KriYaansh OS: Iridescent.

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Iridescent





Her brazenly exposed body was shining in the golden sky, and he made it sure that he don't miss any single view of this heavenly creature. Her wet lips curved and shaped into a perfect smile. Her hairs were playing with the oceanic currents, flowing so smoothly. Her eyes were witnessing the most astounding twilight of her life and he was experiencing the same. The moments passed like this, with his accompanying her in this abandoned part of cruise. It was more like the sun had embossed her beauty as the most gorgeous one. He smiled eyeing at his love and thanked his almighty for imprinting him for her. And soon, the sky turned into a darker shade of orange. Sun was right in front of them, kissing the sea, spreading beautiful yellow sparkles in it. It felt like sun was going to jump into the sea, and the next morning it will come up after a long diving session. But Rey didn't know at whom he should stare, at the beautiful nature or Kria who was adorned in a yellow frock. Time elapsed, as they both witnessed one of the most amazing things they have seen till yet. He didn't knew when the sweat from his palm evaporated and when she snuggled into his arms. He simply wanted to mark this current moment for his love. He wrapped his arms around her and both embraced the speedy oceanic air currents. And he just let the time flow with its intensity. No need to think anything else. The temperament tried to smooth his blurring thoughts. Her warmth and the slight cold temperature caressed his muscles. He smiled, again, caressing her bare shoulders. Her pendant eyes captured his brown ones and looked at him with innocence. Sometimes he wondered how can someone can be so dreamlike. He felt like she was the most vulnerable creation and it was his responsibility to protect her from any kind of harm or despair. He just couldn't tolerate her eyes getting teary. He loved her till the root of her blissful soul. And so was his love for him,Sparkling, Iridescent. He captured her lips, with utmost care and love he could bestow.







Okay I know. SHORT. Right?
But isn't it complete in this way? (:

This was something very very sudden. I was actually trying to write something , I don't know what. I was trying to frame out a beautiful thing and Result is in front of you. :P

Do tell me how is this try of mine, by hitting the Like Tab and you can drop a comment Also.

I am waiting for reviews :]

Love~
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg 😲two os n a day😲

unresing

upi🤗🤗

d os was simply brilliant

d way u portrayed was beautiful

totally looveedd ittt

btw me 1sttt

sry for d late unres


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Posted: 12 years ago
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res will unress in a hour or so
Unres
Sorry for really late unress
But this is beautiful..
I loved the how how you have portrayed the things over hear..
i'm shocked ki itne chote part mai itna acha description..
Kuddos to you

Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😛

🤣

pupu cheating ki tune...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was utterly butterly sweet...

amazingly written..

loved the name...

so sweet and beautiful...

it was lovely how she was admired.. and he was lost..

sweetly written.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Vaish-

😛


🤣

pupu cheating ki tune...

Kesi cheating? 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Why is everyone Shocked? 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OS ke naam pe cheating kari ahi tune...

and u get the credit of writing 2 OSs...

CHORIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The update is so sweet
love the way
how u explain the veiw
it was beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Vaish-


OS ke naam pe cheating kari ahi tune...

and u get the credit of writing 2 OSs...

CHORIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P

🤢 Jo bhi ho. I gave 2 OS's bas. Yehi Sach hai!! 😉

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