Crisp Bytes SC - 18th July 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sach ka saamna

Vidya chatur, it's time to face the reality

Guniyal, you know, don't you that all is not well with Kumud?


Sunny, thank God you tried to talk to Saras and are now coming to India to look for him


Pramaad, you creep, stay away, tumhare liye tumhari woh do take ki kalika hai na

Bilkul tumhare type ki hai, usmain woh sab hai Jo tum hain chahiye


Hmm ho gaya sab!

Ab chalain, akhri scene ki aur?

Yeh CVs bhi na, phir shock kar diya aaj!


Saras :

Aag ki lapton main

Kis ki ahuti de rahe the tum?

Apne ateet ki?

Tute rishton ki?

Kadwi yaadon ki?


Aur eka ek bharak uthi aag

Jo kuch daba ke rakha tha seene main

Jis sach ka saamna karne se dar rahe the tum

Usiki aanch main jal uthe tum


Ek bar bhi naam na liya uska

Ek baar bhi haal na poocha uska

Jaise koi ghaav tha jise kuredane se

dar rahe the tum


Jaise ik aas ka daaman tham ke baithe tum

Ki jo hua woh sirf ek sapna tha

Bus uske tootne ka intezar karna hai

Aur phir meethe sapne ko sach karna hai


Aur aaj sach ka saamna Jo hua

To sab swaha ho gaya

Jal ke rakh ho gayee har ummeed


Maang main siindoor

Mangalsutra ka shingar

Dulhan sa damakata roop

Sapna to yeh tumhara tha

Haqueeqat hai kisi aur ki !


Gautam, Gautam, Gautam


Aaj Gautam tumhari aankhon main padhi maine

Saras ki sari vedana, uske man ke saare bhaav


Kitna kuch keh gaye tum bina kuch kahe

Yeh shayad tum bhi nahi jaante


Hairat, avishwas, kshama, pashchatap

Shikva, shikayat, apradh ka bodh

Dher Sara dard, halka sa krodh

Na insaafi ka ehsaas, naummeedi aur santap


kshama aur shikayat ek saath

Aanknon main sawaal aur jude hue haath

Chand aansuon main dard ka gehra sagar

Tum Gautam ho ya Saras, mita daala har antar!



Tumhari aankhain bolti hain

Shabdon ke mohtaj nahi ho tum

Dil se jiya hai Saras ko tumne

Tumhari issi baat pe to marte hain hum!



Episode -10/10,

Jen you were excellent, superb,

par kya karain

Aaj Gautam ne bahut rulaya!




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Posted: 12 years ago
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jenam rocked what a confrontation so much pain and hurt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: khanrocks

jenam rocked what a confrontation so much pain and hurt


The last scene was superlative
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gautam was 15/10 today...They rocked it...Their eyes...My goodness!

My only issue with Kumud's potrayal is how could she hold back tears so welll...She is a young girl after all, ghar ki maryad weighed so much that she did swallowed her tears?

Sunny angle is going to be intersting...he will soon get Danny worried and on board too...

I liked how that vistor chided VC...seriously VC! You are the biggest culprit here...You are the wise one...not these fools in love...Why oh Why?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fire! An element heat- unforgiving, blazing, burning, all consuming flames. What is aflame? Their lives, their ehsaas. Across the gulf of glow, each saw an apparition- the other one. And absoluteness of a reality, hit them like a solar flare right on their face. As if Fiery Goddess herself pit them a-face, She a witness. She a tester, 'could a momentary frailty be permitted for the spacial ones? Then what is a claim for 'privilege'? Now prove the penance.'...
Wiill they burn out in inferno of their own making? Or their inner mettle will see them through- like a pure gold distilled in a furnace? And here, a tell tale extinguisher is already seeping from their praying hearts- tears of grief, atonement and amends. Though amendment has slipped far out for the grasp, yet water has always been antidote of a blaze. And after all, water has also been the base element in their love so far.

'Phew', what a scene that was! So entirely apt and yet, so entirely unexpected, as it should be. These people know what they need to show, as they should.👏 The Gale, after a deceptive, momentary calm of the 'eye', hit him full force. He realised. What a blunder to ask one's soulmate to leave. And what a death to see his 'wife' wearing adornments of other name! What a fall. Forgive him God. He is too decent to merit such a punishment. And she is too innocent to partake the part.🤢

Edited by smrth - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshicritic


Saras :

Aag ki lapton main

Kis ki ahuti de rahe the tum?

Apne ateet ki?

Tute rishton ki?

Kadwi yaadon ki?


Aur eka ek bharak uthi aag

Jo kuch daba ke rakha tha seene main

Jis sach ka saamna karne se dar rahe the tum

Usiki aanch main jal uthe tum


Ek bar bhi naam na liya uska

Ek baar bhi haal na poocha uska

Jaise koi ghaav tha jise kuredane se

dar rahe the tum


Jaise ik aas ka daaman tham ke baithe tum

Ki jo hua woh sirf ek sapna tha

Bus uske tootne ka intezar karna hai

Aur phir meethe sapne ko sach karna hai


Aur aaj sach ka saamna Jo hua

To sab swaha ho gaya

Jal ke rakh ho gayee har ummeed


Maang main siindoor

Mangalsutra ka shingar

Dulhan sa damakata roop

Sapna to yeh tumhara tha

Haqueeqat hai kisi aur ki !



And this is pure Arshi.👏

@ GR, agree entirely. Take a bow, Sir.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: smrth

Fire! An element heat- unforgiving, blazing, burning, all consuming flames. What is aflame? Their lives, their ehsaas. Across the gulf of glow, each saw an apparition- the other one. And absoluteness of a reality, hit them like a solar flare right on their face. As if Fiery Goddess herself pit them a-face, She a witness. She a tester, 'could a momentary falter be permitted for the spacial ones? Then what is a claim for privilege? Now prove the penance.'...
Wiill they burnt out in inferno of their own making? Or their inner mettle will see them through- like a pure gold distilled in a furnace? And here, a tell tale extinguisher is already seeping from their praying hearts- tears of grief, atonement and amends. Though amendment has slipped far out for the grasp, yet water has always been antidote of a blaze. And after all, water has always been the base element in their love so far.

'Phew', what a scene that was! So entirely apt and yet, so entirely unexpected, as it should be. These people know what they need to show, as they should.👏 The Gale, after a deceptive, momentary calm of the 'eye', hit him full force. He realised. What a blunder to ask one's soulmate to leave. And what a death to see his 'wife' wearing adornments of other name! What a fall. Forgive him God. He is too decent to merit such a punishment. And she is too innocent to partake the part.🤢


Smrth, your words made me cry again,

I can't forget his face, tears in his eyes, hands folded, the questioning tilt of his head - just that moment was worth a thousand words!

I think we also have to thank the Cvs for this meeting across the fire - the ahooti, the swaha, and the shock of realization,

Phir aag main ghee dhala Kumud ne, ahooti Di Saras ne, aur bharak gayi aag!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mini7

Gautam was 15/10 today...They rocked it...Their eyes...My goodness!

My only issue with Kumud's potrayal is how could she hold back tears so welll...She is a young girl after all, ghar ki maryad weighed so much that she did swallowed her tears?

Sunny angle is going to be intersting...he will soon get Danny worried and on board too...

I liked how that vistor chided VC...seriously VC! You are the biggest culprit here...You are the wise one...not these fools in love...Why oh Why?


Yes, today was Gautams day, and Jen - too good, they just outdid themselves today
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤗 to you, Arshi.

Was waiting to read your CB.

Rulaakar chal diye ek din, hansee bankar jo aaye the...
Chaman ro ro ke kehta hai ye kabhi gul muskuraaye the...

Agar dil ke zuban hote to yeh wam kuch kam to ho jaate...

Saras ke "dil ke zuban" is in Gautam's face..He is such a gem of an artist!

Loved that they did it in SC style, nothing OTT but everything to keep us imprisoned!










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Posted: 12 years ago
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Today it all belonged to Gautam...he had it all...happiness to see her...sadness of loosing her...regret for what he did all through eyes

and Kumud was all past it...she had it all pain pain and pain...and all she had left with herself were tears and tears and tears ...Jenny dear u r too good with Glycerine

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