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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
shitty tanveer yaha bhhi pahunch gayi..😡
aur uski maa bhi shaitan hai..eager to knw abt her...
conti soon
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good one..thnks 4 d pm

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wow tis is really superb...love the bonding between ayaan n humeira n hw they are getting along it really great...asim n najma are too cute n the way they react to each other n the way their fight with each other is also soo cute...so tis was tanveer plan...she wanted to surprise asad n zoya...wonder whose pic is with zoya...thx fr the pm n please pm me for the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part
but plz tanveer ko baher nikalo😡
i just hate her
plz cont soon
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Originally posted by: awesome

awesome part

but plz tanveer ko baher nikalo😡
i just hate her
plz cont soon


even i hate her... but she will be there in the story what to do... villan nahi hoto hero aur heroine kaise milenge...
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Part 16

Udaipur:

              Everyone were busy with their works…. Zoya is checking everything and instructing everything…. Zoya instructed Jia through her wirless to bringdown bride and her family memebers and relatives accompanied them….. On the other side she instructed Prasad to bring bride groom and his family members and relatives…… they reached to the center of the ceremony hall….. Bride and Bride groom came to center where it is marked….. when they came there it started revolving slowly….  When this varmala session is going on there is fall of red  petals on them……. It is just like a rain but instead of rain drops it was petals……

                 Everyone were really excited watching this but Asad is happy seeing Zoya's excited face…… he couldn't take his eyes from her….. Tanveer is burning with jealousy on the other side…..

Tanveer (To herself) – mein inke baghal mein khadi hoon…. Par Asad ki nazar toh Zoya se hati nahi rahi hai….. yeh dono khud ki feelings se bekabar hai…. Abhi haal ise hai toh feelings jaane ke baad….. mujhe kuch karna padega…. Abhi kuch karna padega…..

                     Tanveer looking at Asad….

Tanveer – Humari nikha isse bhi zyaada khoobsurat hogi na Asad…..

                Asad turned to her with a shocked expression…… Tanveer is standing there with a wicked smile….. Asad again looked at Zoya…. Zoya got a call because of so much noise in the hall she went outside…… Asad ignoring Tanveer went back of her…… Tanveer made an irritated face with quivered lips…..

                Zoya was speaking to someone in the phone….. Asad was standing at distance and watching her…..

Asad (To himself) – mera nikha Tanveer se honewali hai…… par mein yaha kya kar rahi hoon….. dimag maan rahi hai Tanveer se nikha ke liye par dil kyu nahi……..

               Asad glance struck with kangan wore by her….. that is the same kangan Dilshad gave to her…..

Asad (To himself) – yeh kangan…. She is still wearing it…. But why……

               Asad made an questioning face and went to Zoya and stood back of her….. she disconnected her call and turned back…. She is surprised to see Asad there…… When Zoya was going ask him……… he caught her hand lifted it up to make kangan visible to both of them…… He held her hand across and infront of there faces and asked her looking into her eyes…….

Asad – Aapne yeh kangan abhi tak utara kyun nahi……

                Zoya didn't answer and she is just looking down to search answer for her question……

Asad – batayiye….. jawaab dijiye……

            Asad came more close to Zoya…. Zoya's heart started racing….. she could hear her heartbeat….. she could feel his breath on her face….. she closed her eyes and opened it again as a symbol getting herself back to answer……

Zoya – woh…. Mein…. I mean….

             Zoya was going to answer they heard someone screaming and crying just few steps away from them…… Asad turned back to see who it was…… it is Tanveer who is on her kneels weepingly badly…… Asad came to her running and Zoya followed him…… Asad was on his kneels and trying to console her……. Tanveer placed her head on Asad's shoulder and started crying more….. she effected Zoya…

Asad – Kya hua Tanveer….???

                      Tanveer looking at Asad and wiping her dramatic tears……..

Tanveer – Asad….. Asad… woh abbu….

Asad – kya hua hai uncle ko….??

Tanveer – Abbu is hospitalized…… Abbu…..Heart attack

                 Tanveer completed her half broken sentence in between her sobbs…..Asad and Zoya are trying to console her.

Tanveer – Asad abbu ke pass jana hai abhi…… please leke chalona…..

                    Asad couldn't say no…. they three got up... Asad held Tanveer and started walking towards the building to collect there luggage and then to leave….. Zoya stared at there way until they got vanished…….

Zoya (To herself) – Tanveer, Mr. Khan ki magetar hai… mujhe in dono ko dekh kar farak nahi panda chahiye… par mujhe farak pad raha hai………. Kyu..??

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NewYork :

                 After party Ayaan reached his room…. He got freshen up and lay back on his bed…… He tried calling Asad but Asad is not answering his call……

Ayaan – Bhaijaan phone kyu nahi utta rahe hai….. Bhaijaan mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai…. Mein ne aaj ek isi ladki se mili hoon jo sabse alag hai…. Mein ne aaj tak isi ladki se nahi mili hoon…..

                      Ayaan is so excited to share about Humeira with her brother….. Whole night he was thinking about Humeira, her words, her smile, her innocence and her politeness…….

Humeira's home:

                  All are sitting in the hall and having a happy chit-chat……

Humeira – Abbu Zoya baji kyu nahi ayi…..

Abbu – Tumhe pata hai na usse kaam hai….. usne phone karke bhi bataya aur abh mujhe complain matt karna……

Humeira – Khala Asim aur Aisha kyu nahi aye…..

Asma – Aisha ko college hai….. aur Asim

Abdul – Asim ko meeting hai….. issi liye mein mana kiya tha aane ke liye……

Zeenat – Humeira mooh matt latka…. Tumhe toh India hi jaana hai na….. woh logh yaha aake kya karenge…. Waise bhi tum toh hume chodke jaarahe ho…..

                 Zeenat making an dramatic frown….. Humeira carefully with th came to Zeenat and sat beside her…..

Humeira – aap bhi na Aapi…..

              Anwar entered with a envelope in his hand from outside carrying his laptop bag……….

Anwar – Uddass honeki koi zaroorat nahi hai….. kyun ki meinaur Aapi bhi India aane wale hai……

Zeenat (Shocked and Surprised) – Kya….??

Humeira (excitedly) – Sach mein…..

                 Everyone sitting there are excited to hear this……..

Zeenat – Aap ye kya keh rahe hai…??

Anwar – Sach mein…… India mein meri company wale ek contract kar rahe hai….. uss contract ke liye kisi lo India bejna hai 6months ke liye…… aur woh koi aur nahi mein hoon….. mujhe select kiya hai India jaane ke liye…. So no uddasi hum jaarahe hai India kyun ki hum hai Bharatwaasi……

             Zeenat with a sigh…….

Zeenat – Hmm…. Aap yahi se shuru hogaye…. Waha jaane ke baad aapko aur Zoya ko rokhna mushkil hi nahi naamunkin hai…….

Gaffur – woh toh hai…..

                    All had a happy laugh……..

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Next Day :

               After continuous journey for hours Asad and Tanveer reached Bhopal….. Asad drove to hospital where Abbas is admitted……. When Asad and Tanveer entered they saw Rashid in waiting area…… Asad and Tanveer went there running to enquire about the situation……..

Asad – Abbu uncle kaise hai…….

Tanveer – Uncle abbu kaise hai…..

Rashid – woh abhi stabilized hai…… andar ICCU mein hai……

Tanveer (Crying) – Woh teekh hai na uncle……??

                Rashid gently putting his hand on her head and by caressing said…..

Rashid – Chinta matt karna….. woh teekh hai….. aur hum hai na yaha….. Doctor andar check-up kar raha hai…. Don't worry…..

Inside ICCU :

                 Abbas is lying on hospital bed and doctor is standing beside him…….

Abbas – Yaad hai na tumhe kya bolna hai….. koi gadbad matt karna……

Doctor – Nahi sir mein sambal lungi…..

Abbas – lagta hai sabb agaye…… abb tum jao…. Aur sirf meri beti ko andar aanedo aur kisiko nahi……..

Doctor – teekhe sir……..

Outside ICCU :

            Doctor came out wearing his stechscope in a white coat………

Rashid – Abbas kaise hai……

             Tanveer was crying and Asad held her………

Doctor – woh out of danger hai…. Par humne unhe observation mein rakha hai….. agar ek aur baar heart attack aaya tho bachana mushkil hojayega…… unhe koi stress aur tension nahi hona chahiye….. unhe kush rakhiye…..

                  Doctor left from there……. Tanveer was still crying…. Abbas and Rashid are trying to console her…...

Tanveer – Kya mein andar jaa sakti hoon……

Doctor – Haa… par unhe disturb matt kijiye…….. now excuse me…

               Doctor left from there and Tanveer went inside….. Asad and Rashid sat outside in waiting area……

Inside ICCU :

             Abbas was lying there on hospital bed……. Tanveer went near to him and sat on the stool beside his bed……

Tanveer (Crying) – Abbu yeh kya hogaya….. humne kya socha aur kya hogaya…….

             Abbas opened his eyes……

Abbas – wahi hua na…. jo humne socha tha…

              Tanveer wiping her crocodile tears…. An evil smile spread on her face…..

Tanveer – woh toh hai abbu…..

             Abbas sat straight on the bed…

Abbas – Humari plan ka aadaha ankh puri hogaya hai…..

Tanveer – Dusri ankh ek ghante mein shuru karenge……

               Abbas and Tanveer discussed there plan again…..

Tanveer – Abb mein jaati hoon…….

          Tanveer again came out with tears in her eyes and sobbing….

Rashid – Abbas kaise hai..

Tanveer – Tekkh hai uncle….

After Hour :

              Doctor went inside and after check up he came out…… Asad, Rashid and Tanveer went inside…….. Abbas opened his eyes slowly….. he raised his hand… Rashid went and held his hand……

Abbas – Mujhe pata nahi mein kitne din zinda rahoongi….. Doctors kahengey ki mein teekh hoon…. Par mujhe nahi lagta hai…. Issi liye mein chahta hoon ki……

Rashid – Kya…??

Abbas – Asad aur Tanveer ki shaadi jald se jald hojaye…..

                  Asad is shocked….. Tanveer controlling her evil smile and with some more crocodile tears in her eyes…

Tanveer – Aap ye kya keh rahe abbu….??

Abbas – ye meri aakhri kwaayish samjho…..

Rashid – aisa matt bolo…. Tum jaise chahogi waise hi hoga…..

Asad – Abbu….

               Rashid gave him a look…..

Asad – Abbu suniye…. Dadi, Nikhat, Nuzzat aur Ayaan ane tak intajaar karenge….

               Tanveer for making impression supported Asad……

Tanveer – Asad teekh keh rahe hai…..

              Tanveer convinced Rashid and there marriage was preponed to 1 week from there orginal nikha date…….

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  Udaipur :

                    Zoya's phone was ringing from longtime…….. She was tired because of continuous work…… at last fuction was over at 2:00 Am….. bride and bride groom were left to there place and their relatives to there respective places…… for cleaning everything and handing over the banquiet hall keys to owner Zoya and her team were satying there so that they can complete there work…… At last she woke up and answered her phone….

Zoya (Still in her sleep – Hello……

Other Side – Hello mam…. There is a problem….

                  Zoya woke up with a sudden stroke……..

Zoya – What happened….???

Other side – Mam hum kal jo Fashion show organize ki thi waha gadbad hogayi hai……….

Zoya – Kya hua….???

Other side – Humne jo ramp arrange kiya tha….. woh show ke beech mein toot gayi thi…... sabb gadbad hogayi hai….

Zoya – Yise kaisa hogaya…… Mein waha 10 ganto mein pohanch thi hoon……

           Zoya got up and freshen up in 10 minutes…… She called Cab and informed Jia everything……. Cab reached there in half an hour…… They reached Bhopal after 9 hours journey…….. She directly went to her office……

Bhopal: Zoya's office:

                   Zoya in her conference room…..

Zoya – Yeh ho kya ho raha hai….. in this one and half year we never got any complaint…. What is this…. How did this happen..??

Suraj – Mam…… we took care of everything but don't know how did this happen…..

Zoya – If you took care of everything… how did this happen…??

Suraj – wahi pata nahi chal raha hai mam….

Zoya – mujhe clients se baat karna hai…. Abhi…

Suraj – paanch minute mein woh yaha pahonch jayenge…….

                     Zoya is really tensed about this….. How will she convince them….. what will be there demands and all…… After sometime clients reached SDW management…… Zoya welcomed them but they didn't react for her welcome…. They started there meeting……

Client – What is this Miss. Farooqi….. because of you people my company is suffering from 1 crore loss…..

Zoya – I am really sorry for that……

Client – I don't think that your sorry will reduce the loss…..

Zoya – we are ready to refund your 1 crore which your company paid to us…..

Client – It will be 2crores…..

Zoya – Two crores…!!!

Client – yes two crores…. You will refund payment and also you will pay the loss…..

Zoya – But…. It is no where in the contract…….

Client – Why don't you check contract once again….

          Zoya saw the contract and shocked to see that clause….

Clause 20 : Any loss borne by client company will be refunded by the company……

Client – So it is better to refund money….. other wise see you in the court…..

         They left from there…. Zoya is in still in shock…… After that she asked Suraj to come to her cabin……

In Zoya's Cabin :

Zoya – what is this Suraj… We never make any clause like this for any contract….. why did this mistake happen this time…..

Suraj – I don't know mam….

Zoya – what do mean you don't know….. when I check papers that clause is not there…. Then what is this…..

            Zoya asked throwing papers on her table which traveled few centimeters on the table and stopped at the edge….. Suraj didn't answer anything…. This is the first time she is really angry at someone…. Because someone chested her…… someone changed papers….. she is sure about that…. Because she scrutinized the papers before sending…….

Zoya – You can leave now and send our legal advisor inside…….

                 Suraj came out of her cabin and informed legal advisor to go to Zoya's cabin…..

Farida (legal advisor) – may I come in mam……

Zoya – Come in…. please sit…..

                  Zoya explained her the problem and Farida remained silent for sometime…..

Farida – Mam legally... sba kuch humari khilaaf hai…. Ye contract papers dikha kar woh humein sue karsakte hai…. Isse humari company ke liye sirf nuksaan hi hoga…… agar hum asli papers find out karke dikhayenge toh shayad problem hum handle kar sakte hai……

Zoya – Iske liye mere pass ek idea hai…….

SDW Canteen : 

             Suraj went to one corner…. He took out his phone from his pocket….. he dialed one number and waiting for that person to answer……

Suraj – hello mam…..

Tanveer – Kya hua….??

Suraj – Aapne jaise socha waise hi hua….

Tanveer – teekhe….. tumhare paise tumhara ghar pahonch jayenge…….

             Tanveer disconnected call and dailed other number…….

Tanveer – Thank you…. Aapki madat ke liye shukriyaa….

Zoya's client – ye toh kuch nahi hai….. aapne jo madat kiya hai meri company ke liye…… who contract mere liye zarrori tha… aapne mujhe contract dilwaya aur mein ne aapka kaam kar diya……

Tanveer – Phir bhi…. Aur ek baat ye plan kisiko pata nahi chalna chahiye…… kisi ko pata nahi chalega…..

Zoya's client – aap chinta matt kijiye……..

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                      Dilshad is so weak that she is not able to stand….. she is suffering from high fever…. Najma knew that her brother is in Udaipur so she cannot inform him and she also cannot inform her abbu…. second thought in her mind is Asim…. Najma called him and said that their family doctor is not available and they have to take Dilshad hospital……. Asim reached there in 10minutes and from there he accompanied Najma to bring Dilshad hospital………

Bhopal Hospital:

                  Asim, Najma and Dilshad entered hospital…… Asim stood outside and Najma accompanied her ammi into doctor's cabin……. When they were coming out of the cabin Rashid and Asad saw them….. They were there to enquire about Abbas health with doctor…… but this shocked them…. Asad ran to his ammi and Rashid stood there in tension….. Asim is watching this……

Asad – Ammi kya hua hai aapko…..??? Tamatar….

Najma – Kuch nahi fever ki wajah se weak hai aur doctor ne kaha ki ek bottle silane chadana hai... room no. 5 mein leke jaane ke liye bola hai…..

Asad – Par tumne mujhe phone kyu nahi kiya hai…..??

Najma – Kyun ki mujhe laga aap Udaipur mein hai….. issi liye mein ne Asimji ko call kiya tha….. (Pointing towards Asim)

Asad (To Asim) – Thank you…

Asim – It's ok…..

                Asad and Najma held Dilshad and moved towards room which is just few steps away……. Asim also went with them…. Rashid was staring at Dilshad and her weak condition with a worried face…..

Rashid (To himself) – Dilshad ko bhukaar hai…. Itni weak hogayi hai…. Mujhe inform tak kiya nahi……

Flashback Starts:       

Rashid – Tum phir se kitchen mein kya kar rahi ho Dilshad….

Dilshad – Paani lene aayi Rashid….

Rashid – Tumhari tabiyat karaab hai…. Tum room se kyu bahar aagayi… mujhe bula deta mein paani lekar aajata...

Dilshad – Aap do din se office nahi gaye, aaram nahi kiya… mere pass hi hai.. abb mein teekh hoon…. Aap aaram kijiye….

Rashid – Mujhe nahi aaram ki zarrorat aapko hai…..

                    Rashid took her to room and made her sit on the bed….. he brought her some water….. Dilshad drank water……

Rashid – abb aap aaram karenge aur kuch nahi…

Dilshad – aap ise hi karte rahenge na aapko sabb biwi ke gulaam kahengey……

Rashid – Humein manjoor hai par aap abhi aaram kijiye…….

Flashback Ends

                   Rashid stood there in thoughts with tears in his eyes which were ready to flow…. Asim was standing outside room… He saw Rashid's condition….. Asim brought a glass of water and offered it to Rashid with a smile on his face…. Rashid took it from him and drank….. Rashid sat there on the chair which were outside the room….. Asim placed a hand on Rashid's shoulder…..

Asim – Aap teekh toh hai……??

               Rashid nodded….. Asim came and sat beside him… After some silence….

Asim – Aapko phuphi se milna hai….??

                       Rashid looked at him…. His eyes says 'yes'

Asim – mein madat karu…..

Rashid – aisa kuch na…..

                      Before Rashid could complete his sentence Asim stood up and went inside…… Dilshad was on bed with canella on her right hand which is connected to saline bottle through a pipe…. Najma sat beside Dilshad and Asad was sitting in his couch…… Nurse was checking Dilshad…. Asim went to Najma….

Asim – Najma, Aisha bata rahi thi ki tumhe ek important lecture hai aur iss class ki attendance iss semester ke liye important hai…..

Najma – Kya…!!! mujhe yaad nahi hai… ye konsa lecture hai….

Asad – Kya hua…??

Asim – Kuch nahi Aisha ne call karke bataya ki important lecture hai….. toh Najma….

Asad – Aisa hai toh tumhe jana chahiye……

Najma – Par ammi bhaijaan…..

Asad – Tum chinta matt kar mein hoon na…… kaise jaogi..??

Asim – Mein drop kardunga……

              Asad looked at him and gave a smile……

Asad – Thank u…

            Asim and Najma left…… Asad was still with Dilshad….. After going out when they reache there car…..

Asim – Najma tum beto mein abhi aata hoon……

Najma – kaha jaa rahe ho…..

Asim – andar mein apna phone bhul gaya hoon…..

               Asim went from there……. He saw one nurse and stopped her…..

Asim – Aap wahi hona jo ward no. 5 ki patient ko dekhthe hai……

Nurse – Haa… kuch kaam hai….??

Asim – waha uss room mein Asad naam ka ek aadmi hai…. Aap please waha se bej dijiye……

Nurse – Kyu…???

Asim – achi kaam ke liye hai…. Koi problem nahi hogi…..

              After so many please she accepted….. Asim was happy that his work is done….. Nurse went inside and sent Asad for bringing medicens with prescription…. Asad was out to medical shop…. Rashid was still sitting out... Asim went to Rashid……

Asim – Abb andar koi nahi hai…… aap jaakar mil sakte hai……

             Rashid was trying to say something but Asim left from there…..

Asim (To herself) – Asim jaldi chal Tamatar teri intezaar kar rahi hai…. Late hojaogi toh gusse se aur bhi laal hojayegi….

              Rashid was in dilemma to go in or not….. He wants to go but he is worried about Dilshad's reaction….. At last with some courage he entered her room….. Rashid was in tears seeing Dilshad in that condition…. He took slow steps and reached her….. he sat beside her and held her hand……..

Rashid – Dilshad tum sabke khayal rahti ho…. Khud ki kyu nahi rakh thi ho….. mein tumhe isse nahi dekh sakti hoon….. apna khayal rakhna……

                  He left from there with tears in his eyes…… Dilshad opened her eyes….. tears flowed from her eyes in side ways…..

Dilshad – Aap meri itna chinta karte hai….. aap ke bina mein teekh kaise ho sakti hoon….. tho uss din aap Bashir se ise kyu kaha tha…..

He didn't know that pair of evil eyes are watching them….. Tanveer was standing there and watching them with wicked smile…….

Tanveer (To herself) – Bashir saab aapke itne saal ki mehnat mitti mein milne waala hai….. Tanveer tumhe nahi lagta Bashir saab ko batana chahiye…..

                 Tanveer took her phone out and dialed his number……

Bashir – Asalam alekum….

Tanveer – walekum asalam…… aapke liye ek kabar hai…..

Bashir – Kon sa kabar….??

Tanveer – Yaha hospital mein woh ho raha hai jo aap kabhi nahi hone ka dua karte hai…. Yaha do purane prem panchi mil rahe hai… unke pyaar bayaan karne ke liye alfaaz nahi hai……

Bashir – Kya mazaak hai ye… kiske baare mein baat kar rahe ho tum…??

Tanveer – Aapke pyaare Rashid Miyya aur Dilshad ki…..

Bashir – kya…??!!!!

            Tanveer narrated the whole story which sent Bashir to the stage of shock…. Bashir disconnected her call…..

Bashir – ye dono phir se mill rahe hai…. Ise nahi hosakta hai…. Issa kabhi nahi hosakta hai….. mein issa hone nahi doonga…..

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Gosh

Tanveer , her abbu and Bashir are so evil

God save AsYa and their family

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god..why does tanveer has to see everything...
even if she saw what is the need to inform bashir...😡
great update...
and thanx for the non Qh character pics...
asim and asma are cute...
bashir is a lil young than what i imagined...😆
conti soon