak !!"
"yeah i am..chocolates papa? First chocolates then talks.."
"Ummm.."
"Papaaa.." and now he crawled on him.
"Aarav,am driving.." he scolded him.
"Sorry papa.." he sat back on his seat,quiet..
"Its ok baby..you dont want chocolates" he tried to cheer him up.
"Who said that i dont want..i want them"he said glowing up.
"At the back.But..but.."
"What now ?"
"The blue one is yours.."
"Okk...and the white one with flowers on it?"
"Umm.."
"Oh..got it! Its for muma na.." he looked at him from the back mirror with the naughtiest smile and pulled his papa's cheeks.
"Yeaaa..dont tell her mm.."
"Hmm..i wont..whats in it ?" He said as he literally opened it.
"Thats none of your business baby..leave it and dare not open it.It would be opened by your muma.."
"Okk papa.." he left it and concentrated on his chocolates."Wowww...m and m's..rocher..my god!!!!!! Lindor..my favourite..you are the best..I love youu..!!" He climbed from the back to the frnt seat and kissed him to which viren smiled.
"Dont eat them now.."
"Whyy ?? Chalo okk..i wont"
"Thats like my good boy"
After the 15 minutes of drive they finally reached her hospital.
"Finallly.." aarav and viren both said at the same time and then they shared a cute laugh.Both got out of the car and viren locked the car.Aarav held viren's finger and they made their way to jeevika's cabin.They entered with a bang but to find noone there.Both gave each other a disappointed look and in no time jeevika's intern entered.
"Hey.. gud aftrnun sirr..! Aftrnoon aarav.." she kissed aarav on his cheek and he replied wid d same.
"Gud noon anjiee.."viren replied wid a smile on his face.
"She is coming in a few minutes.." she knew what he was going to ask next so she said herself and they both laughed.
"Okk..waise,what is she doing ?"
"umm...she was guiding zoya and janie as..lo aa gaiii" she looked at jeevika and left d place taking all the required files and bidding gudbye to everyone..
Viren and Jeevika..Their eyes said it all..viren blinked his eye,full of desire..full of affection at jeevika and jeevika too replied d same wid d blush on her face but bfore anything aarav popped.
"Mummaaa.." and he ran towards her.
"Aarav.." and they hi-fived each odr.
"How was the school?"
"Us se kya pooch rhi ho main batata hu" viren winked at aarav and aarav was helpless..what could he do? And an idea struck his mind.
"Umm..mommy..what are todays plans?" and he winked at viren and viren gave will-deal-with-it-later look..
"What do you want to do?"she kneeled down till his level .
"We will go out today"viren said kneeling down.
"Whattt ??" they both screamed with joy.
"Yesss!! U dont want to go..ok..we wont" he said getting up.
"Eh listen! who said so? We want to go..we will go...kyu aarav!" She said holding viren's hand.
"Yes papa..muma is right." viren laughed at them.
"Soo..waitng for what? Lets goo..!"
"But whereee ?" they both said together.
"Will decide it in car..lets go now"
"HMmm.." jeevika took her purse while aarav rushed towards the car.
Jeevika backhugged Viren as he was opening the door of the room.Feeling her hands on his chest made him go gagaa..he took her soft hands and kissed them.A beautiful scenario..
Before anything,again he opened the door,disturbing them..they broke apart.
Viren was so disappointed this time and not only viren jeevika too..
"Muma,papaa..can you cntinue wid it later..abhi chalein.."
"Hmm..chalo.." they all got out f the room and made their way to their red audi.Aarav sitted at back while jeevika in front wid viren.
"Museum.." said aarav.
"Boringgg it is.."said jeevika.
"Shopping.."exclaimed she.
"Nooo..not at all.." they both literally shouted.
"Ok..fine.."
"Convent garden..what say?" said viren.
"Yeahhh !!!! good idea.." both said.
"Haaye..ballet dance by sexy chicks..!!!kitna maza aegaaa" Viren said overjoyed and then regretting on what he said.
"Virenjii.."
"Papaa.." both of them had a different looks on their faces and viren had his eyes shut..After a few seconds the three of them bursted out .. they laughed really loud. He then started the engine and drove to convent garden.
"Papa..a movie dere.."
"Virenjii.." before they both came up with their demands viren said.
"What about taking karan and krystle with us ?"
"Papaa..what an idea..then ofcourse abeer will also come"
"Hmm...he wil come..it would be really fun..lets call dem also.."jeevika said.
"Hm..." she called them and asked them to b ready asap as they are coming to their place to pick them up..while virem signalled aarav to hide the gift pack under his seat which he bought for jeevika before it gets caught by her.Aarav did what he said..He drove to their place,picked them up from their home.All of them met each othr aarav and abeer,best friends in school also..study in same standard..They then travelled to convent garden,london.
They had a great,well spent day there..After having fun there they had their dinner and in no time both the boys were asleep on their papa's shoulder.They then drove to kk's place bid goodbye to each other..and then finaly at their place.Jeevika picked aarav but viren refused her to do so,he took him from her arms.jeevika opened d door lock,virem made his way to aarav's room.He changed his clothes while he was half asleep..placed him on his bed..kissed his forehead,covered him wid d blanket and then to their room.He closed the door and searched for jeevika.She was on the bed waiting for him.He came to her and smiled at her.
"First,go and change..We have whole night to talk."she said to him and smiled at him.He followed her and took his kurta and went to the washroom and in no time he was out as he badly wanted to spend time with his jeevika.He found her no where in the room.
"Jeevikaa..where are you?" he srched for her and he stopped when he found her outside staring at the stars.He backhugged her with his hands around her 4 month old belly.He dropped a wet kiss on her neck.He made her face him.He cupped her face and looked deeply into her eyes.They were lost in each other,unaware about the surroundings,the world..only they,viren and jeevika.What else did they want when they had each other. She couldn't help feeling the adrenaline of her heart when he first took her hand in the moonlight. She felt so protective and secure in his presence, that she hadn't taken much notice of where he was leading her. The scenery was so exquisite, that it left her breathless to the shimmering of the water, left with the moonlight ray as it painted a precise picture of the perfect scene. But when he leaned down to her ear and recited one of the most romantic poems, she couldn't help the blush and the sound of her heart pounding inside her chest, to hide the fact that she was falling head over heals for this guy. They made the perfect couple. He spoke every word with affection; 'love', would make her hands go numb, 'you're my' would set off his heart as a ticking bomb, and 'I Love you' meant the world to both of them. I love you, was the only words they wanted to hear in the world. I love you, was the message of bells that rang in their ears, as he had become one of her to cherish. She looked into his eyes, their heads were the same level. His eyes were the colour of a fresh moist grass. They emphasized on the freshness his appearance gave to his beauty; but in the moonlight, they looked almost blue. From the pressure of his hands, she could tell he was as nervous as she was. Especially when he leaned in, so close she could spell the flouriest scent coming from his breath, which she knew she would never forget this moment. His lips reached her jaw, tracing the lines of her ear to her collarbone. They were so warm against her skin as they reminded her of soft, little fluffy pillows; and for that moment, reminded her of fairy floss. He couldn't stop his heart from pounding in his chest. Her blood flowed rapidly in her cheeks, making her face as red as ever. She lifted her hands out of his, and pulled them up high to his shoulders, where she entwined them with his soft light brown hair. He put His hands down at her waist while pulling me closer to his chest. She was his, and he was her and so the bowl ran away with the spoon.They broke apart and yes,their eyes said it all again.They are so much used to of each other they cant imagine their lives widout each other.He kneeled down and caressed her belly,kissed it sooo softly and he kept his hand on her stomach "Papa wants to meet you my baby,come out soon..papa loves you and your muma a lot..cant wait to see you.." jeevika too kept her hand on his hand.He kissed her belly.He took her hand and made her sit on the chair placed there supporting her back with his hands. He went to the room and took the gift which he bought for her.
"Virenjii...where are you going?"
"Aaa raha hu...1 minute.."
He came there with the gift bag and handed it to her.
"Please sit with me" she said it with full of love and again they were lost in each other.they can never get enough of each other.They can spents ages sitting in front of each other admiring each other.He took another chair and sat sidehugging her.
"What is this?"
"Its a gift cant u see?" he smiled at her. "Open it"
"hMM..."she swiftly opened it and saw her favourite date chocolates."Oh my god !!!! Dates..."
"Hmmm..."he kissed her on cheek."Only for youu baby!!"
"Why are you spoiling me?You know i cant live without you and can never live without you and by doing these things you just make me crazyy!! I am a frenzy for you..I love you a lot...I love youu..."she kissed him back on lips.
"I love you tooo...You are my everything !!"he kissed her back on her forhead.
"There is one more thing..what is this?"she said looking quizically at a blue box
"Open it.."he smiled at her cuteness.She opened the box and found a diamond solitaire.She was taken aback.She looked at him and then back at the ring.
"Viren jii..."she was spellbound,totally numb.
"Shh..."he put his finger on her perfect lips."You need not say anything.It is a gift from me to my world.Here...give it to me."he took it from her and then took her hand and kissd it.He then inserted the ring,full of brilliance and fire,into her elegant,sleek finger. They heard the sound of the door getting opened,who else it could be,it was aarav.
"Mumaa...Papaaa..."he searched for them in the room and finally found them sitting outside.
"Yes babyy..!!"said viren.
"Aww..."
"What aww?"said jeevika.
"You look soo adorable together...aftrall my mum,dad..." and he giggled.They both smiled at each other.
Aarav jumped up and sat in viren's lap.
"Why didnt u sleep?"
"Wanted to sleep wid my papa today.."they both smiled at him.
"Then chalein...its one...!"
"Hmm.."said jeevika.
Viren got up with aarav in one hand while jeevika held his other hand.Vien helped her to stand as she was really tired after the dayout.Jeevika had her hand in viren's.They then laid on the bed with aarav in middle.In no time he was asleep and they both admired their son. They both too went to sleep in each others

_____________________________________THE END________________________________________

Thank you for always helping me out in the title my mangoo !!
Sorry if it was boring.
Criticism welcomed with open arms...
Chappals..potatoes...tomatoes...roses...flowers...everything accepted!!!
Thank you for reading..!!!
Feedback welcome...!

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maryammaqsood92 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME👍🏼
INDEED A WEEKEND TREAT
U DESCRIBED EVERYTHING SO BEAUTIFULLY ❤️
one word:BEAUTIFUL 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so freaking amazing
Wonderful
Brilliant
Loved it
Loved the way you described their emotions and their desire
Beautifully written
Good job girl
Thanks
virikamaliha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww awesome...
Aarav was soo cute...
Loved virika's sweet romance...
Fab yr...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
it was amazing
aarav is so cute nd he was.teasing her mom dad...so naughty just like viren
how much they missed eachother...loved the virika part ...superb
vry well written
awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Superb superb superb..
This can't get any better coz this is PURFECTT 👏
I love it to the core 😳
Thnx for the pm
Continue if u can 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was amazing
wonderful
magical
poetic
beautiful and why??? its all because of virika magic.. oh man i loved ur update..
whishing that kryan will understand that they are actually made for each other very soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb OS!
Nice storyline:)
Thank u for putting so much effort!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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osm...
wonderful...
brilliant...
vry nice...
vry cute...
luvd it...
luvd virika and arav and lauren...
arav naughtiness,cuteness...
nice work...
really a weeknd treat...
keep writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
damn cute
loved it
lovely
beautiful
fab
awesome
great work
can v gt 1-2 parts more

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