[AK] FF:Dear Miss Grapy... *Chp2 Pg 5 |23/7|

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|Dear Miss Grapy...|

{An Arnav-Khushi Fan Fiction}

A/N I would like to dedicate this entire fiction to Chaitalee Di[Eccentrica], Pari[Parun_Arshi] and Ria[Chand1234].
You both have been incredible friends till date and I love you all a lot!

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Chapter One-


31st March 2012

Bidding farewell! Bidding farewell is the most peculiar thing I have ever come through- not to mention Lavanya and her humorous tales. Melancholy, glee, thrill; all these three coalesced together give an inexpressible concoction of odd emotions that scuttle down our spine when saying goodbye. Ditto Miss Grapy! Arnav has left for India. No. No, I didn't even shed a tear- you have my word on that. I was extremely glad for him- finally he is getting married! Do you get that? Arnav; Arnav Singh Raizada is getting married! I guess I'm invited; if not I am always in to barge into his marriage! Okay; I admit, I am pretty sad- to say pretty will be an understatement, I am really very sad. Peculiarly, I can't even let a drop of tear cascade down my cheeks; If I ever do so, Arnav will leave everything and come back-my selfish part tells me to cry; cry my heart out but I can't! Since Arnav has come into my life, I've been only smiling; grinning always; for nothing!

Yeah; you can bet on that I'll not weep, unless' Unless I force myself to watch Kal Ho Na Ho which I can't since the movie is with Lavanya. Shit! YouTube on my IPad is not loading! Great; today is such a great day that everything is reeling so shoddily!

Hey Devi maiyya- I can't believe that I am penning down 'Hey Devi Maiyya' too! Anyways, Arnav has left! He is gone- shit! He's not kicked the bucket Khushi; he's alive, remember? He's just gone to carry on his studies and get married! Yah! Get married?! But why? Arrrgg! Enough! Why can't I get that away from my mind?

'Specsy!' and again my mind gets diverted to my supposed nickname pronounced by his husky voice. No Khushi! Stop! Think about something else- Salman Khan! His next film Dabangg2 is releasing towards the end of this year; think Khushi! Think about seeing him attired again in a police outfit with Sonakshi Sinha! How romantic!

Note to self
- It's a must to buy the first tickets for the release of Dabangg2!
- There are many things to worry about- like the world is ending in December; we must panick.
- It's my birthday next month; I should be in full swing to enjoy and stop worrying about Arnav.
- Remember to Skype chat with Arnav as soon as he reaches India; Arnav! Sigh! I miss him, already!


Before retiring, Miss Grapy, I would like to share that I hope Lavanya really succeeds in bringing Arnav back- Yes. I am being selfish now, very selfish. Lest, I hope she was joking, as usual, when she said that if she couldn't bring Arnav back, she wouldn't be her neighbor's daughter. I mean, is she really, her neighbor's child? Whatever, it seems palpable- you can count on me to be wicked on that!

Who would say that I, Khushi Kumari Gupta, is actually an adult of twenty two with her crazy suggestions and resolutions? Fine; let's not be too infantile! But I am apprehensive; I hope Arnav is having a nice flight back to India and not magnetizing troubles- he's not like me by the way; he'll be fine, right Miss Grapy?
I finally hope that he settles down happily, if not with me, at least with another woman, because you know na? I love him a lot!

Kuch kuch ho raha tha; usne nahi samjha! Oh! Finally, the remorse and tears of letting him go are coming back- I miss him.
Right Miss Grapy? You miss him too?
Goodnight; have lovable dreams! Love you Miss Grapy!

As he felt the words she wrote, tears soaked the diary leaving traces of water everywhere. He missed her too; a lot.
"I hope you get well soon, Khushi," he held her hand in his, "I miss you a lot- you and your crazy chatters! I am dying to hear you talk again Khushi. It's been months and you're still in this hell; get up! Be a fighter! I am here to take you back, come on Khushi! Get up!---"
"Mr Raizada, could you please excuse yourself for a moment? Mrs Raizada needs to be examined by the doctor," Arnav nodded at the nurse's words and plunged himself back in her diary, Khushi's diary, where at least he could see her, hear her, feel her talking; he could at least live with her in the diary.


Index:
Part One- Scroll Up
Part Two- Page 5



A/N-
As cliched as it may sound, I am back, again.
First and Foremost I am utterly apologetic for not updating anything for weeks, now. 'O Level' assessments' [so as not to make it worrisome by naming it 'exams'] preparations along with personal life have hooked me up a lot.
Also, to my sheer discontent, I will not be continuing anything out here; I've lost track of what I was writing and it's all encumbering when I don't know what to write next, how to proceed ahead. Neither can I prolong my stories, nor can I impede writing- exams are imminent and writing perks up my English.
I would like apologize to Afna di specially and all my readers for not being able to continue anything; I know you were, and are still looking forward to IFS updates. I am absolutely sorry di.
I am going to write only one story here; one Fan Fiction; that is this one.
The Fan Fiction will be updated at the interval of one day.
However, I have decided to keep you posted by PMs only on Mondays and Fridays.
Please, those who have ceased to read any of the stories I write, please feel free to unbuddy me; it takes a lot of time to send PMs; please!
I'll filter my buddy list by the end of this week and if you plan not to read anything I write, kindly scrap me and I'll remove you myself from my buddy list!
I'd again like to point out that I am really very sorry and please pardon me; it's just that the time is not favorable!
Also, i would appreciate that if you could pin point all my flaws in the story-concept, language, mistakes--verbs/grammar, style of writing, anything- while reading; it will help me a lot to improve!
Thank you all for reading and being by my side,
Rhea.🤗





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AneesahJabeen thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds like a cool concept x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the chapter one...
Arnav went to get married...
now Khushi is Mrs. Raizada ryt??
what happened to her??
looking very promising...
update soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome back Rhea, you took us on quite a roll coaster of emotions there and that too with first chapter. As I began reading the chapter, I was feeling all amused and instantly recognised the writer because of the way she was rambling, then you very conveniently provided us with all the info we needed about her character such as her age and what she did. I love this whole diary format!

What I did not anticipate was feeling a tad sad towards the end, I had to read the following line twice or three times to make sure you didn't mean SHE instead of HE.

"As he felt the words she wrote, tears soaked the diary leaving traces of water everywhere. He missed him too"

^^The transition was brilliant, so Khushi is Mrs Raizada. We can therefore take comfort in the fact that Arnav and Khushi do end up being together. As to how they get married and how Khushi ends up in the hospital bed fighting for her life I am sure you will unravel all in the coming chapters and I can hardly wait! All the best and thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome back 👏
Liked the concept 👍🏼
Khushi how come Mrs. Raizada?????? 😕
What the! she is in dairy??? 😲
Waiting for the update eagerly.
Edited by 25imrankhan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khushi is Mrs. Raizada... 😕

interesting concept...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome back dear
very interesting start can't wait to read more
continue soon please and thank u for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all welcome back...nice story continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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welcum bk
arnav was readng her diary... wt happnd 2 khushi????
arnav left...khushi s mrs raizada
intriguing
lukng fwd
danx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good to see you back.. awesome start dear.. arnav was reading khushi's dairy.. what have happened to khushi??? loved it... do continue soon...

thanks for pm 😊

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