EVERYTHING IS FAIR, WHEN LOVE IS WAR -ch19 - pg 84 - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 10
"Hello, inspector Jaggat speaking" , Jaggat answered his call.
"sir, I am Dr kumar of the forensic department, I just identified the body"
"Hmmm , anyone we know" enquired Jaggat
"Ummm, its Akash Varma, the dental records gave us a match. And the dna test too gave the same result"
Jaggat : ummm, thanks doctor, keep me posted with further developments about his murder.
"Oh god!! Akash!!! What's happening here? There is something serious behind this. Maybe its time to do some digging", thought Jaggat
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Uday pulled up in his driveway , quite late at night. Whilst day-dreaming about Maya in his office , he dozed off there and his eyes only opened , just to see that it was rather late and he should be headed home. Lazily he opened the front door and greeted : "Hey Arthi , Hi Tani ... Baby , daddy's home!"
"She's asleep Uday ! It's late ... IN CASE U HAVEN'T NOTICED!" , came Arthi's sharp reply. "Oh yeah THAT , I lost track of time ", he answered as he neared Arthi , in order to kiss her cheek. She pushed him with force that he stumbled a bit.
"Whoa , what's the matter?" , Uday asked , clearly aware that something was bugging Arthi. "U tell me Uday ... U TELL ME WHAT'S THE MATTER", she yelled . "Oh shut up Arthi , I have a head-ache - STOP SCREAMING , If u got something to say ; SPIT IT OUT!"
A : Where the hell were you today?
U : Oh God , not this again! I was at the office , where else would I be?
A : REALLY? Then , why didn't u pick Tani?
U : SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I - I - I don't , where is - where is she? Did - Did U bring her? (he fumbled getting a sentence together)
A : No Uday , I didn't go for her , BECAUSE HER FATHER WAS SUPPOSSED TO FETCH HER! What has gotten into you? Where was your mind? If you were busy , you should've told me ... I would've made other arrangements! U KNOW , she could've DIED today?
U : Oh come-on Arthi ... stop over-reacting now!
A : I'm not over-reacting , Tani nearly get knocked trying to cross the road by herself . It was by luck , that a kind soul was there to save her!
U : Is she okay?
A : She's fine , NO THANKS TO YOU!
U : THAT'S ENOUGH ARTHI ... I've had it up to here (he held his hand over his head) , with your taunts. I forgot to get her ... I'M HUMAN ... it happens!
A : Well , it's happening a bit too often with you! I want to know Uday , WHERE WERE YOU ? AND THIS TIME THE TRUTH DAMMIT!
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Jaggat entered the drawing room, when Arthi and Uday were shouting at each other

"Excuse me? Hope I am not disturbing you" asked Jaggat . Uday and Arthi who were literally at each other's throats, looked embarrassed. No one would ever be proud when their private fights had an unexpected audience. Uday and Arthi was always loving in front of others though they kept their fights at home to a bare minimum. So this was totally unexpected. Uday was first to recover ...

Uday: ah!! Jaggat. What a fine surprise!!! What brings you at this hour? You want tea or coffee? (he kept jabbering).

Arthi was a bit more composed ...

Arthi: Hi Jaggat, I think you caught us in a bad time. Uday is being so irresponsible nowadays. Her eyes shot daggers at Uday.

Uday: Oh , for Pete's sake , give me a break!

Jaggat: Uday and arthi, both of you don't start again, take a break ok.

Arthi: so jaggat, I will get you some tea. Without sugar, na?

Jaggat: yes Arthi , u remembered!

Arthi left the room, and Jaggat spoke to Uday

Jaggat: Uday, I have come here for an official purpose, not a social visit

Uday: what is it Jaggat?

Jaggat: Akash verma is dead. He was murdered.

Uday: what? Akash!!!! Your joking, how? When? (Uday found it difficult to process this news, his friend Akash died!!!! What's happening to all his friends?)

Jaggat: my heartfelt condolences Uday. Three days back we found a headless corpse in a alley at S.R. street. The body was in a very bad shape, it had stab marks and maggots had started to feast on it. Yesterday a fisherman fished out a head . Forensic tests identified the body as Akash's .

Arthi who had entered the room with the tea was shocked to hear the news.

Arthi: what? Akash!! But why should anyone kill him? He was such a jovial person.

Jaggat: I don't know who did it. But the murders are becoming more and more frequent. Uday if you have noticed, one by one , all your friends are dying. First Aryan, then Sameer and now Akash. There was a huge time gap of 2 years between Aryan's and Sameer's death. But the time gap between Sameer's and Akash's death is just 5 weeks.

Uday: but Jaggat, Aryan and Sameer died in 2 separate ACCIDENTS. The deaths could be a coincidence! You should be looking for Akash's killer , instead of linking all the deaths.

Jaggat: Uday, I can understand your distress, but it is my intuition that tells me there is a connection between these deaths and it has to be one killer behind all this. And I am never wrong. If we read the pattern, then you are next Uday!

Arthi and Uday together says: what????

Uday:But who would want to kill me? What did I do? It's totally madness

Jaggat: Uday I don't have proof to give you now, but soon I will come with all proof to nab the killer. Till then stay safe uday. Don't go out at night ... you have a family that depends on you.

Uday: Good day Jaggat. (he left the room)

Arthi told jaggat: what do we do jaggat? I am getting scared.

Jaggat: don't worry arthi, I'll nab whoever is behind this, soon. Just make sure Uday understands the dangers.

Arthi: I will , but he is so stubborn ... he may not listen to me!

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Manyata sat by the window in her bedroom , looking at the rain outside. Her mind drifted to all the times , she run out and play in the rain. Even THAT day , she had done that. She twirled herself in the first rain of the season , saturating her clothes , so much so , that it stuck to her ... outlining her every curve , igniting a carnal desire in HIM.
"Come Uday ", she held out her hand for him ... inviting him to join her in getting wet. He did join her and within seconds , he was as soaked as she was.
In the last 2 months , Manyata and Uday had gotten very close. She told him that she loved him and to her surprise , he reciprocated. They shared their first kiss thereafter. Everyone warned her that Uday was NOT to be trusted. "If she'd give herself to him ... that would be the last she'd see of him" ... all her friends told her , but she trusted her heart - her heart said that they'd be together FOREVER!
"I wish I was a raindrop ", he whispered huskily to her. "Why is that? ", she asked with lowered eyes . "So that I'd get to touch you from your head to your eyes , down your nose , kissing your lips , rolling down your neck ; sliding in-between your ... " , he couldn't complete as she placed her palm over his mouth and blushed shyly.
In a single swoop , she was being carried in his arms ... and taken to his bedroom. Gently , he laid her on the bed , and without shifting his gaze from her eyes , he started undoing her clothes. Shortly , all her clothes and even his, were piled on the floor.
He placed himself over her body , careful not to crush her under his weight. Slowly , lovingly , he kissed her ... until they had to break for air. Lightly , with his fingers , he closed her eyes . She could feel him kiss every inch of her ... it felt heavenly; and she moaned in pleasure. Her legs parted on their own ; and he entered her , breaking her virginity. It was the most beautiful sensation in the world. She fell asleep in Uday's arms ...
Remembering that night - still caused her to smile ... EVEN TODAY!
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Uday was very frustrated, Jaggat was trying to scare him; with a cock and bull tale about some killer coming for him ,and had already killed his friends. He had more pressing matters to handle, than hide from a mysterious killer, ie if he even exists. He did not have any news about Maya yet. That was eating his brains. "Where did she disappear?" . If he had been able to talk to her once, just once, everything could be sorted. He was sure she loved him the way he did.

Nowadays he drove through the city,hoping that he would meet her. Till date he did not get a chance. But still he drove, like a blind man in search of light. Driving for a long time made him tired, and he wanted to have a cup of coffee. He stopped by a outdoor restaurant, parked his car safely and went to grab a cup of coffee.

He bought a chicken sandwich and started to munch on it, when he saw her, he blinked his eyes to make sure that he was not hallucinating. No it was her, he was damn sure. She was here, OMG SHE WAS REALLY HERE!!!!!!!

It was really exciting to see her, he wanted to meet her NOW , but at the same time , he didn't want to scare her away. She grabbed her burger and coffee and went and sat at one corner of the restaurant, "time to strike" thought uday.

He went and sat in the chair opposite to her, she looked up, but made no sign of leaving. She ignored him as if he was invisible!

U: Maya!!! Where were you all these days? I was looking for you.

Maya looked at him stone faced and asked: "what do you want Uday, just leave me alone?"

U: Maya, please, listen to me, I know that I did a big mistake lying to you, but

M: but what uday?? You thought you could have fun with me?? Do I look like a wh**e to you?? You know - I wanted to be a girl in love with a guy - that loved me too ... not a MARRIED MAN'S MISTRESS!!!!!!

U: its not like that Maya, I love you

M: I don't think u know what LOVE means Uday! U only LUST me ... that's all! I was a fool to give my EVERYTHING TO YOU! (she shook her head)

U : But Maya ...

M: enough Uday, I just don't want to talk to you anymore. As a women, I felt humiliated, I felt ashamed of myself for trusting you. Its over Uday. EVERYTHING is over between us.

Saying this Maya left the place, without giving Uday a backward glance. BAMMM ! , she knocked into a middle-aged woman ; in a nurses uniform. Quickly , she blocked her face and walked away without even apologising ... leaving the nurse pondering about whether she had seen or known this girl from BEFORE!
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that is a big chapter done, tired now😉
hope you like it😃, enjoy the calmness that the update gives you, because soon... he he he ... its a suspense
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

par UDAY will stay UDAY!!
sorry kyun feel Karu??
kisne kaha tha use affairs rrakhne keliye??? MAINE kaha😳!

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey barfi jiji and andy jiji
i am first again '
aha making an record
so i got all my questions answered
uday played with manyata feeling
just to use her body and got her pregnant
veer is her son and he is taking revenge
on everybody who made his mother life hell
ok here do not mind me saying but

I HATE UDAY
HE IS SUCH A JERK
I MEAN SO MANY AFFAIR
HE SPOILED A GIRL LIFE
I MEAN SHE WAS JUST 18 HOW COULD HE
DO THAT
THEN HE GOT MARRIED TO ARTHI
AND EVEN AFTER MARRIAGE AND DEAD OF HIS DAUGHTER HE IS INTO HIS YEH JAWAANI HAI DEWWANI MOOD
I MEAN HE BETRAYED HIS WIFE
AND SPOILED ANOTHER GIRL LIFE
I THOUGHT AT FIRST MAYA IS MANYATA
AND AT END HE WILL END UP FALLING FOR HER
BUT YOU SUPRISED ME I MEAN YOU TRICK ME ALWAYS
IN YOUR ONE SS YOU MAKE ME HATE MANYATA AND IN THIS YOU MAKE ME HATE UDAY
WOA YOU INDEED ARE AN EXCELLENT WRITER

i really loved this update
the concept is totally different
here we will not see manveer in love
actually not a manveer love ss
it is so different and unique
and each update makes me eagerly wait for the another
update super asap
great story

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi guys...
Haye now I like Maya!!!
Hehehehe Uday ko kya well deserved jawab diya HAN NAHI TOH!!
Ye ladka akhir kitne ladkiyon ko ghuma raha hai??? Pehle manyata...
Fir aarthi...
fir Maya...
fir koi aur!!!
I guess veer manyata aur Uday ka baccha hoga watts say mere dono khatarnakam evils????
Hufff after so many days I've commented 2nd...
Andy u have my full support in killing Uday!!
But navi ko manana padega na???
Bada hi difficult kam hai!!
After all UDAY ka sawaal hai!!
Navi let's make a deal Uday ko hatake tujhe lead mein dalde...
Fir toh Uday ko maar sakte hai na????
Sochle bahot fayda hai!!
Heheheehe!! Bas bas bohat bore karliya mene...
I really wish that happy family will be back!!! Awesome update again guys...
You two are the best..
Love u!!
Edited by MAHI1198 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hawwwv see Andy we got the culprit!!
ITS NAVI!!!
hehehhehhehhe!!
but on a serious note m really loving the way this story is proceeding!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ala re Ala!! woohhoo Awesome update Andy Jee!!😆

confusion confusion😕 and confusion all the way!! you guys twist a lot man.😭
i don't really understan if Maya and Manyata are the same people?🤔 are they? One thing is clear that uday had used Manyata in past and Veer was possibly his son🤓. btw this jagat and akash part is out of my sense totally.
manyata remembering the past and smiling, that was nice.😊 I feel like kicking uday was using her😡 dumb ass.!!🤢

poor Arthi, she is going to face a ew uday everyday now😆 it was an awesome update ANDVINA.😛 that's what i call you both.😆
Thanks for the PM😃
&
Update ASAP!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
SO MY GUESS WAS CORRECT.IT WAS AKASHs HEAD.OOOHPPS WAT A HORRIBLE END OF A PERSON.SO ALL EXCEPT UDAY R DEAD.WILL HE DIE.NO HE WONT.IF HE DIE SO EASILY WHO WILL SUFFER FOR HIS BAD DEEDS.EVERYTIME I READ EACH UPDATE I FEEL BAD FOR AARTI.

DEN MANYATA THINKING ABOUT UDAY PART WAS NICE.SOMETIMES I FEEL DAT MANYATA IS BEHIND VEERS TO HER REVENGE.THERE ALSO I WAS CORRECT .MAYA CAME BACK. GLAD DAT SHE IS NOT HAPPY WID UDAY n HATES HIM. DEN LAST PART DAT NURSE CONFUSED SEEING MAYAS FACE IS REALLY CONFUSING.

ANDINAS MINDBLOWING UPDATE.WEN U REVEAL SOME MYSTRY IN AN UPDATE U WILL LEAVE ANOTHER ONE HANGING US FOR A WEEK. EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPPY WID NEW RELEVATIONS. CONTINUE SOON DEARIES. DANXS FOR PM ANDY.
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsssmmm andvina love the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Andy n Navina di
How ur'll? 😊
Wow, update was amazing 👏
I have a feeling that Maya is pregnaunt
I feel sorry for Uday,
First because I thing Jaggat is right n that the next to die will be him
Second because he was searching for Maya madly
Third because after he found her, he sort of lost he again
Is Manyata, Maya? 😲
Shame, also feel bad for Maya/Manyata because she/they were used by Uday
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon 😃 , eagerly waiting for next chapter
Edited by humairaa1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey... Andy...
Hey... Navina...
That was a superb update...
I liked Arthi and Uday's fight...
But this update confused me little too...
I mean now the entry of Manyata...
Till now I had been thinking Maya is Manyata...
And you have changed the name...
But now you mentioned Manyata...
And the last was a mysterious one...
You both have an expertise in creating mystery...
Pls... pls...Update soon...
And thanx for the PM...

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